Sgt. Pepper’s Hunky Dory Yellow Brick Road
Anonymous
Poetry Contest Description
Write a 5 line poem for every track on your favourite album.
Here’s a musical challenge:
Take your favourite album. Write a five line poem based on each of the tracks on the album. See where the inspiration of the song takes you.
So for example if your favourite album has 12 tracks, write 12 x 5 line poems inspired by each of the songs, each separated by either numbers or roman numerals. The title of your poem should be the title of the album.
Rules
• Please title your poem with the name of the album.
• New writes only
• Up to 2 entries per human being.
• Visual / Audio / video poems accepted
• A poem must be written to represent every track on the album. Each poem should be only 5 lines in length. No more, no less.
• 3 weeks
DaisyGrace
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Dangerous Mind
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Ooooh! Fun!
anvinvil
Anvillan
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Anvillan
Fire of Insight
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Leonard Cohen... Songs of the Road
#1
Lover, Lover,Lover
I’m trapped in this body that drips with shame.
My pleas for help go unanswered.
I search my heart and hear the sounds
of “you can do it and go for it”. I resolve
to do and go, but I don’t know what or where.
#2
Bird on the Wire
I wander the alleys and doorways
looking for a place of comfort.
I’ve tried the real world, been rejected
so often that I no longer belong. So I sit
and observe, pno longer an eager participant.
#3
Chelsea Hotel
There was sex and success and that
led to love or what we thought was love.
But we grew apart, our paths seldom crossed,
and what we thought was love faded
with the beauty of our youth. Adios...
#4
Heart with no Compassion
For the heart that’s broken and bleeds regret,
for all who’ve lost, who’ve missed or cried,
my heart aches and sobs along with you.
Some ignore your pleas for help, so self absorbed!
I hear you, but, i to am lost and can’t help.
#5
That don’t make it Junk
I live inside a bottle, and reality is a blur.
I drink to see more clearly but nothing becomes clear.
I’m just a drunk who sold all that he holds dear.
That don’t mean that I don’t care.
I just can’t play the role you wrote for me.
#6
Waiting for the Miracle
Time keeps on passing, I’m waiting just for you.
Life is strange with problems old and new.
I hope you will hear my cries of love for us.
I’m not sure how I can go on alone..
I need that miracle of togetherness.
#7
Avalanche
I’m buried with life and can no longer breath.
I need to be rescued from this feeling of loss.
I need to be saved from the passion of my mind.
Can’t someone see my crisis and lend a helping hand?
I’ll slip below the surface and be gone forever.
#8
Suzanne
You draw me in like a moth to the flame.
Your glow lights my day and fills my soul.
What you offer transcends the gifts of this world.
I’m taken to a different place when I’m with you.
Cover me with your aura and peace will come to me.
#9
The Partisan
I’m in search of freedom and I am not alone.
We have surrendered everything to achieve our goal.
People have died in the winds of change but
we will prevail. Our efforts are not in vain.
Much to do before lying down to sleep in peace,
#10
Famous Blue Raincoat
I live my life with just a souvenir of you.
My lady has your aura and feeds me every day.
Will you ever find peace? Will you ever fix the rips?
Where you live is desert but I wonder what kind.
I hope the oasis is what you are looking for.
#11
Hallelujah ( one of the 3 top compositions ever written)
I feel the need, I’m drawn to truth but do you
have enough to share with me? Songs of old
to praise the Lord were not enough for him.
I’ve done my best to keep the faith, to give
the praise that creation and song demand.
#12
Closing Time
Don’t think of this place as home, it’s a bar.
Last call isn’t about one last whiskey.
Who will take you home? Where will you go?
There are many like you who will wander.
Did you find any answers in the bottom of that bottle?
Lover, Lover,Lover
I’m trapped in this body that drips with shame.
My pleas for help go unanswered.
I search my heart and hear the sounds
of “you can do it and go for it”. I resolve
to do and go, but I don’t know what or where.
#2
Bird on the Wire
I wander the alleys and doorways
looking for a place of comfort.
I’ve tried the real world, been rejected
so often that I no longer belong. So I sit
and observe, pno longer an eager participant.
#3
Chelsea Hotel
There was sex and success and that
led to love or what we thought was love.
But we grew apart, our paths seldom crossed,
and what we thought was love faded
with the beauty of our youth. Adios...
#4
Heart with no Compassion
For the heart that’s broken and bleeds regret,
for all who’ve lost, who’ve missed or cried,
my heart aches and sobs along with you.
