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Collaboration: Love Vs. Hate

Tripl3Thr3at
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2 poet work 2gether showing a battle of love & hate as one confuse between the 2 emotion good luck 2 all

Grace
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Just curious  here, should a collaboration win, do both poets get the acknowledgment  with the trophy or will they have respective trophies and mentions?

Tripl3Thr3at
W. S. Pearce
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Grace said:Just curious  here, should a collaboration win, do both poets get the acknowledgment  with the trophy or will they have respective trophies and mentions?

They'll both get a trophy on my word...

poet Anonymous

Hate and Love  – COLLABORATION –  RunningTurtle87
And Somelikeithot

The a. muse landed on my right shoulder
On My Left Shoulder an Angel Has Landed

Dear RN87....I think you are brilliant

   My Dearest Sweet Kitty

When you make your diagrams and explanations

   I've grown so fond of your linear lines

They dazzle with clarity
   
   Paint by number all over my spine

I cannot say that for your poetry

   Erotically speaking your verse is ablaze

You are a good poet

   And historically set it glories all days

And I respect you for that

   Your kindness and patience

But turning a conceptual framework

   Has won my heart true

Into a poet makes me hate that

   As artist and poet

So I love you and hate you

   I love through and through

At the same time

   You can take this quite personally

Only for your poetry

   I'd lay on the track

Do not take it personally

   I meant every word

I will always admire you.


ToteMich
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me and a friend did one, only its a battle of happiness and depression, does that still work?

Tripl3Thr3at
W. S. Pearce
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ToteMich said:me and a friend did one, only its a battle of happiness and depression, does that still work?

Yes yes it does I love it

ToteMich
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awesome!! by ToteMich and Haruhi888
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Ich hasse regnerischen Tagen, die ich so sehr liebe

sometimes I break down
trying not to drown
in thoughtlessness I found
that mercy is never around

dreaming of a new day
not wanting to say
all these meanings array
until the final today

how can I continue
finding faults in you
demons will ensue
realizing I miss you

how can it be
that you cannot see
my pain and agony
all this torturing misery

I find the blue in the sky
so sad to my eye
as if it is to lie
this blue will someday die

trying so hard to be glad
and leaving behind the sad
forgetting all the bad
I try to let the happiness add

yet still it subtracts
so hard to keep track
loneliness I attract
my life so matter of fact

I'm on top of the world
All these feelings swirled
I just wanna twirl
Until all these mixed feelings are hurled

but they will all fall
before I can call
to the world and you all
the questions you stall

I will walk off the end
the asphalt is my friend
and just pretend
the pain was received, pain I send

I hate rainy days, the ones I love so much



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