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Completing lines or verses (Sena)

Posted: 9th February 2016 7:37am
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Uncleslam

the future twisting our faith,
YES 1point for this line

Posted: 9th February 2016 8:13am
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Lost to ourselves
Too often trapped in conundrums
Of competing philosophies, brittle and empty religiosity...
Yet, redeemed
Redeemable
Seeking inward for ineffable truths

Posted: 9th February 2016 10:45am
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1 yes point for this one.


Lost to ourselves
Too often trapped in conundrums
Of competing philosophies

Posted: 9th February 2016 1:22pm
Edited: 9th February 2016 1:47pm
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as if we could see prehistory's stars
yet unborn, beyond when time had snuffed through
the black vortex of Andromeda's heart

Posted: 9th February 2016 6:55pm
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UFFFFFFF.

PANDORA, THAT WAS STRONG ONE..... I FELT YOU WERE READING ME..

YES 1 POINT.FOR JADE PANDORA.

RIGHT NOW, EVERYONE, IS IN ONE POINT. JUST AFEW, HAS NOT BEEN THERE YET...
THERES A FULL WEEK AHEAD.

Posted: 10th February 2016 5:49pm
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heading us toward an abliss of unnatural,unmaned and unnamed celistrial passages towards the conciouse of our forbidden future past

Posted: 10th February 2016 6:02pm
Edited: 10th February 2016 6:18pm - edited 2 times
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And our times spent star gazing through our dullard haze
lost light we see, quite. hmm quite lost
future turned past and lost in fury super nova supa stupor BOOM!
and the dim gloom...after...ugh...
of our man made ambient light
and heart...

crazed dudes pseudo love and world's
collide          in a..
big fucking bang..  WhOA!
Gawt! danged!
and for it we...be damne d...

damne d and bange d to do it allll
ova again...

jeeesss a lil..jess a lil..revolutution

Posted: 10th February 2016 8:40pm
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Clamitygin

This linr is a TEA 1 POINT

And our times spent star gazing through our dullard haze....

Posted: 10th February 2016 8:42pm
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,Good line UMCLESLAM

1 YES POINT

unmaned and unnamed celistrial passages towards the conciouse of our forbidden future past

Posted: 10th February 2016 9:33pm
Edited: 11th February 2016 4:26am - edited 3 times
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Theory and genius...
Mass produced happy solution
to questions pop culture produced
Wharhol says!? Man..far out...I am diggin another galaxy...groooovy
They love soup a go go
and Marylin overdosed...
exposed exposed exposed
in pinks blues and violets....
                               (purple)
Stars? have them by hundreds
they twist, Jackson's rolled up
toot toot,  lill engine that could many a nose....
Stars? got them. exposed.
hazed
by the hundreds

Posted: 10th February 2016 10:40pm
Edited: 11th February 2016 4:30am - edited 3 times
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retro grind rewind light years...
disembodied youth and ill
fittin anal country time retention
caused Midnight Cowboy
recourse...yeehaw baybeee...
intercourse with star boys
Ratzo Rizzo tappin Taxi'a
"I am walking here!"
dead..where the @$#! am i golden boy says?
easy!
"Holly came from Miami F L A
Hitch hiked her way across the USA
she never lost her head..
even when she was given head.  said"

Hey babe! I am walk in here!

doo da doo da doo doo doo doo da doo da doo doo doo doo doo .. da doo doooooo....

Posted: 12th February 2016 7:36am
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calamitygin

THIS ONE GAVE YOU A YES POINT 1


retro grind rewind light years...
disembodied youth and ill

Posted: 12th February 2016 12:52pm
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in the veil of star nurseries,
smoke spires from off

fossil-strewn horizons,
ruching the length of sky,

never to fully cure, only to
warp in time's languishment,
to render the tallow

Posted: 12th February 2016 12:56pm
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pandora 1 POINT YES....

in the veil of star nurseries,
smoke spires from off

fossil-strewn horizons,
ruching the length of sky,

THE WORD FOSSIL, GOT YOU THE POINT.
IF IT WAS NOT FOR THAT THAT WORD
IT WOULDNT MAKE SENSE TO ME. nice one. really nice piece you put in that poem

Posted: 12th February 2016 12:59pm
Edited: 12th February 2016 1:01pm
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RSena said:pandora 1 POINT YES....

in the veil of star nurseries,
smoke spires from off

fossil-strewn horizons,
ruching the length of sky,

THE WORD FOSSIL, GOT YOU THE POINT.
IF IT WAS NOT FOR THAT THAT WORD
IT WOULDNT MAKE SENSE TO ME. nice one. really nice piece you put in that poem

Thank you, SENA, exactly.  Very observant and spot-on:  "fossil (strewn)" is the lynch-pin to this set.
== Jade Pandora

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