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If only One could Pen you Happy...
"Pen me a piece of life, real life"
Those words...
Deposited themselves within me...
How does one reconcile their lot in life?
I suppose it's common to be bitter
after having been force fed
the defecate of life's rotten bowels
Still, I was led to believe there are
some things that people could do to enhance their stay
at this temporary hotel that gravity relentlessly holds them to
What things?
Far be it for me to say...I'm seeking answers
each and every waking moment
I do know this...
For every single time life has sufficently
planted it's uninvited foot up my anus
somehow, someway, a single thought that even ONE soul cares
Empowers me
To trudge forth, and by God I fight to find a smile
and much like a homeless derelict, who may not express it well
yet inside his soul, the belly appreciates
the warmth of being fed an occasional
ration of SUSTENANCE...
Those words...
Deposited themselves within me...
How does one reconcile their lot in life?
I suppose it's common to be bitter
after having been force fed
the defecate of life's rotten bowels
Still, I was led to believe there are
some things that people could do to enhance their stay
at this temporary hotel that gravity relentlessly holds them to
What things?
Far be it for me to say...I'm seeking answers
each and every waking moment
I do know this...
For every single time life has sufficently
planted it's uninvited foot up my anus
somehow, someway, a single thought that even ONE soul cares
Empowers me
To trudge forth, and by God I fight to find a smile
and much like a homeless derelict, who may not express it well
yet inside his soul, the belly appreciates
the warmth of being fed an occasional
ration of SUSTENANCE...
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Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
25th May 2013 2:45pm
"a single thought that even ONE soul cares
Empowers me " what else is need here... Nothing! A stunning piece my friend.
Red
Empowers me " what else is need here... Nothing! A stunning piece my friend.
Red
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re: Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
Nothing I love more than empowerment
N to give u a feeling of that...I'm flattered n honored thank u my dear lady poetess :)
N to give u a feeling of that...I'm flattered n honored thank u my dear lady poetess :)
Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
Anonymous
25th May 2013 4:05pm
"a single thought that even ONE soul cares"
That line resonates with me, too, Poetikmind. A great write & I particularly like the finishing stanza, as well. :)
Carlene
That line resonates with me, too, Poetikmind. A great write & I particularly like the finishing stanza, as well. :)
Carlene
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re: Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
26th May 2013 4:00am
Thank u! Ur always amazingly sweet n I try appreciate u n ur support lady :)
Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
25th May 2013 6:25pm
I hope you don't have to fight so hard to smile, not when you bring so many to all of us here who love your words:)
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re: Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
26th May 2013 4:02am
Aaaawww will all that sweetness coming from u, it's easy to smile!
thank u my dear one, appreciate u always! :)
thank u my dear one, appreciate u always! :)
Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
25th May 2013 7:37pm
What a vivid use of words. I can relate to the feelings you display in this piece. Very well done.
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re: Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
26th May 2013 4:05am
Thank u, I'm happy you enjoyed my ink here n am grateful for ur time n thoughts :)
Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
25th May 2013 10:45pm
Can I just say AMEN?!
"To trudge forth, and by God I fight to find a smile
and much like a homeless derelict, who may not express it well
yet inside his soul, the belly appreciates
the warmth of being fed an occasional
ration of SUSTENANCE..."
Beautiful Write! You Penned me with happiness by creating such strong ink! Xo
"To trudge forth, and by God I fight to find a smile
and much like a homeless derelict, who may not express it well
yet inside his soul, the belly appreciates
the warmth of being fed an occasional
ration of SUSTENANCE..."
Beautiful Write! You Penned me with happiness by creating such strong ink! Xo
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Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
26th May 2013 4:10am
Aaaaawwww penning I happiness at any time would be my utmost pleasure my sweetness! Thank u so much! :)
Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
Anonymous
26th May 2013 7:17am
Wonderful poem - and perfect timing...
Sweet write, cher.
Sweet write, cher.
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re: Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
26th May 2013 1:16pm
I'm glad the timing was right n happy you enjoyed! I appreciate
much my dear! :)
much my dear! :)
Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
26th May 2013 12:44pm
Oh if only one could it would be wonderful,
"For every single time life has sufficently
planted it's uninvited foot up my anus"
Such a pain in the derriere LOL.
So many can relate I imagine. Great expression and write Poetikmind.
"For every single time life has sufficently
planted it's uninvited foot up my anus"
Such a pain in the derriere LOL.
So many can relate I imagine. Great expression and write Poetikmind.
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re: Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
26th May 2013 1:18pm
Yup I agree, it would be wonderful... Heck I'd be
putting in an order DAILY!! lol
Thanks so much sweetie pie in my eye! lol
putting in an order DAILY!! lol
Thanks so much sweetie pie in my eye! lol
Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
28th May 2013 12:14pm
God write..LIfe can be a bitch, how we handle hurdles and situations is what defines us and makes us strong..
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re: Re: If only One could Pen you Happy...
28th May 2013 12:46pm
Ur so right lady, although it would be nice to
have a few more breaks true? lol
Thanks, ur wonderful support is always giving me smiles :)
have a few more breaks true? lol
Thanks, ur wonderful support is always giving me smiles :)