Poetry competition CLOSED 20th November 2011 2:55pm
WINNER
rayheinrich (Death Plane for Teddy)
rayheinrich (Death Plane for Teddy)
RUNNER-UP:
siphondarkness
Light+Dark=??
Poetry Contest Description
Combine a "Light" Poem and a "Dark" Poem
This Poem was a challenge from my good friend , she said write 2 poems one being "light" and one being "Darker" than that, and then combine them by writing Line 1 of the "light" Poem, Then Line 1 of the "dark" poem, Then Line 2 of the "Light" then Line 2 of the "Dark Poem" and So on...The Goal was to see if it would fit together as 1 poem at the end....
Here is My Failed Attempt at it http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/26626/
Here is My Failed Attempt at it http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/26626/
The more I thought about your competition the more it inspired this.
Confused Killer
They must pay for their torture
But I cannot hurt my friends
After what they did to me
I must hurt them
I will kill them
No no I cannot
I must take revenge
No I must not
I will watch their
lives leave their eyes
I am not a killer
No one can die
I shoot the first one
I grieve them deeply
Why did I do this
I kill the next in their sleep
I'm not a monster
But yet I am
I must do whats right
I turn myself in
Confused Killer
They must pay for their torture
But I cannot hurt my friends
After what they did to me
I must hurt them
I will kill them
No no I cannot
I must take revenge
No I must not
I will watch their
lives leave their eyes
I am not a killer
No one can die
I shoot the first one
I grieve them deeply
Why did I do this
I kill the next in their sleep
I'm not a monster
But yet I am
I must do whats right
I turn myself in
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well, here it is. interesting, if weird, exercise
< weather from the north / your fine brown hair >
rocks
your hat
cliffs
oh that hat of yours
morning breaks
i can see that hat
with the waves white
and your hand
the sky empty
taking it off
waiting
and all your fine brown hair
the weather from the north
pinned
the last of a bright sun
and clasped
followed by years of cloud
combed
horizon to horizon
and braided
a cotton sheath
your fine brown hair
a dressing for a wound
wetted
the voices
lathered
the wind
shampooed
the notes filled
and rinsed
the chorus
in showers
the seabirds
and baths
the last of the sun
in oceans
the bulb of the planet
and seas
it's fragile glass
in the summer winds
evacuated
on a back porch
the sea boils
it falls
the birds explode
in winter
the rocks are
hiking a west slope
the rocks survive
with the sun through it
even the giants feet
your fine brown hair
the deep sounds
at night
of their footsteps
as it falls on my chest
of drums
falls through our story
- - -
well, here it is. interesting, if weird, exercise
< weather from the north / your fine brown hair >
rocks
your hat
cliffs
oh that hat of yours
morning breaks
i can see that hat
with the waves white
and your hand
the sky empty
taking it off
waiting
and all your fine brown hair
the weather from the north
pinned
the last of a bright sun
and clasped
followed by years of cloud
combed
horizon to horizon
and braided
a cotton sheath
your fine brown hair
a dressing for a wound
wetted
the voices
lathered
the wind
shampooed
the notes filled
and rinsed
the chorus
in showers
the seabirds
and baths
the last of the sun
in oceans
the bulb of the planet
and seas
it's fragile glass
in the summer winds
evacuated
on a back porch
the sea boils
it falls
the birds explode
in winter
the rocks are
hiking a west slope
the rocks survive
with the sun through it
even the giants feet
your fine brown hair
the deep sounds
at night
of their footsteps
as it falls on my chest
of drums
falls through our story
- - -
Anonymous
My entry in your rather strange competition.
Dark: a visit with a demon.
Light: Summers come.
Singing in the rain,
Clouds of hatred overhead,
Unclad, covered in mist,
Mortal being, soul was shed,
Dancing the streets
The night turned cold,
Jive, samba and twist.
Lightning, wet – alive was one
Joyous to see it,
At an age very old
Taste the happy bit.
“Stand in line” they spray,
I enjoyed the airs breezy smell
As a leader shouts orders
We can even enjoy the rainbows
Your way, “Do it”, they say.
Long tail, colourful delight,
As the first blow bellows,
The sun shines bright.
Resounding hum,
A pot of gold at the end of the light.
Stop, pop, the bleeding some,
Twinkle the prisms, the fairies made
Gnaw at flesh as they devour
Sit together as the colours fade.
Grass grows, flowers bloom.
