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Unconscious Love
She sleeps naked
Non-defensive
Implacable
Undisturbed.
I awake
In the middle
Of the night
The covers pushed off
And her skin
The hue
Of unstained marble
With its inclusions
And ancient wisdom
Sustains my breathing.
I reach
for her
And even
In her sleep
She pulls
Me close
and cuddles in
And spreads
Her cherishing
Humanity
To receive me.
And in our unwoken
Luminesence
The twilight
Taste of her skin
The breaking horizon
Of her climax
The fading night
Of her acceptance
She loves me
Even when
She's sleeping.
runningturtle87
Non-defensive
Implacable
Undisturbed.
I awake
In the middle
Of the night
The covers pushed off
And her skin
The hue
Of unstained marble
With its inclusions
And ancient wisdom
Sustains my breathing.
I reach
for her
And even
In her sleep
She pulls
Me close
and cuddles in
And spreads
Her cherishing
Humanity
To receive me.
And in our unwoken
Luminesence
The twilight
Taste of her skin
The breaking horizon
Of her climax
The fading night
Of her acceptance
She loves me
Even when
She's sleeping.
runningturtle87
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Re: Unconscious Love
1st Jul 2013 12:27pm
re: Re: Unconscious Love
1st Jul 2013 12:42pm
By saying so you turn winter into summer....I'm overlooking a lake and the sun has just now broken the horizon line....the reflection on the water is a poem I cannot read...but my eyes recite it....it's like that.
Re: Unconscious Love
Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 1:54pm
This was just beautiful....
xoxox
Kitty
xoxox
Kitty
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re: Re: Unconscious Love
1st Jul 2013 2:01pm
I think this is the true test of our wanting to know if we are loved....how do they treat us in sub or unconscious ways.....this is extremely important to me. Thanks, Kitty......I'm guessing you purr when you sleep.
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1st Jul 2013 2:45pm
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1st Jul 2013 2:56pm
Transcendent love is never taken off guard, but guarded love cannot transcend even the most banal of moments...if you argue over when and where you are going to make love, that horse has left the barn because you're fucked already....yes, G.
Re: Unconscious Love
1st Jul 2013 3:13pm
See don't make me get jealous and jump out of my shell! hear! hahahaha
Red
Red
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re: Re: Unconscious Love
1st Jul 2013 3:22pm
I will try to be more stealthy next time...didn't mean to wake you...fully...Red.
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1st Jul 2013 3:33pm
Silly turtle I will beat with the shell(looking around to see who needs a whoopin)!!
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1st Jul 2013 3:39pm
Re: Unconscious Love
Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 4:39pm
This is so beautiful and eloquent...a rush
of intimacy, and you captured it so
gracefully:)
of intimacy, and you captured it so
gracefully:)
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1st Jul 2013 8:58pm
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 6:46pm
Love the sense and sensuality of this.
And true - do they reach even in sleep, or roll over and turn away?
And true - do they reach even in sleep, or roll over and turn away?
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re: Re: Unconscious Love
1st Jul 2013 9:02pm
This question is so hard.....what is the unconscious emotion of this person next to me if she wakes up angry at me every day? If I nudge her accidentally at night, am I such a burden that she rebuffs me? How many times would it take before I take it personally and feel rejected? What if this were the reaction I had to this other person, would she feel hurt and dejected? Really hard questions, Petit_Minou.