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kissofthedevil (Somebody Useless)
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Friendship transition to lovers
Anonymous
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His name was Savior and his love was named Legacy, two souls that were separated from each other. No matter how long they were taking away from each other he would find her.
Savior was a servant to mankind. He was also a soldier to the people he loved most in his life. He was true and loyal to her and the others. His soul was pure and strong. He did everything he could to make the people he cared about to smile and protect them.
Legacy was a fallen angel sent from Hell. She did everything to fight her battles on her own. She didn't give up without a fight. Her soul was strong. Although, their were moments were she let her voices inside her head get the best of her.
Even as they first met, her heart couldn't stop beating. She didn't quite know this feeling so well. She didn't want to believe this feeling inside her was true. That was until she felt his lips on her. She was no longer in pain but happy.
The difference between Legacy and Savior wasn't just the fact they were different but because both knew how painful love was. Many girls loved Savior, to them he was their God. As for Legacy, she wasn't anything like Savior. No matter, how much Savior would reach out to prove to Legacy he was only hers to love. That would never reach out to her. Legacy was as stubborn to believe something like that but she knew it was true.
When the moment came he found her leaning against a cherry blossom tree. He smiled and walked towards her. He place a red rose in her long dark hair.
"You came..." She says without looking at him.
"Don't I always."
"Yes but may I ask you something?"
"Why did you fall for me?" She asks as she returned her gaze to the full moon. He smiled and sat beside her. His gaze didn't leave stars.
"I fell for you because you are sweet and you always know what to say when I'm depressed or when Hell has come to ruin my day. You're there when I need you most. Now, why did you fall for me?" Savior asked, taking Legacy hand and held it close to his beating heart.
He was her love. He was her fate. He was her legacy. Nothing could change that between them. He was the reason he never gave up on his life.
"I fell for you because you know what to do when you see me falling. I know, when I'm losing faith you will would be there to hold me. You keep my soul living." Legacy said to Savior as she rested her hand on his heart.
She was his soul. She was his strength. She was his savior. If she lost him, she wouldn't be anything but a piece of the past to him. For her, she would no longer exist in the World of the Living. She tried to hold back her tears, this feeling was growing to much that it began to bring her pain inside.
When she opened her eyes, he was down on one knee. His brown eyes looking into her dark brown eyes. He smiled. "Legacy, will you marry me?" He asked her.
Legacy eyes widen, but to find tears running down her red cheeks. Was this what she been waiting for to spend the rest of her life with a soldier she truly love? Would she give up everything she had just to be with him?
"Yes, I will Savior." She says to him with joy in her voice.
Few months later...
In a Gothic style church, Savior waited at the alter in his mad hatter suit. The one he had mention to Legacy so many months ago. The day they talked about their love and wedding day has finally came. When the music began to play, Legacy appeared down the aisle. In her black Victorian Gown and a bouquet of roses, iris, and tiger lily in her hands. In front, of her was their four beautiful children, Naomi Rose, Alice Iwasawa, James Tim, and Yuki. Naomi and Alice both were their flower girls. While James and Yuki held the rings.
This was more than a fairy tale but reality.
"Water giver of life witness the love of the two being you gave birth to." Savior said .
"Moon the light of this world help guide us to a happy life." She said.
"Sun light that destroys evil help these two lovers from the evils of this world." Both lovers said with a smile.
"I take you Legacy to be my love for the rest of my life." Savior placed a sliver ring on her ring finger and smiled. "To be the only one to share my love with." He said his hands on Legacy cheek and looked at her.
"I take you Savior to be the one heart I hold." She says with a smile as she places the ring on his finger. "To be the only one to share my love with." She says.
They smiled. Her placed his hand on her cheeks and leaned in. She closed his eyes and felt his lips on her. He held her body close to his. Every touch, was a new feeling she was letting in.
"I love you Savior."
"I love you too, Legacy."
No matter, how many times they fight. They know, they love each other no matter what.
Savior was a servant to mankind. He was also a soldier to the people he loved most in his life. He was true and loyal to her and the others. His soul was pure and strong. He did everything he could to make the people he cared about to smile and protect them.
Legacy was a fallen angel sent from Hell. She did everything to fight her battles on her own. She didn't give up without a fight. Her soul was strong. Although, their were moments were she let her voices inside her head get the best of her.
Even as they first met, her heart couldn't stop beating. She didn't quite know this feeling so well. She didn't want to believe this feeling inside her was true. That was until she felt his lips on her. She was no longer in pain but happy.
