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"Loneliness is such a drag"  Tri-Ku?

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

Three Haiku's on Loneliness
Hello everyone. I was thinking about all the news stories that suggest we are the most lonesome generation. Apparently, elderly people are less isolated than people in their twenties.  

Can you express loneliness in three strikes of the Katana?


Write up to three (5,7,5) Haiku's expressing, imagining and examining etc etc, the feeling of loneliness.

Three Haiku's per person.  

"Loneliness is such a drag"
Jimi Hendrix: Burning of the Midnight Lamp, Electric Lady Land 1968


snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
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Untitled

My shadow gave me
From the floral wallpaper
A faded bouquet

 
Written by snugglebuck
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addictedhelp
lonely-soul
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom
Joined 8th May 2013
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Loneliness

To wake every day is a lonely task,
Just a normal conversation is to much to ask,
I sit in my chair and the windows my view,
My wife passed away theres no more me and you,
My meals are equally frozen there bagged for one meal,
Has i silently eat hoping this pain isnt real,
The days are getting harder my legs dont want to move,
My health deteriorates fast not much a day improves,
My vision now is much shorter tunnel vision is what i see,
Losing you has changed my life its slowly killing me,
So all i have is family and a house no longer a home,
My angel in heaven please wait for me im coming so we aren't alone,
No more growing for me im dying of a broken heart,
I spread my wings to fly to you it killed me being apart....
Written by addictedhelp (lonely-soul)
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addictedhelp
lonely-soul
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United Kingdom
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Untitled

My shadow gave me
From the floral wallpaper
A faded bouquet

 
Written by snugglebuck
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snugglebuck said:

If my poems to long its ok to delete

dizzzzzzy
Dangerous Mind
Curaçao 15awards
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Back when we were in school
I had a crush on you And then one day you were gone. Goodbye friend

David_Macleod
14397816
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 5th Nov 2014
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me, myself and I

me being alone
brings me to such a low ebb
Me, I have no flow


loneliness breaks
my precious porcelain heart
no glue to repair


I am so alone
like a cute dog with no bone
hunger to be seen

poet Anonymous

Thank you to all who have entered so far.  I am in aw. However I would like to stress that unless your entry is a haiku, it won't be counted in the competition.

That doesn't mean it isn't a worthy and heartfelt expression of loneliness.

poet Anonymous

i swim to the light
in deep end of the ocean
floating solitude


rhythmic shallow breaths
fold in useless bones and flesh
origam-a-skin


god of icy moon
feed me spoonful of dirt
city of angels

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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http://i1288.photobucket.com/albums/b482/jadepandora1/Haiku%20Renga%20sky%20and%20clouds%2000_zps7qzfrqzw.png

3 'ku


I lie here alone
under a cloudless night sky
with fallen black plums


the moon's mask of light
casts no shadow where I sleep
in solo orbit


never so alone
than a warm night of crickets
that sing not for me


Beukez
Twisted Dreamer
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Slipping down a hole, cold unmade dirty ass bed. Na mean? home alone

Nothing on the stove    
Pyramids of scuzzy clothes  
Forlorn ego cry  
   
Casue i dont need most  
If not all the shit i own  
People make a home  
   
Though alone i strive 
Cause i'm far too much alive  
To misuse my time
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jemac
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 25th Jan 2013
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After ...

Woodlands speak to her
Dreams have never made her bed
Long shadows remain

Restless under stars
Sleep walk in full moon blanket
Clandestine meetings

Hands spin out of time
Touching the slow turning pain
Nothing feels the same

Poetryman
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"Solitary Confinement "

Cracks in the sidewalk
Lead down a less travelled path
Past unmarked gravestones
 
The abyss opens
Where emptiness carves hollows  
Bones fall in shadows
 
My heart collects them
To play solitaire  
With my empty hands

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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Thank you, host doggerelsheets, for the opportunity, for the runner-up slot, and my congratulations to Poetryman, & to Vee!

poet Anonymous

Thank you for the nod DS and congratulations to Poetryman and Jade.

Poetryman
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Oh wow! Thank you doggerelsheets!
Congrats to Rina (Vee) and jade tiger (Jade-Pandora) for there runner-ups and everyone else who entered!!!
JJ

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