Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
I know some of your secrets
I know enough
Maybe I’d like a few more
Perhaps not
I’m greedy
Not stupid
The fringe is paradise
Cold mornings
Despair in personal heat
You control my lust
Thermometer shatters
Mercury poisoning
Mercy ….
Maybe I’d like a few more
Perhaps not
I’m greedy
Not stupid
The fringe is paradise
Cold mornings
Despair in personal heat
You control my lust
Thermometer shatters
Mercury poisoning
Mercy ….
#crush
#despair
#lover
#lust
#temptation
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Find Me
To be looked at like yours is the only existence
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
#IMissYou
#love
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Strength Beyond Strength
I pray that…
You discover your vigor and courage coming from within
That resilience and heart carry you in their eternal wings
That they give you the driving force in those darkest times
And light will shine and steer you pulling at the heartstrings
.
I pray that…
You find solace in knowing you are worthy of love and respect
That no matter how hard the punches have been you can still stand
Even when the pain has been much to bear something is there
And that the fighting spirit will be near giving you a guiding hand
.
I...
You discover your vigor and courage coming from within
That resilience and heart carry you in their eternal wings
That they give you the driving force in those darkest times
And light will shine and steer you pulling at the heartstrings
.
I pray that…
You find solace in knowing you are worthy of love and respect
That no matter how hard the punches have been you can still stand
Even when the pain has been much to bear something is there
And that the fighting spirit will be near giving you a guiding hand
.
I...
#courage
#SelfDiscovery
#strength
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LOVE THOUGHTS
#erotic
#orgasm
#passion
#seductive
#sensual
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Everyone Has A Lover
I'm dazzled by her beauty
The stories she tells
The songs she sings
The things I learn from her at all times of the day and night
Regretfully , I use her and abuse her sometimes
Carelessly discarding her or leaving her at the mall
But
When my fingers wrap around her delicate frame I am beguiled by her tight little holes.
A frame so fragile that a sudden bump could damage her seriously
I know all the buttons she has for me to press and I press them often and instinctively
She comes alive when I look at her or sometimes just say hello ...
The stories she tells
The songs she sings
The things I learn from her at all times of the day and night
Regretfully , I use her and abuse her sometimes
Carelessly discarding her or leaving her at the mall
But
When my fingers wrap around her delicate frame I am beguiled by her tight little holes.
A frame so fragile that a sudden bump could damage her seriously
I know all the buttons she has for me to press and I press them often and instinctively
She comes alive when I look at her or sometimes just say hello ...
#gratitude
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exquisite beauty
her beauty
is so
exquisite,
it almost
pains me
to look
upon her
and know
i don't
feel
anything.
is so
exquisite,
it almost
pains me
to look
upon her
and know
i don't
feel
anything.
#admiration
#emotions
#respect
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Eternally
Love is a verse from your body,
outspoken when twisted to mine.
We merge like co-writing poets
who write in perfect rhyme.
Bliss is our bond shared in ballads;
no chorus I knew was unsung.
Each song I've offered held rapture,
hummed softly, using my tongue.
Lust lights a flame burning brightly
with a passionate ember's glow.
But always there, glowing inside me,
is a love you'll eternally know.
outspoken when twisted to mine.
We merge like co-writing poets
who write in perfect rhyme.
Bliss is our bond shared in ballads;
no chorus I knew was unsung.
Each song I've offered held rapture,
hummed softly, using my tongue.
Lust lights a flame burning brightly
with a passionate ember's glow.
But always there, glowing inside me,
is a love you'll eternally know.
#love
#sex
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These Dreams...
In this dream, we are together,
Inside a naff café -
Chatting over coffee...
Smiling.
Ok, maybe I still desire the special grill but hey,
Don't be distracted -
It'll help me concentrate;
Not that I need to, because,
I have examined each cute dimple,
Hook, line and sinker, that exist,
On your pretty little face.
I love your story too...
In fact, I wanna learn so much more!
You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws;
Without them, you are NOT you, rather,
A cheap imitation -
And who needs that,...
Inside a naff café -
Chatting over coffee...
Smiling.
Ok, maybe I still desire the special grill but hey,
Don't be distracted -
It'll help me concentrate;
Not that I need to, because,
I have examined each cute dimple,
Hook, line and sinker, that exist,
On your pretty little face.
I love your story too...
In fact, I wanna learn so much more!
You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws;
Without them, you are NOT you, rather,
A cheap imitation -
And who needs that,...
#coffee
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Gone
It's been months, still can't put myself together.
Stupid of me to believe I'd be yours forever.
The things your uncle did to you, your best friends suicide.
All the horrors you went through, for you I often cried.
When I thought you'd killed yourself, both times left me broken.
The sweet things that you'd say to me, I so needed to hear spoken.
The beauty in your movement, when you'd practice dance.
You are such an A type, to think I stood a chance.
I hope your life is perfect, I hope your dreams come true.
Despite the way it ended, I'll always...
Stupid of me to believe I'd be yours forever.
The things your uncle did to you, your best friends suicide.
All the horrors you went through, for you I often cried.
When I thought you'd killed yourself, both times left me broken.
The sweet things that you'd say to me, I so needed to hear spoken.
The beauty in your movement, when you'd practice dance.
You are such an A type, to think I stood a chance.
I hope your life is perfect, I hope your dreams come true.
Despite the way it ended, I'll always...
#breakup
#love
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I love you
I killed for you so we could come true.
Self righteousness has many debts.
A viable muse to get who you choose.
Don't hide from fate, it's just a gate.
Another life with all your pride.
No past regrets, just love and respect.
Self righteousness has many debts.
A viable muse to get who you choose.
Don't hide from fate, it's just a gate.
Another life with all your pride.
No past regrets, just love and respect.
#love
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u-4-ik
viz u4ik
#freedom
#love
#metaphor
#minimalist
#spiritual
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Not Yet Swans
We were fooled last week
when so many things outside
were tipped in green
And though darkness is
your favorite color,
you disrobed from it
and kicked it under the bed
As you accepted Spring
to your bosom
as you shook your hair back
and offered your throat
to the kiss of something
renewing
all of your tips to pink
At first, I felt like a bird
fidgeting upon your window ledge
(edge of the bed)
I suffered the settling
for at least bread crumbs
Two pieces, ...
when so many things outside
were tipped in green
And though darkness is
your favorite color,
you disrobed from it
and kicked it under the bed
As you accepted Spring
to your bosom
as you shook your hair back
and offered your throat
to the kiss of something
renewing
all of your tips to pink
At first, I felt like a bird
fidgeting upon your window ledge
(edge of the bed)
I suffered the settling
for at least bread crumbs
Two pieces, ...
#bittersweet
#LongDistanceRelationship
#separation
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