Poetry competition CLOSED 20th April 2012 10:22am
WINNER
kriticool
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RUNNERS-UP:
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Time
TIME
Spend treasures
Spend time
Buy treasures
Buy time
Find treasures
Find time
Fulfilling moments
For recreations
Of love
And happiness
For life
Living moments
Recreating moments
To live
And become happy
Throughout life
Spending it
But never bought
Time lives
Lifetimes
Time shared
With love
Brings joy
Treasuring moments
Treasuring love
Treasuring life
Is worth
Time spent.
Spend treasures
Spend time
Buy treasures
Buy time
Find treasures
Find time
Fulfilling moments
For recreations
Of love
And happiness
For life
Living moments
Recreating moments
To live
And become happy
Throughout life
Spending it
But never bought
Time lives
Lifetimes
Time shared
With love
Brings joy
Treasuring moments
Treasuring love
Treasuring life
Is worth
Time spent.
Time
Time after time after time
I keep on giving in silence
picking miracles
from bulb of words
in time bubbles
hoping changes made
improvement
will happen
with time.
You will never grow
with the tides of time
you just whine
and whine
about everything
and Time
and time again
I walk on beside
you, in silent supplication
to known and unknown gods.
Please! In time,
do adapt.
Time after time after time
I keep on giving in silence
picking miracles
from bulb of words
in time bubbles
hoping changes made
improvement
will happen
with time.
You will never grow
with the tides of time
you just whine
and whine
about everything
and Time
and time again
I walk on beside
you, in silent supplication
to known and unknown gods.
Please! In time,
do adapt.
My Time Is Heavy
My time is often mislaid
While yours continues forward
My distracting memories rewind still
Playing over and over in spite
I am always running late
I can’t keep myself up with the minutes
My degrading time will always drag
While yours flies by easily and light
My time is often mislaid
While yours continues forward
My distracting memories rewind still
Playing over and over in spite
I am always running late
I can’t keep myself up with the minutes
My degrading time will always drag
While yours flies by easily and light
Anonymous
TIME
Time crept by during long hot summers
Time tick-tocked by the Bavarian Clock
Time reminded I was not growing fast enough
Little girl you not ready for what you want
Wait, said Mother and Father
Everything will come in time
Time is too slow, time is too fast
Working and commuting make time irrelevant
No time is a form of time
The grown up form of time
The I can fit you in - in six months
Disaster when it comes to sex
The classes started on the hour
Fifty minutes later it was over, at last
Run to my next lecture
Students saunter in
They pay me to teach
The consumer always wins
Winter is a long long time
Spring lasts a week
Summer is lazy time
Fall is falling in...to line
Time means so much
To people waiting to die
Old people know time goes fast
Unrelentingly and this is good
For with pain and suffering
Time will not last
Death is understood
To be the end of time
But often
The bringer of good
Time crept by during long hot summers
Time tick-tocked by the Bavarian Clock
Time reminded I was not growing fast enough
Little girl you not ready for what you want
Wait, said Mother and Father
Everything will come in time
Time is too slow, time is too fast
Working and commuting make time irrelevant
No time is a form of time
The grown up form of time
The I can fit you in - in six months
Disaster when it comes to sex
The classes started on the hour
Fifty minutes later it was over, at last
Run to my next lecture
Students saunter in
They pay me to teach
The consumer always wins
Winter is a long long time
Spring lasts a week
Summer is lazy time
Fall is falling in...to line
Time means so much
To people waiting to die
Old people know time goes fast
Unrelentingly and this is good
For with pain and suffering
Time will not last
Death is understood
To be the end of time
But often
The bringer of good
Anonymous
TIME STANDS STILL
Dark house, dark night, looking out the window
Standing and waiting for hours, for what?
For long time ago....When she was the Queen of all that is here
Her husband a doctor, her three children near
The house with the staircase out of GONE WITH THE WIND
In Thornhill, a good neighborhood,
He has come to pick up the kids for the weekend
As he said he would....she had loved this man for 16 years
Bore his children, kept the house, was a somebody
Not the mouse who cries at the window remembering the time
When life was bigger and she was not broken
Oh to be given a second chance - would anything have changed?
Dark house, dark night, looking out the window
Standing and waiting for hours, for what?
For long time ago....When she was the Queen of all that is here
Her husband a doctor, her three children near
The house with the staircase out of GONE WITH THE WIND
In Thornhill, a good neighborhood,
He has come to pick up the kids for the weekend
As he said he would....she had loved this man for 16 years
Bore his children, kept the house, was a somebody
Not the mouse who cries at the window remembering the time
When life was bigger and she was not broken
Oh to be given a second chance - would anything have changed?
Time Difference
Frigid walls of four
without promise to be free
innocent proved guilty
his time drags on
Months to live is six
without hope of prolonging
mother of three to be taken
her time rushes by
Years to conceive is fifteen
the heartache has finally ended
only nine months to go
her time crawls along
To raise them right by eighteen
the greatest challenge he knows
from diapers to diplomas
his time races ahead
Death came without warning
awaited chances are none
it happened just now
no more time is left
Frigid walls of four
without promise to be free
innocent proved guilty
his time drags on
Months to live is six
without hope of prolonging
mother of three to be taken
her time rushes by
Years to conceive is fifteen
the heartache has finally ended
only nine months to go
her time crawls along
To raise them right by eighteen
the greatest challenge he knows
from diapers to diplomas
his time races ahead
Death came without warning
awaited chances are none
it happened just now
no more time is left
Inner Space
The continual baffling
of endless time
the spent is amassing
anti matter from light
the present a passing
in a gone time
we live a yesterday
as tomorrow will die .
