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OctoberArts
October
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Joined 14th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596
October
Fire of Insight


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Winning Poem
I'm the death, breathing life
I'm the void vociferating verve
flowing through the pulse of point,
I'm the fowling filament of truth
being coerced by the corrupted captain of country,
I'm the idle impulse
pulsating in the psuedo heartbeat of
my remote romeo,
I'm the galloping gambler
betting my pellucid poetry
shadowed by the slick sonnetists,
I’m the cold caterpillar in a class
of students supporting platonic practicality
of thudding thesis,
I'm the insecure infant
trying to insure the loyalty of my idolized individual
by siltting my slender skin,
I'm the silver symphony
of the vexed veins of violin,
I'm the raging rebel
against those fringing the fair share of females,
I'm the isolated indifferent inferno
away from inducement of inflated ego
injected by the luring Lucifer,
I'm the vibrantly velocious, veiled spirit
inhabiting in an inspirited iron butterfly.

I'm the death, breathing life
I'm the void vociferating verve
flowing through the pulse of point,
I'm the fowling filament of truth
being coerced by the corrupted captain of country,
I'm the idle impulse
pulsating in the psuedo heartbeat of
my remote romeo,
I'm the galloping gambler
betting my pellucid poetry
shadowed by the slick sonnetists,
I’m the cold caterpillar in a class
of students supporting platonic practicality
of thudding thesis,
I'm the insecure infant
trying to insure the loyalty of my idolized individual
by siltting my slender skin,
I'm the silver symphony
of the vexed veins of violin,
I'm the raging rebel
against those fringing the fair share of females,
I'm the isolated indifferent inferno
away from inducement of inflated ego
injected by the luring Lucifer,
I'm the vibrantly velocious, veiled spirit
inhabiting in an inspirited iron butterfly.
AlisVolatPropriis8
7
Joined 24th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 322
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Forum Posts: 322
Me gratified:),the first thing i did when i woke up was to check the results ....yay me shining with the star.My adrenalin is jolting high. ThankYOU so much for the encouragement.

AlisVolatPropriis8
7
Joined 24th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 322
Thought Provoker


Forum Posts: 322
Thank you 

OctoberArts
October
6
Joined 14th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596
October
Fire of Insight


Forum Posts: 596
I was lucky to get us a second trophy and is goes to Viddax
Viddax said:The Bronzed British’un
Beaten bronzed am I in tone of skin
And Black hole golden is my grin
Forged in thoughts, tempered in words
The Byzantium-British-man I could be
So it seems I am a slight Classicist maybe?
Yet I am a man,
With some plan
Ravenous esoteric music King and Cultured Conqueror,
Fantastical fiend of terrible treasure
And a poet to some measure.
Daft destroyer of vain villains and heroes too
Though that may not be entirely true
Overall a Madgod made mortal
A human at base and an architect at pyramid top
Waiting for that delightful thing to heartbeat stop.
A cruel heart and kind face, scratch that,
A cruel pace and kind start rectify that
To make a thing so hardly discussed
A poetic philosopher advantageous to alliterations ways
This is just a snippet of how I shall exist in my due days.

Viddax said:The Bronzed British’un
Beaten bronzed am I in tone of skin
And Black hole golden is my grin
Forged in thoughts, tempered in words
The Byzantium-British-man I could be
So it seems I am a slight Classicist maybe?
Yet I am a man,
With some plan
Ravenous esoteric music King and Cultured Conqueror,
Fantastical fiend of terrible treasure
And a poet to some measure.
Daft destroyer of vain villains and heroes too
Though that may not be entirely true
Overall a Madgod made mortal
A human at base and an architect at pyramid top
Waiting for that delightful thing to heartbeat stop.
A cruel heart and kind face, scratch that,
A cruel pace and kind start rectify that
To make a thing so hardly discussed
A poetic philosopher advantageous to alliterations ways
This is just a snippet of how I shall exist in my due days.
OctoberArts
October
6
Joined 14th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596
October
Fire of Insight


Forum Posts: 596
Thankyou everyone fr your wonderful poems and congrats to the winners :)
Viddax
Lord Viddax
32
Joined 10th Oct 2009
Forum Posts: 6739
Lord Viddax
Guardian of Shadows


Forum Posts: 6739
Thank you OctoberArts for the second trophy, I didn't know there was a thing as two winners until now!
Congrats to Rakhi Rudra also, and everyone else for their entries.
Congrats to Rakhi Rudra also, and everyone else for their entries.
Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 17205
Wow..Yay! *claps* congratulations to Rakhi Rudra and Lord Viddax! You guys are awesome! UnleashedHeathen...wow!
Chandler
Gleana Snipoms
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Joined 8th Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 270
Gleana Snipoms
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Congratulations to the both of you magnificent poets! A very deserved reward indeed!