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ONENESS RECALLED (a love poem to the Oneness of all that is)
ive knelt
before
the grace
of trees
humbled
in their dance
of sun
through leaves
to chlorophylled
songs
off curved tongues
whispering
through
the breeze
in syllables
of green
where
i am
transformed somehow
lucidly renewed
to step forth
out upon
the grassy earth
again
a sacred child
reborn
remembering
always
my inseparable
oneness
with all
that
is
oh dancing seas
face to face
ive entered thee
and slid
into
your open
hollow
fluid throats
through spinning
cathedrals
of liquid light
like
a wet tongue
singing
the purest vowel
a sacred
vow
in the sweetest
hymn
of life
released
too soon
from your timeless
spinning
transcendent
wombs
where i am
transformed somehow
lucidly renewed
to step forth
out upon
the sandy beach
again
a sacred child
reborn
remembering always
my inseparable
oneness
with all
that
is
oh universe
oh earth
in forests
mountains
deserts and seas
in hearts
in eyes
in minds
and lives
i am reopened
refilled
and renewed
again and again
beyond
all tangles
of mind
dissolved
released
set free
in deepest
connection
to all without
to all within
where
i am
transformed somehow
lucidly renewed
to step forth
out into
the sacred
flowing
continuous dance
of this living
universe again
a sacred child
reborn
remembering always
my inseparable
oneness
with all
that
is
Published 28th Jun 2013
| Edited 3rd May 2024
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2013 11:08am
lovely simply lovely oin
strider
strider
Thanks Strider, I'm glad you felt so!...
The feelings, the thoughts, the words, the sentiments, the underlying, near forgotten, largely disconnected reality of these essential, vital, natural connections, are still alive & well, deep at the epicenter in the heart of my own core truths, but what gets me, is the fact that so much of it's wonder still exists in glorious tact, but is being further decimated & obliterated at an alarmingly rabid rate & it seems to only be a relatively small percentage of the world's modern, civilized, major consumer populations, who seem to truly give a shit!...
(Sorry, but it appears my passion for it all can quickly shift from the consciousness of a beautiful, peaceful, inspired, spiritual poem, suddenly to a consciousness of baffled, frustrated, pissed-off, societal anger, all in the unexpected course of one unanticipated paragraph!?!!)(😇/👹=🤪?!!!?) lol
Oh well, it's probably best for all if I simply learn to stick with the inspired, higher mind of my free flowing muse and pen, rather than the overly opinionated, spontaneous, egoic purging of my all too human mind and tongue, eh?!!!? ~ lol 😄😏-☀️😎👍🏻
- OIN
The feelings, the thoughts, the words, the sentiments, the underlying, near forgotten, largely disconnected reality of these essential, vital, natural connections, are still alive & well, deep at the epicenter in the heart of my own core truths, but what gets me, is the fact that so much of it's wonder still exists in glorious tact, but is being further decimated & obliterated at an alarmingly rabid rate & it seems to only be a relatively small percentage of the world's modern, civilized, major consumer populations, who seem to truly give a shit!...
(Sorry, but it appears my passion for it all can quickly shift from the consciousness of a beautiful, peaceful, inspired, spiritual poem, suddenly to a consciousness of baffled, frustrated, pissed-off, societal anger, all in the unexpected course of one unanticipated paragraph!?!!)(😇/👹=🤪?!!!?) lol
Oh well, it's probably best for all if I simply learn to stick with the inspired, higher mind of my free flowing muse and pen, rather than the overly opinionated, spontaneous, egoic purging of my all too human mind and tongue, eh?!!!? ~ lol 😄😏-☀️😎👍🏻
- OIN
28th Jun 2013 5:06pm
Thanks bud!... I appreciate that man, especially after checking out & reading one of your poems ('BABY DOLL'), I thought it was a great poem, even though it's tone & nature is (contrast-wise) just about as polar-opposite from mine as you can possibly get, if looked at side-by-side with this older one of mine here, which you just commented on in a positive way, as I also did with yours!...
But there's Yin & Yang in everything & everyone & our writing, our poems can never accurately nutshell who we are completely, they are only little reflective cells that shine light (& darkness sometimes as well)on facets of who we are, though only in part, for we (& our true being, in wholeness) are truly as vast & expansive as any sea & more likely, even the cosmos!... I think I've submitted & now successfully posted around 250 poems here on DUP thus far, over the past 3 months or so, since I found it on a search & they reflect many different facets of my true nature, some light, some dark & some even darker still...(pretty much the whole fuck-n spectrum!)... But lets face it, 'ALL' of these 'poems' we all write, throughout our lives, are nothing less than vital 'THERAPY' (sometimes even life-saving!)for us all & are probably better & most likely have been more effective in that regard, to our overall well being & growth, than any amount of highly expensive, standard, professional therapy care from a licensed Psychologist, Psychiatrist or Counselor could have ever been!... (and writing is pretty much free!)... Ooops, got a bit carried away here... just a few relative thoughts!...
Anyway, thanks again for your encouraging comment here darkheartmagic!... Much appreciated!...
~ OIN
But there's Yin & Yang in everything & everyone & our writing, our poems can never accurately nutshell who we are completely, they are only little reflective cells that shine light (& darkness sometimes as well)on facets of who we are, though only in part, for we (& our true being, in wholeness) are truly as vast & expansive as any sea & more likely, even the cosmos!... I think I've submitted & now successfully posted around 250 poems here on DUP thus far, over the past 3 months or so, since I found it on a search & they reflect many different facets of my true nature, some light, some dark & some even darker still...(pretty much the whole fuck-n spectrum!)... But lets face it, 'ALL' of these 'poems' we all write, throughout our lives, are nothing less than vital 'THERAPY' (sometimes even life-saving!)for us all & are probably better & most likely have been more effective in that regard, to our overall well being & growth, than any amount of highly expensive, standard, professional therapy care from a licensed Psychologist, Psychiatrist or Counselor could have ever been!... (and writing is pretty much free!)... Ooops, got a bit carried away here... just a few relative thoughts!...
Anyway, thanks again for your encouraging comment here darkheartmagic!... Much appreciated!...
~ OIN
29th Jun 2013 00:04am
You have a way with words my friend...
A magical gift of written tapestry...
Your words flow like silk....
Simply Beautiful visual inside this piece
XOXO
Fire
A magical gift of written tapestry...
Your words flow like silk....
Simply Beautiful visual inside this piece
XOXO
Fire
Anonymous
29th Jun 2013 7:21pm
Reminds me of pastlives, soulmates,
the renewal of vows so to speak.
I really enjoy the way you weave your
words in such descriptive overtones,
like making your own language of understanding...
Very fluid..nice job:)
the renewal of vows so to speak.
I really enjoy the way you weave your
words in such descriptive overtones,
like making your own language of understanding...
Very fluid..nice job:)
30th Jun 2013 4:11pm
Wonder how a song can be made of it - the last four lines of each stanza making the chorus.
