Poetry competition CLOSED 29th July 2011 6:00pm
WINNER
Starlight_angel
Starlight_angel
Penetration!
Yes I liked the these because they both spoke clearly about penetrations of two different types. (Though there were similarities.) Dinner clearly speaks of a man's view of cunnilingus. Definitely oral penetration going on here but yet we know a skilled tonguesmith will bring forth strong mntal penetration as well.
Pleasure me on the other hand for the reader as a delicious "mind fuck". Planting suggestive images to seduce; get into the readers head with very visual seductive imagery. That too is penetration as well. Both are good and not long odes.
Pleasure me on the other hand for the reader as a delicious "mind fuck". Planting suggestive images to seduce; get into the readers head with very visual seductive imagery. That too is penetration as well. Both are good and not long odes.
Her weight against me.
Her hair brushes against my skin.
Her scent fills my nostrils.
Longing for her, wanting her.
Her fingers slowly melt into me.
Filling me completely.
My breath stops, my hip rise to
met her hand.
My heart pounds in my head,
my wet sweetness pulses in
my stomach.
My thighs ache, my chest burns.
Every nerve tingles.
Until I collaspe in exhaustion.
Her hair brushes against my skin.
Her scent fills my nostrils.
Longing for her, wanting her.
Her fingers slowly melt into me.
Filling me completely.
My breath stops, my hip rise to
met her hand.
My heart pounds in my head,
my wet sweetness pulses in
my stomach.
My thighs ache, my chest burns.
Every nerve tingles.
Until I collaspe in exhaustion.
Exit Here
She wept solemnly, strewn across the coffin, spilling her heart
on loose-leaf paper. Her cigarette long burnt out in a puff of
ash, almost as confusing now as his body was then. The honeymoon,
O, the honeymoon, the day to remember how to forget. She tasted the
champagne and the trip of his tongue as he brought her woozy fingers
in his hand and said, "It's time to go to bed." Oddly red sheets,
in blots, like a scene, her body hollow with anticipation, her lungs
ringing with holes of the questionable kind. He practically jumped on
her frail frame laying snugly between her beach-sand gown and bed. His hand
cupped away at the grains and loosed free her skin in a whorl, with
one swift tear her hair broke free and haloed the room with innocent
suggestion. She puckered, he pinched, she threw coo's like knives,
he dodged all distraction with lips like rubbing alcohol and gauze. Guns hammered lazily
in the distance, and dreams fell like clouded angels, blinded by lust, surely they were the
opalescent oracles of the night that the vicars spoke of. He pushed through her veil and strummed
mysteriously taught chords for lack of reason, she swallowed his pride
and the idea of pain was apparent on her face. Her eyes burning questions
when he stopped in his movements, he fell atop her breasts like a babe
drinking himself drunk, goodnight. He never woke from this dream, but she, O,
but she surely screamed.
She wept solemnly, strewn across the coffin, spilling her heart
on loose-leaf paper. Her cigarette long burnt out in a puff of
ash, almost as confusing now as his body was then. The honeymoon,
O, the honeymoon, the day to remember how to forget. She tasted the
champagne and the trip of his tongue as he brought her woozy fingers
in his hand and said, "It's time to go to bed." Oddly red sheets,
in blots, like a scene, her body hollow with anticipation, her lungs
ringing with holes of the questionable kind. He practically jumped on
her frail frame laying snugly between her beach-sand gown and bed. His hand
cupped away at the grains and loosed free her skin in a whorl, with
one swift tear her hair broke free and haloed the room with innocent
suggestion. She puckered, he pinched, she threw coo's like knives,
he dodged all distraction with lips like rubbing alcohol and gauze. Guns hammered lazily
in the distance, and dreams fell like clouded angels, blinded by lust, surely they were the
opalescent oracles of the night that the vicars spoke of. He pushed through her veil and strummed
mysteriously taught chords for lack of reason, she swallowed his pride
and the idea of pain was apparent on her face. Her eyes burning questions
when he stopped in his movements, he fell atop her breasts like a babe
drinking himself drunk, goodnight. He never woke from this dream, but she, O,
but she surely screamed.
Anonymous
Her kitten is wet
I longingly want to stick my dog in
Being furry breed she shags and I can't see the hole
I am barking at this dismal situation
I seek to penetrate and keep myself from barking
She bends over but I don't want to bark up the wrong tree
I'll chase her around like a mailman
Just to chew on her like my new doggy toy
Howling in satisfaction this kitty let me pet her
I shove my hotdog inside finally getting to bury my bone
To bad its in her backdoor flap
When we are done I lay down with my tail in between my legs
Penetration doggystyle makes us both take cat naps...
I longingly want to stick my dog in
Being furry breed she shags and I can't see the hole
I am barking at this dismal situation
I seek to penetrate and keep myself from barking
She bends over but I don't want to bark up the wrong tree
I'll chase her around like a mailman
Just to chew on her like my new doggy toy
Howling in satisfaction this kitty let me pet her
I shove my hotdog inside finally getting to bury my bone
To bad its in her backdoor flap
When we are done I lay down with my tail in between my legs
Penetration doggystyle makes us both take cat naps...
