Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
These Dreams...
In this dream, we are together,
Inside a naff café -
Chatting over coffee...
Smiling.
Ok, maybe I still desire the special grill but hey,
Don't be distracted -
It'll help me concentrate;
Not that I need to, because,
I have examined each cute dimple,
Hook, line and sinker, that exist,
On your pretty little face.
I love your story too...
In fact, I wanna learn so much more!
You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws;
Without them, you are NOT you, rather,
A cheap imitation -
And who needs that,...
Inside a naff café -
Chatting over coffee...
Smiling.
Ok, maybe I still desire the special grill but hey,
Don't be distracted -
It'll help me concentrate;
Not that I need to, because,
I have examined each cute dimple,
Hook, line and sinker, that exist,
On your pretty little face.
I love your story too...
In fact, I wanna learn so much more!
You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws;
Without them, you are NOT you, rather,
A cheap imitation -
And who needs that,...
#coffee
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Shattered Love
You told me that you loved me...
...you gave me everything...
...so much - that it was too much!
I clutched the material things...
...wonderful memories...
...unbelievable feelings...
and the years of safety - so tightly!
I wanted it to be real.
But it was unbelievable...
...it wasn't what I had ever had...
...or ever known - I hesitated!
I tried to return feelings...
...but I hurt us both -
trying too hard to hold on to me...
and be what you deserved.
The weight of my past...
...piled too...
...you gave me everything...
...so much - that it was too much!
I clutched the material things...
...wonderful memories...
...unbelievable feelings...
and the years of safety - so tightly!
I wanted it to be real.
But it was unbelievable...
...it wasn't what I had ever had...
...or ever known - I hesitated!
I tried to return feelings...
...but I hurt us both -
trying too hard to hold on to me...
and be what you deserved.
The weight of my past...
...piled too...
#breakup
#love
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We Are Islands
We are islands, all
with our peninsulas and coves
With our forks in the road
that are really wishbones
Tugged at, by the piraticals
who want us to be their havens
while they recover from their scourging
from their touted opulent lives
Perhaps burying their treasure
within our dunes, before they go;
Memories mostly, and leaving us
with the short side of the wishbone
As the gold within good thoughts is worthless
to the truly alone
When nothing is left to spend it on
~
Perhaps I wished long enough ...
with our peninsulas and coves
With our forks in the road
that are really wishbones
Tugged at, by the piraticals
who want us to be their havens
while they recover from their scourging
from their touted opulent lives
Perhaps burying their treasure
within our dunes, before they go;
Memories mostly, and leaving us
with the short side of the wishbone
As the gold within good thoughts is worthless
to the truly alone
When nothing is left to spend it on
~
Perhaps I wished long enough ...
#happiness
#hope
#love
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Towering Silence
I have no right to you, don't know you
You're just a conjuring of words, like smoke
Signaling something more, yet distant
And I can feel the heat though we've never spoke
Time slows down in dreams, you know
As we try to hold that moment in our minds
Like an old photo, slightly out of focus
That still touches something deep inside
And you, if all my imaginings could be anything
Could be believing
Though I know not your voice in love, or even
Color of your hair, my dreams conceiving
I would touch you
Hand soft...
You're just a conjuring of words, like smoke
Signaling something more, yet distant
And I can feel the heat though we've never spoke
Time slows down in dreams, you know
As we try to hold that moment in our minds
Like an old photo, slightly out of focus
That still touches something deep inside
And you, if all my imaginings could be anything
Could be believing
Though I know not your voice in love, or even
Color of your hair, my dreams conceiving
I would touch you
Hand soft...
#dreams
#love
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Draw me
You wanted fire
to burn your insides.
Something to inspire...
You to express yourself
Draw me
on the subway wall.
I can be your next stop
Where you get off.
Draw me
The attraction is visible.
I am naked
in curvy sensual lines
And also weave in
some wavy golden strands
with dark shadows cast
along the body and soul
Trace the edges.
Press hard against me,
Baring down
bold and defining
Drawing you inside me
touching, kissing, more
And...
to burn your insides.