Some ignore your pleas for help, so self absorbed!
I hear you, but, i to am lost and can’t help.
#5
That don’t make it Junk
I live inside a bottle, and reality is a blur.
I drink to see more clearly but nothing becomes clear.
I’m just a drunk who sold all that he holds dear.
That don’t mean that I don’t care.
I just can’t play the role you wrote for me.
#6
Waiting for the Miracle
Time keeps on passing, I’m waiting just for you.
Life is strange with problems old and new.
I hope you will hear my cries of love for us.
I’m not sure how I can go on alone..
I need that miracle of togetherness.
#7
Avalanche
I’m buried with life and can no longer breath.
I need to be rescued from this feeling of loss.
I need to be saved from the passion of my mind.
Can’t someone see my crisis and lend a helping hand?
I’ll slip below the surface and be gone forever.
#8
Suzanne
You draw me in like a moth to the flame.
Your glow lights my day and fills my soul.
What you offer transcends the gifts of this world.
I’m taken to a different place when I’m with you.
Cover me with your aura and peace will come to me.
#9
The Partisan
I’m in search of freedom and I am not alone.
We have surrendered everything to achieve our goal.
People have died in the winds of change but
we will prevail. Our efforts are not in vain.
Much to do before lying down to sleep in peace,
#10
Famous Blue Raincoat
I live my life with just a souvenir of you.
My lady has your aura and feeds me every day.
Will you ever find peace? Will you ever fix the rips?
Where you live is desert but I wonder what kind.
I hope the oasis is what you are looking for.
#11
Hallelujah ( one of the 3 top compositions ever written)
I feel the need, I’m drawn to truth but do you
have enough to share with me? Songs of old
to praise the Lord were not enough for him.
I’ve done my best to keep the faith, to give
the praise that creation and song demand.
#12
Closing Time
Don’t think of this place as home, it’s a bar.
Last call isn’t about one last whiskey.
Who will take you home? Where will you go?
There are many like you who will wander.
Did you find any answers in the bottom of that bottle?
Written by anvinvil
(Anvillan)
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Anonymous
Anvinvil & MadameLavender — thank you for your great entries and for kicking this off! 😊
Rumors ... Fleetwood Mac
(I) "Second Hand News"
Never ever thought this
that I would become
so dumb yet numb ...
being retold, re-rolled
over and over
(II) "Dreams"
I heard raw thunder
the other grey day
and I must now say
wasn't any rain
to wash myself clean
(III) "Never Going Back Again"
Keep telling myself that
like it is a concrete fact
set in lyrical stone
written down in a poem
till the next heartbeat
(IV) "Don't Stop"
Hard to think about such things
when my heart has leaden wings
my hands chained to the wheel
fingers unable to feel
to turn this melancholic page
(V) "Go Your Own Way"
You sure did come in
that way
with not much to say
sweeping me off my feet
before beating a sweet retreat
(VI) "Songbird"
I really do wonder
if it was a blunder
to write this quilled song
let Christine play it for so long ...
without even asking the chickadee
(VII) "The Chain"
You will always have me
dangling that brass key
from my collar
just as long as
you don't love me now
(VIII) "You Make Loving Fun"
Always a game with you
with all that you do
a fun one I must say
making we want to play
especially when it hurts
(IX) "I Don't Want to Know"
You know I am such
a terrible liar
even when on fire
burnt sulphur in the air
complaining about my hair
(X) "Oh Daddy"
Screw the pony
just screw me
make me finally see
why I am so good
when I am oh so bad
(XI) "Gold Dust Woman"
It is quite a glittering snort
always unable to abort
the gilded little flakes
the feeling that it makes
fourteen carat tingles
(XII) "Silver Springs"
I used to live there
barely had a care
eating lots of blue crabs
dusted in Old Bay
every single Memorial day
Never ever thought this
that I would become
so dumb yet numb ...
being retold, re-rolled
over and over
(II) "Dreams"
I heard raw thunder
the other grey day
and I must now say
wasn't any rain
to wash myself clean
(III) "Never Going Back Again"
Keep telling myself that
like it is a concrete fact
set in lyrical stone
written down in a poem
till the next heartbeat
(IV) "Don't Stop"
Hard to think about such things
when my heart has leaden wings
my hands chained to the wheel
fingers unable to feel
to turn this melancholic page
(V) "Go Your Own Way"
You sure did come in
that way
with not much to say
sweeping me off my feet
before beating a sweet retreat
(VI) "Songbird"
I really do wonder
if it was a blunder
to write this quilled song
let Christine play it for so long ...
