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Being Thankful

eswaller
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Poetry Contest

A poem about someoneone or something you are thankful/grateful for.
As Thanksgiving approaches, it is time to start thinking about being thankful/grateful. With that in mind I want you to write a poem about someone or something you are thankful for. Keep in mind this is my first competition so please DM me if you have any questions, comments or how I can improve.

*One month
*Up to 2 entries in any length (old or new)
*Be creative

Joshuaberry
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TO THE ONE WHO RAISED MY ARMS

Being the giver of my life:
Jolting me away from strife.
Loaning me to joyfulness
Graced with love and happiness.

The hunting wolves measuring the depth
Of the promiscous earth:
You tossed me above their claws,
Raising  me beyond all flaws.

Even when the leopard figured my brights:
Even when i was wroth in its sight.
It intended to make me and destruction bethrot.
But dashed apart was it like cedar by his wrath.

Under his wing my shelter be:
Even like the mother hen's:Little mild chicks.
Through the hole of the wings my eyes perceived the foe:
And yea,by him,i did words throw.

'Come take me now' i'd said.
To the wandering timid chick who fled.
And i who once dwelt in the cave of fright,
Now take against all my plights.

Traces...

The beauty of your holiness,
Even crazed with indisguise awesomeness.
At the awe of your generosity,
My glottis soar in it's velocity.

Chewing: 'Oh how grateful am i'.
To the one who raised my arms!
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Joshuaberry
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            GRATITUDE

When the path seem tight,
And the way lead astray.
Your words tossed me back:
'In praise to you,i will not slack'.

drivelicious13
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Half-Mad Queen

       
she`s anxious        
 yet unafraid        
willin' to do        
 whatever it takes        
regardless        
 of heartaches,        
past mistakes,        
 disappointments,          
or earthquakes        
       
she loves herself        
 even as she parades    
her faults        
 brutally honest        
fully aware        
 of the wounds        
she salts        
       
she deepens the pain        
 gets right in your face        
she forbids you        
 to continue          
self-destructive ways        
       
at first you're confused        
 "what a fucked-up date!"        
then you realize        
 you're standing        
ten times stronger       
 after meeting        
Goddess Fate        
       
 no matter the times        
she wrecked        
 your crippling pride        
there she is        
 fighting to the death        
right by your side        
       
turning worrier        
 to Warrior        
leading a victim        
 to Victory        
Her Brilliance        
 brings Balance        
where once
 there was absence        
       
she`s conquered    
 tragic experience        
transforming herself        
 into what seems        
like a Half-Mad Queen        
       
 because she travels        
through places        
 you thought        
existed in dreams        
         
 she expresses    
truthful things        
 your mind`s too closed        
to believe      
       
first you think        
 you`re cursed        
then realize        
 you`re cured        
awoken to Harmony        
 by her cruel        
and Magnificent        
 life-changing Beauty
       
 
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eswaller
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Thank you for your entry.

OxyMoronicMe
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LDF (Long Distance Friendship)

 
I didn't know how you take me as
all I care is that we share a bond
I don't expect your full trust
Just a little glimpse is enough

You live a life far different from mine
We are not the same, I wonder how
the connection lingers, tying a knot
forming a circle from parallel grounds

I am not so pure, I have my moods
Maybe I'm just a little bit shrewd
If this me can make a difference
to one person's life, then I thank thee

Am not so eloquent nor am I sweet
I can't say I love you, glad you hear me thou
between the lines of shared thoughts
my feelings, I can't put words onto

Forgive this one, for being shy
Its not always that I recieve a plaque
know that, for whatever its worth
I'd be the me for the you that is us

Thank you for the friendship.
Lets make it last.

I penned this, first as a response to Chelley's. I dedicate this little piece of poetry to all the friends I have made thus far in this avenue. especially to Michelle Rice-LaPine for adopting me. equally to everyone who make me feel like I am someone they are glad to have known even if we are far apart and no opportunity to ever meet in close proximity. I am grateful for the friendship. YOU ALL KNOW WHO YOU ARE. (lol, forgive me for not tagging coz im afraid that if I missed even just one, then I'll loose everyone)





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snugglebuck
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TP

I stepped into the confessional
Because I couldn’t be thankful
No blessings were given me

Taking a seat like ‘The Thinker’
I tried to remember
A cause for humility

This too shall pass
And I cut loose some gas
Before reaching the TP

What, where, how?
No damn way,
There’s no TP?

