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Tragedy Strikes!

fieryangelsouljia
M6rr6g6n
Fire of Insight
United States 2awards
Joined 30th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 263

Poetry Contest

write a tragic poem about two tragic lovers. MAKE ME CRY PEOPLE!
Rules:
No collabs and please don't enter more than ten times!
Good luck!

nagasaki
pittyfulmind
Twisted Dreamer
South Africa 1awards
Joined 8th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 67

an unholy affair

he loved her so
that at night
he would sleep under her window
just to smell her
she knew he was there,
to see him
she would not dare
her father rebuked him
hated him
"stay away"
but love knows no bounds
he had love for her
by the pounds

she loved him too
so much
i cannot explain it to you
too much
too much....she loved him too much

for them to be together
they had to be together forever
found in a field under a tree
they hung together....happily




Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 16999

A brief union

The day you came home
My love, hands entwined
Looking deep into each other's eyes
Knowing deep passions and desire
Among the flowers we stand
I unbound myself from the world
The trees shrouding us from them

The day you came home
I unbound myself from contraints
The sea came to the mountain
The wind blew a symphony
of love and sweet belonging
To each other we entwine our soul
in one, through the joining of our bodies

Eve came home to Adam
At the threshold of Eden
lighted by the moon and stars
Breathes met and coalesced
midair like a promise of forever
The wholeness began from my heart
and set within me
Lending a blush to a tired rose

Among the dewy grass I lay me down
with you in my arms
You became mine again among the roses
Your claimed my body and soul
and lavish upon me ecstasy
Bringing me up to the heavens
and down again like fluttering confetti
You charm my soul

The day I came home
to you my love was the day
I said goodbye
To them for I have chosen you
As my home, my love
I followed you through the portal
to a rebirth, a death, an eternity
Until we return.

Page_Writer
Mad Girl
Thought Provoker
United States 19awards
Joined 25th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 183

Kiss It All Better

He remembered this girl, his best friend.
When she was cying out her eyes
because people were cruel to her.
He remembered the look in her eyes,
when he would kiss her and make all the tears go away.
"Kiss it all better" she would say.
But now she was laying limply in his arms,
a spot of blood blooming through her shirt.
She looked up at him, the same adoration in her eyes.
"Kiss it all better" she cries tugging on his shirt.
He looks down at her,
shivering and bleeding.
Where were the cops?
Why did that guy shoot her?
What had she done to him ever in her entire life?

She was the sweetest of people
That he had ever gotten the chance to meet.
Why would someone want to kill her?
No-- She wasn't dead, but she was dying.
The bullet had hit her in the heart.
Why hadn't he been there?
Why hadn't he saved her?
What took him so long to get to her?
This wouldn't of happened.

"I'm sorry" he whispers to her.
She smiles up at him.
"It's not your fault love, you didn't know--"
she draws in a sharp breath.
She wasn't going to last much longer.
Where had that man gone?
Dropped his gun and fled the scene of the crime?
...
The gun?

There it was, still on the ground.
He reached over and grabbed it.
Anger boiled in his veins.
The love of his life was bleeding before him
on a cold, empty street.
He looked in the direction the man ran.
And he could see his shadow,
among the alley way in the dark of night.
Hiding from the sin he commited.
The life he ended.

One bullet.
That was all it took.
In the back of the man
that tore his world apart.

The shadow dropped.
But she was also gone.
He stared down at her body and he could see
That she was still beautiful as ever.
He kissed her lips.
Still warm with her fading heat.
"It's okay love, I kissed it all better"
he whispered than he raised the gun to his own head.
Just as the police sirens could be heard in the distance.

AlexnEmoLand
RevolutionOfAlex
Fire of Insight
Japan 10awards
Joined 19th July 2011
Forum Posts: 216

Till Death Do Us Part

one day we will reach the light before i cry
beside my love, i just watched you die.
days we were close
were your heart beats close to mine.
looking into your eyes for the very last time.
maby in life you will whip my tears,
to whisper you love me in my ears.
and with your hands you'll run threw my hair,
looking in your eyes i smile and stare
Its fragrance shielding off despair,
to remember beyond death
the softness of your lips and the sweetness of your breath.
and while i hold you close and near,
till death do us part your spirit appear.
The breath from my kiss will takes you away
And so you are gone  without delay.
many years will come and ill feel your embrace,
no other love will take the shape of your face.