Melt
So turgid is my length
Seductive lips play coquettish games
Her caramel tongue invites me in
My goddess, so moist her depth
swallows me whole
Her kisses flow like melting butter
Her tongue unfurls and wraps around me-
bucking with a piston pump grip
Ecstasy shatters my masculine sheath
and she takes me to my limit
Her warm lips part to reveal the surging flood
of my hot white syrup painting l o v e upon her pallet
I m e l t
Everything else is forgotten
So turgid is my length
Seductive lips play coquettish games
Her caramel tongue invites me in
My goddess, so moist her depth
swallows me whole
Her kisses flow like melting butter
Her tongue unfurls and wraps around me-
bucking with a piston pump grip
Ecstasy shatters my masculine sheath
and she takes me to my limit
Her warm lips part to reveal the surging flood
of my hot white syrup painting l o v e upon her pallet
I m e l t
Everything else is forgotten
Alright, I'll give this a try:
Soft and trusting hands explore my landscape.
High mountains and low valleys
Bring your own peak to it's greatest heights.
Plunging yourself into pools of colour wonderful,
My opening accepts you like a sweet kiss,
Embraces you like coming home.
Our eyes roll back,
Bringing to pass visions of a beautiful horizon.
Our worlds colliding again and again.
This is how creation came to be!
Our own big bang looming
As the music of our moans grow ever louder
Ever closer.
Earthquakes move and roll
Harder and faster,
Closer and closer.
Heavy breathing, heartfelt kisses,
Sweat pouring down like a healthy rain.
Light escapes me
And we are enveloped in our own sunlight,
Our own universe.
Our own heartbeats bringing us back down
To rest once again in each others arms.
Still cradled inside of me.
Catching breath.
No word needs to be spoken.
But you see, my love,
Why I see fit to call you God!
Soft and trusting hands explore my landscape.
High mountains and low valleys
Bring your own peak to it's greatest heights.
Plunging yourself into pools of colour wonderful,
My opening accepts you like a sweet kiss,
Embraces you like coming home.
Our eyes roll back,
Bringing to pass visions of a beautiful horizon.
Our worlds colliding again and again.
This is how creation came to be!
Our own big bang looming
As the music of our moans grow ever louder
Ever closer.
Earthquakes move and roll
Harder and faster,
Closer and closer.
Heavy breathing, heartfelt kisses,
Sweat pouring down like a healthy rain.
Light escapes me
And we are enveloped in our own sunlight,
Our own universe.
Our own heartbeats bringing us back down
To rest once again in each others arms.
Still cradled inside of me.
Catching breath.
No word needs to be spoken.
But you see, my love,
Why I see fit to call you God!
[quote]Starlight_angel said:
Alright, I'll give this a try:
Soft and trusting hands explore my landscape.
High mountains and low valleys
Bring your own peak to it's greatest heights.
Plunging yourself into pools of colour wonderful,
My opening accepts you like a sweet kiss,
Embraces you like coming home.
Our eyes roll back,
Bringing to pass visions of a beautiful horizon.
Our worlds colliding again and again.
This is how creation came to be!
Our own big bang looming
As the music of our moans grow ever louder
Ever closer.
Earthquakes move and roll
Harder and faster,
Closer and closer.
Heavy breathing, heartfelt kisses,
Sweat pouring down like a healthy rain.
Light escapes me
And we are enveloped in our own sunlight,
Our own universe.
Our own heartbeats bringing us back down
To rest once again in each others arms.
Still cradled inside of me.
Catching breath.
No word needs to be spoken.
But you see, my love,
Why I see fit to call you God!
Wow!!! You are amazing, love. Glad to see you writing again.
Alright, I'll give this a try:
Soft and trusting hands explore my landscape.
High mountains and low valleys
Bring your own peak to it's greatest heights.
Plunging yourself into pools of colour wonderful,
My opening accepts you like a sweet kiss,
Embraces you like coming home.
Our eyes roll back,
Bringing to pass visions of a beautiful horizon.
Our worlds colliding again and again.
This is how creation came to be!
Our own big bang looming
As the music of our moans grow ever louder
Ever closer.
Earthquakes move and roll
Harder and faster,
Closer and closer.
Heavy breathing, heartfelt kisses,
Sweat pouring down like a healthy rain.
Light escapes me
And we are enveloped in our own sunlight,
Our own universe.
Our own heartbeats bringing us back down
To rest once again in each others arms.
Still cradled inside of me.
Catching breath.
No word needs to be spoken.
But you see, my love,
Why I see fit to call you God!
Wow!!! You are amazing, love. Glad to see you writing again.
Hey gang, I know this is old but had some really bad things happen and I've been away. I see there have been a few more entries so...........
...if you'd like a winner declared and a prize given, I'm officially closing this Friday, July 29th. Tell me what you think?
...if you'd like a winner declared and a prize given, I'm officially closing this Friday, July 29th. Tell me what you think?
Beat crescendos; you invade me quietly
Whisper of a snare drum rising
You shock me; your rhythm slams me
Syncopation copulation, you turn vocal
Viral, prying me open, filling my hole, hot
Liquid melody squirts through my veins
Second verse so same as first; thrusting
Rising; shoved hard inside of me
I scream at the sudden intrusion
But it fades as quickly as it started
And you are gone
And I am still not quite sure
If you were welcome or not
But you grow on me
And now I don't change the station
Once I know it's the Black Eyed Peas
Whisper of a snare drum rising
You shock me; your rhythm slams me
Syncopation copulation, you turn vocal
Viral, prying me open, filling my hole, hot
Liquid melody squirts through my veins
Second verse so same as first; thrusting
Rising; shoved hard inside of me
I scream at the sudden intrusion
But it fades as quickly as it started
And you are gone
And I am still not quite sure
If you were welcome or not
But you grow on me
And now I don't change the station
Once I know it's the Black Eyed Peas