Something to inspire...
You to express yourself
Draw me
on the subway wall.
I can be your next stop
Where you get off.
Draw me
The attraction is visible.
I am naked
in curvy sensual lines
And also weave in
some wavy golden strands
with dark shadows cast
along the body and soul
Trace the edges.
Press hard against me,
Baring down
bold and defining
Drawing you inside me
touching, kissing, more
And...
#art
#FallingInLove
#lust
#passion
#sensual
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Two Sheets of Vampire
Two sheets intoxication dripping
hammered in ecstasy metamorphosis
a burning ember lighting my fire
tasting your skin between my lips
filling me with grace full of life
never ending peace of twilight
hammered in ecstasy metamorphosis
a burning ember lighting my fire
tasting your skin between my lips
filling me with grace full of life
never ending peace of twilight
#love
#romantic
#vampires
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short and sweet
i saw you downtown
from a distance...
and that was good
enough for me
from a distance...
and that was good
enough for me
#apathy
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Mm... Get Here If You Can
Get Here If You Can
Close your eyes, hear my sentiments as they cross faraway lands
A hard felt contender
For a soft pillow of surrender
Don’t be scared, shh, never be afraid
Now that echoes are silent serenades
Emotions now hiding behind a quiet masquerade
A never ending female’s dominating charade
Once had it made
Dopamine was the game, mentally parlayed
No one is getting compensated for words portrayed, or displayed
Get Here If You Can
By car, bus, or on a Boeing airplane as it lands
You can reach...
Close your eyes, hear my sentiments as they cross faraway lands
A hard felt contender
For a soft pillow of surrender
Don’t be scared, shh, never be afraid
Now that echoes are silent serenades
Emotions now hiding behind a quiet masquerade
A never ending female’s dominating charade
Once had it made
Dopamine was the game, mentally parlayed
No one is getting compensated for words portrayed, or displayed
Get Here If You Can
By car, bus, or on a Boeing airplane as it lands
You can reach...
#mythology
#water
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1 Comment
I
Don't think of you at
All
The time...
All
The time...
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8 Comments
Deserted
Sonoran desert
sparse like you
unsentimental wishes
alluring invitation
cancelled party
sparse like you
unsentimental wishes
alluring invitation
cancelled party
#desert
#hope
#TruthOfLife
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8 Comments
what makes me WET ?
the gentle breeze and
the virtual-soothing touch
coming from your side makes me wet
your glowing shadow
bathed in pale moonlight n wrapped in black
warm shade makes me wet
the aura
of your fearless lust
n naked words makes me wet
soundless kisses of us n
chain-less waist of mine longs to cling you tightly
n that makes me wet
an unpromising tomorrow
takes shape in the cold night
and makes me wet
i get wet when your pink lips
and delighted chin beard explore my genitals ...
the virtual-soothing touch
coming from your side makes me wet
your glowing shadow
bathed in pale moonlight n wrapped in black
warm shade makes me wet
the aura
of your fearless lust
n naked words makes me wet
soundless kisses of us n
chain-less waist of mine longs to cling you tightly
n that makes me wet
an unpromising tomorrow
takes shape in the cold night
and makes me wet
i get wet when your pink lips
and delighted chin beard explore my genitals ...
#crush
#love
#romantic
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My dream
Come to my dreams
someday...
I will lie in your arms
in a vast field
blanketed with verdant grass
and
dappled with white and yellow
wildflowers.
The mellowed smile of
joyous sun
enlivening the scenery
and clouds like ballerinas
gliding about
in their puffy white frocks,
telling tales of love's glory.
Cool velvety zephyr
caressing us lightly
as...
someday...
I will lie in your arms
in a vast field
blanketed with verdant grass
and
dappled with white and yellow
wildflowers.
The mellowed smile of
joyous sun
enlivening the scenery
and clouds like ballerinas
gliding about
in their puffy white frocks,
telling tales of love's glory.
Cool velvety zephyr
caressing us lightly
as...
#hope
#love
#nature #dreams
#nature #dreams
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