Poetry competition CLOSED 16th May 2023 11:36am
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Kou_Indigo (Karam L. Parveen-Ashton)
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Wine

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IDryad
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Poetry Contest

What does wine reminds you of

What does wine remind you of?
sad, happy, angry etc
no collaborations
no extreme content

dimpy
dimpsmoon
Dangerous Mind
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Get together with friends in cool breezy evening !

Jordan
D.O.C.
Thought Provoker
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The Majority Rules the Minority's Rights

or
 
Still Trying to Get Babies on Board with a Rational Ethics
 
"I detesht having to shtep outshide for a shigarette."
-- a drunk pate to a drunk date on driving home from TGIF
 
* * *
 
In suit and tie, I went to court to claim a cig is taxed
much more than liquor served at family restaurants and bars,
the policies on alcohol yet somewhat too relaxed --
booze killing countless babies plus poor judgment tanked in cars.
 
* * *
 
A Dedication of Respect
for
the Ceaseless Pain of Alcohol-Related Deaths Untold due to
Cancer, Heart Failure, Liver Damage, Alcohol Poisoning, and Violence
(Aside from Car Accidents and Vehicular Homicides)
 
Friday -- Still Legions of "Light" Drinkers Having
"Just One More"
Written by Jordan (D.O.C.)
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robert43041
Viking
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Wine and whine

It all started at a fine Napa Valley Vineyard
A fancy Dégustation de vin rouge
Superb
Then she started going for a bottle at dinner time
Went down superbly well with the Boeuf Bourgignon
The she upped it, oh dear, to only two bottles per day
Also, later upped again to three bottles by the time she went to bed

The losses staryed to pile on
The loss of appetite
The loss of friends
The loss of work

Increased whining while wining

Then saved, in a manner,
Picked up by an ambulance
As she was dead drunk on a bus stop bench.
Written by robert43041 (Viking)
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IDryad
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Jordon and Robert thank you for your respective entry.

MidnightSonneteer
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Aubade

A wineglass caught a lunar ray  
As efficiently as could be  
Blazing its own luminous way  
Toward a bleak eternity.  
It stopped awhile in the wine  
To ponder itself in the dark  
And contemplate all the things divine  
Seen by its far flung halo spark.  
It checked itself at wanton man  
And thought how here its path was blocked  
Or stymied by some other plan  
Wherein its mission was lightly mocked,  
And not by nature given a grace  
As much as it had in outer space...  
So by refraction it got away  
To mix once more with the break of day!
Written by MidnightSonneteer
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Kou_Indigo
Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
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The Wine of Love

- The Wine of Love -

What is the most sublime and fair, of all the varied nectar of the gods?
Some claim it be the ambrosia sweet that only celestial lips hath tasted.
Oh so false the claims of such glory as this, for I hath tasted far greater,
In glory and in sweetness, in immortality to last in my heart eternally!
There is a wine far better to the taste, and which leaves me in wonder.
Shall I speak fair of what I mean, and praise the lips of a certain lady?
Which on meeting mine were sweeter than any honey mead not wasted.
There art experiences of beauty and love which make the heart aflutter,
In bliss and in enchantment, in pleasing moments that endure infinitely!
There is no wine far better, to the taste, either of the heavens or under.

I hath sat at divine tables, with fellowship of those undying and grand,
And savored there the delicacies that no mortal could fathom in dream.
Cauldrons of plenty, cornucopias of everlasting splendor, all mundane,
Compared to a single kiss, savored well and remembered for all time...
The gods may keep their culinary delights, my taste is for other flavors.
So many things people crave; drinks, beverages and fruits of the land,
In every variety that could make one's mind come nigh unto a scream!
And some crave pleasure itself, just as others find their delight in pain,
Whilst the poetically inclined seek to enhance pleasure with a rhyme...
To woo the hearts of maidens fair, and gain of a lady's coveted favors.

Such seduction of the senses, as I hath employed to win love's smiles,
That my lips might taste the wine for which my craving is insatiable...
To stain my lips red as blood with my addiction to a moment of bliss!
Love is a drug, it is a drink, it is a kiss and an embrace of hot warmth,
All who live, are in need of such diversion from reality's discomforts.
In my pursuit of such, I hath surrendered happily to a maiden's wiles,
A certain maid of such charm that I can only call her incomparable...
For in such forms, the purest angels walk, and sometimes a goddess.
Love is immeasurable, it is perfect, it is beyond even all time's length,
It is for me the only thing that counters the awfulness of life's tumults.

Why seek a forgetfulness in the oblivious liquid poured from a bottle,
When I can instead find a paradise to remember in a perfect moment?
I pick my poison, and it illuminates my senses with a thousand joys...
Until the moment transcends reality, bringing me unto a true heaven!
Into each life, I take with me the memories of such everlasting things.
There is no other wine for me, save the wine of love without trouble,
Which makes my very spirit to soar on wings beyond the firmament.
I pick my pleasure, and it enhances my delight as it opens my eyes...
To countless possibilities, a reminder, of all for which I hath striven!
In the flesh and beyond, it is a wonder for which one's very soul sings.
Written by Kou_Indigo (Karam L. Parveen-Ashton)
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IDryad
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MidnightSonneteer, Kara and Rianne, thank you for your participation.

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IDryad
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Inviting more participants. Thank You...

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IDryad
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Ald, thank you for your entry.

wallyroo92
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Tolosa

(or the Finer Things in Life)  
 
My wife and I took a drive up the California coast  
To wine country  
Up to SLO  
To where the rolling hills are green and full  
After the rains  
To cooler weather and open Pacific skies  
Where vineyards seem to go on forever  
 
It was there where we met Johnny  
An older gentleman  
With a jacket and hat  
As he spoke about the Chardonnays and Pinot Noirs  
And how the soil and climate are perfect here  
He spoke about how some of the wind that comes in from the ocean  
Ripens the delicate grapes  
The intertwining of cold air and warm soil  
 
And the vineyards…  
They look like a painted landscapes  
 
With every tiny serving  
Our noses are treated to a scintillating aroma  
Our tastebuds indulge in some untold story  
Our senses are elevated  
Making us imagine  
This must be how art tastes like  
 
I’m no wine connoisseur  
But Johnny describes the grapes  
And the fermentation process like it’s poetry  
Like it’s his passion  
The finer things in life  
 
If you ever find yourself in the California coast  
In San Luis Obispo  
Check out old Johnny  
He’ll make you smile  
He’ll retire soon before he turns 80  
And you’ll be in for a treat
Written by wallyroo92
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Grace
IDryad
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Thank you all participants for your respective entries. Congratulations to Kara for writing a wonderful piece, to Wallyroo in second place and Ald, of course. Thank you!

wallyroo92
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Congrats to Ald on runner up and to Kou_Indigo  on taking the trophy on this comp. Yes, I know I'm a little late, but thank you to our host.
Hope everyone is doing well.

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