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Loveless_Lifeless
Jasmine
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 24th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 195

Poetry Contest

write a poem of your experiences with true love<3
No erotic poems please...
As for anything else its free game....
Any questions just PM me...

jadielue
Jade.
Dangerous Mind
United States 3awards
Joined 22nd Aug 2010
Forum Posts: 1785

Sean

I was older then, and you just a few years younger.
At least on the inside.
I'd forgotten what ecstacy was, the kind that wasn't
short lived or wasted with self-conciousness. You revealed to me
the simplest pleasures, of things like dancing with
your eyes closed and laughing when we fell.

It wasn't lost on me each time you tried, every
kiss held back with careful bites, every smile forbidden.

I felt savage stealing your hopes away. Pretending,
feigning disgust, even displeasure at your attempts.
How I longed to just lie on my trampoline with you
and listen to the dreams and debris enter the
atmosphere, as nothing disturbed ours.

poet Anonymous



Y, Te amo... by mikimoondancer

He
shaped my soul
coloured my aura
landscaped my dreams
Gave me a tomorrow

and that was all before I met him...

He
gave me purpose
drove my spirit
fired my synapses
removed the limits

Made me whole
the only one without control...

He keeps me humble
though I try to be bold

Keeps me burning
when I feel the nearing cold

Keeps me hopeful
Gives me something sure to hold

I'll always need him
like the planet needs the Sun

I've always loved him
he's always been my only one


Bethy
Bbbethy
Twisted Dreamer
United States 3awards
Joined 28th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 184

Paper Clip Hearts
      Your Perfect Paper Clip Heart
           holds my life together
      Keeps my thaughts organized
           helps me to remain sane
      Our Paper Clip Hearts
           fit together perfectly
      OHHHHH soo perfectly
           when the world is unorganized
      Lets use them to keep together
           and when we cant be together
      Were sooo far apart
           Our Perfect Paper Clip Hearts
      Hold us together
           hold us as one
      Bond us... to be perfect
As we continue to be perfect
    in an unperfect world
We cant let the hard times get us down
    lets use OUR Perfect Paper Clip Hearts
That WILL hold us together
     Through the hard times, through the worry...
There will NEVER be any doubt
As our Paper Clip Hearts...  
                           Hold us together
Because the Coldest, Darkest time of night
    Is jus before day break
We jus have to hold on
     Use OUR Perfect Paper Clip Hearts
 To...
       Keep us together
       Bond OUR love
       Secure OUR lives...
                           With eachother


poet Anonymous



Pious .    
   
   
You declare warfare within my    
un-solved mind.    
On bended knee    
I recite my emotions -    
a prayer in the darkness    
of my divine soul.    
   
And I whisper    
my wor-ship    
in solitude…    
   
“I am loyal    
to your every    
- pant    
- gasp    
& breath.    
Fervent to your existence,    
beyond any words    
devoted to your judgments    
virtuous to your well-being    
devout of your desire    
& protective    
of your heart.    
My emotions    
surpass    
another    
   
“I – love - you”  cliché.    
   
This is my prayer of    
spiritual - dedication,    
honour & devotion.    
   
Devout always.    
   
Amen . ”    
   
   
-x-




poet Anonymous



Hardcore Love Poem .  
 
 
Consign these words across your skin
brand them in your mind
ink the letters to your lungs
ram them in your heart.  
 
Like a wager.
 
Listen as I say them
suffer them in your veins
watch my lips  
as you read their meaning.
Ride the letters in your
desire.
 
Take these words,  
each pause;
each symbol
each accent
and feel them  
control-your-hips.
 
Now wear them  
in your  
panties
with confidence.
 
“I am devoted  
beyond any
m e a s u r e
of love”.
 
 
-x-
 


Bethy
Bbbethy
Twisted Dreamer
United States 3awards
Joined 28th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 184

My Sun. Our Diamond
Earth...
She's bleeding
Thunder is rolling
and rain is falling
Earthquakes shake her
Break her to peices
But her core
           Is still well kept together
By the gravity
             of her Sun
Yet, she struggles
to bloom her flowers
Her skin... is dying
And the air around her
causes wind storms
of such Horrific events
But deep inside
        Inside her core
Diamonds commence
Solidly formed
Growing. With warmth
Warmth from her heart
and the Glow of her Sun
Protected by iron
Impenetrable Amity
That loves her
until the end of the Galaxy
The Sun wishes
to hold her
But she will burn
he will be punished
When all he wants to do
     Is
   Love Her
And keep her from danger
From the evil
that wants to discpline her
The evil
that shuns her Sun
He is
    Her Guidence
    Her Guardian
He holds her Soul
The Fundamental key
He gives light
Makes her captivated!
Sheilds
      THEIR
           Diamond
That they made
with ALL of their Love
A Beautiful Diamond
Perfectly
        Concieved.



ricecake
Thought Provoker
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Joined 20th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 73

Remembering Kristallnacht




Is it love  
in the marshes 
for the sun is down 
and t'is cold  
to be locked in a dungeon 
with metal bars 
and empty stars  

Is it love to be across the oceans 
surrounded by cold currents and  
the sharks of teeth, 
in this great underneath 
deep dark deep dark 
tinkle tinkle 
not a twinkle 

Is it love 
if liberty is in chains 
and the veins of men
are blue 
for the women too.
 
Slaves enter this courthouse
one by one  
upon which judgement 
upon which bare breasts 
and empty nests  
until the hammer down
Ah the frown  

Is it love if birds blue 
if your lover too
and the world cruel 

All the Hitlers that killed love 
and life     
that stamped numbers 
that made tattoos out of men,  
bones out of souls 
and fires out of books 
Remember Kristallnacht  

Is it love if ye killed 
if ye music stills,
less the lust  
and t'is for you
black daffodills 

When ye sleep at night
where does it end 
and when ye awake 
in thee sweats and stares  
What of all your tomorrows.  

