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love vs. lies

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1383

Poetry Contest

in max. 50 words, minimalist poem on the topic, using the prompt words given
simple rules:

*max. 50 words, a poem can range from as minimum as just five words to 50 words max.

*the minimum words used the better (for win), also the intensity & emotive content in feltness & your x-factoring styles - of metaphorical or simple worded, free verse , any poetic forms like haiku senryu , visual etc are all considered for win

*no erotica or extreme content pls.

* max. TWO entries per poet

* no AI generated poems

*5 prompt words given below: you need to compulsorily use them in your poem

*PROMPT WORDS:
    #blackhole
    #porcelain
    #origami
    #cuckoo
    #whirlpool
   

all the best to you fine poetic minimalists👍✍️♥️🙏



PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
Portugal 22awards
Joined 26th May 2022
Forum Posts: 344

emotional suction

love´s is not a lie
it's an origami cuckoo  
catched by the whirlpool  
of a porcelain blackhole
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
Portugal 22awards
Joined 26th May 2022
Forum Posts: 344

unexplainable draw

Beneath the surface  
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.

A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.

Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
 
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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Anne-Ri999
Fire of Insight
Norway 7awards
Joined 16th Aug 2023
Forum Posts: 270

Ragnarok returns

blackhole beast Surtr giants  
summoning porcelain songbirds
voluptuous vespers spew
kelp robed origami oracle
 
where cuckoo eggs crack
wyrd whirlpool openings
billows carved from foam
rebirthing each lie  
love cusp creation
 
 
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all rights reserved
Written by Anne-Ri999
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oiza
Strange Creature
Joined 4th Aug 2023
Forum Posts: 4

Fold

Porcelain dreams fold origami-style
While cuckoo clocks count whirlpool blackholes.
Written by oiza
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RyanBlackborough
Surprise guest
Thought Provoker
Australia 1awards
Joined 11th June 2024
Forum Posts: 89

Cosmic anomaly

Floating in awe towards what appeared a porcelain glaze.
Facing the inescapable pull of that dense, pitch blackhole.
Another cuckoo traveller, bound to grace the twisting whirlpool.
To be folded like origami then distended, mercilessly.
Written by RyanBlackborough (Surprise guest)
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KittyFromHell
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 31st May 2013
Forum Posts: 656

Toxic Crazy Baby

I have happened upon  
A whirlpool of blue in your eyes.  
Behold, I am spellbound—  
Suspended as a porcelain doll  
Hung in a windstorm.  
It is doomsday in wonderland.  
The awe of you has left me cuckoo  
As all reason abandons me,  
And I am sucked into the black hole  
Where your heart should be.  
Only grippy socks and origami  
Can save me now.
Written by KittyFromHell
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summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1383

Thankyou  PAR, Rianne, oiza, RyanBlackBorough & KittyFromHell… for your intense poetic takes on the title & with the prompt words! It’s magical that using same prompt words, how each of you had gone deep in your own unique tellings..  bravo!! keep them coming xx

Johnny_Silver
Johnny Silver
Strange Creature
United Kingdom
Joined 13th Jan 2025
Forum Posts: 3

Love Is...

Love is this whirlpool
This blackhole
Love is the cracks in the porcelain of my body
My heart folds like origami
Cuckoo, cuckoo
Time heals no wounds
Was it love or a lie?
Love is love
Is love is
Love is
Love is a lie
Written by Johnny_Silver (Johnny Silver)
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James_A_Knight
Thought Provoker
Palestine 2awards
Joined 24th Feb 2021
Forum Posts: 105

Porcelain Origami


She folds herself into a swan
So she can fly away
She cracks but never breaks
She reinforced her porcelain
Written by James_A_Knight
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