-Kumiko Yamamoto

poet Anonymous

Together Forever
written in Dec. of 2011

She is like the sun,  
he is like the moon.  
 Though in their minds they felt trouble,  
  their hearts maintained the pursuit.  
   The chemistry they felt,  
    could be avoided no longer.  
   For each other they felt,  
  the deepest of hunger.  
 Even on the sunniest of days  
when the two became one,  
it always seemed to rain.  
   She arose like a beautiful flower,  
    and though he carried a dark cloud,  
     with him, she felt such power.  
      They knew from the start...  
  the reasons unspoken.  
      Their love would never work,  
     two hearts will be broken.  
    Yet it did not stop them from trying,  
   they had to be together...  
  their attraction undying.  
   He was the bad boy,  
    she was the golden child.  
     Since the day they met,  
      their hearts went wild.  
  The thrill was exciting,  
  often sneaking away.  
  There was no question it was going to happen,  
      the question was, which way?  
     Skipping school,  
    staying out late,  
   passionate glances,  
  extended breaks.  
  The late night began like every other,  
  out their windows they crawled,  
  to sneak away with each other.  
  Driving down the road  
   music up high,  
    he leaned over for a kiss  
     while stopped at the light.  
      Out of nowhere it came,  
  last thing they saw were bright lights.  
    Hit head on
   In the middle of the night
  All they ever wanted
    was to be together for Always...
      Now they will be together Forever

BleedingSpectre333
Eden
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 5th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 63

My tragic past

He saw her,
And the ice in his heart,
Melted away.

She saw him,
And her face glowed,
With the radiance of a thousand suns.

They felt each others embrace,
Spirit and soul uniting into one,
The love of a thousand lovers.

It had been months,
Since the lovers,
Saw each other last.

He was restricted at home,
Like a dog on a leash,
And loved a forbidden love.

She was abused at home,
Like the old and unwanted,
And loved a painful love.

Together,
They felt free,
And truly alive.

She wished to run away with him,
He wished the same,
But they never got the chance.

She broke.
She left without warning,
Without him.

He wept,
He had no love left,
Without her.

Thus the two loves died,
Her fate unknown to all but the omniscient.
He an empty soul.

Now,
He spends his days wondering,
"Will she ever come back?"

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704

My Lost Love    

I remember
my honey-sweet
freckle-faced
by the weeping-tree
gone days of rainbow -tinted
the years since
have just sprinted
we were young
but master-spirited
where have you gone
you used to live in
the meadow-sweet .

I was your friend
good-marrow
you were my guide
my beacon-tower  
and then you died
my lovely flower
blink-eyed
I cried through years
for hours
leaden-day
with thunder-showers
a death-warrant came
like head-hunting cowards .

No more sun rays
death-damp a dead-day
a gone wonder-song
we used to play
it's just so wrong
a judgement-day
could come along
and steal you away

No more smiling face
end of passion-play
the fairy-tale ended
at your resting-place
the grave is small
and since has aged
it's no chapel-royal
but at peace here you lay .








raorrick
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 17th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 1590

He Say's; She Say's

She says:  
Too many times you've hurt me  
You've let me down too much  
Anger and resentment  
I hold to like a clutch  

I'm trying to say we're over  
It's too late for us now  
I hate going back on  
The words we called a vow  

He says:  
I can't believe you'd do this  
You are not making sense  
I love you, I need you  
This is my defense  

You promised you'd always be here  
To see this through the end  
You said you'd always love me  
Forever we would spend  

She says:  
I love you greatly  
You know I'm not wrong  
I gave you everything I had  
While you strung me along  

