Observational Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about life, society and the natural world
Poems written by Top Critiquers
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 9:32am
9th Mar 2025 9:32am
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hey babe
there is a
difference
between
BAR
n
BRA
...totally
different meaning
totally different words
with same alphabets
but
yaaa
I
can take off
my BRA in the BAR
n can show
my ample
milky boobies...
can you do that??
when the world
gets dark n lonely
i became a candle,
wrapped with red velvet,,
to burn in someone's fire...
can you do that??
babe...
don't make yourself a fool
be...
there is a
difference
between
BAR
n
BRA
...totally
different meaning
totally different words
with same alphabets
but
yaaa
I
can take off
my BRA in the BAR
n can show
my ample
milky boobies...
can you do that??
when the world
gets dark n lonely
i became a candle,
wrapped with red velvet,,
to burn in someone's fire...
can you do that??
babe...
don't make yourself a fool
be...
#anger
#mirror
138 reads
9 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
Today 6:52am
Today 6:52am
Demonolatry
Demonolatry
Scream idolatry
Seen a sprawling leak
Keen to call it freak
Seeming constantly, each adultery
Weaving harlotry, thieves and audit see
Reams of forgery
Thesis conjuring
Scenes accordingly
Creeping quarterly
Leading laundering, legions commonly
Keys responsively, keep the cornering
Region watering
Fees but fostered seeds
Each recording speaks
Dream apostasy
Decent lobbying,...
Scream idolatry
Seen a sprawling leak
Keen to call it freak
Seeming constantly, each adultery
Weaving harlotry, thieves and audit see
Reams of forgery
Thesis conjuring
Scenes accordingly
Creeping quarterly
Leading laundering, legions commonly
Keys responsively, keep the cornering
Region watering
Fees but fostered seeds
Each recording speaks
Dream apostasy
Decent lobbying,...
#humankind
#metaphor
#morality
#rhyming
#spiritual
27 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 3:20pm
27th Mar 2025 3:20pm
for the sake of sanity
if it ain't worth
dying for, then
it ain't worth
arguing over
build a bridge
and get over it
buy a Van
move and on
be like the dying
and just let go
dying for, then
it ain't worth
arguing over
build a bridge
and get over it
buy a Van
move and on
be like the dying
and just let go
#humankind
73 reads
6 Comments
eroseternal
Tim Eros
Tim Eros
Poem Published
29th Mar 2020 6:15pm
29th Mar 2020 6:15pm
Freedom to Love
Born into the world with only our souls
and we'll leave this life with only its content
Our naked bodies are complete and whole
with everything we need from beginning to end
Untainted, unbroken, sinfully naive
Our minds and hearts are free of despair
Unconsciously demanding of our own needs
with an awakening desire to receive loving care
We are free to love, but have lost our way
in this world where dreams are crushed by expectation
Expectations of being what others see
when we are already all we need to...
and we'll leave this life with only its content
Our naked bodies are complete and whole
with everything we need from beginning to end
Untainted, unbroken, sinfully naive
Our minds and hearts are free of despair
Unconsciously demanding of our own needs
with an awakening desire to receive loving care
We are free to love, but have lost our way
in this world where dreams are crushed by expectation
Expectations of being what others see
when we are already all we need to...
#love
#freedom
325 reads
2 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
24th Sep 2022 5:14pm
24th Sep 2022 5:14pm
Noah's Ark
Isn't it funny that we worry more about Mars and what's among the stars
Than we do about each other and what's in our oceans which aren't that far
Billions spent on the invention of powerful telescopes to look into outer space
Building satellite after satellite, along with a spacestation to head the race
We know nothing of each other, hell we barely notice each other's face
We consider times getting to know each other as time that we've wasted
Parents don't know their children, children don't know that their parents worry too
Neighbors live next to...
Than we do about each other and what's in our oceans which aren't that far
Billions spent on the invention of powerful telescopes to look into outer space
Building satellite after satellite, along with a spacestation to head the race
We know nothing of each other, hell we barely notice each other's face
We consider times getting to know each other as time that we've wasted
Parents don't know their children, children don't know that their parents worry too
Neighbors live next to...
#humankind
277 reads
4 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2021 11:54am
23rd Mar 2021 11:54am
good morning
hi anna grin do ye yet crave?
[please grin today
grandad is the abyss
are you yet poxed and plagued
not me granddad you are
via Carey
you been drinkin again granddad
yes gal
call your disgusting womb
get you fuck twin to
give them their own book
sing for a cure
called germs
you been fucked by demons
his real parents
now back off easy e's
he's afraid
I am white black
you are too ugly
daddy likes babies
thank God I never grew up
I am clean
now go to Islam and pray
he will...
[please grin today
grandad is the abyss
are you yet poxed and plagued
not me granddad you are
via Carey
you been drinkin again granddad
yes gal
call your disgusting womb
get you fuck twin to
give them their own book
sing for a cure
called germs
you been fucked by demons
his real parents
now back off easy e's
he's afraid
I am white black
you are too ugly
daddy likes babies
thank God I never grew up
I am clean
now go to Islam and pray
he will...
