Poetry competition CLOSED 15th September 2023 3:36am
WINNER
wallyroo92
wallyroo92
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I Saw Red
Anger
Kisses deep, gut hauling
hands mauling, shivering
erections on my body
all over, stabbing, prodding
all orifice used, no mercy
Just stabbing and thrusting
my mind crawled
my soul screamed
in anger, enough! enough!
Let me go...silent screams
echo and rebound
in the walls of mind's hell
Groping I grasped
a shiny knife
all nine inches of it
slashed, cut, stabbed
gouged, furrowed, sliced
Standing in the middle of the floor
I watched in silence
as five bodies no longer moved
lazily allow crimson liquid flow
and became just flesh in bloody confusion....
hands mauling, shivering
erections on my body
all over, stabbing, prodding
all orifice used, no mercy
Just stabbing and thrusting
my mind crawled
my soul screamed
in anger, enough! enough!
Let me go...silent screams
echo and rebound
in the walls of mind's hell
Groping I grasped
a shiny knife
all nine inches of it
slashed, cut, stabbed
gouged, furrowed, sliced
Standing in the middle of the floor
I watched in silence
as five bodies no longer moved
lazily allow crimson liquid flow
and became just flesh in bloody confusion....
Written by Grace
(IDryad)
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Insane Rage
I've insane rage inside it kills
O comfort me my Mother dear
Its wills will me to do self ills
I've insane rage inside it kills,
O mother mine please hold me still
gently gentle me free from fear
I've insane rage inside it kills
O comfort me my Mother dear.
This rage will will me underground
Dear gentle me with Mother love
down on Earth I am so hell bound
this rage will will me underground,
I might reach peace deep underground
I'm teetering, just one shove,
this rage will will me underground
Dear gentle me with mother love...
I called you came you comfort me
though rage still wills me underground
you gentled me to let it be
I called you came you comfort me,
those future years I feared you see
I wasn't shoved I just jumped down
you called I came you comfort me
together now, deep underground...
O comfort me my Mother dear
Its wills will me to do self ills
I've insane rage inside it kills,
O mother mine please hold me still
gently gentle me free from fear
I've insane rage inside it kills
O comfort me my Mother dear.
This rage will will me underground
Dear gentle me with Mother love
down on Earth I am so hell bound
this rage will will me underground,
I might reach peace deep underground
I'm teetering, just one shove,
this rage will will me underground
Dear gentle me with mother love...
I called you came you comfort me
though rage still wills me underground
you gentled me to let it be
I called you came you comfort me,
those future years I feared you see
I wasn't shoved I just jumped down
you called I came you comfort me
together now, deep underground...
Written by Rew
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Anger and rage
Suzy-Ann, happily married mother of three
And mistress to her darling Colonel Braintree
Also married and father of two
Drove one-thousand-two-hundred-and five-point-six miles
To get to that Parking Plaza where she knew that bitch Marylin
Parked every single day
That bitch, not content to also have husband and kids
Was playing on her turf and enjoying the pleasures
Of the oh, so handsome Colonel. Her Colonel.
Never mind that her lover was also married with kids.
He promised to get a divorce, didn't he?
She saw the bitch's car, jumped out of her own,
Not forgetting the can of bleach she would thrown at
The slut's face
But as she struggled with the twist top
Marylin, seeing the can and the rage on her foe's face
Got ready and more of a cat-fight ensued
Both ending with scratch marks
Before the cops arrived
And led them away to cool-off
For a bit in their clink,
And mistress to her darling Colonel Braintree
Also married and father of two
Drove one-thousand-two-hundred-and five-point-six miles
To get to that Parking Plaza where she knew that bitch Marylin
Parked every single day
That bitch, not content to also have husband and kids
Was playing on her turf and enjoying the pleasures
Of the oh, so handsome Colonel. Her Colonel.
Never mind that her lover was also married with kids.
He promised to get a divorce, didn't he?
