Let Evil Ring!
fieryangelsouljia
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Poetry Contest Description
write a sinister poem that is bloodcurdling and scary beyond belief. I want to see who will disturb me the most.
Anonymous
LET EVIL RING
I am the one who gets you to lose your job
I am the one who causes you to have a miscarriage
I am the one who steals your husband
I am the one who makes you an outcast
I am the one who makes people hate you
I am the one who ridicules you
I am the one who says you are no good
I am the one who tells you that you are fat
I am the one who gives you a mediocre reference
I am the one who gossips behind your back
Now that I see what I can do to you
I will do something really evil
I will make you live to 120 years
Nothing will kill you and nothing will remain
No children, no grandchildren, no sisters, brothers or friends
The land you were born in has changed so much
No-one will remember you
You - who were so high and mighty
Now have to beg to be fed
Death is not the worst punishment on earth
You do not deserve the rest
I wish upon you a long, long, long life
Without relatives, friends, recognition or rest
I am the one who gets you to lose your job
I am the one who causes you to have a miscarriage
I am the one who steals your husband
I am the one who makes you an outcast
I am the one who makes people hate you
I am the one who ridicules you
I am the one who says you are no good
I am the one who tells you that you are fat
I am the one who gives you a mediocre reference
I am the one who gossips behind your back
Now that I see what I can do to you
I will do something really evil
I will make you live to 120 years
Nothing will kill you and nothing will remain
No children, no grandchildren, no sisters, brothers or friends
The land you were born in has changed so much
No-one will remember you
You - who were so high and mighty
Now have to beg to be fed
Death is not the worst punishment on earth
You do not deserve the rest
I wish upon you a long, long, long life
Without relatives, friends, recognition or rest
MagicianType0
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Sits Evil
Sitting motionless
On his pee-wet bed
Looking inwards
Into his darkness
Where swirling gibbering
Voices whispers urgings
Pushing him further and further
In a bleakness
A terrain of desolation
In his soul
Where he wanders
He remembers his wife
So beautiful
So pliant in his arms
So peaceful
He remembers the darkness
Engulfing his eyes
As he looks at her
felt the knife in his hands
He slashes away the darkness
And his wife lay in his arms
In small shivery pieces
He remembers his baby
With pretty curly hair
Looking at him so trustingly
He loves her so
He cuddles her
Closes his eyes
And brought her over to his darkness
He looks down
His baby is headless
In his arms
Her head on the fence spike
He remembers
He looks at their accusing eyes
In his desolate land
He walks towards them
They never wait
They never stop
They keep on swirling in the mist
Crying out their sorrow
Wailing their accusation;
he sits on his pee-wet bed
Drool trickling from his slack mouth.
Sitting motionless
On his pee-wet bed
Looking inwards
Into his darkness
Where swirling gibbering
Voices whispers urgings
Pushing him further and further
In a bleakness
A terrain of desolation
In his soul
Where he wanders
He remembers his wife
So beautiful
So pliant in his arms
So peaceful
He remembers the darkness
Engulfing his eyes
As he looks at her
felt the knife in his hands
He slashes away the darkness
And his wife lay in his arms
In small shivery pieces
He remembers his baby
With pretty curly hair
Looking at him so trustingly
He loves her so
He cuddles her
Closes his eyes
And brought her over to his darkness
He looks down
His baby is headless
In his arms
Her head on the fence spike
He remembers
He looks at their accusing eyes
In his desolate land
He walks towards them
They never wait
They never stop
They keep on swirling in the mist
Crying out their sorrow
Wailing their accusation;
he sits on his pee-wet bed
Drool trickling from his slack mouth.
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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StephenPaul Summerscales
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Joined 18th Dec 2009Forum Posts: 1704
The Hall Of The Damned
The scream of sheer death
it deflates your lungs
and rips out your breath
it tears apart
the ventricles of your heart
like the demonic sounds
of a fallen angels harp
the evil flame forming faces
howl and burn mental ash traces
that lick your brain with hot pain
which lights up the dark
to show the insane
in their stark underworld
of plughole down drain .
A soul stealing trident
Satan spiked and hell sent
tri pronged and wrapped
in a serpent
stands arrow capped
in an evil dominant
inside are trapped spirits of unrepent
and infinite , expirement
they ache for your
desperate , detriment
and life retirement
So how can you be here
if your not dead yet
a demon leans near and says
this is what you might get
only fear if you gamble
and lose the bet
your soul so dear
shall be speared in an eternal net
The hall of the damned
full of gone murderers that hanged
now they're hell framed
their pictured in pain
forever tortured
dead and inane
they cry out contorted,
faintly my name
as I leave Satans
emporium of reign
I know after this
that I'll play the right game
and never shall I diss
the lords name ever again ,
nor dare never shall I speak it
in vain .
