KINDNESS
Ahavati
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Main and South
"[He] was beautiful in the quiet way
that lonely, unnoticed people are
beautiful to those who notice them."
~ C. JoyBell C.
There is a man, leaning
against a street corner
post bearing the weight
of loneliness
Rising salt water trickles
ore a felled dam of bristles
below his cheeks
He rocks in the bright sun
before an abandoned building
with “Shelter” chiseled
deeply in arched stone
There are symptoms of lack
that even Vitamin D
cannot eliminate
.
Each of us is limping
from our history
Show me scars across
your own experience—
how Life crippled you;
show me survival skills
with one arm, a busted keyboard
and half-written song
missing its chorus;
I’ll love you more
Because, sometimes
there is no sanctuary
from remembrance—
no "Shelter" from bygone eras
or deserted sunsets;
no sandbags to insulate joy
from a violent onslaught
of cruel circumstance
Life presents opportunity
to offer love to hopelessness
to extend kindness regardless
of our own circumstance
~
that lonely, unnoticed people are
beautiful to those who notice them."
~ C. JoyBell C.
There is a man, leaning
against a street corner
post bearing the weight
of loneliness
Rising salt water trickles
ore a felled dam of bristles
below his cheeks
He rocks in the bright sun
before an abandoned building
with “Shelter” chiseled
deeply in arched stone
There are symptoms of lack
that even Vitamin D
cannot eliminate
.
Each of us is limping
from our history
Show me scars across
your own experience—
how Life crippled you;
show me survival skills
with one arm, a busted keyboard
and half-written song
missing its chorus;
I’ll love you more
Because, sometimes
there is no sanctuary
from remembrance—
no "Shelter" from bygone eras
or deserted sunsets;
no sandbags to insulate joy
from a violent onslaught
of cruel circumstance
Life presents opportunity
to offer love to hopelessness
to extend kindness regardless
of our own circumstance
~
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Grace
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Thank you Ahavati for your entry.
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DaryaWaters, thank you for your entry.
Grace
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Congratulations to all the winners! After much deliberation these three entries were chosen.
1. Lessons in life (Part 1 Try a little Kindness) by Razzerleaf
2. On waifs and strays by Northern_Soul
3. Main and South by Ahavati
Marvellous entries everyone. Thank you for your participations, and please be with me again in our next competition.
1. Lessons in life (Part 1 Try a little Kindness) by Razzerleaf
2. On waifs and strays by Northern_Soul
3. Main and South by Ahavati
Marvellous entries everyone. Thank you for your participations, and please be with me again in our next competition.
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I have loved reading all these poems, Kindness has brought out some wonderful writing. Really appreciate your time Grace and thank you for recognizing my offering. Very much appreciated. Keith
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Razzerleaf! Congratulations on a very deserving win! Grace, thank you for the honor of placement! I truly appreciate it. And congrats to NS for her placement! I too enjoyed the poetry of this competition. It brought out the best in everyone, and the poetry reflected it.
Grace
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