You took me for granted  
Thought I'd never leave  
You were mistaken for this  
Not right to perceive  

He says:  
Please don't go  
I won't give up the fight  
Give me one more chance  
You deserve I make this right  

I know I wasn't good to you  
Clearly now I see  
I wasn't your everything  
That you needed me to be  

She say's:  
It is too late for your efforts  
I begged for them for years  
Asked you to give a fuck  
I cried so many tears  

Physically you've been here  
But mentally you've been gone  
I tried for years to talk to you  
You'd get angry and stay withdrawn  

He say's:  
I see the error of my ways  
I swear to you I've changed  
Please stay, don't make me leave  
I can't stand if we're estranged  

Thirteen years and three kids later  
Don't they deserve a chance  
Think of what you're doing to them  
Did you think of this in advance  

She say's:  
How dare you use the kids like that  
Look what you've done to them  
No stability or security  
It's not me you should condemn  

For us to be happy  
Is the thing that they deserve  
To not live in this Hell we made  
The fighting they observe  

He say's:  
I can't go on like this  
My life I can't continue  
If you leave me I swear  
My carotid I will cut in two  

You are my life you see  
You are my whole existence  
I refuse to accept this fate  
Can't you hear my persistence  

She say's:  
You're being dramatic  
Put down the knife  
You won't really do it  
You won't end your life  

Why are you walking toward me  
You're making me nervous  
I'm calling the police  
Why can't I get any service  

He say's:  
You wanted to end this  
I'm doing what you asked  
I'll do you first then on to me  
I promise to make is fast  

Don't struggle my dear  
Oh please don't start to scream  
Who is being dramatic now  
Must it be this extreme  

She say's:  
I love you I love you  
I swear I do  
I'm sorry I'm sorry  
We can work this through  

You were right, I was wrong  
I don't know what I was thinking  
Let's talk tomorrow  
When neither of us have been drinking  

He say's:  
It's too late for you to beg  
I have already decided  
A deal with the devil  
The knife he provided  

You're lying on the floor  
There's way too much blood  
I can't believe I didn't know  
How much it would flood  

He say's:  
Stop making that sound  
Why are you choking  
What have I done  
Your clothes they are soaking  

Open up your eyes  
Why are they closing  
I can't hear you breathe  
Stop your fucking posing  

He say's:  
I can't believe I killed you  
I can't believe your dead  
What do I do now  
I am filled with so much dread  

I guess it's my turn now  
Wasn't that the deal  
It's the only way out  
For my heart to ever heal

LittleChaoChao
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 28th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 21

My last goodbye

It hurts me
I'm breaking

The pain here
Is aching

No hope left
Just too late

For you to come
And save me

By drowning
My life I see

This aching breaking
Heart will be

Just silent
In darkness

For you to die
Is madness

It's messed up
Our true love

A curse I hate
I'm broke up

You're up there
You much be

But down here
I'm sorry

Here I am
All torn apart

Giving up
You have my heart

There's nothing left
I'm sad to say

Since you are gone
I'm on my way

Just wait now
I'll be quick

I sang this song
With my last breath

poet Anonymous

raorrick said:He Say's; She Say's

She says:  
Too many times you've hurt me  
You've let me down too much  
Anger and resentment  
I hold to like a clutch  

I'm trying to say we're over  
It's too late for us now  
I hate going back on  
The words we called a vow  

He says:  
I can't believe you'd do this  
You are not making sense  
I love you, I need you  
This is my defense  

You promised you'd always be here  
To see this through the end  
You said you'd always love me  
Forever we would spend  

She says:  
I love you greatly  
You know I'm not wrong  
I gave you everything I had  
While you strung me along  

You took me for granted  
Thought I'd never leave  
You were mistaken for this  
Not right to perceive  

He says:  
Please don't go  
I won't give up the fight  
Give me one more chance  
You deserve I make this right  

I know I wasn't good to you  
Clearly now I see  
I wasn't your everything  
That you needed me to be  

She say's:  
It is too late for your efforts  
I begged for them for years  
Asked you to give a fuck  
I cried so many tears  