Eat the souls in half an hour.
Remember now not to bow,
Oh it’ll be summer really soon!
The devil curtsies, the fat cow.
Dark: a visit with a demon.
Light: Summers come.
Singing in the rain,
Clouds of hatred overhead,
Unclad, covered in mist,
Mortal being, soul was shed,
Dancing the streets
The night turned cold,
Jive, samba and twist.
Lightning, wet – alive was one
Joyous to see it,
At an age very old
Taste the happy bit.
“Stand in line” they spray,
I enjoyed the airs breezy smell
As a leader shouts orders
We can even enjoy the rainbows
Your way, “Do it”, they say.
Long tail, colourful delight,
As the first blow bellows,
The sun shines bright.
Resounding hum,
A pot of gold at the end of the light.
Stop, pop, the bleeding some,
Twinkle the prisms, the fairies made
Gnaw at flesh as they devour
Sit together as the colours fade.
Grass grows, flowers bloom.
Eat the souls in half an hour.
Remember now not to bow,
Oh it’ll be summer really soon!
The devil curtsies, the fat cow.
dis is jus a freestyle....
For my people I will Pray
The killer, he awaits
Please no more senseless violence today
And the victim can not escape
Please enlighten our minds
The trap has now ben set
Please give us enough time
The trigger reeks of the killer's sweat
Please Give us Strength
The target has now been acquired
Please Guide the way we think
He gives the trigger purpose....shots fired
Please Give us Love for our fellow man
2 to the chest...another to the head
Please Give us Wisdom to Understand
Next to the last...now the last...breath....dead
Please bring an end to all the hate
He stands over his victim...his wife's naked lover...she looks scared & exhausted
Please Touch us all before it's too late
She takes her final breath as well....now he feels exhaulted
i hope u like....
For my people I will Pray
The killer, he awaits
Please no more senseless violence today
And the victim can not escape
Please enlighten our minds
The trap has now ben set
Please give us enough time
The trigger reeks of the killer's sweat
Please Give us Strength
The target has now been acquired
Please Guide the way we think
He gives the trigger purpose....shots fired
Please Give us Love for our fellow man
2 to the chest...another to the head
Please Give us Wisdom to Understand
Next to the last...now the last...breath....dead
Please bring an end to all the hate
He stands over his victim...his wife's naked lover...she looks scared & exhausted
Please Touch us all before it's too late
She takes her final breath as well....now he feels exhaulted
i hope u like....
I am the girl who loves the sun
This is for the kids who live in the dark
I am the girl who lives a happy life.
This is for he kids who have never see happiness
I am the girl who loves all
This is for the kids who have never been loved
I am the girl who sees good n everyone
This is for the kids who have only known evil
I am the girl who is loved by all
This is fort he kids who are kicked by all
I am the girl who see's the stars at night
This is for the kids who look at cardboard at night
I am the girl who is always happy.
This is for the kids who are in a rehab center
I am the girl who goes by D.A.R.E
This is for the kids who were told too late.
I am the girl...
This is for the kids...
This is for the kids who live in the dark
I am the girl who lives a happy life.
This is for he kids who have never see happiness
I am the girl who loves all
This is for the kids who have never been loved
I am the girl who sees good n everyone
This is for the kids who have only known evil
I am the girl who is loved by all
This is fort he kids who are kicked by all
I am the girl who see's the stars at night
This is for the kids who look at cardboard at night
I am the girl who is always happy.
This is for the kids who are in a rehab center
I am the girl who goes by D.A.R.E
This is for the kids who were told too late.
I am the girl...
This is for the kids...
Beloved
He embraces me in the dark of night
Giving me his essence with his rod
Channelling into me his hard might
Pumping hard into me, his seeds
The bright dawn illuminate the world
Dancing light on the tree tops
Soughing breeze caressing the woods
Walking with me, he holds my hands
Darkness in his eyes reflects
Nothing, but his fiery lusts
As he rides me into oblivion
This lover, this strange man
For night brings his mighty sword
To cleave the hidden cleft
With the brightness of the world
Show his cherubic face, so sweet
For within lies a demon
That sleep till the twilight hours
And brightness bring forth the dawn
with songs and melodies till dusk falls
He embraces me in the dark of night
Giving me his essence with his rod
Channelling into me his hard might
Pumping hard into me, his seeds
The bright dawn illuminate the world
Dancing light on the tree tops
Soughing breeze caressing the woods
Walking with me, he holds my hands
Darkness in his eyes reflects
Nothing, but his fiery lusts
As he rides me into oblivion
This lover, this strange man
For night brings his mighty sword
To cleave the hidden cleft
With the brightness of the world
Show his cherubic face, so sweet
For within lies a demon
That sleep till the twilight hours
And brightness bring forth the dawn
with songs and melodies till dusk falls
I'm...
