Poetry competition CLOSED 16th April 2022 8:30pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous

RUNNER-UP:
javalini
Girl On A Ball

Poetry Contest Description
Write a poem based on the image / quote below

“There are more copies than originals among people.” — Pablo Picasso
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Girl on a Ball or Young Acrobat on a Ball is a 1905 oil on canvas painting by Pablo Picasso, which he produced during his Rose Period.
It depicts a group of travelling circus performers during a rehearsal, with a primary focus on two contrasting figures. It has been housed in the collection of the Pushkin Museum in Moscow since 1948.
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Write a poem based on what the image / quote brings up for you.
Rules
•New writes only
•Audio / visual / picture entries allowed
•No erotica
•As many entries as you like
•2 weeks
I_IS_ME
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Joined 29th Aug 2018
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Tyrant of Words


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RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
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Joined 24th July 2012
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Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind


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[A Giant & Concrete Ball ]
She's been balancing big balls
of stone 10 years or more
he's been studying rehearsals
and performances in big halls
They've learned each other
She knows every muscle and bone
every shiver and shake
He knows every balance and movement
each step, role and take
They're nearly ready for a life long dream
Where he lifts the ball
way above his head
and she keeps composure
holding the show, standing tall
The dream is more than a wish
it's the need to be the first
because every circus has
a floor with ball and girl
but no other has
a floor with 7 foot giant holding
a ball and girl.
crimsin
Unveiling
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Joined 25th Jan 2011
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Unveiling
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girl on a ball
agile of soul I balance my thoughts
in this circus called life it keeps me sane
in the blue colored world I have a tenuous hold at best
one misstep and I will fall so I keep my mind on the ball
striving for perfection is my profession
while people gawk at the woman performing
a feat of pure amazement
how a woman with a precarious perch is making it
lithe of form I require little
my heart burdened carries a lot of weight
I muster my core strength and bear it
with the support of the ring leader I can survive
circular energies it all comes around in time
I, in spite of the odds will continue on
my back square and my shoulders taught
I am an amazing example of perseverance
Written by crimsin
(Unveiling)
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javalini
17
Joined 4th Apr 2019
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Fire of Insight


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CIRCUS GIRL
practice
is freedom
and grace
and knowledge
deep and true
so that i know my place
exactly --
light as a wren,
balanced here
and later
on shoulders
sturdy as trees
or on hands of wire and hard wood,
an inflexible stage
for a spider's dance
or a one armed
handstand
or a back flip finale --
me, airborne,
spinning,
light as dust
and then,
just as quick,
solid on the ground
and the crowd
will be amazed
is freedom
and grace
and knowledge
deep and true
so that i know my place
exactly --
light as a wren,
balanced here
and later
on shoulders
sturdy as trees
or on hands of wire and hard wood,
an inflexible stage
for a spider's dance
or a one armed
handstand
or a back flip finale --
me, airborne,
spinning,
light as dust
and then,
just as quick,
solid on the ground
and the crowd
will be amazed
Written by javalini
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Thank you everyone for your entries so far. Smashing 😊

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lepperochan
CraicDealer
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Joined 1st Apr 2011
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Guardian of Shadows


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not today, lil pixie, please g'way
"jus sayin, they've painted your head too small, that's all. you need something to make it look bigger, like a wig or..."
"jus sayin, they've painted your head too small, that's all. you need something to make it look bigger, like a wig or..."
mzlyrical
JuleZzz
2
Joined 29th Mar 2022
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JuleZzz
Lost Thinker


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Girl On A Ball
Would you focus upon what it is that you see, is it balance, agility or grace within me?
That captures the attention of those that look on, take your eye off the ball in a n heartbeat it's gone,
Let me now entertain you as my trapeze it soars, and I'll land on my feet to most thunderous applause,
Then some guy with a paint brush will capture it all, in a painting worth millions they'll hang on the wall,
Or behind glass in some gallery for people to gaze, but what of the story it tells of those day's,
Not the day's basked in darkness,or the days when we sinned, but the days when I soared on trapeze like the wind,
With adrenalin searing, nerve, fibre and vein, as I flew like the North wind, came down like the rain,
The time of my life and unable to stop, as the audience drive me on, neath the big top,
But It can end in a moment with one single fall, and that's why I became then..this girl on a ball.
That captures the attention of those that look on, take your eye off the ball in a n heartbeat it's gone,
Let me now entertain you as my trapeze it soars, and I'll land on my feet to most thunderous applause,
Then some guy with a paint brush will capture it all, in a painting worth millions they'll hang on the wall,
Or behind glass in some gallery for people to gaze, but what of the story it tells of those day's,
Not the day's basked in darkness,or the days when we sinned, but the days when I soared on trapeze like the wind,
With adrenalin searing, nerve, fibre and vein, as I flew like the North wind, came down like the rain,
The time of my life and unable to stop, as the audience drive me on, neath the big top,
But It can end in a moment with one single fall, and that's why I became then..this girl on a ball.
Written by mzlyrical
(JuleZzz)
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DreamIllusions
3
Joined 17th May 2013
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Thought Provoker


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Girl on A Ball Competition
There’s circus in her blood
He showed it to her on a map
A funny map of lines that
Looked the branches
Boxes
That could have been flowers
Filled with names
All the names
That went before her
On the tightrope
With the lions
Or maybe it was tigers
But she wanted to forge her own path
Daddy please look at me
Look what I can do
I can be
The girl on the ball
He showed it to her on a map
A funny map of lines that
Looked the branches
Boxes
That could have been flowers
Filled with names
All the names
That went before her
On the tightrope
With the lions
Or maybe it was tigers
But she wanted to forge her own path
Daddy please look at me
Look what I can do
I can be
The girl on the ball
Written by DreamIllusions
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Some great entries here. Congrats to the winners and runners up. And for all of you that entered.
Until next time x
Until next time x
cold_fusion
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Joined 14th June 2017
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Tyrant of Words


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Amazing Comp Missy.
Congratulations dear ML!! I felt yours one more than knocked the target off its perch! Well deserved win I say.
Congrats to both runner ups and entrants!👍
Congratulations dear ML!! I felt yours one more than knocked the target off its perch! Well deserved win I say.
Congrats to both runner ups and entrants!👍
lepperochan
CraicDealer
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Joined 1st Apr 2011
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CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows


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well done Doc and Javalini
Feral... I am aghast at your mere runner up accolade. nearly wordles by your 'devil may care approach to this challenge.
you are a winner, Feral. a winner. I hope... no, I really hope I never have to start the day with this level of disappointment again. there is just.a void
I'm really gonna have to reevaluate our friendship. (it'll take about 2 weeks and I am of course open to bribes)
anyhow...
Feral... I am aghast at your mere runner up accolade. nearly wordles by your 'devil may care approach to this challenge.
you are a winner, Feral. a winner. I hope... no, I really hope I never have to start the day with this level of disappointment again. there is just.a void
I'm really gonna have to reevaluate our friendship. (it'll take about 2 weeks and I am of course open to bribes)
anyhow...

… soz mate 😂👀