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We.
Them: they see the water fall from the skies.
Tut and sigh and complain, ah,
The weather these days.
Us: we notice the rain when it's over;
When we step outside and realise
We walk on water.
Tut and sigh and complain, ah,
The weather these days.
Us: we notice the rain when it's over;
When we step outside and realise
We walk on water.
Published 12th Oct 2010
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12th Oct 2010 8:50am
i like this a lot. takes you into flight at the end, straight out of everyday cubicle mentality. [:
12th Oct 2010 8:11pm
18th Nov 2010 6:50pm
Pure brilliance, this.
I absolutley love how you invoke the sense of freedom and light at the end with that masterstroke of a last line. beauty indeed.
I absolutley love how you invoke the sense of freedom and light at the end with that masterstroke of a last line. beauty indeed.
18th Feb 2011 4:32am
