A Picture is Worth...
eswaller
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Thank you for the instructions. I updated my entry to include the image. Thanks again.
Hepcat61
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geoff cat
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eswaller, you are welcome!
eswaller
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Oh my goodness. Somehow I messed it up (again). Now the poem isn't showing up. I don't know what I did.
Jade-Pandora
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eswaller said:Oh my goodness. Somehow I messed it up (again). Now the poem isn't showing up. I don't know what I did.
Dear Es, The link to your entry shows as a link but doesn't show the poem unless you tap/ click on the link. Otherwise, the photobucket link is working fine. So let's see what our host thinks once he comes in and takes a look. It's fixable.🌾
Dear Es, The link to your entry shows as a link but doesn't show the poem unless you tap/ click on the link. Otherwise, the photobucket link is working fine. So let's see what our host thinks once he comes in and takes a look. It's fixable.🌾
snugglebuck
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When Did It All Go Wrong?
In this world
Of alternative facts
Where everything is
Ready to collapse
Where nothing seems
To make any sense
And what it claims to be
Is the exact opposite
Do you ever ask yourself
The same question
What I ask myself
All the day long?
“When in the fuck
Did it all go wrong?”
Of alternative facts
Where everything is
Ready to collapse
Where nothing seems
To make any sense
And what it claims to be
Is the exact opposite
Do you ever ask yourself
The same question
What I ask myself
All the day long?
“When in the fuck
Did it all go wrong?”
Written by snugglebuck
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Hepcat61
geoff cat
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geoff cat
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Hello contestants - It seems that having two url links in your entry causes one - the link to your poems' texts - to show up as only a link...
Here's the work-around - if you have - as eswaller has - gotten your photo to appear in the competition, simply copy and past your poem's text into your entry - you can leave the link to your poem in the entry, it will appear as the poem's address; so, if the reader clicks on it, they will be taken to the poem's page.
I hope this helps...
geoff
Here's the work-around - if you have - as eswaller has - gotten your photo to appear in the competition, simply copy and past your poem's text into your entry - you can leave the link to your poem in the entry, it will appear as the poem's address; so, if the reader clicks on it, they will be taken to the poem's page.
I hope this helps...
geoff
eswaller
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Yes, that helps and makes sense. Thanks for all of your help. Somehow I got it to work again. I'm now leaving it alone.
eswaller
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And thanks Jade. I got it to work again. No more messing with it now.
seekingkate
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http://i1036.photobucket.com/albums/a450/geoff_collins2/8f4baffa-9e69-43f4-ad1c-c68a63d8265b_zps5wx4kuhe.jpg
for those who hear...
every night I glimpse her world
melancholic music plays, endlessly
she transports me with her thoughts
her life open for review
laid out before me
naked
on the edge of her bed
she’s sits
an empty shell
vacant
staring
whispering
I watch her, spellbound
not wanting to move as
her hopes
her dreams
her loves
come into view
she feels me watching
sometimes she’ll murmur quietly
‘I know you’re there….’
I hold my breath for a second, wondering
‘how?’
nights, weeks, and months have passed
she's talking to me more and more
hoping I hear her words and
I do
sometimes she’s forceful in what she says
adamant
demanding I hear her
‘remember this…or that…’
is tacked on to note its importance
I don’t answer
I just watch
and listen, earnestly
as though my life depended on it
knowing I need to embed her words in my being
aware they’ll help me continue on this path
a path not chosen by me
or her or those before her
but by something greater than us
way back when…
when we came into existence
I want to paint her
in my minds eye she’s there on canvas
dark as a Rembrandt portrait
mysterious as Da Vinci’s Mona Lisa
with a touch of Klimt’s erotica
I want to capture her soul like Caspar
blending it with the angst of Vincent
paint it with my reality and
Frida’s raw simplicity
she is me
she is all women
our past, our present, our future
she’s come to guide me
as I sail these turbulent seas
for those who hear
her wisdom is free
© Kate Adams 9/1/16
'The Penitent Magdalen' (1877) by Hans Heyerdahl
Phantom Lunch Companion
Stories are told of amputees
Who when an arm or a leg is taken
They still sense the presence of
The now absent limb as if it were a phantom
My lunch companion
Was excised from my life
Amputated from me
Due to my moronic and insensitive behavior
My inability to control the “Y” chromosome
Now when I visit the places of our former repasts
I can feel her presence there
My phantom lunch companion
Our first lunch, Mexican I think, was fascinating
Filled, at least for me, with the nervous excitement
Of meeting someone new
Our conversation quickly turned to deeper things
I met a soul open to frank discussion of real life,
My absolutely favorite kind of friend
At the little Italian place on the corner,
Where she spoke orgasmically of their Chicken crepes
We first sat by the window and spoke of
Her passion for spreadsheets
The prettiest geek in the room,
At that table there in the corner, against the wall
We spoke of our love and concern for our children
And our painful childhood memories
And, of course, the seemingly unavoidable
Spilling of something on my shirt
At the table nearest the front
Freedom was the topic
True self-expression
The living of life on our own terms
A skill my phantom lunch companion masters so much better than I
On my weekday bus rides out of town
I can’t help but glance at "our"table in Market Square
Where on a beautiful Winter’s day
We sat and ate Greek food
While she, wearing a bright smile,
Recounted her recent adventures in New York City
Family relationships, kids, work, cupcakes, tattoos, religion
Politics, movies, clothing, sex (not certain though), piercings, French, philosophy,
And so many more were the topics we discussed
While eating at the Chinese restaurant across the street
I think we would have solved all of what’s
Wrong with this world if given a few more meals
My lunch hours, although still enjoyable,
Are spent, now, with prosthetic companions
And one note conversations
These can never feel like the real thing
Though the table and meal are the same
And yet in some mysterious way
I can still feel the presence of my Phantom Lunch Companion
La Fin
(Image: Unattributed-found in Google search}
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Hepcat61
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Thank you, snugglebuck, for your entry and for participating in the competition.
geoff
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Hepcat61
geoff cat
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geoff cat
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Thank you, seekingkate, for sharing your words and photo with us and thank you for participating in the competition.
geoff
geoff
Hepcat61
geoff cat
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geoff cat
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Thank you, Gahddess_Worship for your image and words and for joining us in the competition.
geoff
geoff
Hepcat61
geoff cat
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geoff cat
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Thank you, calamitygin, for picture poem offering and for you adding to the competition...
geoff
geoff