Poetry competition CLOSED 8th March 2012 6:30pm
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JAITO (Magic poemz)
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The one You Love

JAITO
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight
Kenya 8awards
Joined 24th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 171

My  heart   is   dying   just  for  loving
my  tears   are   many,happiness  i  cant   find  it
u   are   beyond  a   lover  i  want   as  my   wifee
u   control  everything  i  ever   stand   for   in  my  lyfee
why   am  i  troubled  loving  u?i  swear   to   god   i  love   u   honey.

JAITO
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight
Kenya 8awards
Joined 24th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 171

i   can   prefer   to  express   what  is   in  my  heart
still   any  word  can't   be    enough  
all  this   is   brought  because  i   have  love
i  guess  that  explains   why  im  troubled   in  this  world
i  love  u  faith  u  are  the  reason   i  wrote   this   words.

SOo-Soulfull-Kev
Kevin Harris
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom
Joined 20th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 19

not always could be 5 line poem or 5 line amphibrachic meter but strictly rhymin. DDDAD
e.g

........loud
.......fraud
.....cause
...because
..allowed

SOo-Soulfull-Kev
Kevin Harris
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom
Joined 20th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 19

My Love
I run to you when I lie
And say next time I lie to you may my heart die
I  feel my heart stuck to something kind of beautiful
You reply “I hate you” I say maybe you’re beautiful or sort of just a miracle
Just then u drive me mad, we argue and I scream “I no longer wanna try”

SOo-Soulfull-Kev
Kevin Harris
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom
Joined 20th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 19

My Love

I run to you when I lie
And say next time I lie to you may my heart die
I  feel my heart stuck to something kind of beautiful
You reply “I hate you” I say maybe you’re beautiful or sort of just a miracle
Just then u drive me mad, we argue and I scream “I no longer wanna try”

ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 28awards
Joined 10th Oct 2010
Forum Posts: 1347

I Adore You.

I can't write a little piece
about how I love.
You see
sometimes I'm not so sure,
sometimes I doubt his sincerity
or the way he contorts his face when he's focusing
and sometimes it doesn't matter.
Tragically, my chest often feels it may explode
whilst my mind cynically damns it
and I know
forgiveness is not an easy virtue to
acquire from my stubborn mind.
Perhaps I don't have to say 'I love you'
if it causes me much stress,
he'll know it
because he'll feel me
playing with his pallium,
the same innocent glee in my eyes
as he has when he's playing in mine.

raorrick
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 17th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 1590

When we were younger, we had a lot of ability
Now we're old, we rely on compatibility
Even though I miss having intercorse
For this I promise we will not divorce
I just pray for the day I'm blessed with senility!

JAITO
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight
Kenya 8awards
Joined 24th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 171

i   dont   why  it  has  to  be  her
she   makes   my  life   a  miserable   curse
i   want  to   give  her  everything  she  is  first
instead   she  refuses  to  like  me   she  is   worse
and  my  problem  is   this  decison  cant  be  reversed.

cjmshadow
Poetic Joker
Fire of Insight
United States 10awards
Joined 2nd Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 557

My Angel


Here we are, together at last, hand in hand
As we walk along the beach, in the waves, in the white sand.
Here we stroll through the park, side by side
As we talk and laugh together, waiting for the next ride.
It doesn't really matter what we do
the only thing that truly matters is that I get to be with you.
It doesn't matter where we go
As long as we're together we'll have fun, that much I know.
Cause my sorrow and loneliness is a thing in the past
I now experience a happiness that will always last.
Even though sometimes our days can go kinda bad
Even though our distance and my deployments can cause us to feel a little sad.
We don't have to worry about being alone anymore, not now, not ever
Because you and I will always be together, for now and for forever.
Renee, my beautiful angel, I love you more than I could ever say
My adoration and love for you grows more and more each and every day.
Ever since we met you've had a special hold on me
The first night we talked I knew we were meant to be.
You had me hooked honey, I never had a chance
It's like I'm under your spell, almost stuck in a trance.
I am yours, my love, for as long as I shall live
There's nothing I wouldn't do, nothing I wouldn't give.
For the chance to see you, kiss you once more
You affect me so much, down to my heart's very core.
I cannot live without you, my sweet angel of light
I would do anything to protect you, even suffer Death's bite.
All I can do now is kiss you hard and hold you tight
Cause there's nothing I can say, nothing I can write.
That could possible explain my emotions, or my feelings
Damn baby, every time I think of you, you send my mind reeling.
This poem I write for you, Renee, since I play no instrument and cannot sing
And one day I'll truly show my love by slipping on your finger a wedding ring.
But for now we must wait and bide our time which is fine
Just know that one day I'll be yours and you'll be mine.

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 17073

Once

Once I had a boyfriend
who thought he was handsome
A fop he was, all powdered and groomed
Fell off a bus while ogling a lady
married her and had a baby

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 17073

A Rose

He said he loved me
For all eternity
Gave me a red rose
that made me blushed
It was from my mother's grave

goodest
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 22nd Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 3007

it is really a shame
but you really cant complain
because by the time you find out its too late
& this lady wont discriminate
because ghanerrea allows brings that flame....rotflmao

ShaienneMachale
Ladazia Jackson
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 7th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 36

Everyone did fantastic and im sorry its taken so long to award the winner Pooh, highschool and aall....anyways ive chosen a winner

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