The scream of sheer death
it deflates your lungs
and rips out your breath
it tears apart
the ventricles of your heart
like the demonic sounds
of a fallen angels harp
the evil flame forming faces
howl and burn mental ash traces
that lick your brain with hot pain
which lights up the dark
to show the insane
in their stark underworld
of plughole down drain .
A soul stealing trident
Satan spiked and hell sent
tri pronged and wrapped
in a serpent
stands arrow capped
in an evil dominant
inside are trapped spirits of unrepent
and infinite , expirement
they ache for your
desperate , detriment
and life retirement
So how can you be here
if your not dead yet
a demon leans near and says
this is what you might get
only fear if you gamble
and lose the bet
your soul so dear
shall be speared in an eternal net
The hall of the damned
full of gone murderers that hanged
now they're hell framed
their pictured in pain
forever tortured
dead and inane
they cry out contorted,
faintly my name
as I leave Satans
emporium of reign
I know after this
that I'll play the right game
and never shall I diss
the lords name ever again ,
nor dare never shall I speak it
in vain .
Anonymous
The Spiders Of Ancient Old-
The spiders of ancient old,
Came back today,
To feast upon this dead man's flesh,
And to eat his dark swollen soul.
In the gunshot wound to the head, the spiders crawled within,
Infesting his rotten brains with eggs and lusting for more flesh.
They would soon hatch and then push his eye balls out.
So the spiders clicked away eating muscle tissue,
Moving his sorry bones around to eat within his disfigured joints,
Infection scabs of puss they like to slurp up.
Ebony demons with beady black eyes looking through the open wounds of puss.
Soon all his insides well be eaten leaving nothing but bones
To feast upon.
The spiders of ancient old,
Came back today,
To feast upon this dead man's flesh,
And to eat his dark swollen soul.
In the gunshot wound to the head, the spiders crawled within,
Infesting his rotten brains with eggs and lusting for more flesh.
They would soon hatch and then push his eye balls out.
So the spiders clicked away eating muscle tissue,
Moving his sorry bones around to eat within his disfigured joints,
Infection scabs of puss they like to slurp up.
Ebony demons with beady black eyes looking through the open wounds of puss.
Soon all his insides well be eaten leaving nothing but bones
To feast upon.
firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
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blaring red eyes
flames licking at your feet
its hot! your burning!
no relief from the heat.
you stand at hells gate
and wonder what went wrong.
maybe its those people you killed
and you took away their songs.
the hellhounds wail
jerks you awake
and satan stands before you
and you know your souls at stake.
he yells some spiteful words
and your falling down to hell
and the last thing to go through your mind
is dang! what about the one i stuck down that well?
flames licking at your feet
its hot! your burning!
no relief from the heat.
you stand at hells gate
and wonder what went wrong.
maybe its those people you killed
and you took away their songs.
the hellhounds wail
jerks you awake
and satan stands before you
and you know your souls at stake.
he yells some spiteful words
and your falling down to hell
and the last thing to go through your mind
is dang! what about the one i stuck down that well?
fieryangelsouljia
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as many times as you wish!
fieryangelsouljia
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wonderfully written
fieryangelsouljia
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remember enter as many times as you like!
Inspiration_Speaks
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Courtney Singleton
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 26th June 2011Forum Posts: 33
The Murder
I hear you scream for help
I chuckle at your pain
You being tortured you cry and yelp
You see your life flash before your eyes
But should I let you live
And let you pursue your dreams
When you ruined mine?
For now you just sit and scream
I'll skin you till I see flesh and blood
I'll laugh as I see your eyes start to flood
You hurt me so bad and you cry forgive and forget?
My revenge is ice cold and your death bed is set
I want you to cry Uncle
I want you to scream mercy
I want to see you in fear
I want to see you in misery
I set your blood and tears in a jar
I'll save it for later
In your after life you wont go far
You will never be in favor
I slide you in your coffin
And put you in your liquid remains
This day will leave unspoken
All I hear is the whispering of your name
It whispers
are you trying to find my guilt
well guess what
I have none i did as i felt
I have no shame for what I did
Do you have shame in what you said
I knew who you really were
Did you see my past tense?
Realize you're the one who's dead
I died in the inside but I resurrected
Who's that evil bitch who's read all over?
Oh that's your picture in the obituaries
Your blood seeped over
I see my life reopen now that your gone
With the wind you went and all i can say
Is thanks for your time but thats all for now
You tried to ruin my life go 'head and take your bow
Cause I won in the end and what did you lose
Your life in the end; there's no new path to choose...
