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a broken scene seen from a bald sky
life slipping away like porcelain
broken branches
scattered origami flowers
tired cuckoos circling around trees
reality disappearing into the whirlpool of a blackhole...
Published 1st Feb 2025
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1st Feb 2025 7:21am
1st Feb 2025 7:44am
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2nd Feb 2025 4:37am
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2nd Feb 2025 9:29am
You're not broken Dimpy, young and upcomign poetess.
great metaphor.hamid
great metaphor.hamid
2nd Feb 2025 4:32pm
hello hamid
i have just accepted that no one can be the reason for my own happiness...why should someone else be the reason for my happiness? ...and that is why i am not broken I'm just happy... :) I like to live alone... ;)
i have just accepted that no one can be the reason for my own happiness...why should someone else be the reason for my happiness? ...and that is why i am not broken I'm just happy... :) I like to live alone... ;)
2nd Feb 2025 4:32pm
hello hamid
i have just accepted that no one can be the reason for my own happiness...why should someone else be the reason for my happiness? ...and that is why i am not broken I'm just happy... :) I like to live alone... ;)
i have just accepted that no one can be the reason for my own happiness...why should someone else be the reason for my happiness? ...and that is why i am not broken I'm just happy... :) I like to live alone... ;)
2nd Feb 2025 4:41pm