We live in a measurement
by our sun
which is irrelavent
past this zone
thoughts produce none particle space
in this nothing we deduce
a something of less weight
we only believe what we can understand
through this we deceive
the movement of man
nothing and something
together they face
the nothing is more
as it is inner space .
The continual baffling
of endless time
the spent is amassing
anti matter from light
the present a passing
in a gone time
we live a yesterday
as tomorrow will die .
We live in a measurement
by our sun
which is irrelavent
past this zone
thoughts produce none particle space
in this nothing we deduce
a something of less weight
we only believe what we can understand
through this we deceive
the movement of man
nothing and something
together they face
the nothing is more
as it is inner space .
Against All Odds ( Written in 2010 )
Memories are clutched
in the hands that point time
flocculent skies did touch
the turning of the dial
love is such
the contrary of denial
barefoot in the dust
we married without an aisle .
Against all odds
and across the waves
we of the same pod
that god
had gave
the path we trod
is how we were saved
together we rock
untethered
to the grave .
Memories are clutched
in the hands that point time
the future holds so much
like unpenned lines
new seconds they crush
the doubts that fly
all mouths will hush
that ever lied
together we'll push
together we'll die
I married my love
with the Indian eyes
your soul comes flush
with your mind
of surprise
your heart is plush
with a golden
magnetise .
Memories are clutched
in the hands that point time
flocculent skies did touch
the turning of the dial
love is such
the contrary of denial
barefoot in the dust
we married without an aisle .
Against all odds
and across the waves
we of the same pod
that god
had gave
the path we trod
is how we were saved
together we rock
untethered
to the grave .
Memories are clutched
in the hands that point time
the future holds so much
like unpenned lines
new seconds they crush
the doubts that fly
all mouths will hush
that ever lied
together we'll push
together we'll die
I married my love
with the Indian eyes
your soul comes flush
with your mind
of surprise
your heart is plush
with a golden
magnetise .
I haven't been alive that long
If pigs could fly
this would be my swinesong
Can we unwind the clocks?
to find the blocks
we lay on time lost
I haven't been dead for long
Stolen moments have lead me on
If time could fly
then where has the autopilot gone?
If pigs could fly
this would be my swinesong
Can we unwind the clocks?
to find the blocks
we lay on time lost
I haven't been dead for long
Stolen moments have lead me on
If time could fly
then where has the autopilot gone?
Hello friends..
I was infact a little depressd when i did not see any entires coming up after 2 days of posting this competition..Being relatively new to this website i thought i would not get the response...But to my suprise..all of u guys have done a wonderful job...fantastic work and keep up the good work...I guess Time does give nice suprises!!!
I was infact a little depressd when i did not see any entires coming up after 2 days of posting this competition..Being relatively new to this website i thought i would not get the response...But to my suprise..all of u guys have done a wonderful job...fantastic work and keep up the good work...I guess Time does give nice suprises!!!
Anonymous
Puzzle
They all look for answers
yet, in research they are so picky.
How can you learn of Architecture
from one book on just one city?
What if Buddha had it right,
and Jesus did as well?
What if Mohammed
and Confucius meant to
convey and not to sell?
Nostradamus and Cayce-
even Well's ,Poe, and
Aristotle...
Wicca, Mother nature,
Native's know it's lost in all.
Amazing.
What if it's a puzzle-
they all had little key's-
What if even they didn't know-
How to set us free.
I cannot build a stairway
to the infinite divide
unless My eyes are open
and truth is on my side.
The truth in all is Love,
we were created
by an artists brush
Every stroke is different-
the unique in all is us.
We are the poems words
and for ...
the entire book-to be whole
we better join in unison
and decide where to go.
Puzzle pieces everywhere
scattered all through time
everything that is here now
has always been divine.
Will they ever stop the fighting
and alas start realizing
Everyone is right-
and everyone is wrong-
when there's only one note
To the tune of any song.
Written by mikimoondancer
Anonymous
lunarvibes said:Hello friends..
I was infact a little depressd when i did not see any entires coming up after 2 days of posting this competition..Being relatively new to this website i thought i would not get the response...But to my suprise..all of u guys have done a wonderful job...fantastic work and keep up the good work...I guess Time does give nice suprises!!!
Writers often ebb and flow as the tides, sometimes it's like everyone is constant and busy-then it just dies again-doing what you did is smart and advisable-re-post and stay with it-Thank's for this one-really cool topic!!!
I was infact a little depressd when i did not see any entires coming up after 2 days of posting this competition..Being relatively new to this website i thought i would not get the response...But to my suprise..all of u guys have done a wonderful job...fantastic work and keep up the good work...I guess Time does give nice suprises!!!
Writers often ebb and flow as the tides, sometimes it's like everyone is constant and busy-then it just dies again-doing what you did is smart and advisable-re-post and stay with it-Thank's for this one-really cool topic!!!