without even asking the chickadee
(VII) "The Chain"
You will always have me
dangling that brass key
from my collar
just as long as
you don't love me now
(VIII) "You Make Loving Fun"
Always a game with you
with all that you do
a fun one I must say
making we want to play
especially when it hurts
(IX) "I Don't Want to Know"
You know I am such
a terrible liar
even when on fire
burnt sulphur in the air
complaining about my hair
(X) "Oh Daddy"
Screw the pony
just screw me
make me finally see
why I am so good
when I am oh so bad
(XI) "Gold Dust Woman"
It is quite a glittering snort
always unable to abort
the gilded little flakes
the feeling that it makes
fourteen carat tingles
(XII) "Silver Springs"
I used to live there
barely had a care
eating lots of blue crabs
dusted in Old Bay
every single Memorial day
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Eerie
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Dangerous Mind
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DaisyGrace
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Dangerous Mind
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When you say 5 lines, do you mean 5 lines of text or can there be blank lines in there.
What I’m trying to say
is: can I
space
a poem
like this?
Or is that considered 7 lines?
What I’m trying to say
is: can I
space
a poem
like this?
Or is that considered 7 lines?
Anonymous
Thank you all for your entries so far, they’ve been wonderful Keep ‘em coming!
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DaisyGrace
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Dangerous Mind
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anvinvil
Anvillan
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Anvillan
Fire of Insight
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Maybe your best work D. I’m gonna try the same approach on Ravels “Bolero”.
TCLilly
Tanzen Lilly
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Tanzen Lilly
Twisted Dreamer
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Hounds of Love
Hounds of love by Kate Bush
Running up that hill
When I see you again,
Will you meet me halfway
It might be true, what you used to say
We are more strangers to our younger selves
Than to who the other is today
Hounds of Love
I often miss the old country house
With that little creek where wild things grow
You used to race me to the swimming hole
But that was forever ago
Oh, how I’d like to be there now!
The Big Sky
Nothing could ruin my mood today
Looking all around me as I skip and play
I notice little miracles as I jiggle my front tooth
Each tiny ant and leaf drawing circles back
To unanswered questions from my youth
Mother Stands For Comfort
Oh great, here it comes
My least favorite game
20 questions about who I was with
Just where on earth have I been
Yea, I know, I love you too
Cloudbusting
When my mind wanders from my work
I follow faded pink carpet to my grandparent’s house
And the impressions left in my mind
At the ages of 5 and 9
Too young to understand, too old to ever forget
And Dream of Sheep
Faded pink carpet leads up a grand staircase
That I’m not sure ever existed
But if I climb to the top
Suddenly I’m in grandma’s study
I smell cigarettes and tomato juice. But no one is home.
Under Ice
It’s dark and I’m alone and the front door
Is wide open, wind blowing in from the cold night
I know I have to leave, but where to go?
I think of the safest place I know - our church
The boogey man emerges! He chases me out into the street
Waking the Witch
As I reach the church gates
The sun is coming up
The boogey man slows his pace
we stand in place, just staring at each other
At least I think he is staring back. He has no face.
Watching You Without Me
I often wonder what you’d think
If you could see me now
But I take comfort in thinking of how
When someone that you love departs
They’re never gone. They’re in your heart.
Jig of Life
You are more connected to your ancestors
Than you will ever know
The roots of those before you are buried in your soul
Even now you are a living, breathing testament
To all their joys and sorrows
Hello Earth
Do you remember when the world stood still?
I was 10 living in Brooklyn. My mother drove us home from class.
I came home to my father watching the news in silent terror
When the twin towers fell, heroes from all walks of life rose to the task
But where are those heroes now? Just thought I’d ask.
Morning Fog
There has been a mass awakening
But some still slumber deep
Take a look around
At the company you keep
Learn. Heal. Repeat.
Running up that hill
When I see you again,
Will you meet me halfway
It might be true, what you used to say
We are more strangers to our younger selves
Than to who the other is today
Hounds of Love
I often miss the old country house
With that little creek where wild things grow
You used to race me to the swimming hole
But that was forever ago
Oh, how I’d like to be there now!