#dark
655 reads
2 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
6th Apr 2023 1:02am
6th Apr 2023 1:02am
Reality Is Mind
Reality Is Mind
The function
of the form is
to house
that function.
The form
is its own function.
The CTMU:
The back
of the head
evolved eyes
on its blindside,
knowing exactly
what it would find:
the Self-Directed,
still evolving.
Submitting
to reality
and dominating
our vanities,
we bring
all sides
of ourselves
into inner,
integrated
harmony.
The function
of the form is
to house
that function.
The form
is its own function.
The CTMU:
The back
of the head
evolved eyes
on its blindside,
knowing exactly
what it would find:
the Self-Directed,
still evolving.
Submitting
to reality
and dominating
our vanities,
we bring
all sides
of ourselves
into inner,
integrated
harmony.
#universe
#shadows
#evolution
247 reads
2 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
14th May 2022 1:40pm
14th May 2022 1:40pm
A day in a Nurses life
A day in a Nurses life
Many people do not see what a Nurse goes through each day my hat goes off to them.
The old man opens his eyes as I approach and manages a smile when he sees me.
“You again, young miss?” he struggles to speak.
She smiles and nods, checking his vitals, and fluffing his pillows. The old man is not long for this world; I hope his family makes it.
She sits and holds his hand for a few minutes, catching him up on the news, anything to take his mind off the inevitable.
As she leaves, the old man catches...
Many people do not see what a Nurse goes through each day my hat goes off to them.
The old man opens his eyes as I approach and manages a smile when he sees me.
“You again, young miss?” he struggles to speak.
She smiles and nods, checking his vitals, and fluffing his pillows. The old man is not long for this world; I hope his family makes it.
She sits and holds his hand for a few minutes, catching him up on the news, anything to take his mind off the inevitable.
As she leaves, the old man catches...
#LifeChangingMoment
601 reads
2 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 7:13pm
12th Oct 2024 7:13pm
To Shore
Even through the storms
the rough, the tumble, the turmoil
I'll leave the window open
to give you a place to shore
until that time again
unanchored
the winds carry you
and you're set to sail free
the rough, the tumble, the turmoil
I'll leave the window open
to give you a place to shore
until that time again
unanchored
the winds carry you
and you're set to sail free
#love
143 reads
0 Comments
Zazzles
Broom
Broom
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 00:07am
18th Feb 2025 00:07am
Dumb Things Narcissists Say # 2
Come to daddy
said the middle aged man
to his senior-citizen pet
the pet looks up
then flopped back down.
The man repeats himself
then says, you know daddy
has a bad leg, like wtf?
Copyright © 2025 J. Doucette
All rights Reserved
said the middle aged man
to his senior-citizen pet
the pet looks up
then flopped back down.
The man repeats himself
then says, you know daddy
has a bad leg, like wtf?
Copyright © 2025 J. Doucette
All rights Reserved
#PowerOfWords
157 reads
9 Comments
Hatful-of-Hollow
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 12:14pm
9th Mar 2025 12:14pm
Carry On dot.com Sitcom
Skinstorm of scripts
written upon Wi-Fi wrists,
ever the moon is vowel shaped
Wide to receive
from another lonely hand,
as roadkill waiting to be shovelled
earthed into the ground
Who will chalk around cursors
at love-crime cyber scene?
Something is squeezing your skull
Surfing Transmitted Disease,
tinder sticks smoulder desire
before rain retreats to the sky
& reality nothing more than a drunk emoji
Post mortem modem
threads bone though keyboards,
no ghosts in the machine
only...
written upon Wi-Fi wrists,
ever the moon is vowel shaped
Wide to receive
from another lonely hand,
as roadkill waiting to be shovelled
earthed into the ground
Who will chalk around cursors
at love-crime cyber scene?
Something is squeezing your skull
Surfing Transmitted Disease,
tinder sticks smoulder desire
before rain retreats to the sky
& reality nothing more than a drunk emoji
Post mortem modem
threads bone though keyboards,
no ghosts in the machine
only...
#technology
#universe
81 reads
1 Comment
Sappho
Poem Published
24th Apr 2024 8:18am
24th Apr 2024 8:18am
The Green Classroom
Lying on the soil of the forest
My refuge and my sanctuary
All my senses sharpened
Attentively observing the wildlife
I become a humble student of
All the mysteries of nature
Snail shells, ferns and hexagonal
Honeycombs teach me about
Sacred Geometry
From birds, howling wolves,
Rustling leaves and buzzing insects
I get to know the harmony of music
Nature's circle of
Birth, death and rebirth
Allows me insights in religion
Trees with their strong bonds and
Supportive relationships
Are my...
My refuge and my sanctuary
All my senses sharpened
Attentively observing the wildlife
I become a humble student of
All the mysteries of nature
Snail shells, ferns and hexagonal
Honeycombs teach me about
Sacred Geometry
From birds, howling wolves,
Rustling leaves and buzzing insects
I get to know the harmony of music
Nature's circle of
Birth, death and rebirth
Allows me insights in religion
Trees with their strong bonds and
Supportive relationships
Are my...
#gratitude
#inspirational
139 reads
2 Comments
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