The difference between Legacy and Savior wasn't just the fact they were different but because both knew how painful love was. Many girls loved Savior, to them he was their God. As for Legacy, she wasn't anything like Savior. No matter, how much Savior would reach out to prove to Legacy he was only hers to love. That would never reach out to her. Legacy was as stubborn to believe something like that but she knew it was true.
When the moment came he found her leaning against a cherry blossom tree. He smiled and walked towards her. He place a red rose in her long dark hair.
"You came..." She says without looking at him.
"Don't I always."
"Yes but may I ask you something?"
"Why did you fall for me?" She asks as she returned her gaze to the full moon. He smiled and sat beside her. His gaze didn't leave stars.
"I fell for you because you are sweet and you always know what to say when I'm depressed or when Hell has come to ruin my day. You're there when I need you most. Now, why did you fall for me?" Savior asked, taking Legacy hand and held it close to his beating heart.
He was her love. He was her fate. He was her legacy. Nothing could change that between them. He was the reason he never gave up on his life.
"I fell for you because you know what to do when you see me falling. I know, when I'm losing faith you will would be there to hold me. You keep my soul living." Legacy said to Savior as she rested her hand on his heart.
She was his soul. She was his strength. She was his savior. If she lost him, she wouldn't be anything but a piece of the past to him. For her, she would no longer exist in the World of the Living. She tried to hold back her tears, this feeling was growing to much that it began to bring her pain inside.
When she opened her eyes, he was down on one knee. His brown eyes looking into her dark brown eyes. He smiled. "Legacy, will you marry me?" He asked her.
Legacy eyes widen, but to find tears running down her red cheeks. Was this what she been waiting for to spend the rest of her life with a soldier she truly love? Would she give up everything she had just to be with him?
"Yes, I will Savior." She says to him with joy in her voice.
Few months later...
In a Gothic style church, Savior waited at the alter in his mad hatter suit. The one he had mention to Legacy so many months ago. The day they talked about their love and wedding day has finally came. When the music began to play, Legacy appeared down the aisle. In her black Victorian Gown and a bouquet of roses, iris, and tiger lily in her hands. In front, of her was their four beautiful children, Naomi Rose, Alice Iwasawa, James Tim, and Yuki. Naomi and Alice both were their flower girls. While James and Yuki held the rings.
This was more than a fairy tale but reality.
"Water giver of life witness the love of the two being you gave birth to." Savior said .
"Moon the light of this world help guide us to a happy life." She said.
"Sun light that destroys evil help these two lovers from the evils of this world." Both lovers said with a smile.
"I take you Legacy to be my love for the rest of my life." Savior placed a sliver ring on her ring finger and smiled. "To be the only one to share my love with." He said his hands on Legacy cheek and looked at her.
"I take you Savior to be the one heart I hold." She says with a smile as she places the ring on his finger. "To be the only one to share my love with." She says.
They smiled. Her placed his hand on her cheeks and leaned in. She closed his eyes and felt his lips on her. He held her body close to his. Every touch, was a new feeling she was letting in.
"I love you Savior."
"I love you too, Legacy."
No matter, how many times they fight. They know, they love each other no matter what.
Anonymous
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Anonymous
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Procommenter, this is not the place for your soap-box philosophies. I realize you are a new member, so here is one warning. It is not considered polite to hijack another member's thread for irrelevant posts. Save it for your own space on DU, under your poetry submissions.
