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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:58pm
Yesterday 9:58pm
From before to the now
From the deepness of the truth, that it shall reveal the real makings of a new, frontier of hope and dreams and endless possibilities. 🙏 For sure we can slowly see a new horizon, that once was hidden behind the darkness of thick clouds. Changing as it has done more harm than good, yet it is soon coming over the world. 🌍 YET it's for the betterment of mankind and humanity, for gone is the unnecessary feelings of hatred and discrimination of negativity, bought on by the devil's 👿 in human skin. For sure we stand here as one nation under GOD. 🙏 ALMIGHTY and the...
#friendship
#humankind
#men
#soldiers
#women
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BatPowers
Bat Powers
Bat Powers
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:29pm
Yesterday 8:29pm
Crows
Painted against a Michigan blue
in the naked limbs of a cottonwood
taking its slumber into November
i saw a murder
in the naked limbs of a cottonwood
taking its slumber into November
i saw a murder
#fall
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2 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:31pm
Yesterday 7:31pm
Please! Don't try to insult my intelligence you fawning serf sycophants, as you evidently won't succeed!
By Stanley Collymore
The Britain monarch, you keep telling
the rest of us citizens, quite lyingly
has no political power, which is
in fact a blatant and orchestrated travesty of
the truth. Simply a lie, in actual terminology!
Since the monarch does, in fact, have huge,
political power! Just one, but very simply a
significant example of this is, that actually
any MP who we, as the literally, legitimate
electorate obviously, democratically elect
must specifically and similarly too, rather
compulsorily, swear complete...
The Britain monarch, you keep telling
the rest of us citizens, quite lyingly
has no political power, which is
in fact a blatant and orchestrated travesty of
the truth. Simply a lie, in actual terminology!
Since the monarch does, in fact, have huge,
political power! Just one, but very simply a
significant example of this is, that actually
any MP who we, as the literally, legitimate
electorate obviously, democratically elect
must specifically and similarly too, rather
compulsorily, swear complete...
#courage
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
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Academic
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:39pm
Yesterday 4:39pm
Rich landowners aren't necessarily farmers!
By Stanley Collymore
An excellent job undertaken Rachel
Reeves; so thoroughly well done
and likewise effectively keep
going with more of the same! Frankly, and
most unequivocally also, I quite obviously
rather distinctly, simply don't actually feel
the least bit sorry for the vast majority of
these evidently allegedly, British farmers,
significant numbers of whom are clearly essentially, quite conspicuously, literally
undoubtedly, and rather unquestionably discernibly wealthy landowners; literally
with crucially honest...
An excellent job undertaken Rachel
Reeves; so thoroughly well done
and likewise effectively keep
going with more of the same! Frankly, and
most unequivocally also, I quite obviously
rather distinctly, simply don't actually feel
the least bit sorry for the vast majority of
these evidently allegedly, British farmers,
significant numbers of whom are clearly essentially, quite conspicuously, literally
undoubtedly, and rather unquestionably discernibly wealthy landowners; literally
with crucially honest...
#denial
#disappointment
#fear
#greed
#shame
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0 Comments
DarkPassion
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:18am
Yesterday 10:18am
Ka represents vital essence
Remember to breathe.
Plus three.
Release mind in serene pastures. Vibrate in a safe place.
Supreme precedence set in stone. Android engineered micro clones.
Miracles grown, fragile powdered bones.
Rising in thee knew whirld.
Have know intention to make it alone.
Pledge for allegiance.
Thirsty in an overflowing well of surprise.
Sheer sacrifice.
Fearless fruit forbidden yet redeemed EVE 🧬 Gene-Eroot.
Shocking Ra to scream.
Gut at the altar. Is this justice for a altered throne?.
Lift that Magnifies the way home…...
Plus three.
Release mind in serene pastures. Vibrate in a safe place.
Supreme precedence set in stone. Android engineered micro clones.
Miracles grown, fragile powdered bones.
Rising in thee knew whirld.
Have know intention to make it alone.
Pledge for allegiance.
Thirsty in an overflowing well of surprise.
Sheer sacrifice.
Fearless fruit forbidden yet redeemed EVE 🧬 Gene-Eroot.
Shocking Ra to scream.
Gut at the altar. Is this justice for a altered throne?.
Lift that Magnifies the way home…...
#healing
#honesty
#peace
#SelfDiscovery
#TimeHeals
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DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:59am
Yesterday 7:59am
Toxic Regime
Can someone please explain their logic?
