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Strokin' it...
one stroke,
two strokes,
one more makes three
gotta confess,
these ink strokes
are kinda gettin' to me
one stroke,
two strokes,
what is it I see?
the birth of a new voice
singing so passionately
though one ink drop
is never enough,
don't stop
gonna need to soak
it deep into the mental's spot
two ink drops
seepin' in verb props
neva wanna serve word flops
then, guess I betta start
to moisten this liquid jot
now I'm pushin' this ink deeper
inside just to get it a lil mo hot
one drip
two drips
baby's bound to sip
the crowned tip
when it begins to drip
as I spread open
the bud of thought's power
watchin' as it
begins to blossom n' flower
now one page saturated
in a poet's ink
awaitin' on a moment's
inspiration I sink
far into passion's well
again I fell
drinkin' up all her gifts
as I stiffen n swell...
two strokes,
one more makes three
gotta confess,
these ink strokes
are kinda gettin' to me
one stroke,
two strokes,
what is it I see?
the birth of a new voice
singing so passionately
though one ink drop
is never enough,
don't stop
gonna need to soak
it deep into the mental's spot
two ink drops
seepin' in verb props
neva wanna serve word flops
then, guess I betta start
to moisten this liquid jot
now I'm pushin' this ink deeper
inside just to get it a lil mo hot
one drip
two drips
baby's bound to sip
the crowned tip
when it begins to drip
as I spread open
the bud of thought's power
watchin' as it
begins to blossom n' flower
now one page saturated
in a poet's ink
awaitin' on a moment's
inspiration I sink
far into passion's well
again I fell
drinkin' up all her gifts
as I stiffen n swell...
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Re: Strokin' it...
1st Jul 2013 12:56pm
you've rendered me utterly speechless; this ink is indescribable. Love it!!!
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1st Jul 2013 1:25pm
WOW, that's an amazing thing to say! Thank you my dear
Troy humbled n grateful for you always :)
Troy humbled n grateful for you always :)
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1st Jul 2013 2:10pm
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1st Jul 2013 2:32pm
Aaaaawww thank u angel, u always warm my lil ticker! :) appreciate u always! :)
Re: Strokin' it...
1st Jul 2013 3:15pm
Ahh this is a familiar tune hahah the inspiration we get from fellow poets sometimes get us all worked up hahahah glad to see I am not the only odd ball hahahaha!
Red
Red
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1st Jul 2013 4:51pm
Aaaawww you know we're like two peas in a pod
squirting all that ink over each other lol thank you my dear friend.... Appreciate u :)
squirting all that ink over each other lol thank you my dear friend.... Appreciate u :)
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 4:08pm
Great poem, very sensual like, the metaphors
teasing as something else...genus writing,
and wickedly so...;)
teasing as something else...genus writing,
and wickedly so...;)
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re: Re: Strokin' it...
1st Jul 2013 4:57pm
A massive hug to you n a thanks too! lol
happy you enjoyed n I appreciate you much :)
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happy you enjoyed n I appreciate you much :)
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1st Jul 2013 5:37pm
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2nd Jul 2013 5:52am
Aaaww Anita my sweet beauty I'd sing it to u anyday! lol
Thank u so much my dear :)
Thank u so much my dear :)
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 6:43pm
Hope it was as good for you as it was for me, lol.
Great rhythm, very sensual. Love it.
Great rhythm, very sensual. Love it.
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re: Re: Strokin' it...
2nd Jul 2013 6:13am
Lmao yea it was n I want more lol cum gimme more lol
Much appreciated sweetie pie in my eye :)
Much appreciated sweetie pie in my eye :)
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 00:40am
This is an awesome clever poem. Enjoyed it much! :)
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