Is it love 
In the comas of Morpheus 
dost come Thanatos 
and our dreams are not  

Is it love if you fall, 
less humanity's grace

And all that's left are numbers,
is it love?

ricecake
Thought Provoker
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Joined 20th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 73

Instead of Heaven

The loneliness of 
a birdcall from a birdcage 
over the top of my head,
Neanderthal I feel,
White picket fences not 
Tears wetting a bit
Breath panting a little more 
Where are all the good poets 
Screaming from rooftops 
Where are you? 
Until I fall 
Instead of heaven,  
Hell

Surrounded by poppy leaves 
Embracing heaven 
Except once again
 it's Hell

He'll know my call
From one Neanderthal to another 
Across the lonely suburban picket fences 
The perfect windy driveways 
I wonder if he gets lonely too
Walking down these slippery slopes
 

It's 4am and very quiet
The only thing between my good self and God, 
The damn tinnitus   
Surrounded by Dorothy Porters' Love Poems, 
The crumpled doona of single
And the longing for you.  

6am, still waiting 

amandrin
Lost Thinker
1awards
Joined 22nd Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 32

Christopher:

Christopher, I want to drive into the sunset with you.
I want to jump out of airplanes with you.
I want to grow wings instead of shoulder-blades so I can fly away with you.

Christopher.

I want to write a thousand anonymous love poems about you so I can love you in secret.
I want you to write me a million love songs that only I can hear.
I want you to lie to me when you say you love me just so I can tell you that your lies are as beautiful as you are.

Christopher.

I want you to be the only one to call you by your full name besides your mother.

Christopher, I think I would marry you, if you asked me.

Christopher, if you didn't ask me, I think I would still marry you.

Christopher

I want to fall in love you.

Christopher

I think I'm falling in love with you.

Christopher

I think I'm in love with you, because you're like breathing oxygen underwater.
I think I'm in love with you, because you get my poetry before I do.
I think I'm in love with you, because I have dreams about us ten years from now.

Christopher, I think I'm in love with you.

JakeBlack
BLACKnBONE
Twisted Dreamer
Kenya
Joined 15th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 7

loved that!!

marielavoue
Gypsy Red
Tyrant of Words
United States 40awards
Joined 18th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 905

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I wish…

Once you were my companion,  
my friend and also my lover,    
all that in life truly mattered  
then my world stopped and shattered.  
 
Somehow I wish here you were again  
still my friend, that you were near;    
it seems sometimes if I just dream  
by some means you would be here.  
 
If I could just hear your voice again  
I perhaps could comprehend;  
dreaming of you, time stands still  
although I realize, hear you, I never will.    
 
Cold and monumental stone gargoyles    
see my passing insignificantly,  
they seem  wrong as companions,    
you were gentle and warm, my D'Artanian.  
 
Too many days fighting back tears  
struggling with unspoken fears.  
Just die past I so despise!  
All you bring is agony without compromise!  
 
I catch myself wishing you were here again  
sharing an embrace dispelling fear’s reign  
always knowing that after goodbye    
there is nothing but an emptiness that won’t subside.  
 
Try to forgive,  
you asked me to live,  
gave me the strength to try,  
to never give up and dream as big as the sky!  
 
No more memories or silent tears,  
gazing across the wasted days and quiet fears,  
to accept the inevitable, help me say goodbye,    
to end this burgeoning love, once so sublime.    
 
 
Gypsy red

harlequin
Thought Provoker
United Kingdom 5awards
Joined 4th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 149

BEFORE THE BENCH  

That moonlight isn’t there at all
Some monkey stole it
No ring of hands or any dream
Ransacked, gone
Beneath thin tears  
Brittle fingers leaf the tattered text
You’re not
We like to think we are
We’re not
We’re not immune
We’re not insured
No one is

Harlequin (Sept 2012)
In Memory of SCS July 84

Lifeless_Loveless
Chrisella Payne
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 24th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 12

No more need...

Long ago
When my heart roamed first
My gaze fell upon you
And my curse was reversed

We laughed and talked
And I enjoyed our time
It was like you were the only one
Who could never do any crime

Every time I looked at you
Your eyes looked the way I felt
Causing every single smile
To make my heart melt

It stayed like that for a while
Almost a year to be exact
But then I saw you do bad
Making my heart broken and cracked

And when I pulled myself away
From that new wicked curse called love
I realized you treated everyone else the same
And you needed to be disposed of

Because you smiled at everyone
The way you smiled at me
And made everyone else feel
What only could be decribed as need

Once I realized this
I left you with a frown
You may have been my first love
But I've moved on to a different town

the_unheard
Snake_charmer
Twisted Dreamer
Joined 27th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 8

before i tear up. before i fuck up. before i get up. before im stuck up. i always think abut you. you were my drugs through the good and bad. no love drove me mad. and you kicked me to the curb.
your thought wakes the demon inside. your thought is the scream of an unstable mind. your thought is the endless night. and someone has turned out the lights.

the pain is gone but scarred. love was too far! a succubis is who you are. fuck you! this is tearing me apart. your gonna die! my heart is alread there, waiting for you in the land of the damned. and my mind is left with.
your thought is my 6 feet of dirt. your thought made my blood spurt. your gona pay! you inspire the hate! this is for you. remember me when they scream my name.
im not scared but impaired of my ability to care. beauty is insanity! happiness is a fantasy! not from anything! i'll see you in hell!

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