Poetry competition CLOSED 22nd January 2020 4:26am
WINNER
russell_snow
russell_snow
RUNNER-UP:
Jade-Pandora
Palindrome Poetry
Silence and Darkness
Silence and Darkness
Wait!
Silence
crippling from creaking floors
consuming screams of
loneliness and depression
familiarizing voices echoing
Wait.
Darkness
smiting and unleashing silence
muting pictures and voices
subduing imagination
assailing greed
Wait.
Silence
gaining power
of unmanaged anxiety
from muted voices
and isolated thoughts
Wait.
Darkness
invoking pain
AGAIN
pain invoking
darkness
Wait.
Thoughts isolated and
voices muted from
anxiety unmanaged of
power gaining
silence
Wait.
Greed assailing
imagination subduing
voices and pictures muting
darkness unleashing and smiting
darkness
Wait.
Echoing voices familiarizing
depression and loneliness
of screams consuming
floors creaking from crippling
silence
Wait!
Darkness and Silence
Wait!
Silence
crippling from creaking floors
consuming screams of
loneliness and depression
familiarizing voices echoing
Wait.
Darkness
smiting and unleashing silence
muting pictures and voices
subduing imagination
assailing greed
Wait.
Silence
gaining power
of unmanaged anxiety
from muted voices
and isolated thoughts
Wait.
Darkness
invoking pain
AGAIN
pain invoking
darkness
Wait.
Thoughts isolated and
voices muted from
anxiety unmanaged of
power gaining
silence
Wait.
Greed assailing
imagination subduing
voices and pictures muting
darkness unleashing and smiting
darkness
Wait.
Echoing voices familiarizing
depression and loneliness
of screams consuming
floors creaking from crippling
silence
Wait!
Darkness and Silence
Written by NuBorn
(BxckedbyGold)
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Silence and Darkness
Silence and Darkness
Wait!
Silence
crippling from creaking floors
consuming screams of
loneliness and depression
familiarizing voices echoing
Wait.
Darkness
smiting and unleashing silence
muting pictures and voices
subduing imagination
assailing greed
Wait.
Silence
gaining power
of unmanaged anxiety
from muted voices
and isolated thoughts
Wait.
Darkness
invoking pain
AGAIN
pain invoking
darkness
Wait.
Thoughts isolated and
voices muted from
anxiety unmanaged of
power gaining
silence
Wait.
Greed assailing
imagination subduing
voices and pictures muting
darkness unleashing and smiting
darkness
Wait.
Echoing voices familiarizing
depression and loneliness
of screams consuming
floors creaking from crippling
silence
Wait!
Darkness and Silence
Wait!
Silence
crippling from creaking floors
consuming screams of
loneliness and depression
familiarizing voices echoing
Wait.
Darkness
smiting and unleashing silence
muting pictures and voices
subduing imagination
assailing greed
Wait.
Silence
gaining power
of unmanaged anxiety
from muted voices
and isolated thoughts
Wait.
Darkness
invoking pain
AGAIN
pain invoking
darkness
Wait.
Thoughts isolated and
voices muted from
anxiety unmanaged of
power gaining
silence
Wait.
Greed assailing
imagination subduing
voices and pictures muting
darkness unleashing and smiting
darkness
Wait.
Echoing voices familiarizing
depression and loneliness
of screams consuming
floors creaking from crippling
silence
Wait!
Darkness and Silence
Written by NuBorn
(BxckedbyGold)
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NuBorn said:
Thank you, NuBorn: you have submitted the perfect mirror of your soul -- visually (graphically), literally (structurally), emotionally (expressively).
If I were still a literature teacher, I would include your work in my instruction examples of the palindromic form.
Best regards to you in the competition.
Sincerely
cab
Thank you, NuBorn: you have submitted the perfect mirror of your soul -- visually (graphically), literally (structurally), emotionally (expressively).
If I were still a literature teacher, I would include your work in my instruction examples of the palindromic form.
Best regards to you in the competition.
Sincerely
cab
cabcool said:
Thanks for your entry, russell_snow!
You seem to have followed the rules precisely. My best regards for your placement in the competition.
PS
If you're not Dr Russell Snow, ENT specialist from Caldwell, Idaho, you're at least a DUP protagonist!