The Big Sky
Nothing could ruin my mood today
Looking all around me as I skip and play
I notice little miracles as I jiggle my front tooth
Each tiny ant and leaf drawing circles back
To unanswered questions from my youth
Mother Stands For Comfort
Oh great, here it comes
My least favorite game
20 questions about who I was with
Just where on earth have I been
Yea, I know, I love you too
Cloudbusting
When my mind wanders from my work
I follow faded pink carpet to my grandparent’s house
And the impressions left in my mind
At the ages of 5 and 9
Too young to understand, too old to ever forget
And Dream of Sheep
Faded pink carpet leads up a grand staircase
That I’m not sure ever existed
But if I climb to the top
Suddenly I’m in grandma’s study
I smell cigarettes and tomato juice. But no one is home.
Under Ice
It’s dark and I’m alone and the front door
Is wide open, wind blowing in from the cold night
I know I have to leave, but where to go?
I think of the safest place I know - our church
The boogey man emerges! He chases me out into the street
Waking the Witch
As I reach the church gates
The sun is coming up
The boogey man slows his pace
we stand in place, just staring at each other
At least I think he is staring back. He has no face.
Watching You Without Me
I often wonder what you’d think
If you could see me now
But I take comfort in thinking of how
When someone that you love departs
They’re never gone. They’re in your heart.
Jig of Life
You are more connected to your ancestors
Than you will ever know
The roots of those before you are buried in your soul
Even now you are a living, breathing testament
To all their joys and sorrows
Hello Earth
Do you remember when the world stood still?
I was 10 living in Brooklyn. My mother drove us home from class.
I came home to my father watching the news in silent terror
When the twin towers fell, heroes from all walks of life rose to the task
But where are those heroes now? Just thought I’d ask.
Morning Fog
There has been a mass awakening
But some still slumber deep
Take a look around
At the company you keep
Learn. Heal. Repeat.
Written by TCLilly
(Tanzen Lilly)
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Kinkpoet
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Tyrant of Words
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Abraxis
I
dark jazzy keys
bass rhythms stroll beside congas bells chimes
cymbals punctuate chords
howling like jungle creatures
ethereal fusion
II
sensual black magic woman
got me so blind i can’t see
her magic tricks spells charms
ecstatic sounds pulsing throbbing
bewitching gypsy queen
III
listen listen listen
feel the rhythm
let feet move move move
just feel it feel it feel it
flow with it go with it
IV
soil bathed with haitian sweat
must offer no sustenance
napolean’s army met bodies in heaps
scorched earth vision of hell leading to defeat
by papa touissant’s self-freed slaves
V
methedrine cadence
downhill racer out of control
headed for danger until
it’s over it’s over it’s over
it’s over it’s over it’s over
VI
what happened to you?
your mamma’s not so bad
now i got a woman who treats me better
your stupid games are over
and you’re left standing in the corner
VII
a samba for you
smooth sexy latin groove
sensual hips swaying
sound so sweet
tears fall every time
VIII
eyes fade as mind fills with tears
waiting for sunshine seeing only glare
looking outward nothings really there
hope you feel better
with diamonds in place of friends
IX
tribal drums beating
singers chanting
let’s go let’s go let’s go chepito
fading parade dancing joyfully toward the beach
© 2020
dark jazzy keys
bass rhythms stroll beside congas bells chimes
cymbals punctuate chords
howling like jungle creatures
ethereal fusion
II
sensual black magic woman
got me so blind i can’t see
her magic tricks spells charms
ecstatic sounds pulsing throbbing
bewitching gypsy queen
III
listen listen listen
feel the rhythm
let feet move move move
just feel it feel it feel it
flow with it go with it
IV
soil bathed with haitian sweat
must offer no sustenance
napolean’s army met bodies in heaps
scorched earth vision of hell leading to defeat
by papa touissant’s self-freed slaves
V
methedrine cadence
downhill racer out of control
headed for danger until
it’s over it’s over it’s over
it’s over it’s over it’s over
VI
what happened to you?
your mamma’s not so bad
now i got a woman who treats me better
your stupid games are over
and you’re left standing in the corner
VII
a samba for you
smooth sexy latin groove
sensual hips swaying
sound so sweet
tears fall every time
VIII
eyes fade as mind fills with tears
waiting for sunshine seeing only glare
looking outward nothings really there
hope you feel better
with diamonds in place of friends
IX
tribal drums beating
singers chanting
let’s go let’s go let’s go chepito
fading parade dancing joyfully toward the beach
© 2020
Written by Kinkpoet
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