Love Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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Chocolate Paradise In His Arms
Sheet music we lay upon in the rapture of night
Instilling his royal loins as he elevates my, heart, mind, body and the esoteric passage to my soul
The stairway to Heaven we seek in the throne of divine passion
Easing into the desire once he parts my soft Pearly Gates
The beginning of our eternity within the quietness of times enclosing our charms of fate
Destiny we are cloaked
Lust we are soaked
Mm… ordained by the parables of King Solomon’s poetic Proverbs
Illuminating his wishes
Upon my supple Creole...
Instilling his royal loins as he elevates my, heart, mind, body and the esoteric passage to my soul
The stairway to Heaven we seek in the throne of divine passion
Easing into the desire once he parts my soft Pearly Gates
The beginning of our eternity within the quietness of times enclosing our charms of fate
Destiny we are cloaked
Lust we are soaked
Mm… ordained by the parables of King Solomon’s poetic Proverbs
Illuminating his wishes
Upon my supple Creole...
#lover
#mythology
#water
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HERS
Today is not only a day on the calendar,
It's a shared heartbeat,
A caress of the wind
On a quiet July afternoon,
And an embrace that dissipates all doubts,
Today I am more hers than ever.
It's a shared heartbeat,
A caress of the wind
On a quiet July afternoon,
And an embrace that dissipates all doubts,
Today I am more hers than ever.
#lover
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Wine
BUT A GLIMPSE OF THE SOUL
INTACT
THE FUSION
OF ALL WINES,
GODS
INTACT
THE FUSION
OF ALL WINES,
GODS
#love
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InsideOut
Baby, you're so beautiful inside out. Your mind shines bright no doubt. I love your personality. I also love your beauty. A beautiful face will age. But the body will change. A beautiful soul will engage. A heart that's rearranged. From a million broken pieces. The pressure releases. Like steam coming from a pot. Until Happiness unties the knot. Free as a bird floats across the sky. She's trying not to cry. Almost about to lose control. Until she realized laughter is good for the soul.
#anger
#love
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I know I'm doing this wrong, but I can't stop
You look at me like I'm heartbreak
like you're waiting for me to move that
extra inch and break your ribcage open
on my way out the door
And I won't lie
sometimes I think of running
in the same way I always think of running
because there isn't a love that
has flooded my veins
that I haven't wanted to escape
and there isn't a love I've run from
that I could bleed out of my soul
Love haunts me more than hate
more than anger
more than fear
If it's possible to die from a feeling
I would...
like you're waiting for me to move that
extra inch and break your ribcage open
on my way out the door
And I won't lie
sometimes I think of running
in the same way I always think of running
because there isn't a love that
has flooded my veins
that I haven't wanted to escape
and there isn't a love I've run from
that I could bleed out of my soul
Love haunts me more than hate
more than anger
more than fear
If it's possible to die from a feeling
I would...
#emotional
#heartbroken
#hurt
#love
#lover
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Flower
I rumbled,
And rumbled,
A flower intoxicated with its light.
And rumbled,
A flower intoxicated with its light.
#love
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Impressive
you got to admire
the braveness of
Archive playing
very long songs
in a world & time
of fast food music
for having the guts
to play huge parts
instrumental their
lengthy silences
for their build up
starting laid-back
quiet & dreamlike
until suddenly it's
hypnotic trip hop
or jaw-dropping
progressive rock
with stunning riffs
how intricate their
compositions are
it wasn't a concert
it was a drug free trip ...
the braveness of
Archive playing
very long songs
in a world & time
of fast food music
for having the guts
to play huge parts
instrumental their
lengthy silences
for their build up
starting laid-back
quiet & dreamlike
until suddenly it's
hypnotic trip hop
or jaw-dropping
progressive rock
with stunning riffs
how intricate their
compositions are
it wasn't a concert
it was a drug free trip ...
#admiration
#respect
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Moon and night
My chemical romance.
For you!
Bound together,
Moon and night.
Entangled on my ribs and bones.
You are the fire!
The knitted pleasure,
On this flesh of mine.
For you!
Bound together,
Moon and night.
Entangled on my ribs and bones.
You are the fire!
The knitted pleasure,
On this flesh of mine.
#love
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she is nude
her bare
flesh
contrasting
in blue
water,
but she
blends in
with
the desert,
and
her eyes
joining
like sky,
while her
dark hair
is night,
and her
smile, my
morning.
flesh
contrasting
in blue
water,
but she
blends in
with
the desert,
and
her eyes
joining
like sky,
while her
dark hair
is night,
and her
smile, my
morning.
#admiration
#happiness
#inspirational
#kindness
#love
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My Archive
some years ago
i spent my nights
watching Archive
"Live in Athens"
Their music is
sad & desolate
a refuge in my
darkest nights
it saved my life
in 2023 Archive
had a gig here
yet in that time
i went from one
crisis to another
it wasn't doable
together with my
support worker &
some practicing
a try-out concert
i got a rain check
February the 16th
i saw them live for
the first time after
...
i spent my nights
watching Archive
"Live in Athens"
Their music is
sad & desolate
a refuge in my
darkest nights
it saved my life
in 2023 Archive
had a gig here
yet in that time
i went from one
crisis to another
it wasn't doable
together with my
support worker &
some practicing
a try-out concert
i got a rain check
February the 16th
i saw them live for
the first time after
...
#admiration
#gratitude
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18 Comments
Abstract
I crave
A level of intimacy
That I have never met or seen
I crave something that extends beyond
The touches from friends and family
I crave it so badly, yet it is so far out of reach
A level of intimacy
That I have never met or seen
I crave something that extends beyond
The touches from friends and family
I crave it so badly, yet it is so far out of reach
#romantic
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Keep people out your business
Do not tell people things about your personal life, y is that cobra? well because they’ll tell everything about your personal life, twice, they’ll remix the story, have you like, that story ain’t right, have you so mad 😡 you’ll be knocking ish over, punching through walls, cursing people out, bouncing up in down, head moving side to side, ready to fight.
So keep it to yourself, I know it suck some time, cause you feel like venting be good for your health, truth be told it is good when the right people there, that circle made of thin air, in other words need to be...
So keep it to yourself, I know it suck some time, cause you feel like venting be good for your health, truth be told it is good when the right people there, that circle made of thin air, in other words need to be...
#inspirational
#LifeStruggles
#love
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