Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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Deadsorrow78
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 2:41am
22nd Jan 2025 2:41am
Pleasure in thy Name
Silent winds of grace to softly touch your face.
A sensual feel over comes you like you have never felt before.
Making all your senses melt with pleasure. sensually spicy on the back of your neck.
Arousal has been provoked, as the taste of your skin hits.
your body shivering with each part of you that is caressed.
New to this kind of pleasure you want to run. but every touch has been calculated for your satisfaction.
Tasting all of you for your stimulation. as your flower secrets nectar, that sweet honey of the gods.
...
A sensual feel over comes you like you have never felt before.
Making all your senses melt with pleasure. sensually spicy on the back of your neck.
Arousal has been provoked, as the taste of your skin hits.
your body shivering with each part of you that is caressed.
New to this kind of pleasure you want to run. but every touch has been calculated for your satisfaction.
Tasting all of you for your stimulation. as your flower secrets nectar, that sweet honey of the gods.
...
#lover
137 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 11:50pm
21st Jan 2025 11:50pm
Falling snow
#erotic
#passion
#seductive
#sensual
#sexy
126 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 11:11pm
21st Jan 2025 11:11pm
salacious
salacious, audacious need
a man with an ego turns me on
spitting fire, his arrogance sires desire in me
tittlating passion, to see me on my knees
submitting, relentlng to his beast
culminating with a little cream of essence to taste
yummy addiction, fellatio dick
taking dictation with my eloquent diction, makes him hard
hardened affecttions, then penetrate want
wanton thrill to make your ardor rise
saluting my femininty
my ego stroked
stoked, to know I did you good
my lust only grows from here
as...
a man with an ego turns me on
spitting fire, his arrogance sires desire in me
tittlating passion, to see me on my knees
submitting, relentlng to his beast
culminating with a little cream of essence to taste
yummy addiction, fellatio dick
taking dictation with my eloquent diction, makes him hard
hardened affecttions, then penetrate want
wanton thrill to make your ardor rise
saluting my femininty
my ego stroked
stoked, to know I did you good
my lust only grows from here
as...
#lust
136 reads
12 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
You Couldn't Wait For Me. Could You?
Ashley went into
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
#fiction
#lover
#sex
#tanka
#threesome
95 reads
0 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 11:46am
21st Jan 2025 11:46am
The Clapping Sound
#lust
#sex
197 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 11:21am
21st Jan 2025 11:21am
Good Thing Mom And Dad Are Not Here To See This
Went into a brothel in
London and became
shocked at the sight
of my own little sister
Jessica letting some
character hump her.
London and became
shocked at the sight
of my own little sister
Jessica letting some
character hump her.
#corruption
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
96 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 2:21am
21st Jan 2025 2:21am
Sorry About Last Night
Clare finally opened her eyes.
She discovered that she's hungover and naked.
That's before David walked in.
He gave her a cup of coffee.
"Sorry about last night.", David regretfully said.
She discovered that she's hungover and naked.
That's before David walked in.
He gave her a cup of coffee.
"Sorry about last night.", David regretfully said.
#alcohol
#coffee
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
137 reads
0 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 7:54am
20th Jan 2025 7:54am
We're Not Furries!
#animals
#dirty
#sex
162 reads
2 Comments
Lynxxey
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 4:15am
20th Jan 2025 4:15am
Electric Air
You’re a supernova,
and I’m confined by your spell.
I survive, I come alive and I’m just
going with the waves, can you tell?
I’ve deduced that what to do
is everything that includes you.
Much obliged, go dim the lights
I’m just trying to take you where you ain’t been to
I can feel it, you right there
And I believe in, electric air
You’re a, cascade of skin
I just get so sucked in
Let me, walk through your valley
Feel you up, and leave my prints.
I wanna put my spell on you,
Give me what you brought...
and I’m confined by your spell.
I survive, I come alive and I’m just
going with the waves, can you tell?
I’ve deduced that what to do
is everything that includes you.
Much obliged, go dim the lights
I’m just trying to take you where you ain’t been to
I can feel it, you right there
And I believe in, electric air
You’re a, cascade of skin
I just get so sucked in
Let me, walk through your valley
Feel you up, and leave my prints.
I wanna put my spell on you,
Give me what you brought...
#erotic
#lust
#passion #sex
#passion #sex
171 reads
4 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th May 2024 1:52am
27th May 2024 1:52am
Body
What is it about the body that is so sensual in its creation?
Is it the supple texture of the skin?
The way the body is shaped to emphasize,
The chest
The breast
The abdomen
The strength in the arm
The softness in the arms.
Oh those dusted nipples
hardening
THE BODY
It is a secret that needs to be solved
Not all are the same
The combinations are endless
The crack into the safe of desire
THE BODY
Not needing to say a word
Will...
Is it the supple texture of the skin?
The way the body is shaped to emphasize,
The chest
The breast
The abdomen
The strength in the arm
The softness in the arms.
Oh those dusted nipples
hardening
THE BODY
It is a secret that needs to be solved
Not all are the same
The combinations are endless
The crack into the safe of desire
THE BODY
Not needing to say a word
Will...
#erotic
#lust
#sensual #sex
#sensual #sex
242 reads
24 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 2:52am
20th Jan 2025 2:52am
In the Crumbs
In the Crumbs
It's our senselessness
that is the hallmark
of our nature;
every sacred moment....
burnt,
and every intimacy
and integration are left
in the crumbs
of the coals.
It's our senselessness
that is the hallmark
of our nature;
every sacred moment....
burnt,
and every intimacy
and integration are left
in the crumbs
of the coals.
#BDSM
#lust
#passion
150 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 2:30am
20th Jan 2025 2:30am
A Possible Encounter With A Ghost In The Woods
Lisa walked into the woods.
She stopped, breathed heavily and stripped down.
She felt something humping her.
She stopped, breathed heavily and stripped down.
She felt something humping her.
#corruption
#fiction
#forest
#ghosts
#sex
109 reads
2 Comments
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