I'm such a happy kid,
I'm bleeding inside.
I'm such a carefree girl,
why can't I forget it?
I'm the first to laugh,
please let me cry!
I'm the one who loves,
my body burns in hate.
I'm the one you think is fun,
I wish you'd all go away.
I Love to talk,
be quiet and shut up!
I'm the girl, who lives for life.
Sometimes, I think the world will die.
Someday I'll laugh, and grin to the world.
Someday I'll cry, and carry a gun in hand.
Someday we'll play together as friends.
Someday, I might just be you're end.
I"m a friend.
I'm a loner.
I love you all.
Leave. Me. Alone.
I'm such a happy kid,
I'm bleeding inside.
I'm such a carefree girl,
why can't I forget it?
I'm the first to laugh,
please let me cry!
I'm the one who loves,
my body burns in hate.
I'm the one you think is fun,
I wish you'd all go away.
I Love to talk,
be quiet and shut up!
I'm the girl, who lives for life.
Sometimes, I think the world will die.
Someday I'll laugh, and grin to the world.
Someday I'll cry, and carry a gun in hand.
Someday we'll play together as friends.
Someday, I might just be you're end.
I"m a friend.
I'm a loner.
I love you all.
Leave. Me. Alone.
I always find the cure
Oh they are dead for sure
The hearts they skip a beat
They will become an evening treat
My soul does seems to have mass
These bridges will burn at last
Resolving to only find
Your body will soon be mine
A friend to hold me dear
Come close and taste the fear
We only want acceptance
Never mind repentance.
Something about being accepted this one is. Gave it a shot!
Oh they are dead for sure
The hearts they skip a beat
They will become an evening treat
My soul does seems to have mass
These bridges will burn at last
Resolving to only find
Your body will soon be mine
A friend to hold me dear
Come close and taste the fear
We only want acceptance
Never mind repentance.
Something about being accepted this one is. Gave it a shot!
Anonymous
rayheinrich said:[font=Courier New][size=2]
well, here it is. interesting, if weird, exercise
< weather from the north / your fine brown hair >
rocks
your hat
cliffs
oh that hat of yours
morning breaks
i can see that hat
with the waves white
and your hand
the sky empty
taking it off
waiting
and all your fine brown hair
the weather from the north
pinned
the last of a bright sun
and clasped
followed by years of cloud
combed
horizon to horizon
and braided
a cotton sheath
your fine brown hair
a dressing for a wound
wetted
the voices
lathered
the wind
shampooed
the notes filled
and rinsed
the chorus
in showers
the seabirds
and baths
the last of the sun
in oceans
the bulb of the planet
and seas
it's fragile glass
in the summer winds
evacuated
on a back porch
the sea boils
it falls
the birds explode
in winter
the rocks are
hiking a west slope
the rocks survive
with the sun through it
even the giants feet
your fine brown hair
the deep sounds
at night
of their footsteps
as it falls on my chest
of drums
falls through our story
- - -
I really like this one, Ray. :]
well, here it is. interesting, if weird, exercise
< weather from the north / your fine brown hair >
rocks
your hat
cliffs
oh that hat of yours
morning breaks
i can see that hat
with the waves white
and your hand
the sky empty
taking it off
waiting
and all your fine brown hair
the weather from the north
pinned
the last of a bright sun
and clasped
followed by years of cloud
combed
horizon to horizon
and braided
a cotton sheath
your fine brown hair
a dressing for a wound
wetted
the voices
lathered
the wind
shampooed
the notes filled
and rinsed
the chorus
in showers
the seabirds
and baths
the last of the sun
in oceans
the bulb of the planet
and seas
it's fragile glass
in the summer winds
evacuated
on a back porch
the sea boils
it falls
the birds explode
in winter
the rocks are
hiking a west slope
the rocks survive
with the sun through it
even the giants feet
your fine brown hair
the deep sounds
at night
of their footsteps
as it falls on my chest
of drums
falls through our story
- - -
I really like this one, Ray. :]