I hear you scream for help
I chuckle at your pain
You being tortured you cry and yelp
You see your life flash before your eyes
But should I let you live
And let you pursue your dreams
When you ruined mine?
For now you just sit and scream
I'll skin you till I see flesh and blood
I'll laugh as I see your eyes start to flood
You hurt me so bad and you cry forgive and forget?
My revenge is ice cold and your death bed is set
I want you to cry Uncle
I want you to scream mercy
I want to see you in fear
I want to see you in misery
I set your blood and tears in a jar
I'll save it for later
In your after life you wont go far
You will never be in favor
I slide you in your coffin
And put you in your liquid remains
This day will leave unspoken
All I hear is the whispering of your name
It whispers
are you trying to find my guilt
well guess what
I have none i did as i felt
I have no shame for what I did
Do you have shame in what you said
I knew who you really were
Did you see my past tense?
Realize you're the one who's dead
I died in the inside but I resurrected
Who's that evil bitch who's read all over?
Oh that's your picture in the obituaries
Your blood seeped over
I see my life reopen now that your gone
With the wind you went and all i can say
Is thanks for your time but thats all for now
You tried to ruin my life go 'head and take your bow
Cause I won in the end and what did you lose
Your life in the end; there's no new path to choose...
Indie
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Miss Indie
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The Entity
Can you feel it?
The breath on the back of your neck
Sending shivers down your spine
Can you hear it?
The whisper in your ear
Murmuring all the things
It wants to do to you
Like tendrils of smoke
It wraps itself around you
Smothering you to its non form
While it roams it will
Across your body
As your panic wells up
To choking gasps
You’re throat holding on
To the screams that won’t escape
One word
Pounds through you mind
No!
Crying out silently
Begging someone to hear you
No
No
No
No
NO!
And it’s inside you
All around you
Filling your ears
With its poisonous desire
Whispering ever touch
As your body shudders
Your mouth gagged into silence
Unable to stop
The violation within
Can you feel it?
The breath on the back of your neck
Sending shivers down your spine
Can you hear it?
The whisper in your ear
Murmuring all the things
It wants to do to you
Like tendrils of smoke
It wraps itself around you
Smothering you to its non form
While it roams it will
Across your body
As your panic wells up
To choking gasps
You’re throat holding on
To the screams that won’t escape
One word
Pounds through you mind
No!
Crying out silently
Begging someone to hear you
No
No
No
No
NO!
And it’s inside you
All around you
Filling your ears
With its poisonous desire
Whispering ever touch
As your body shudders
Your mouth gagged into silence
Unable to stop
The violation within
UnleashedHeathen
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A Lovers Sleep Over
by ~UnleashedHeathen
A Lovers Sleep Over
Do you really think words could express how I feel
I can show you better than I can tell you
I'm adequate when it comes to precision because you see, I have a few knives here and there
Lay down for me, I'll make you something you'll never forget
I'll start by cutting a heart into your chest where my heart should be
I remember when you broke my heart, I'm just returning the favor
I then slit your neck so you are reminded of how I couldn't breathe when I was near you
I saved the best for last, though
When I finally stab your heart you can feel the same pain I felt when you left me for that bastard
by ~UnleashedHeathen
A Lovers Sleep Over
Do you really think words could express how I feel
I can show you better than I can tell you
I'm adequate when it comes to precision because you see, I have a few knives here and there
Lay down for me, I'll make you something you'll never forget
I'll start by cutting a heart into your chest where my heart should be
I remember when you broke my heart, I'm just returning the favor
I then slit your neck so you are reminded of how I couldn't breathe when I was near you
I saved the best for last, though
When I finally stab your heart you can feel the same pain I felt when you left me for that bastard
RedHot_Peppers
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Thought Provoker
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Joined 5th Sep 2011Forum Posts: 52
HeLLo iM JeRkFaCe...
hehehe...
Hello im Jerkface..
its bout damn time my pops let me out..
bad enough he has padded my room..
took all my toys..
like my eight inch dagger..
or like the last rapist i visited in his dream..
well..
he called it my stabbing knife..
tollum, "SHUT THE FUCK UP!.." as i stabbed.. "think twice bout wa u did.......she was jus a kid.."
then stuck um four more times.. he cried..
i said, "IT THRILLS ME..(stab) TO SEE U WHINE..(stab) JUS LIKE A LITTLE BITCH!"