I’m lost beyond measure it would seem
I got deja-vu the whole thing feels ironic
Once again living under this toxic regime
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
I’m lost beyond measure it would seem
I got deja-vu the whole thing feels ironic
Once again living under this toxic regime
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#disappointment
50 reads
12 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
30th Nov 2015 3:13am
30th Nov 2015 3:13am
Recycled Ni@@ers
Sistaz get knocked up
As brothas get locked up
At astronomical rates
It's damn near comical
Makes you laugh until you cry
Or just wanna holler
Younginz repeatedly remanded
Comin home with invisible collars
Black balled and branded
Children left stranded
Single mothers struggling
Facin hardknocks in
Housing facilities
With no sense of stability
Waitin on men still considered
A commodity on parole
Fulfilling their societal role
Studded out amongst their own
Bringing more ghetto bastards...
As brothas get locked up
At astronomical rates
It's damn near comical
Makes you laugh until you cry
Or just wanna holler
Younginz repeatedly remanded
Comin home with invisible collars
Black balled and branded
Children left stranded
Single mothers struggling
Facin hardknocks in
Housing facilities
With no sense of stability
Waitin on men still considered
A commodity on parole
Fulfilling their societal role
Studded out amongst their own
Bringing more ghetto bastards...
1066 reads
3 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:07am
Yesterday 1:07am
Threnodial Sapphic for Liberty
Now the sore winners seek more necks to stretch
because MAGA cancer has metastasized
out from an especially monstrous letch...
so foolishly prized.
The people abandoned good sense and sweet hope
to vote for a mob armed with threatening guns
as more educations on a downward slope...
have cost overruns.
And Democrats are the ones they will all blame
when the bombs keep falling on children and moms
as they burn away in the phosphorus flame...
of endless pogroms.
There's more pain ahead, so get used to it...
because MAGA cancer has metastasized
out from an especially monstrous letch...
so foolishly prized.
The people abandoned good sense and sweet hope
to vote for a mob armed with threatening guns
as more educations on a downward slope...
have cost overruns.
And Democrats are the ones they will all blame
when the bombs keep falling on children and moms
as they burn away in the phosphorus flame...
of endless pogroms.
There's more pain ahead, so get used to it...
#anger
#disappointment
82 reads
0 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 4:01pm
6th Nov 2024 4:01pm
Equal to
My birthday has become
a time of giving and serving
It's an exchange of gratitude
for another year of living
What better way to share
than providing a home
for a rescue kitty
who needed to be loved
Isn't that true for all of us
“And, in the end
The love you take
is equal to the love you make.”
a time of giving and serving
It's an exchange of gratitude
for another year of living
What better way to share
than providing a home
for a rescue kitty
who needed to be loved
Isn't that true for all of us
“And, in the end
The love you take
is equal to the love you make.”
#animals
#birthday
#cats #love
#cats #love
64 reads
7 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 12:25pm
6th Nov 2024 12:25pm
NOT ALL VAMPIRES SUCK BLOOD
Your gaze wanders through corridors of dead and living poets, devouring, slipping in like thieves at midnight—not for communion with the spirit’s insight, but to feast, to draw stolen breath and reshape it as your own, a mimicry born without debt to the muse, a hollow construct grasping for self acclaim, void of responsibility to its sources.
Poetic Vampires, the charlatans of thought, these pale shadows drift through other minds, cloaked in filched passion and counterfeit phrases—a theater of echoes lacking the marrow of originality. They linger, barren of fresh vision, bereft of...
Poetic Vampires, the charlatans of thought, these pale shadows drift through other minds, cloaked in filched passion and counterfeit phrases—a theater of echoes lacking the marrow of originality. They linger, barren of fresh vision, bereft of...
#anger
#art
#disappointment
#frustration
#morality
38 reads
2 Comments
EleazarSwan
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 7:48am
6th Nov 2024 7:48am
To: the virgin Sophist
#politics
#rhyming
11 reads
0 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 5:03am
6th Nov 2024 5:03am
Channel 4 Dispatches allegedly biased, versus the Daily Mail a reliable source of balanced news!
By Stanley Collymore
Let's be perfectly blunt and not
only state but likewise face
facts seriously! Channel
4 Dispatches on the bountiful, and ongoingly
distinctly dubiously acquired wealth, of both
Charles and William at the obvious expense
of the NHS which they don't use; the Armed Forces: actually the Army and Navy; and, as
well, even charities, which they distinctively
hypocritically, literally pretend to champion,
really could not have been aired or would it
have been for very obviously legal reasons
alone, if...
Let's be perfectly blunt and not
only state but likewise face
facts seriously! Channel
4 Dispatches on the bountiful, and ongoingly
distinctly dubiously acquired wealth, of both
Charles and William at the obvious expense
of the NHS which they don't use; the Armed Forces: actually the Army and Navy; and, as
well, even charities, which they distinctively
hypocritically, literally pretend to champion,
really could not have been aired or would it
have been for very obviously legal reasons
alone, if...
#admiration
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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