Physically you've been here  
But mentally you've been gone  
I tried for years to talk to you  
You'd get angry and stay withdrawn  

He say's:  
I see the error of my ways  
I swear to you I've changed  
Please stay, don't make me leave  
I can't stand if we're estranged  

Thirteen years and three kids later  
Don't they deserve a chance  
Think of what you're doing to them  
Did you think of this in advance  

She say's:  
How dare you use the kids like that  
Look what you've done to them  
No stability or security  
It's not me you should condemn  

For us to be happy  
Is the thing that they deserve  
To not live in this Hell we made  
The fighting they observe  

He say's:  
I can't go on like this  
My life I can't continue  
If you leave me I swear  
My carotid I will cut in two  

You are my life you see  
You are my whole existence  
I refuse to accept this fate  
Can't you hear my persistence  

She say's:  
You're being dramatic  
Put down the knife  
You won't really do it  
You won't end your life  

Why are you walking toward me  
You're making me nervous  
I'm calling the police  
Why can't I get any service  

He say's:  
You wanted to end this  
I'm doing what you asked  
I'll do you first then on to me  
I promise to make is fast  

Don't struggle my dear  
Oh please don't start to scream  
Who is being dramatic now  
Must it be this extreme  

She say's:  
I love you I love you  
I swear I do  
I'm sorry I'm sorry  
We can work this through  

You were right, I was wrong  
I don't know what I was thinking  
Let's talk tomorrow  
When neither of us have been drinking  

He say's:  
It's too late for you to beg  
I have already decided  
A deal with the devil  
The knife he provided  

You're lying on the floor  
There's way too much blood  
I can't believe I didn't know  
How much it would flood  

He say's:  
Stop making that sound  
Why are you choking  
What have I done  
Your clothes they are soaking  

Open up your eyes  
Why are they closing  
I can't hear you breathe  
Stop your fucking posing  

He say's:  
I can't believe I killed you  
I can't believe your dead  
What do I do now  
I am filled with so much dread  

I guess it's my turn now  
Wasn't that the deal  
It's the only way out  
For my heart to ever heal


Oh WOW Rachel...that just gave me the chills!!! That was a great piece

raorrick
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 17th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 1590

Thank you milkyway! I love your new pic!!! :)

poet Anonymous

A Brief Moment of Waiting

Leave it up to the air
to tell me when you're ready

I linger and listen to silent whispers
that speak of little secrets, here and there

The silver lining of quiet is loud
it pierces my ear drums and beats me to death

I wonder of your condition
while I remain static in the absence of your voice

I miss you
and there is nothing to do but wait

poet Anonymous

Accounting of the Heart

You’re worth all of the tear drops
and every fallen petal that dies
not in vain, in search for your hands

You’re worth exceeds human wonderment
and dreams only begin the sentence
that defines you, love

You’re worth standing for hours in the rain
only to be sopping wet
and bathed in translucent hope

You’re value cannot be determined
by a glance or a sound
or the intensity of a redeeming hug

Collect my bones and bury me whole
because by the time your worth is lost
I’ll care not of life, nor age, nor love

Let me be an actuary of the heart
trust my judgment, that it does not fail
in attributing immeasurable worth to your name

For what you are worth, is my adoration
that it may endure until the last eye is shut
and the final inscription is made upon my mark

It shall read, “Here lies the woman
whose worth was seen as unblemished
by the man who gave himself to her, in life and love.”

poet Anonymous

Juliet

On bent knees I give thanks  
for finding something so pure  
worth more than liquid gold  
 
If in this life I come to lose It  
the irreversible damage  
would pierce my soul  
 
Peeling the skin off my back  
would be a lesser pain  
 
Like the rarest antique It is irreplaceable  
never could there be a substitute  
nor will another compare  
the loss would be impossible to bear  
 
I want it known  
that I have lived exceptionally  
experienced incomprehensible love  
and for that I am grateful  
 
So, in this moment  
I ask that you please spare his life  
and instead take mine

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