Poetry competition CLOSED 17th April 2022 4:11pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNER-UP:
solbluesol
type love
CortanaBlaze
Cortana Blaze
Joined 12th Apr 2022
Forum Posts: 2
Cortana Blaze
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 2
Hate it that I love you ( To the tune of Olivia Rodrigo’s Drivers License)
You broke my heart so easily
And walked away as I stared about
'Remember what you said to me,
When we could finally meet up at my house
But now I just stare at my room,
And picture us kissing on my couch.
You left me on the twentieth third
At 4:01 on the clock.
I begged you on the streets,
But you finally tore my heart out
Yeah, I scream and shout to The heavens...
'Cause never have I ever loved someone else.
And I know I wasn't ready but I swear I would've done anything at all.
And now I can't imagine being with someone else, now that You're gone.
You broke me into pieces and left me to die on my own.
Remember when you swore you loved me, yet now I'm here all alone
My heart was torn and love was worn,
From thinking how much I miss you, but
I know it shouldn’t be,
'But I can't help but want you still, yeah
But now I just stare at my room.
And pictured you were holding me close.
And I know I wasn't ready but I swear I would've done anything at all.
And now I can't imagine being with someone else, now that You're gone.
You broke me into pieces and left me to die on my own.
Remember when you swore you loved me, yet now I'm here all alone
Kisses, heartbreaks
I still feel your lips on my wrists and, creases
Can't walk past the places we used to go to
' I hate that I love you, babe
Shattered hopes and
You left me all alone, now I'm dying, You're lying
All over my soul
God, I hate you, You're so cruel
But I hate that I still love you, babe
And I know I wasn't ready but I swear I would've done anything at all.
And now I can't imagine being with someone else, now that You're gone.
You broke me into pieces and left me to die on my own.
Remember when you swore you loved me, yet now I am here all alone.
Written by CortanaBlaze
(Cortana Blaze)
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Thepunkpoet
Michelle Chelley Rice
Forum Posts: 8
Michelle Chelley Rice
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 13th Apr 2022Forum Posts: 8
Related submission no longer exists.
Northern_Soul said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/409217-ode-to-tinder/
This was outfukkingstanding! Your flow was amazing...
This was outfukkingstanding! Your flow was amazing...
RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Forum Posts: 1257
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 24th July 2012Forum Posts: 1257
To those Who Killed Before Us
Your
words
slide over pages
like ice cream
melting into
sugar
cone
Your grammar holds
as a centre piece Flake
We still lick your opinions
suck on your concepts
and eat your pages
I feel the thunder
of reading
perfection
in titles
as bone creaks
into the next
page
of
your
every
moment
while I pray
on Theresa to
bring you back
in this life or the
next
.
Written by RevolutionAL
(Alistair Plint)
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Bluevelvete
Forum Posts: 2349
Tyrant of Words
74
Joined 21st July 2020Forum Posts: 2349
Crossroads, double helices and the curiosity of transformative love
Always
are
thoughts
that permeate deep
wealth is fierce bravery
that I offer
constant, is my beating heart
that drums
in time to your name.
Every. Single. Breath.
from my anointed mouth
given unto you
is a sustenance
of ours
how we become
utter
sheer
perfection
willingly isolated
in our garden
of remarkable majesty
Just you and I
Keeping a promise
of infinity
long awaited,
now
newly created;
more than ever before
this
sacramental need
has found
it's way
home
Open hearts
spill forth
allowing passion
pure desire
and love without condition
to helix bloom
Satiated betwixt
loving arms,
a new reality centers
anchored-twined in two,
space folds
liquid time flows
we are our own
Traversing a definite known
undoing past scars
and pointless fears
vindication sings
from a holy sacred choir
sweet ethereal music
echo-carries
each cherished kiss
in amplitude
Such resonant soundings
redefine tenderness
capturing proof
from dire lips—
deep exploration
bound in
exquisite discovery
Imprinted
upon
the very DNA,
a divinely perfect code
yours twists into mine
creating
our code
where
lock meets key
answering
that
one
universal secret
Written by Bluevelvete
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Thepunkpoet
Michelle Chelley Rice
Forum Posts: 8
Michelle Chelley Rice
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 13th Apr 2022Forum Posts: 8
Nightmares in Nevada
"Nightmares in Nevada"
I try to escape nightmares in Nevada
I scream for any magik, abracadabra
You snuck up on me with your charm
Lying deeply within your heavy arms
Your lips promise love's latest fashion
Hearts collide & our bodies smashing
I'm drunk on the bullshit you're selling
It's only the rosebuds that I'm smelling
Blakkened blue is what you left of me
Now I'm a slave to this agony & misery
Go fukk yourself reflection in the mirror
I don't think I could see life any clearer
I'm buried in the shadows lurking about
Beware the scream that my soul shouts
My path cutting deeper than the true love
When I secretly thought it was enough
My breath is hotter than a dragon's flame
Hypnotized me in sable eyes your shame
I danced with you under a pale moonlight
Only to endure the stinging bite inside
You were the beat that staked my heart
You are the sneeze that blew me apart
I can still taste you on my ripened lips
Gradually my hunger of love now slips
Blessed a minute now I'm to be cursed
This isn't the dream that I've rehearsed
Come bakk in my chest caressed in grace
Remind me why I miss your fukking face
The Punk Poet…
Always Be Punk…
Always Be Drunk…
(On Poetry)
Written by Thepunkpoet
(Michelle Chelley Rice)
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Anonymous
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EyeLikeMe
Joined 29th Oct 2020
Forum Posts: 41
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 41
Wow....
I like this and makes a lot of sense ...these days
Your view is clear
.... A read I can feel
Yet who ever has the time
....for my response
Convinced mine doesn't seem to hold enough water
Never considers that I have one too
....a view
But I never saw the Monster
Why did He chose to be sited
....... why Nevada
I like this and makes a lot of sense ...these days
Your view is clear
.... A read I can feel
Yet who ever has the time
....for my response
Convinced mine doesn't seem to hold enough water
Never considers that I have one too
....a view
But I never saw the Monster
Why did He chose to be sited
....... why Nevada
Anonymous
EyeLikeMe
Joined 29th Oct 2020
Forum Posts: 41
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 41
I'm feeling the same
...your pain
I'm thinking make-up sex
....maybe next time it rains
No
...your pain
I'm thinking make-up sex
....maybe next time it rains
No
EyeLikeMe
Joined 29th Oct 2020
Forum Posts: 41
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 41
Love youuuu
.....this!
.....this!
wallyroo92
Forum Posts: 1866
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1866
Marriage 101
First off, it’s never been easy,
It’s the hardest work one can ever do,
And if someone tells you otherwise,
Just know they’re full ofshit poo.
If you want your relationship to work,
Always be honest with your other half,
Be ready to share worries, tears and fears,
And in the good times have great laughs.
Never scream or cuss at each other,
Little by little it shears at the core of respect,
Talk calmly and meet somewhere in the middle,
Otherwise you two are bound to get wrecked.
Surprise each other once in a while,
Raise the intrigue, interest and attraction,
And if she happens to put on some weight,
Never bring it up or it’s a nuclear reaction.
Give him a nice smack in the ass in the shower,
Give her a pickle tickle when she least expects it,
Text each other something nasty to get antsy,
Being horny isn’t corny when the other reflects it.
Seriously, keep each other hot and bothered,
Be kinky, do it in elevators or backs of cars,
Explore fantasies, dreams and scenarios,
But most of all, fuck like you were porn stars.
Make each other laugh so hard ‘til one of you cries,
It’s one of the best and natural highs,
But don’t bust out any jokes in the middle of sex,
Believe me it has a terrible performance effect…
Oh, never mind
Enjoy the growth of your children,
Remember the promises and never forget,
Remember when and how you fell in love,
And always remember the first time you met.
It’s the hardest work one can ever do,
And if someone tells you otherwise,
Just know they’re full of
If you want your relationship to work,
Always be honest with your other half,
Be ready to share worries, tears and fears,
And in the good times have great laughs.
Never scream or cuss at each other,
Little by little it shears at the core of respect,
Talk calmly and meet somewhere in the middle,
Otherwise you two are bound to get wrecked.
Surprise each other once in a while,
Raise the intrigue, interest and attraction,
And if she happens to put on some weight,
Never bring it up or it’s a nuclear reaction.
Give him a nice smack in the ass in the shower,
Give her a pickle tickle when she least expects it,
Text each other something nasty to get antsy,
Being horny isn’t corny when the other reflects it.
Seriously, keep each other hot and bothered,
Be kinky, do it in elevators or backs of cars,
Explore fantasies, dreams and scenarios,
But most of all, fuck like you were porn stars.
Make each other laugh so hard ‘til one of you cries,
It’s one of the best and natural highs,
But don’t bust out any jokes in the middle of sex,
Believe me it has a terrible performance effect…
Oh, never mind
Enjoy the growth of your children,
Remember the promises and never forget,
Remember when and how you fell in love,
And always remember the first time you met.
Written by wallyroo92
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
AspergerPoet56, lookingformngick, Indie, rubyredheart, Tallen, Phantom2426, robert43041, Styxian, Jestalessa, lepperochan, Noble_Incubus, Onceler123, Marks, Rianne, zinnzinn, RevolutionAL, Sadeast, SunFox, S-m-sawyer, Northern_Soul, mysteriouslady, MadameLavender, Sweetlovin76
Thank you to the following members for voting:
AspergerPoet56, lookingformngick, Indie, rubyredheart, Tallen, Phantom2426, robert43041, Styxian, Jestalessa, lepperochan, Noble_Incubus, Onceler123, Marks, Rianne, zinnzinn, RevolutionAL, Sadeast, SunFox, S-m-sawyer, Northern_Soul, mysteriouslady, MadameLavender, Sweetlovin76
Anonymous
Goodness. Wasn’t expecting this one. Thank you! x