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Pet Peeves

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vagabondvibes
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 12th Oct 2018
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Pet Peeve

 
The windows all down
The mirrors thumping from the radio’s sound
Wind is flowing throughout my hair
I take a breath of fresh air

I think to myself “a cigarette would be nice”
With one hand I grab my vice
And then I search for a light
I see it sitting towards my right

I put a square in my lips
And thrust my fingertips
A spark comes flying, but to no avail
My lighter has failed

I flick and flick
Hoping maybe something will click
Desperate for a flame
Every god I name

I go look for another
I even ask my mother
I search for what seems forever
Hoping to come across one wherever

Finally answered are my prayers
I grab the light and rush downstairs
Up to my lips I put the lighter
Hoping this one will be brighter

But fate would not permit
My light to be lit
So now here I sit
Angry that I can’t take one hit
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snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
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Tweens in Strollers

Tweens in strollers
Pushed around by mothers
And sometimes fathers
Like they were Queens
Or divine Emperors
 
Is treating a child  
Like they were an infant
Good for their development?
 
Give me a break!
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poet Anonymous

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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
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Passé
(did you forget how to use the muscle in your head?)


( a Quatern )

When formulaics are a crime it seems,
To you who dress as poets and pretend.
To feign & then go thru’ the act. That steams!
And then you blink, how dare I to offend.

You spout about you’d rather do freestyle,
When formulaics are a crime it seems.
That’s fine with me, and frankly, all the while
I polish my new trophy till it gleams.

I think it must distract, these lyric schemes.
How do you manage writing anything?
When formulaics are a crime it seems,
It must be painful as your thoughts unstring.

To one-trick ponies, everywhere, I say,
Whenever you awaken from your dreams:
Since when did rhyming schemes become passe’,
When formulaics are a crime it seems?


fostero
Strange Creature
Joined 23rd Dec 2018
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Remember that deep sigh,

that inhalation, 

how the senses rocked,

green alpine meadows,

closing your eyes,

visualising the orchestra,

the conductors baton,

rise and fall of bows,

sigh again, a newer memory,

a daughter walking down the aisle, 

church bells, an angelic choir,

the confetti, the limousine, 

your speech, painstakingly wrote,

then a deep breathe goes further back,

first day at school, no family,

fear of being alone for the first time, 

friendships formed, year one,

university, work, old age, 

sighs and deep breathes, so much,

muchly, all so muchly appreciated, 

eyes wide open, a local footie match,

two grandsons playing, opposing teams,

inwardly cheering both,

exhalation, pride and love, 

a small tear falls, yours,

small veins glistening in the sun,

the whistle blows,

a scarf wraps around,

its their day as you walk away,

two shouts of 'granddad', 

you turn, you smile, you sigh....


ReggiePoet
Reggie
Fire of Insight
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Joined 13th May 2018
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Peace Must Wait


At 4 AM, the toys’ assembly done,
And everything is smuggled into place.
I’m Beat! …although my Battle isn’t won,
To bed! …a little sleep, for now, I'll chase!
 
By 6 AM, the children burst right in
Rambunctious laughter shocks us both awake
For them, the magic morning just begins
We drag ourselves from bed, just for their sake.
 
The children leave the house to show their toys
It makes for needed respite from the sound
Of early Christmas morning’s joyous noise
9:30, the first peaceful time we’ve found.
 
Ironic, how a little “peace” on earth
Must wait for Christmas morning’s childhood mirth!

 
 
Written by ReggiePoet (Reggie)
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thehardbard
David Nicoll
Strange Creature
United Kingdom
Joined 25th Dec 2018
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Excellent poem Reggie.

thehardbard
David Nicoll
Strange Creature
United Kingdom
Joined 25th Dec 2018
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Brilliant Jade!

thehardbard
David Nicoll
Strange Creature
United Kingdom
Joined 25th Dec 2018
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He will never want to walk at that rate.

thehardbard
David Nicoll
Strange Creature
United Kingdom
Joined 25th Dec 2018
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Being without a lighter is just like no having a fag! A drag!

Ely
E.A.Rothwell
Dangerous Mind
Mexico 6awards
Joined 20th May 2018
Forum Posts: 297

Jade...well done...well said
you hit the nail upon its head
especially S2, L1... ''You spout about you’d rather do freestyle''
I feel the same...and have for a while...
You Go Girl... Ely

yelluw_always
Haley Quaquaversal
Fire of Insight
United States 5awards
Joined 24th Dec 2018
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Amorous_tryst
Dangerous Mind
United States 16awards
Joined 12th June 2017
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Woofy, woof, woof

 
 
 
(to the tune of Jingle Bells)  
 
 
Woof, woof, woof ……woof, woof, woof  
         woof,  
woof,          woof, woof, woof  
woof, woof, woof  
                            wowoof, woof, woof, woof  
wowoof, woof  
                       woof  
                               woof, woof,woof  
 
Woof, woof, woof ……woof, woof, woof  
         woof,  
woof,         woof, woof, woof  
woof, woof, woof  
                            wawoof, woof, woof, woof  
wowoof, woof  
                       woof  
                               woof, woof,woof                        
 
 
Prancing thru the snow,  
booties on my toes,  
dressed with pretty bows  
seems how it always goes  
there would be no pics  
if not for this prick  
forcing me to sit and freeze  
then do some silly tricks  
 
               Oh!  
      (repeat chorus)  
 
bells upon my feet  
cause she thinks its sweet  
though I like the treats  
it gives me the creeps  
perhaps I'll bite her hand  
wouldn't that be grand  
a stand I'd take for heavens sake  
for pets throughout the land  
                    Oh!  
          (repeat chorus)  
 
 
 
Woofy woofwoof,  everyone.  
 
 
 
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PandoraUnleashed
Dangerous Mind
United States 12awards
Joined 29th Mar 2018
Forum Posts: 39

If this were a competition, this would get my  vote and you know all the rest.  You're so very blunt and theatrical with your words is a huge reason for me.

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