Jesus Christ, Christ Almighty!
I exalted divine intervention
Give Charmin please!


Toilet Paper; a luxury we all take for granted. It may sound silly, but the greatest blessings in life, are the ones we don't appreciate. Keeping in mind, most folks in the world have never touched toilet paper, or have ever used indoor plumbing, nor, have they a real bed to sleep in.  If you don’t believe me, just remove the roll after you go.  And when the next person goes into the lavatory, I’ll guarantee you, you’ll hear prayers never heard before.


eswaller
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You're welcome, Joshua!! I am glad it stirs some inspiration up for you. Glad to be getting to know you and your work.

Grace
IDryad
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Thank God for You

Seems like I'm always
grasping the rim
of hopes
with mere fingernails
scratching its sides
as hard as rocks
praying not to fall

at times I whimper
with the pain
or moan with frustration
wishing myself
more strength
to leave or die
and stay

repetition complaints whines
knocking on tired ears
dissatisfactions
unhappiness
discontents
you listen and smile
Says you will be alright

I mutter prayers
supplications
to a distant regal God
but you have the faith
you believe
you trust
so Thank God for You

A strange old new place
sleepless on iron bed
listening to the sounds
of the sea
tears crusting on old eyes
I am so weary
I wish you are here.



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eswaller
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Thank you so much for your entry Grace!!

wallyroo92
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I’m Thankful For…

It’s that season of the year when I like to take time,
To reflect on the things have happened so far,
Being grateful for what I have,
Appreciating the things that matter most.
For my family,
A woman who loves me,
The love of my children which nothing compares,
The well-being of those who are close to me,
The struggles and triumphs we all experience.
I’m thankful for a job that I enjoy,
The roof over my head and food on the table,
The friendships I’ve had over the years,
Even when distance keep us apart.
But most of all,
I’m thankful for,
The wonderful strong women in my life,
From my wife, mother, aunts, daughters and sisters,
Especially my beautiful grandmother
Who will one day leave us.
I’m thankful that I’m close by,
Because at this stage in our lives,
We all go to her for the wisdom of the ages.
There is still a resilience, a resolve,
A faith that does not fade away nor it does not diminish,
Because in her smile
I’m reminded of the wonderful love
That God has bestowed upon us,
A pillar upon which this family was built on,
The root from which we all grew.

Macian24
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All my life, I refused to be bound by the rules
Considering I didn’t have a choice to choose
See I lack the hardware but have the tools
They say meds will give me a chance to improve
My head has an imbalance of chemicals
Which dictates my mood
Don’t get confused, even though I am too
Simply put I’m missing screws
So please let me elaborate
After countless arrests, binge drink every day till nothing is left
Waking up feeling empty was harder than feeling depressed
At least when I was sad without reason I could feel my heart beating when I rest my hand on my chest
Even when I begged for it to be over just let it end I couldn’t imagine just being dead
But when I was empty there was nothing to express
Pain became my only outlet for relief of my poorly managed stress
I would constantly hurt myself in excess
Press razors to my skin and tear the flesh
I felt alive again when I bled
The back of my hands became the perfect place to put out cigarettes, shocked how I survived so many car wrecks
I was in a coma after a sub arachnoid hemorrhage
That occurred when I was hit hard on the side of my head
For so long I could only see red
I spent days on a couch and weeks in a bed
I needed a change began resenting my reflection
Involuntary hospital stays granted  my family and myself protection
Being out of control and seeing it really put things into perspective
Not soon after my wife made a valiant suggestion
So we visited a dr with hopes of answers for our questions
We explained my traits and a lot of things I can’t mention
All in all the dr saw the direction I was heading
Poor attention, reacts to people with a higher connection genuine
That day I was diagnosed with adhd and manic depression
I was so ashamed,I learned a valuable lesson
I may not be perfect, but I’m perfect for an imperfection

eswaller
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Thanks wally and Macian24 for your entries!!

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lanooz
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Thankful

Love poured it
smelled it designer throw
blow it my low price.
Kisses handed
no job real life no
tears only smiles
in scene smoke of weed
for the Bonnie and Clyde.
No more and it hurts to
think of it all ending. Power
in the couple yet nothing
stays the same. How odd.
I don’t believe in the
alternative I say so let’s
keep it alive girl, never
alone, how optimistic.

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