Poetry competition CLOSED 7th April 2012 3:53pm
WINNER
Lee
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RUNNER-UP: firedaughter

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Sojourner

Posted: 5th April 2012 2:21pm
poet Anonymous
Grace said:Thank you Miki and dustyjjewel for being with me in this competition: Just a couple more days to go now. Inviting all DUP friends and family to participate.

Thank you Grace, I have enjoyed this. Peace, miki

Posted: 6th April 2012 5:46pm
firedaughter
firedaughter
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I travel along 
This beaten path..
And watch around
As time doth pass..

Lost souls
Pouring into the street..
Pretty soon 
Their end they'll meet..

I realize that 
I am on my way..
Not to heaven 
But the other way..

I cannot change
What i've done..
But I can change 
Who i've become..



I am well aware this is not perfect.. But its what comes to mind <3

Posted: 8th April 2012 7:55pm
wanderer
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Kristany that's awesome!

Posted: 8th April 2012 7:56pm
wanderer
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A man on a journey;
He is without company,
His direction selected,
His destination predicted,
Focused, focus, he's focused on his journey,

Obstacles on his path,
A mountain block his path,
Cold winds for him to battle,
Focused, focus, he's focused on his journey.

He jumped all the obstacles,
Barged right through the mountain,
Popped his collar,
He dared the cold wind to blow colder,
He's focused, focus, I'm focused on my journey!

Posted: 9th April 2012 7:05am
Grace
Grace
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Congratulations Lee for winning this competition. Your poem won as it pondered on the journey of your subject in this world. Kristanydanel, your poem won as it is short and sweet, and grabbed me immediately, while Miki's first poem 'spend time well' is simple,the message is crystal clear. Thank you everybody for being with me and taking time to join in the competition. I hope to see all of you and more in coming competitions. Thank You!!

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