Sincerely
Ah darn! That's not me, but suppose I should have used my alter ego that no one's heard of, Jon Snow
Thanks for your entry, russell_snow!
You seem to have followed the rules precisely. My best regards for your placement in the competition.
PS
If you're not Dr Russell Snow, ENT specialist from Caldwell, Idaho, you're at least a DUP protagonist!
Sincerely
Ah darn! That's not me, but suppose I should have used my alter ego that no one's heard of, Jon Snow
Palindromic Writer's Block
blank pages
the left side dark
My starting: hard
too: thinking
I'm thinking: too hard starting
My dark side left the pages blank
the left side dark
My starting: hard
too: thinking
I'm thinking: too hard starting
My dark side left the pages blank
Written by Benzy_420
(BTheW)
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love evol
I wanted nothing from this world but to find my love
While she was always close... I was always so far
Only ever needing as to reflect my soul lamp
Made I so worlds falling in love with her
Soul spun our time of all that meant
First to find my heart then last
Last then heart my find to first
Meant that all of time our spun soul
Her with love in falling worlds so I made
Lamp soul my reflect to as needing ever only
Far so always was I... close always was she while
Love my find to but world this from nothing wanted I
While she was always close... I was always so far
Only ever needing as to reflect my soul lamp
Made I so worlds falling in love with her
Soul spun our time of all that meant
First to find my heart then last
Last then heart my find to first
Meant that all of time our spun soul
Her with love in falling worlds so I made
Lamp soul my reflect to as needing ever only
Far so always was I... close always was she while
Love my find to but world this from nothing wanted I
Written by runaway-mindtrain
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love evol
I wanted nothing from this world but to find my love
While she was always close... I was always so far
Only ever needing as to reflect my soul lamp
Made I so worlds falling in love with her
Soul spun our time of all that meant
First to find my heart then last
Last then heart my find to first
Meant that all of time our spun soul
Her with love in falling worlds so I made
Lamp soul my reflect to as needing ever only
Far so always was I... close always was she while
Love my find to but world this from nothing wanted I
While she was always close... I was always so far
Only ever needing as to reflect my soul lamp
Made I so worlds falling in love with her
Soul spun our time of all that meant
First to find my heart then last
Last then heart my find to first
Meant that all of time our spun soul
Her with love in falling worlds so I made
Lamp soul my reflect to as needing ever only
Far so always was I... close always was she while
Love my find to but world this from nothing wanted I
Written by runaway-mindtrain
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said:
Thanks for your entry, runaway-mindtrain. Visually appealing it is, indeed. Let me inbox (PM) you on a thought to ponder.
Sincerely
Thanks for your entry, runaway-mindtrain. Visually appealing it is, indeed. Let me inbox (PM) you on a thought to ponder.
Sincerely
Related submission no longer exists.
Kinkpoet said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/370544-die-id/
Clever, indeed, Kinkpoet! Thanks for participating. All the best for the runnings.
Sincerely
Clever, indeed, Kinkpoet! Thanks for participating. All the best for the runnings.
Sincerely
Derailed
somewhere in my mind
my train of thought becomes lost
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my train of thought becomes lost
somewhere in my mind
my train of thought becomes lost
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my train of thought becomes lost
somewhere in my mind
Written by NewBeginnings
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NewBeginnings said:
Wonderful, NewB!
Here's one that 's different from the rest in its 3-D projection of words into images. An interesting continuum.
Thank you.
Sincerely
Wonderful, NewB!
Here's one that 's different from the rest in its 3-D projection of words into images. An interesting continuum.
Thank you.
Sincerely
DEIFIED
Dreaming deep
Within
Prisms of fragmentation
Inside the mind
Being sensible
Of
Lost reflections
For
Searching endlessly
Until
Loving and wanting
Becomes
DEIFIED
Becomes
Wanting and loving
Until
Endlessly searching
For
Reflections lost
Of
Sensible being
Mind the inside
Fragmentation of prisms
Within
Deep dreaming
Within
Prisms of fragmentation
Inside the mind
Being sensible
Of
Lost reflections
For
Searching endlessly
Until
Loving and wanting
Becomes
DEIFIED
Becomes
Wanting and loving
Until
Endlessly searching
For
Reflections lost
Of
Sensible being
Mind the inside
Fragmentation of prisms
Within
Deep dreaming
Written by wallyroo92
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