Rapping about how hard core you are.

Have max 3 verses and one hook, also if you can rap it over some beats that would be cool. max 2 entries.

Chorus
I’m never going to quit, (what?)   
This life I got to give, (what?)   
No contradict counterfeit,       
I’m just trying to live! (yeah)   
Forever going in, (yeah)   
Grinding till the end, (yeah)   
Fuck it I’m a spend,
I’m just trying to win!  
 

Verse 1      
There is no stopping me,       
It’s not like someone is watching me,       
no pinching pennies I got these remedies ready,       
So let silence devour us!  
 
Finding no time to cower,       
Flinching like a fuck boy fighting for power,       
Find me itching, I'm flowing, going for hours,       
So twist me up some sour!  
 
I got no substitutes,       
So make a move and see what it do,       
See me remove the shoes from a fool,       
Feast on these duels, beast on the beat!  
 
Better than clever flicking these levers,       
More words that a Webster,       
But remember...       
Nothing... lasts... forever! (yeah)  
 

Chorus  x2  
I’m never going to quit, (what?)
This life I got to give, (what?)  
No contradict counterfeit,
I’m just trying to live! (yeah)
 
Forever going in, (yeah)  
Grinding till the end, (yeah)  
Fuck it I’m a spend,
I’m just trying to win!
   
 
Verse 2       
I suppose a vocal poet knows no limits    
With Quotable logic like lock picks,    
Let me clean off these optics-    
So we can leverage these options,  
 
Dope flow leaves me noxious like strong narcotics,    
So toxic no clean-up crew can wash this.    
Like a Watchmen I move with caution,    
Casually skirt off it no stopping  
 
Slide to slaughter chopping down bars,    
My words may martyr, murder, put in work you never heard of,    
They may even hurt ya,    
Divert the herd on purpose,  
 
Perfect, now I got you learning,    
Playful at first a phonetical verve,    
They say I may light up in a church,    
So I stay seated, posted up on this perch.  
 

Chorus  x2
I’m never going to quit, (what?)   
This life I got to give, (what?)   
No contradict counterfeit,       
I’m just trying to live! (yeah)  
 
Forever going in, (yeah)   
Grinding till the end, (yeah)   
Fuck it I’m a spend,       
I’m just trying to win!  
 

Verse 3      
So dope and focused go quote this       
Flows sea sick see me boating       
Hoes on dick licking potion,       
You supposed to know,       
I’m a young Frodo       
I know not where I go.       
At shows they like "whoa"       
Flowing like a coke ho's nose,       
A kilo of snow,       
Defeat is not acceptable,       
I stay flexible,       
I could be next to go,       
A beach in Mexico!  
 
Chorus     
I’m never going to quit, (what?)   
This life I got to give, (what?)   
No contradict counterfeit,       
I’m just trying to live! (yeah)  
the bar has been set!



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Nice entry, thanks for sharing with us.

angst

The other night
I dreamt
I was a monkey
four fingers on my left hand
another for the
punk in me
the junkie
found my raincoat
on the floor
so she didn't want
to fuck me
licked up the iodine
from the wounds
where she cut me
called me a child
cause on her wet
I liked to hydroplane
I crashed
then I smiled
cut my teeth
on the Novocain
drive-through
tattoo in the dark
live in a cemetery grave
your folks call
a trailer park
sneak out to see me
with the weed
& the blood
show me the scars
while we do it in the mud
hide your cocaine
in the curry
in a hurry
to the play-mart
they found you
in a dumpster
thought you were smart
called you a hot-dog
mustard on your shirt
six feats over now
worms eat the dirt
wear my skull
as a mask
for the sake
of society
they pay for the lemonade
as I take a pee

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MY BEST FRIEND'S BITCH

Listen bitch, hear me stitch
You're not playing me against my friend
We'll be brothers to the very end
So you can cut the prick tease
I know you're trying to play the please
Shaking your tits and ass in front of me
Smiling over your shoulder as you leave

This story isn't new, it's as old as can be
Same old buzz, on a brand new screen
Your man and I won't become nemesis
Like Potiphar's old lady came between
Him and his friend Joseph, in Genesis
You're not playing me against my friend
We'll be brothers to the very end


So even though you're a pretty bitch
A hot horny witch full witchy tricks
It ain't going to work on this kid
Cause, despite your wickedness
Trying to burn my bro's friendliness
You're not playing me against my friend
We'll be brothers to the very end

You manipulator
You denigrator
Your nothing more than
An evil manipulator
You wicked BITCH!

BITCH!

Ah aint no body’s fool
An Am hung like a mule
Gotta a huge meaty dagger
It’s why Ah walk with a swagger
There aint nobody bigger
What rhymes with bigger?
You got it ma trigger
Ma grave digger
Full of vigour
Aint got no rigor
Like an Irish jigger
Step off

Hey now wazzup
Ah tried to smack ma bitch up

An Am hardcore
Ah don’t snore
Cause Am a porn dawg
Ah play leapfrog
With ma own cock
It’s like a rock
A puts it in a sock
Like Michael Jackson Ah beat it
If Ah could Ah would eat it
Ah aint sad or alone
When Ah get sex on ma phone
Sometimes it sucks
But it only cost five bucks

Hey now wazzup
Ah tried to smack ma bitch up


Ma bitch went crazy
And it all went hazy
Bitch savaged my leg
She chewed like a peg
Bitch done me like a fool
Ma advice: Never slap yer pit bull

Hey now wazzup
Ah tried to smack ma bitch up
Written by a white man on this occasion
It’s not appropriation it’s black sploitation

Gangsta

I'm a slick motherfucker
Lean mean and filthy rich
Ain't played like no sucker
I'm a bad ass son of a bitch

Strolling my hood you know
Just doing my nasty thing
Men see me and go woah
And their ladies just sing

I can make a priest pray
I can mess you right up son
Hardly done anyone today
But I'll do you just for fun

Exactly, that's how it should be.

jesusshits....you gotta be kiddin'........

egoShit imbecility.........g'odd blezz!

ANYONE ELSE GOING TO RECORD?

Hey all,

I would love to hear you wonderful people perform your lyrics (aka rap!).. It is hard for me to understand how you intend for your words to flow or how they would ride a beat (if any, and what type of instrumental you would use).  I am not the judge, but i agree with Beukez in that I would appreciate anyone actually performing their piece instead of just posting the words of the poem.  If you need any help recording with the free software Audacity, lemme know, i would be happy to assist!

I view this site as a place to experiment and grow. I think of all places to be vulnerable and put yourself out there, this is a pretty safe space to do it in.  Looking back on my first recordings, I am so proud of the progess I made and equally glad that despite my inner voice telling me that i am not good enough and people will laugh, that I started posting my recordings.

Just some dude on the internets $.02

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