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Unimaginative poetry

Posted: 24th October 2015 8:20pm
highwaytohell
highwaytohell
Greg
Thought Provoker
South Africa
Joined 24th Sep 2015
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Stating the obvious huh 1000 points for that. Lets see who are our next contenders.

Posted: 24th October 2015 9:06pm
calamitygin
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
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I guess i dont understand what unimaginatave means to you and random. Random is relitave to topic. If their is no specific topic...everything is random...and your piece is imaginative.. No imagination would be like i watched paint dry...unimaginative and random seeem opposite..could

Like yours talking about a replying shadow is imaginative....i think Kate was on track...i wrote 4 poetry lines

Thats intentionally unimaginative..

We need you to explain..

Posted: 24th October 2015 10:01pm
vortexman
vortexman
Dangerous Mind
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I think mine is very randomly awkward and makes absolutely no sense until the end.  At that point the fact that it does make sense at the end adds to its random nonsense.  

Posted: 25th October 2015 00:40am
shakka
shakka
shauna
Thought Provoker
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Joined 5th Aug 2015
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and that's all she said
to the voices in her head
memories shed
when her mind goes to bed
now I must stop
'cause this poem hurts my head.

Posted: 25th October 2015 1:20am
lepperochan
lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
Yemen 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14583
when I find myself
constantly breathing

just to stay alive

I come to realize
we are slaves to design

and it's many flaws

Posted: 25th October 2015 1:48am
Zazzles
Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1797
mary had a little lamb
it likes to eat spam
it moo's on the grass
and blows shit out it's ass!

Posted: 25th October 2015 2:01am
Phaedra_Farrow
Phaedra_Farrow
Ina
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 12th Oct 2015
Forum Posts: 22
I sat in your lap
Don't read much
Into things
It's not your cock
I want to ride
But a girl was taught
to be polite
And,  you're sitting
In my chair

Posted: 25th October 2015 2:08am
Zazzles
Zazzles
Broomie
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Forum Posts: 1797
Phaedra_Farrow said:I sat in your lap
Don't read much
Into things
It's not your cock
I want to ride
But a girl was taught
to be polite
And,  you're sitting
In my chair
lmao!

Posted: 25th October 2015 2:20am
Zazzles
Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
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http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b43/tabithadrake/tea_zpszhb7wj0z.jpg


Tea Time In My Tree-House
Three Word Inspiration                
Frugality, Tree-house,blunderbuss    

     
               
Nobody is more frugal than me.          
In fact, I hold the first place title in Frugality Awareness!        
I built my first Tree-house outta logs that had fallen from harsh winters past,      
and just about any-ole thing laying around in my backyard or out in my shed.    
Easy Peasy,that's me!                
I don't know how to use blunderbuss in a sentence without sounding Dim,        
So I'll just sit here in my Tree-House
drinking tea with my cats!                

Posted: 25th October 2015 2:58am
JAZZMANOR
JAZZMANOR
Tyrant of Words
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Woke up and donned clothes
slinged hash
jettied home
pan in food for dog
put on the idiot box
and slumped into nothingness

Posted: 25th October 2015 4:00am
archetype23
archetype23
Tyrant of Words
United States 7awards
Joined 5th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 3672
She's here now in imagination
riding my pulsating cock, abomination
master of elation celebration inside her
unintentional celibate masturbation
Time stands still, TICK...TOCK..
A painful prick on my Dick
and a spider in my cum sock

Posted: 25th October 2015 4:11am
rabbitquest
rabbitquest
Dangerous Mind
Ukraine 2awards
Joined 20th May 2012
Forum Posts: 2051

I really am some lesh
I graduated from Lose 'em HS
I watered my garden with Mel's hose
I got cut and suffered heme loss
And got a rare illness: Moss heel
I almost became home less
Were it not for a job at the mess hole.

Posted: 25th October 2015 4:30am
Zazzles
Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1797
lmao rabbit so good
that I wanna fall down and cry
lay down and dye
I have to go bye bye
i want pie
oh my!

Posted: 25th October 2015 4:34am
Zazzles
Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1797
All these entries are fucking hilarious!
This should be endless!!!

Posted: 25th October 2015 5:13am
dejure
dejure
vick
Dangerous Mind
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like some colourful things and
you know like sun and
warm feelings and
something like butterflies and
some thing is happening in my stomach
when i think of you
i'm falling in love
thats why all this
I LOVE YOU
more than suns and
moons and
stars and
the whole
universe



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