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Your Alice Is Lonely
Your Alice
is lost in Wonderland
chasing white rabbits
falling further down the hole
I seek you
on this night
my Cheshire cat
though when
I think I see you
poof you're up in smoke
missing you tonight
I travel further
down the path
thinking you must be
partying with the
Mad Hatter tonight
I want to be
at that tea party
along side you
please pass me
the hookah
(Read by Carpe_Noctem my Cheshire Cat thank you so much I love it)
is lost in Wonderland
chasing white rabbits
falling further down the hole
I seek you
on this night
my Cheshire cat
though when
I think I see you
poof you're up in smoke
missing you tonight
I travel further
down the path
thinking you must be
partying with the
Mad Hatter tonight
I want to be
at that tea party
along side you
please pass me
the hookah
(Read by Carpe_Noctem my Cheshire Cat thank you so much I love it)
Published 15th May 2013
| Edited 17th May 2013
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15th May 2013 5:55am
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15th May 2013 7:19am
Have a toke on this then..
"Well, sometimes I feel like Alice
In a wonderland chasing rabbits
Cheshire cats and mad hatters
A better world but it's not like it matters
Oh, no"- Lisa Mitchell
"Well, sometimes I feel like Alice
In a wonderland chasing rabbits
Cheshire cats and mad hatters
A better world but it's not like it matters
Oh, no"- Lisa Mitchell
15th May 2013 4:14pm
thank you Carpe for passing me the hookah takes it gladly with a smile.. much love Crim :)
Anonymous
15th May 2013 10:14am
Like the flow and yearning here crim
strider...
strider...
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Anonymous
15th May 2013 4:48pm
Unveiling (crimsin),
There seems to be much more afoot down these rabbit holes than realized. Thank you for holding the light to this one ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
There seems to be much more afoot down these rabbit holes than realized. Thank you for holding the light to this one ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
17th May 2013 5:17pm
15th May 2013 5:49pm
I liked the reference to Alice here,
loved the poem.
A wonderful idea for a poem :)
loved the poem.
A wonderful idea for a poem :)
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15th May 2013 8:05pm
I think I have a poetic crush on you haha really interesting rendition of aiw.
17th May 2013 5:19pm
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Anonymous
17th May 2013 5:40pm
Nicely done you two...strider
17th May 2013 8:21pm
thank you Strider..Carpe does add to the poem greatly with his amazing reading..peace Crim :)
17th May 2013 10:50pm
18th May 2013 7:15pm
thank you in my opinion Carpe added so much to this poem..wishing you peace Crim :)
Anonymous
18th May 2013 10:53am
awesome write, dear Crim-and great job by carpe reading it. I love how you've used the story and metaphor to put this poem across-which you do so well-much enjoyed :-) peace x
18th May 2013 7:17pm
thank you so much lovely lady yes I agree Carpe did a fantastic reading..peace Crim :)
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1st Jul 2019 9:20pm
you really did a beautiful reading on this dearest Carpe
I understand why you had to remove it ❤
I understand why you had to remove it ❤
3rd Jul 2019 6:14am
3rd Jul 2019 11:59am
aw thank you dearest Carpe but don't worry about it okay I still remember the brilliant reading you did...
I deeply appreciate you, dear friend...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you, dear friend...
love Brenda 💕
20th Mar 2021 10:32pm