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Amazing Angel
God has blessed me with a curse
like heroin but sometimes worse
Gorgeous women from my dreams
have graced my world, or so it seems
Throughout my life, they’ve all been one
with oceanic eyes and hair like sun
Different names, they all claim
but deep inside, they’re all the same
Straight from heaven, in the least likely place
an angel struck me with her beautiful face
My eyes glued to her, couldn’t pry them away
I admired her beauty and have since that day
Brown eyes and dark hair with warm olive skin
but lust, I did not, too precious for sin
I continued to see her, my tongue always frozen
by this perfect creation for whom I was not chosen
One warm afternoon, she sat beside me
she started to talk, open and free
We conversed for an hour and I was amazed
that the peace within her was more than a phase
A few weeks went by as we cruised separate streets
‘til our paths crossed again like we didn’t miss a beat
The more time we spent, the more clearly I saw
that we shared the same pasts, wicked and raw
In this precious girl, I saw much of myself
as she shared with me, her internal wealth
This angelic woman had me in a trance
triggering reveries of future romance
Sometimes I’m not sure and I don’t understand
so I put faith in God and his master plan
I trust there’s a reason this angel is here
She’s become a great friend and helped me fight fear
I haven’t a clue what the future may bring
for me and this woman with bracelets and rings
but one thing I know is how much I care
and for this sweet angel, I’ll always be there
God has blessed me with a curse
like heroin but sometimes worse
Gorgeous women from my dreams
have graced my world, or so it seems
Throughout my life, they’ve all been one
with oceanic eyes and hair like sun
Different names, they all claim
but deep inside, they’re all the same
Straight from heaven, in the least likely place
an angel struck me with her beautiful face
My eyes glued to her, couldn’t pry them away
I admired her beauty and have since that day
Brown eyes and dark hair with warm olive skin
but lust, I did not, too precious for sin
I continued to see her, my tongue always frozen
by this perfect creation for whom I was not chosen
One warm afternoon, she sat beside me
she started to talk, open and free
We conversed for an hour and I was amazed
that the peace within her was more than a phase
A few weeks went by as we cruised separate streets
‘til our paths crossed again like we didn’t miss a beat
The more time we spent, the more clearly I saw
that we shared the same pasts, wicked and raw
In this precious girl, I saw much of myself
as she shared with me, her internal wealth
This angelic woman had me in a trance
triggering reveries of future romance
Sometimes I’m not sure and I don’t understand
so I put faith in God and his master plan
I trust there’s a reason this angel is here
She’s become a great friend and helped me fight fear
I haven’t a clue what the future may bring
for me and this woman with bracelets and rings
but one thing I know is how much I care
and for this sweet angel, I’ll always be there
Anonymous
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Gemini said:Amazing Angel
God has blessed me with a curse
like heroin but sometimes worse
Gorgeous women from my dreams
have graced my world, or so it seems
Throughout my life, they’ve all been one
with oceanic eyes and hair like sun
Different names, they all claim
but deep inside, they’re all the same
Straight from heaven, in the least likely place
an angel struck me with her beautiful face
My eyes glued to her, couldn’t pry them away
I admired her beauty and have since that day
Brown eyes and dark hair with warm olive skin
but lust, I did not, too precious for sin
I continued to see her, my tongue always frozen
by this perfect creation for whom I was not chosen
One warm afternoon, she sat beside me
she started to talk, open and free
We conversed for an hour and I was amazed
that the peace within her was more than a phase
A few weeks went by as we cruised separate streets
‘til our paths crossed again like we didn’t miss a beat
The more time we spent, the more clearly I saw
that we shared the same pasts, wicked and raw
In this precious girl, I saw much of myself
as she shared with me, her internal wealth
This angelic woman had me in a trance
triggering reveries of future romance
Sometimes I’m not sure and I don’t understand
so I put faith in God and his master plan
I trust there’s a reason this angel is here
She’s become a great friend and helped me fight fear
I haven’t a clue what the future may bring
for me and this woman with bracelets and rings
but one thing I know is how much I care
and for this sweet angel, I’ll always be there
I loved your depiction in this beautiful ink
Gemini
God has blessed me with a curse
like heroin but sometimes worse
Gorgeous women from my dreams
have graced my world, or so it seems
Throughout my life, they’ve all been one
with oceanic eyes and hair like sun
Different names, they all claim
but deep inside, they’re all the same
Straight from heaven, in the least likely place
an angel struck me with her beautiful face
My eyes glued to her, couldn’t pry them away
I admired her beauty and have since that day
Brown eyes and dark hair with warm olive skin
but lust, I did not, too precious for sin
I continued to see her, my tongue always frozen
by this perfect creation for whom I was not chosen
One warm afternoon, she sat beside me
she started to talk, open and free
We conversed for an hour and I was amazed
that the peace within her was more than a phase
A few weeks went by as we cruised separate streets
‘til our paths crossed again like we didn’t miss a beat
The more time we spent, the more clearly I saw
that we shared the same pasts, wicked and raw
In this precious girl, I saw much of myself
as she shared with me, her internal wealth
This angelic woman had me in a trance
triggering reveries of future romance
Sometimes I’m not sure and I don’t understand
so I put faith in God and his master plan
I trust there’s a reason this angel is here
She’s become a great friend and helped me fight fear
I haven’t a clue what the future may bring
for me and this woman with bracelets and rings
but one thing I know is how much I care
and for this sweet angel, I’ll always be there
I loved your depiction in this beautiful ink
Gemini
