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don't worry it's over now
draw with my blood...
perfectly flowing from...
(my aching heart
my dying heart)
cry deliriously in a corner...
hide in the shadows with your knife...
(whisper kill me now
weep kill me now)
my wrists are shaking and bleeding
suddenly your no longer breathing
perfectly flowing from...
(my aching heart
my dying heart)
cry deliriously in a corner...
hide in the shadows with your knife...
(whisper kill me now
weep kill me now)
my wrists are shaking and bleeding
suddenly your no longer breathing
Published 5th Oct 2010
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5th Oct 2010 5:43pm
bloody hell this is just amazing miss ellis!!!
you wear the veil of darkness with a masterful touch!
i can't wait to read through all your poetry!
(by the way this is launa from deviant art, i'm stalking your work because i simply love it!)
i want to buy your book when you publish it darlin!
the last line just makes me think back to the whole poem and i have to keep reading through it to understand what is really going on here... then i clicked... you're not the one killing yourself... you're the one ending someones life in such a cruel manner! epic win for you sis.
keep strong and please continue to write!
love you xx
you wear the veil of darkness with a masterful touch!
i can't wait to read through all your poetry!
(by the way this is launa from deviant art, i'm stalking your work because i simply love it!)
i want to buy your book when you publish it darlin!
the last line just makes me think back to the whole poem and i have to keep reading through it to understand what is really going on here... then i clicked... you're not the one killing yourself... you're the one ending someones life in such a cruel manner! epic win for you sis.
keep strong and please continue to write!
love you xx
5th Oct 2010 8:30pm
5th Oct 2010 9:02pm
@launa (disturbedchild), welcome to DUP and thanks for finding me lol :)
thanks for commenting but i think you're being too nice lol (i'll speak to you more on deviantart) XDDD x
@talulah, thank you for spending a little of your time to read my poem x
thanks for commenting but i think you're being too nice lol (i'll speak to you more on deviantart) XDDD x
@talulah, thank you for spending a little of your time to read my poem x
24th Jul 2012 7:53pm
I cant believe how amazing this is. i can relate so much im gonna read more of ur work(:
