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Desert Lands
My beautiful lady
why have you deserted me?
all the colors spring from you
now my world is painted black
the clock is ticking backwards
without you in my life
a whirling vortex of pain
sucking me dry
you are my water
lovely one
come rain down on me
take me from the desert lands
I've been wandering in
no power nor punch mouth rusted shut
please open the door
that is now locked for me
take me in your arms
I feel you watching from afar
my soul aching for your touch
end this burning need
embrace me now
if not forever walk away.
why have you deserted me?
all the colors spring from you
now my world is painted black
the clock is ticking backwards
without you in my life
a whirling vortex of pain
sucking me dry
you are my water
lovely one
come rain down on me
take me from the desert lands
I've been wandering in
no power nor punch mouth rusted shut
please open the door
that is now locked for me
take me in your arms
I feel you watching from afar
my soul aching for your touch
end this burning need
embrace me now
if not forever walk away.
Published 13th Jun 2013
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13th Jun 2013 11:33pm
Great imagery Crim and such longing. Heartfelt write, wonderfully written. :)
13th Jun 2013 11:52pm
13th Jun 2013 11:39pm
I've been wandering in
no power nor punch mouth rusted shut
... my goodness woman. can i have a glass of you . damn. fucking beautiful poetry.
no power nor punch mouth rusted shut
... my goodness woman. can i have a glass of you . damn. fucking beautiful poetry.
13th Jun 2013 11:54pm
I've missed you my beautiful dark Mistress..thank you so much you made my week I need a triple shot of you dark one. I love you Crim
Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 2:07am
This shows your development as a poem.
It reads easy and is artfully written.
You have mastered the craft.
Thank you for sharing
Kitty
It reads easy and is artfully written.
You have mastered the craft.
Thank you for sharing
Kitty
14th Jun 2013 2:55am
14th Jun 2013 4:18am
Damn Sinful Criminal. I see you're still kickin' poetic ass with your precious verse! Rock on, my dear!
Gemini
Gemini
14th Jun 2013 5:44am
thank you so much Christian you've been rocking it masterfully with building speed I see..peace Crim :)
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 10:32am
Well done crim...felt the desire, the longing...
strider
strider
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14th Jun 2013 8:56pm
I've been looking forward to your next write,
and this has reached, and gone beyond, my expectations.
Keep writing, beautiful poetry.
You can keep or take away the comma.
and this has reached, and gone beyond, my expectations.
Keep writing, beautiful poetry.
You can keep or take away the comma.
15th Jun 2013 8:18pm
20th Jun 2013 6:08pm
So mad at myself for missing such amazing ink!
This was grand, Crim! Loved! Xo
This was grand, Crim! Loved! Xo
21st Jun 2013 10:56pm
