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Alone in vanity
an Heir brushed , swathed
in the day wrapped fragrant
by cooing doves lilac strands
perched high and proud
light rays beam, colour streaks
adorns the one vanity speaks
ever beside tiers statue in life
ruffle the plumage tarry naught
sayeth the frog aside in the dark
yellow bells ring sympathy, to thee
for thou will croak before I
never knowing, true doves cry
only warbles at Your feet
as I see it, in bliss I sit
awaiting my one princess kiss
tender to the night song, shining
bright as a new dawn, whispering
screamed chants upon wiles of the hour
holding baby's breath and the other hand
but tell to me O bird of preen
how long can one bake in that sun
in the day wrapped fragrant
by cooing doves lilac strands
perched high and proud
light rays beam, colour streaks
adorns the one vanity speaks
ever beside tiers statue in life
ruffle the plumage tarry naught
sayeth the frog aside in the dark
yellow bells ring sympathy, to thee
for thou will croak before I
never knowing, true doves cry
only warbles at Your feet
as I see it, in bliss I sit
awaiting my one princess kiss
tender to the night song, shining
bright as a new dawn, whispering
screamed chants upon wiles of the hour
holding baby's breath and the other hand
but tell to me O bird of preen
how long can one bake in that sun
Published 10th Apr 2013
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10th Apr 2013 3:29am
10th Apr 2013 3:38am
It was almost if I could smell the lilac fragrant; the ink was just that potent!
This is truly a STUNNING read, Gabe!
In love with how your words hung teasingly off each other! Just enough to paint the scene, while allowing the reader's imagination to finish the story!
Beautiful!
Perfect imagery for this creation also! xo
This is truly a STUNNING read, Gabe!
In love with how your words hung teasingly off each other! Just enough to paint the scene, while allowing the reader's imagination to finish the story!
Beautiful!
Perfect imagery for this creation also! xo
10th Apr 2013 4:11am
Thank You Dear Rain:)
It is a most Beautiful painting...I could'ive rambled on with it lol but decided I better hadn't!!!
It is a most Beautiful painting...I could'ive rambled on with it lol but decided I better hadn't!!!
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10th Apr 2013 4:14am
10th Apr 2013 4:42am
10th Apr 2013 5:03am
:) Thank You So Much Dear Grace:)
I've loved that word since toddler age...don't know why...just have...odd some words that fancy eh?
It's All 6 of those senses that make up!!!
I've loved that word since toddler age...don't know why...just have...odd some words that fancy eh?
It's All 6 of those senses that make up!!!
10th Apr 2013 9:20am
10th Apr 2013 2:23pm
Thank You Dear Magdalena:)
i did so Love that painting was dying to write something for it!!!
i did so Love that painting was dying to write something for it!!!
Anonymous
10th Apr 2013 10:43pm
I lovely expression wonderfully depicted in your poem :-)
good luck in the comp!
nice write
good luck in the comp!
nice write
10th Apr 2013 11:06pm
Thank You Dear Miki:)
I'd paint pics like that if I could, mixed within the odd and macabre
I'd paint pics like that if I could, mixed within the odd and macabre
