Poetry competition CLOSED 10th July 2011 9:23pm
WINNER
Darkbee (DB)
Darkbee (DB)
WINNER
lepperochan (Craic-Dealer)
lepperochan (Craic-Dealer)
RUNNER-UP:
Viddax
I want Cliche.. A terrible challenge.
[quote]Eamon said:
night line (with dr krane)
hello is that dr krane,i'm going insane
i cant get this chick outta my brain
i guess i am saying, i'm in so much pain
i cant tell the sunshine from the rain
i gave her my heart and she ran away
its all so awful i just have to say
i thought of a hitting the rope today
but i coudna do it,am i o.k?
caller, i think you've lost the plot
i hear this sorta thing a lot
wipe your tears and clean your snot
she probably wasna all that hot
i think you should try drown your sorrow
you might feel better on the morrow
and if you dont, well dont bother me
i coudna give a shit you see!!
night line (with dr krane)
hello is that dr krane,i'm going insane
i cant get this chick outta my brain
i guess i am saying, i'm in so much pain
i cant tell the sunshine from the rain
i gave her my heart and she ran away
its all so awful i just have to say
i thought of a hitting the rope today
but i coudna do it,am i o.k?
caller, i think you've lost the plot
i hear this sorta thing a lot
wipe your tears and clean your snot
she probably wasna all that hot
i think you should try drown your sorrow
you might feel better on the morrow
and if you dont, well dont bother me
i coudna give a shit you see!!
You punched me once,
You punched me twice,
You kissed me thrice
- it tasted nice
and smoked, you did, from big cigar
and drank whiskey from your jar,
uncharacteristic of you it seemed
to taste my lipstick on your violent dreams.
You set alight to my hair
and push my face into the chair
until I'm crawling, bloody nose
- you kiss my hands and kiss my toes.
Grovelling is for the weak
when masculinity is all you seek,
never find it with a punch and kick
but fuck it, puppy love is sick.
You punched me twice,
You kissed me thrice
- it tasted nice
and smoked, you did, from big cigar
and drank whiskey from your jar,
uncharacteristic of you it seemed
to taste my lipstick on your violent dreams.
You set alight to my hair
and push my face into the chair
until I'm crawling, bloody nose
- you kiss my hands and kiss my toes.
Grovelling is for the weak
when masculinity is all you seek,
never find it with a punch and kick
but fuck it, puppy love is sick.
Fire and Ice,
we're so different
At yet im crazy in love with you.
Head over heels.
Never looking back,
You're who i've always waited for.
Its you and me against the world
Nothing can keep us apart
Our love is stronger than steel
Our love could move mountains
If i were a spider, you'd be my silk
If i were a train, you'd be my track
Im falling hard for you baby,
Wont you catch me?
we're so different
At yet im crazy in love with you.
Head over heels.
Never looking back,
You're who i've always waited for.
Its you and me against the world
Nothing can keep us apart
Our love is stronger than steel
Our love could move mountains
If i were a spider, you'd be my silk
If i were a train, you'd be my track
Im falling hard for you baby,
Wont you catch me?
:)
I have just a little more sap left...
My days are long
My life is blue
I think I'll cut myself
If I have to live without you
You're the breath I breathe
My sun my stars
And I will love you forever
Wherever you are
And if she mistreats you
Like women sometimes do
I will always be here
To cry mush all over you
If you love her better
Then I know that you know best
I'll write sappy fucking poetry
Then put a knife in my chest
My days are long
My life is blue
I think I'll cut myself
If I have to live without you
You're the breath I breathe
My sun my stars
And I will love you forever
Wherever you are
And if she mistreats you
Like women sometimes do
I will always be here
To cry mush all over you
If you love her better
Then I know that you know best
I'll write sappy fucking poetry
Then put a knife in my chest
LOL on the Text Line
FML!!!
sup babe?
dat bitch callie
wat she done?
startin roomerz
bout u?
nah, bout ur mom. yeah bout me!!
wat she say?
i fcked Luke Chambers in the locka room
its true tho!
i know but i dont want ppl thinkin ima slut
ur my slut tho
Lukey, ur such a jerk sumtimes. lol <3
FML!!!
sup babe?
dat bitch callie
wat she done?
startin roomerz
bout u?
nah, bout ur mom. yeah bout me!!
wat she say?
i fcked Luke Chambers in the locka room
its true tho!
i know but i dont want ppl thinkin ima slut
ur my slut tho
Lukey, ur such a jerk sumtimes. lol <3
This isn't an entry cause I didn't write it:
Will We Ever Meet?
by Ramona
Across the big blue pond
Lies my heart, my soul, my breath
Remaining there
Leaving me with nothing left
My love knows not of my existance
Does not know who I am
But it seems I've known them forever
The proof be in my hand
My hand is open
The example of my heart
The locket worn around my neck
Says I've loved you from the start
Ripped from my neck
Set outside and free
Tossed into the deep blue sea
My love, still weakening me...
My parents took my iPhone away
____________________________
Once connected,
Now rejected.
I feel myself falling
Twisting
Turning
Into a life of loneliness.
How will I manage?
No updates on Facebook
About my breakup with Brooke.
That whore.
Why don't they understand?
I have to text
Feel that familiar cramp in my hand.
I HATE YOU MOM && DAD!!!!!111
/truestory.
/justkidding
____________________________
Once connected,
Now rejected.
I feel myself falling
Twisting
Turning
Into a life of loneliness.
How will I manage?
No updates on Facebook
About my breakup with Brooke.
That whore.
Why don't they understand?
I have to text
Feel that familiar cramp in my hand.
I HATE YOU MOM && DAD!!!!!111
/truestory.
/justkidding
Our love was strong as an oak tree
our love was true as an old wives tale
Your lips were red as a red delicious apple
your eyes were blue as the summer sky
I’ll never know why you went away, you hurt me so
I’ll miss you forever, and forever I’ll pray to God above
you will come back to stay, and tell me how much you missed me
And this time we’ll get it right, on a dark, dark and stormy night
our love was true as an old wives tale
Your lips were red as a red delicious apple
your eyes were blue as the summer sky
I’ll never know why you went away, you hurt me so
I’ll miss you forever, and forever I’ll pray to God above
you will come back to stay, and tell me how much you missed me
And this time we’ll get it right, on a dark, dark and stormy night
Been teared appart; my broken heart
For me to gather and reuse the shards
And piece together as well as I can
With staples and glue guns, and tactless blue tack
Now it wont be as beautiful as your ice frozen heart
That forms perfectly without cracks or creases
And though so cold that it wont let in love
I'm envious of your strength
So I'll keep mending, working
For however long it takes
Making it once again worthy
To love you and make
That ice heart melt with my words so
Worthless
For all it takes to make me great
The wait for you's still worth it:)
For me to gather and reuse the shards
And piece together as well as I can
With staples and glue guns, and tactless blue tack
Now it wont be as beautiful as your ice frozen heart
That forms perfectly without cracks or creases
And though so cold that it wont let in love
I'm envious of your strength
So I'll keep mending, working
For however long it takes
Making it once again worthy
To love you and make
That ice heart melt with my words so
Worthless
For all it takes to make me great
The wait for you's still worth it:)
woohooo! first,joint first place for eamonn.
i'd like to take this opportunity to thank my mom and daddy,all the angels and saints and jesus mary and joseph.
also d.b and viddax for holding back and just not being quite good enough to beat me....
:)
i'd like to take this opportunity to thank my mom and daddy,all the angels and saints and jesus mary and joseph.
also d.b and viddax for holding back and just not being quite good enough to beat me....
:) 
