Poetry Competition Ends 18th February 2025 4:55pm
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love vs. lies
summultima
uma
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uma
Dangerous Mind
34
Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1383
Poetry Contest Description
in max. 50 words, minimalist poem on the topic, using the prompt words given
simple rules:
*max. 50 words, a poem can range from as minimum as just five words to 50 words max.
*the minimum words used the better (for win), also the intensity & emotive content in feltness & your x-factoring styles - of metaphorical or simple worded, free verse , any poetic forms like haiku senryu , visual etc are all considered for win
*no erotica or extreme content pls.
* max. TWO entries per poet
* no AI generated poems
*5 prompt words given below: you need to compulsorily use them in your poem
*PROMPT WORDS:
#blackhole
#porcelain
#origami
#cuckoo
#whirlpool
all the best to you fine poetic minimalists👍✍️♥️🙏
*max. 50 words, a poem can range from as minimum as just five words to 50 words max.
*the minimum words used the better (for win), also the intensity & emotive content in feltness & your x-factoring styles - of metaphorical or simple worded, free verse , any poetic forms like haiku senryu , visual etc are all considered for win
*no erotica or extreme content pls.
* max. TWO entries per poet
* no AI generated poems
*5 prompt words given below: you need to compulsorily use them in your poem
*PROMPT WORDS:
#blackhole
#porcelain
#origami
#cuckoo
#whirlpool
all the best to you fine poetic minimalists👍✍️♥️🙏
PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
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PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 26th May 2022Forum Posts: 344
emotional suction
love´s is not a lie
it's an origami cuckoo
catched by the whirlpool
of a porcelain blackhole
it's an origami cuckoo
catched by the whirlpool
of a porcelain blackhole
Written by PAR
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Forum Posts: 344
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
22
Joined 26th May 2022Forum Posts: 344
unexplainable draw
Beneath the surface
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
Written by PAR
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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Anne-Ri999
Forum Posts: 270
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 16th Aug 2023 Forum Posts: 270
Ragnarok returns
blackhole beast Surtr giants
summoning porcelain songbirds
voluptuous vespers spew
kelp robed origami oracle
where cuckoo eggs crack
wyrd whirlpool openings
billows carved from foam
rebirthing each lie
love cusp creation
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summoning porcelain songbirds
voluptuous vespers spew
kelp robed origami oracle
where cuckoo eggs crack
wyrd whirlpool openings
billows carved from foam
rebirthing each lie
love cusp creation
copyrights © Rianne 2025
all rights reserved
Written by Anne-Ri999
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oiza
Joined 4th Aug 2023
Forum Posts: 4
Strange Creature
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Fold
Porcelain dreams fold origami-style
While cuckoo clocks count whirlpool blackholes.
While cuckoo clocks count whirlpool blackholes.
Written by oiza
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Cosmic anomaly
Floating in awe towards what appeared a porcelain glaze.
Facing the inescapable pull of that dense, pitch blackhole.
Another cuckoo traveller, bound to grace the twisting whirlpool.
To be folded like origami then distended, mercilessly.
Facing the inescapable pull of that dense, pitch blackhole.
Another cuckoo traveller, bound to grace the twisting whirlpool.
To be folded like origami then distended, mercilessly.
Written by RyanBlackborough
(Surprise guest)
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KittyFromHell
Forum Posts: 656
Dangerous Mind
14
Joined 31st May 2013 Forum Posts: 656
Toxic Crazy Baby
I have happened upon
A whirlpool of blue in your eyes.
Behold, I am spellbound—
Suspended as a porcelain doll
Hung in a windstorm.
It is doomsday in wonderland.
The awe of you has left me cuckoo
As all reason abandons me,
And I am sucked into the black hole
Where your heart should be.
Only grippy socks and origami
Can save me now.
A whirlpool of blue in your eyes.
Behold, I am spellbound—
Suspended as a porcelain doll
Hung in a windstorm.
It is doomsday in wonderland.
The awe of you has left me cuckoo
As all reason abandons me,
And I am sucked into the black hole
Where your heart should be.
Only grippy socks and origami
Can save me now.
Written by KittyFromHell
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summultima
uma
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uma
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1383
Thankyou PAR, Rianne, oiza, RyanBlackBorough & KittyFromHell… for your intense poetic takes on the title & with the prompt words! It’s magical that using same prompt words, how each of you had gone deep in your own unique tellings.. bravo!! keep them coming xx
Johnny_Silver
Johnny Silver
Joined 13th Jan 2025
Forum Posts: 3
Johnny Silver
Strange Creature
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Love Is...
Love is this whirlpool
This blackhole
Love is the cracks in the porcelain of my body
My heart folds like origami
Cuckoo, cuckoo
Time heals no wounds
Was it love or a lie?
Love is love
Is love is
Love is
Love is a lie
This blackhole
Love is the cracks in the porcelain of my body
My heart folds like origami
Cuckoo, cuckoo
Time heals no wounds
Was it love or a lie?
Love is love
Is love is
Love is
Love is a lie
Written by Johnny_Silver
(Johnny Silver)
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James_A_Knight
Forum Posts: 105
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 24th Feb 2021 Forum Posts: 105
Porcelain Origami
She folds herself into a swan
So she can fly away
She cracks but never breaks
She reinforced her porcelain
Written by James_A_Knight
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