"...i've been placed on this Earth to make ur type suffer..."
i whispered in his ear.. licked his lobe..
then bloodied my teeth with a bite on his shoulder..
its my thirst i have no control of..
think thats the night my pops caught me sinnin..
he said he knew id be this way from the beginnin..
i wondered if its because im so hideous lookin..
yessss...
my face is deformed
wish it were jus a mask
details of a clown and very sharp teeth
one who read Stephen King
would think i the son of Pennywise..
but im not..
my pops.. jus maybe one that u know
the preachy bastard..
self righteous fucker...
u may know him as RedHot Peppers..
to me he's jus plain ol' Mr.Softaroundtheedges..
he asked that i poke my head in..
as he says get my feet wet..
which be a good thing
figured u need to be warned
if'n ever u dreamin
consider it a nightmare
the moment u see this Clown face..
8^..( JerkFace
hehehe...
Hello im Jerkface..
its bout damn time my pops let me out..
bad enough he has padded my room..
took all my toys..
like my eight inch dagger..
or like the last rapist i visited in his dream..
well..
he called it my stabbing knife..
tollum, "SHUT THE FUCK UP!.." as i stabbed.. "think twice bout wa u did.......she was jus a kid.."
then stuck um four more times.. he cried..
i said, "IT THRILLS ME..(stab) TO SEE U WHINE..(stab) JUS LIKE A LITTLE BITCH!"
"...i've been placed on this Earth to make ur type suffer..."
i whispered in his ear.. licked his lobe..
then bloodied my teeth with a bite on his shoulder..
its my thirst i have no control of..
think thats the night my pops caught me sinnin..
he said he knew id be this way from the beginnin..
i wondered if its because im so hideous lookin..
yessss...
my face is deformed
wish it were jus a mask
details of a clown and very sharp teeth
one who read Stephen King
would think i the son of Pennywise..
but im not..
my pops.. jus maybe one that u know
the preachy bastard..
self righteous fucker...
u may know him as RedHot Peppers..
to me he's jus plain ol' Mr.Softaroundtheedges..
he asked that i poke my head in..
as he says get my feet wet..
which be a good thing
figured u need to be warned
if'n ever u dreamin
consider it a nightmare
the moment u see this Clown face..
8^..( JerkFace
RedHot_Peppers
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Thought Provoker
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Joined 5th Sep 2011Forum Posts: 52
i HeArD u HaTe GaYs?... >8^..(
JerkFace killa
my Daddy sent me to ur door
....."dis be ur NIGHTMARE!"
the cameras glare
and u da star of dis private show
oopss.. watch ur elbow
yea i know..
its kinda hard to lock these zip ties jus the way i wan um..
but its okay.. jus lay here
so i hear u hate gays
was toll u sodomized that guy u killed the other day
oh Papa was displeased.. prolly why He sent me
and hiddy hoe.. hot damn here I am!
Scalped in hand.. here’s the plan
gon see if we can get u to stay clear of other peoples business..
*sharpens knife begins to slice a certain section of the lower leg
Now this thing about gays..
I feel u man..
not my cup of tea..
guess I aint so fuckin sweet..
but Papa say.. to each his own while in His home
And here it is ur psycho ass don felt it safe to cast the very first stone
Glad we alone..
The way u bitch and moan it racks my nerves
I’ll be done soon
I’ll let u live
Jus need to amputate this leg some.
Now when u wake the doc may think its cancer
……………you’ll know the real answer
And when u sleep may again see me
And if so u gon wish it were cancer………….
hehe.. straighten up and fly ri lil birdie..
>8^..( JerkFace..
JerkFace killa
my Daddy sent me to ur door
....."dis be ur NIGHTMARE!"
the cameras glare
and u da star of dis private show
oopss.. watch ur elbow
yea i know..
its kinda hard to lock these zip ties jus the way i wan um..
but its okay.. jus lay here
so i hear u hate gays
was toll u sodomized that guy u killed the other day
oh Papa was displeased.. prolly why He sent me
and hiddy hoe.. hot damn here I am!
Scalped in hand.. here’s the plan
gon see if we can get u to stay clear of other peoples business..
*sharpens knife begins to slice a certain section of the lower leg
Now this thing about gays..
I feel u man..
not my cup of tea..
guess I aint so fuckin sweet..
but Papa say.. to each his own while in His home
And here it is ur psycho ass don felt it safe to cast the very first stone
Glad we alone..
The way u bitch and moan it racks my nerves
I’ll be done soon
I’ll let u live
Jus need to amputate this leg some.
Now when u wake the doc may think its cancer
……………you’ll know the real answer
And when u sleep may again see me
And if so u gon wish it were cancer………….
hehe.. straighten up and fly ri lil birdie..
>8^..( JerkFace..