Poetry competition CLOSED 6th February 2012 1:50am
WINNER
Whitewand6
Whitewand6
RUNNERS-UP:
anandosen
and Grace
The Online Romance
Anonymous
Grace - thank you very much for your generous support....
you are WONDERFUL....and should get a CERTIFICATE
of being THE BEST COlLEGUE on DUP.....!!!!!
you are WONDERFUL....and should get a CERTIFICATE
of being THE BEST COlLEGUE on DUP.....!!!!!
Whitewand6 said:[quote-61630-diddi]I met my ex wife online and I travelled 3 thousand miles to marry her and we exchanged visits for a couple of years but my point is , it really does and can happen :)
Paul. Man-this is special. Looks like I am
getting into your shoes. Soon enough. x[/quote]
really ? good luck man
Paul. Man-this is special. Looks like I am
getting into your shoes. Soon enough. x[/quote]
really ? good luck man
Grace said:[quote-61650-Whitewand6][quote-61630-diddi]I met my ex wife online and I travelled 3 thousand miles to marry her and we exchanged visits for a couple of years but my point is , it really does and can happen :)
Paul. Man-this is special. Looks like I am
getting into your shoes. Soon enough. x[/quote]
Sumeet! How Sweet! Really? Wow!! Ecstatic here! Congratulations!!![/quote]
Thank you Gracie. In due time.
Paul. Man-this is special. Looks like I am
getting into your shoes. Soon enough. x[/quote]
Sumeet! How Sweet! Really? Wow!! Ecstatic here! Congratulations!!![/quote]
Thank you Gracie. In due time.
likewise i'm sure 
OMG: No! Thank You! Wow...well, firstly, I like you, I like your poems and I generally love people...
I took this a different way...
Late Friday night
His avatar was a rippling, sweat-covered chest...
Not the avatar of an intellectual,
but I do enough thinking-- need more doing
and his name..
10in4U
I'm thinking he's not a carpenter
he might want to lay something
wood might be involved...
but.. yeah.. my vagina's doing the thinking..
I answer the doorbell- open the window
take the chance, answer his "HAY!"
ask him what he does in that neighboring town
must be physical with all those muscles
and he's a bodybuilder with a college degree
(not in English, I hope)
he's never been married and there are no kids
and he likes his girls thick- good news for me
so I go for a drive in total realization
my vagina's in total control
We meet at the coffeeshop and can't help but notice
his muscles are hidden under a thick layer of fat
His teeth poke out from a thick grayish film
I doubt he's a body builder
I doubt he's a college graduate
I doubt he's human
and I doubt
when I arrive home
I will need that toy therapy
or a cold shower
to put my vagina back in line
He asks me back to his place
gives me directions, I repeat them back
and though I've lived here all my life
I still somehow got lost
Late Friday night
His avatar was a rippling, sweat-covered chest...
Not the avatar of an intellectual,
but I do enough thinking-- need more doing
and his name..
10in4U
I'm thinking he's not a carpenter
he might want to lay something
wood might be involved...
but.. yeah.. my vagina's doing the thinking..
I answer the doorbell- open the window
take the chance, answer his "HAY!"
ask him what he does in that neighboring town
must be physical with all those muscles
and he's a bodybuilder with a college degree
(not in English, I hope)
he's never been married and there are no kids
and he likes his girls thick- good news for me
so I go for a drive in total realization
my vagina's in total control
We meet at the coffeeshop and can't help but notice
his muscles are hidden under a thick layer of fat
His teeth poke out from a thick grayish film
I doubt he's a body builder
I doubt he's a college graduate
I doubt he's human
and I doubt
when I arrive home
I will need that toy therapy
or a cold shower
to put my vagina back in line
He asks me back to his place
gives me directions, I repeat them back
and though I've lived here all my life
I still somehow got lost
