Erotica and sex poetry - Honest critique has been requested for these poems.
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Poem Published
Today 6:44am
Today 6:44am
Bound
To anyone else, I'm sick
my perversions repulsive
but she understands
she takes me to her realm
where suffering and shame
become pleasure
she has become the master
of the beast, the one
that threatens to devour me
before she found me
my life meant nothing
she gave me purpose
when she gives me a command
nothing else seems to matter
and failure is not an option
she can show me pleasure
beyond anything I've known
or she can deny it for weeks
she is the master of my world
and I'm just her willing...
my perversions repulsive
but she understands
she takes me to her realm
where suffering and shame
become pleasure
she has become the master
of the beast, the one
that threatens to devour me
before she found me
my life meant nothing
she gave me purpose
when she gives me a command
nothing else seems to matter
and failure is not an option
she can show me pleasure
beyond anything I've known
or she can deny it for weeks
she is the master of my world
and I'm just her willing...
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QuietusQuill
Poem Published
Today 3:43am
Today 3:43am
Primal Ferocity
Primal Ferocity
Bask with me
in the mystic twinkle
of a violet moon,
my alabaster maiden
of heatedly discreet
attraction.
Flowing hair kissed
by swarthy cumulus
softest skin glistening
flushed tranquility.
Lilly scented musk
permeating from
hedonistic pores,
devouring the
subconscious
of my virility
weak in the knees,
aorta adrift as a lump
in my stomach it sits
this celestial enchantress
of seduction breathing
hypnotic corruption.
In this narthex
of...
Bask with me
in the mystic twinkle
of a violet moon,
my alabaster maiden
of heatedly discreet
attraction.
Flowing hair kissed
by swarthy cumulus
softest skin glistening
flushed tranquility.
Lilly scented musk
permeating from
hedonistic pores,
devouring the
subconscious
of my virility
weak in the knees,
aorta adrift as a lump
in my stomach it sits
this celestial enchantress
of seduction breathing
hypnotic corruption.
In this narthex
of...
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Thetravelingfairy
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:47am
Yesterday 00:47am
Unholy Me
They call me innocent
A parishioner never dared do it
But here we are
Hungry for forbidden things
Come and get me
Own a sinners body
I'll grant your every wish
I'll open the Heavenly floodgates
You'll thirst no more in me
Baptize me in your Sea of Galilee
Let's make the congregation scream
Make them deem us unholy
A parishioner never dared do it
But here we are
Hungry for forbidden things
Come and get me
Own a sinners body
I'll grant your every wish
I'll open the Heavenly floodgates
You'll thirst no more in me
Baptize me in your Sea of Galilee
Let's make the congregation scream
Make them deem us unholy
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MaryWalker
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:07pm
Yesterday 8:07pm
The Unbearable Wetness Of My Being In Love With You
I .....
I'm not the least bit jealous
Furthest thing from the Truth
In fact, quite the opposite
The idea of your moist lips
brushing against hers?
Velvet on velvet
Makes me
impossibly
wet
Pacing
Pacing the floor
retracing my steps
rewind in mind
going back for more
I'm that kind of girl who says,
Fuck it
Live life without regret
If not, what the hell
are we living for?
I .....
I live for the day
you walk in the door
feel you for REAL
in my arms
Happily Ever After ...
I'm not the least bit jealous
Furthest thing from the Truth
In fact, quite the opposite
The idea of your moist lips
brushing against hers?
Velvet on velvet
Makes me
impossibly
wet
Pacing
Pacing the floor
retracing my steps
rewind in mind
going back for more
I'm that kind of girl who says,
Fuck it
Live life without regret
If not, what the hell
are we living for?
I .....
I live for the day
you walk in the door
feel you for REAL
in my arms
Happily Ever After ...
105 reads
2 Comments
Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique