Poetry competition CLOSED 16th April 2022 8:30pm
WINNER
Anonymous
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Girl On A Ball

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

Write a poem based on the image / quote below

“There are more copies than originals among people.” — Pablo Picasso

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Girl on a Ball or Young Acrobat on a Ball is a 1905 oil on canvas painting by Pablo Picasso, which he produced during his Rose Period.

It depicts a group of travelling circus performers during a rehearsal, with a primary focus on two contrasting figures. It has been housed in the collection of the Pushkin Museum in Moscow since 1948.

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Write a poem based on what the image / quote brings up for you.

Rules

•New writes only
•Audio / visual / picture entries allowed
•No erotica
•As many entries as you like
•2 weeks


I_IS_ME
Tyrant of Words
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poet Anonymous

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RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
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[A Giant & Concrete Ball ]

She's been balancing big balls
of stone 10 years or more
he's been studying rehearsals
and performances in big halls
They've learned each other
She knows every muscle and bone
every shiver and shake
He knows every balance and movement
each step, role and take

They're nearly ready for a life long dream

Where he lifts the ball
way above his head
and she keeps composure
holding the show, standing tall
The dream is more than a wish
it's the need to be the first
because every circus has
a floor with ball and girl
but no other has
a floor with 7 foot giant holding
a ball and girl.





crimsin
Unveiling
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girl on a ball

 
agile of soul I balance my thoughts
in this circus called life it keeps me sane
in the blue colored world I have a tenuous hold at best
one misstep and I will fall so I keep my mind on the ball

striving for perfection is my profession
while people gawk at the woman performing
a feat of pure amazement
how a woman with a precarious perch is making it

lithe of form I require little
my heart burdened carries a lot of weight
I muster my core strength and bear it

with the support of the ring leader I can survive
circular energies it all comes around in time
I, in spite of the odds will continue on

my back square and my shoulders taught
I am an amazing example of perseverance



 
Written by crimsin (Unveiling)
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javalini
Fire of Insight
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CIRCUS GIRL

practice
is freedom
and grace
and knowledge
deep and true
so that i know my place
exactly --
light as a wren,
balanced here
and later
on shoulders
sturdy as trees
or on hands of wire and hard wood,
an inflexible stage
for a spider's dance
or a one armed
handstand
or a back flip finale --
me, airborne,
spinning,
light as dust
and then,
just as quick,
solid on the ground

and the crowd
will be amazed
Written by javalini
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poet Anonymous

Thank you everyone for your entries so far. Smashing 😊

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lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
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not today, lil pixie, please g'way


"jus sayin, they've painted your head too small, that's all. you need something to make it look bigger, like a wig or..."

mzlyrical
JuleZzz
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Girl On A Ball

Would you focus upon what it is that you see, is it balance, agility or grace within me?
That captures the attention of those that look on, take your eye off the ball in a n heartbeat it's gone,
Let me now entertain you as my trapeze it soars, and I'll land on my feet to most thunderous applause,
Then some guy with a paint brush will capture it all, in a painting worth millions they'll hang on the wall,
Or behind glass in some gallery for people to gaze, but what of the story it tells of those day's,
Not the day's basked in darkness,or the days when we sinned, but the days when I soared on trapeze like the wind,
With adrenalin searing, nerve, fibre and vein, as I flew like the North wind, came down like the rain,
The time of my life and unable to stop, as the audience drive me on, neath the big top,
But It can end in a moment with one single fall, and that's why I became then..this girl on a ball.
Written by mzlyrical (JuleZzz)
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DreamIllusions
Thought Provoker
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Girl on A Ball Competition

There’s circus in her blood
He showed it to her on a map
A funny map of lines that
Looked the branches
Boxes
That could have been flowers
Filled with names
All the names
That went before her
On the tightrope
With the lions
Or maybe it was tigers
But she wanted to forge her own path
Daddy please look at me
Look what I can do
I can be
The girl on the ball
Written by DreamIllusions
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poet Anonymous

Some great entries here. Congrats to the winners and runners up. And for all of you that entered.

Until next time x

cold_fusion
Tyrant of Words
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Amazing Comp Missy.

Congratulations dear ML!! I felt yours one more than knocked the target off its perch! Well deserved win I say.
Congrats to both runner ups and entrants!👍

lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
Yemen 67awards
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well done Doc  and Javalini

Feral... I am aghast at your mere runner up accolade.  nearly wordles by your 'devil may care approach to this challenge.

you are a winner, Feral. a winner. I hope...  no, I really hope I never have to start the day with this level of disappointment again. there is just.a void

I'm really gonna have to reevaluate our friendship. (it'll take about 2 weeks and I am of course open to bribes)

anyhow...

poet Anonymous

… soz mate 😂👀

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