She saw the bitch's car, jumped out of her own,
Not forgetting the can of bleach she would thrown at
The slut's face
But as she struggled with the twist top
Marylin, seeing the can and the rage on her foe's face
Got ready and more of a cat-fight ensued
Both ending with scratch marks
Before the cops arrived
And led them away to cool-off
For a bit in their clink,
Written by robert43041
(Viking)
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I'll Call Her Rage
I stay in the darkest parts of your mind
Waiting to see when its finally time
Im dressed and ready to perfection
To break out and wreak havoc with great deception
All day long I try to pry
I tap the door I'm locked behind
You know im here so let me shine
Don't keep me here behind the line
I only want to play for a day
So let me out to desecrate some strays
I promise I'll make it worth your while
Once I've demolished all their smiles
If you wont let me the hell out
Take me somewhere I can scream and shout
Once in a while I need to escape
If you don't then this door I will break
We can be friends if only you trust
For havoc and destruction only I lust
I hope you listen to my words
Or I'll be an awful scourge
Waiting to see when its finally time
Im dressed and ready to perfection
To break out and wreak havoc with great deception
All day long I try to pry
I tap the door I'm locked behind
You know im here so let me shine
Don't keep me here behind the line
I only want to play for a day
So let me out to desecrate some strays
I promise I'll make it worth your while
Once I've demolished all their smiles
If you wont let me the hell out
Take me somewhere I can scream and shout
Once in a while I need to escape
If you don't then this door I will break
We can be friends if only you trust
For havoc and destruction only I lust
I hope you listen to my words
Or I'll be an awful scourge
Written by Sapphirewolf
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Holes
Healing takes time
and not just
a little bit
Feeding
blank lines
on industry slips we
print
Leaflets
passed out
across the
classroom
Knees bent
buckled down for
the tragic truth
to be dropped on us
in front of em all
And we laugh em back off.
Just type it up as
a twist
and a turn
and a loop
It's no use
to you anymore
go home to the
hole
you were fucking puked right down
into
Now you'll
matter-of-factly worship
everything she did
because she's dead
you served no purpose
with her worthless
Darkness crawling
off her tongue
that black shit runs
and it bleeds down your
fucking back
and not just
a little bit
Feeding
blank lines
on industry slips we
Leaflets
passed out
across the
classroom
Knees bent
buckled down for
the tragic truth
to be dropped on us
in front of em all
And we laugh em back off.
Just type it up as
a twist
and a turn
and a loop
It's no use
to you anymore
go home to the
hole
you were fucking puked right down
into
Now you'll
matter-of-factly worship
everything she did
because she's dead
you served no purpose
with her worthless
Darkness crawling
off her tongue
that black shit runs
and it bleeds down your
fucking back
Written by Dreamboy
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Because I... Because you...
I am an idiot because I listen to your shit
You are a genius because I put up with your stupidity
I am crazy because your world isn't for me
You are wise because it is your world
I am a racist because I don't pretend
You are a hybrid because I relate you to me
I am a son of a bitch because you call them all bitches
Your mother is an angel because I respect them all
I am a weirdo because you created this society
You are an idol because I supported you in it
I am a sinner because your eyes are evil
You are a saint because my eyes are pure
You are a genius because I put up with your stupidity
I am crazy because your world isn't for me
You are wise because it is your world
I am a racist because I don't pretend
You are a hybrid because I relate you to me
I am a son of a bitch because you call them all bitches
Your mother is an angel because I respect them all
I am a weirdo because you created this society
You are an idol because I supported you in it
I am a sinner because your eyes are evil
You are a saint because my eyes are pure
Written by dejure
(vick)
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The Red
There we were
At the crossroads of life and death
Caught between misery and reaching into the beyond
Screaming at the top of my lungs trying to wake the dead
Trying to drown by drinking the oceans dry
But it would not be the end…
I felt the whip and belt
But the welts weren’t enough and so I asked for more
I put the knife into her hands serving a hard dose of truth
Wanting to spill my guts
Because I craved to see the red
Yet it would not be the end…
There we were
She was threatening a man who was riding a suicidal tidal wave
In a lake of fuel and gasoline
But this was no ordinary match
I would light the entire earth because the fury wouldn’t let me see
And still it was not the end
There I was
Between water and electricity
Longing for the shock of a lifetime
Because I wanted see my demise in her eyes before I left this world
And yet fate wouldn’t have it
It wasn’t yet my end
Here I am
Remembering the face and phase of rage and toxicity I reveled in
For the self-loathing and destructive person that I was
For the guilt I carried but then buried in the graveyard of the past
Watching a new sunrise
At peace
Waiting…
Written by wallyroo92
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
Billy_Snagg, Brit_Brit, ajay, Liera25, monovox128, MidnightSonneteer, WillowsWhimsies, PAR, dimpy, Phantom2426, TheOnlyAlliCat, Kinkpoet, JiltedJohnny, Louisamay, Tallen, MadameLavender, Oliviahoney, Honoria, Marks, James_A_Knight, Chere-Rene13, ms_kitty_lagniappe, VeronikaB, lepperochan, down2dirt, SonderNinja, Ahavati, jmcchesnie
Thank you to the following members for voting:
Billy_Snagg, Brit_Brit, ajay, Liera25, monovox128, MidnightSonneteer, WillowsWhimsies, PAR, dimpy, Phantom2426, TheOnlyAlliCat, Kinkpoet, JiltedJohnny, Louisamay, Tallen, MadameLavender, Oliviahoney, Honoria, Marks, James_A_Knight, Chere-Rene13, ms_kitty_lagniappe, VeronikaB, lepperochan, down2dirt, SonderNinja, Ahavati, jmcchesnie
