Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:16pm
Yesterday 11:16pm
Pushing your buttons
#dirty
#erotic
#passion
#seductive
#temptation
53 reads
0 Comments
SweetBobbyBlu
Easin On In
Easin On In
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:24pm
Yesterday 8:24pm
Did you . . .
#dirty
#erotic
#masculinity
58 reads
0 Comments
BaldyBrown
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:41am
Yesterday 11:41am
Brown Sugar - Redux
#erotic
#ForbiddenLove
#lust
52 reads
0 Comments
NaughtyByNature
Tiffany143
Tiffany143
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:40am
Yesterday 3:40am
Just My Imagination
#emotions
#love
#redemption #TimeHeals
#redemption #TimeHeals
106 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:00am
Yesterday 2:00am
That's My First Clue
The air conditioner shorted out?
You see me playing video games topless?
Yes. That's my first clue.
You see me playing video games topless?
Yes. That's my first clue.
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#summer
#technology
79 reads
0 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:46am
Yesterday 00:46am
A Rented Bed
In that room that was new to us both,
the only sounds were soft creaking of
a rented bed and a soft slapping of skin on skin.
Despite the cool air, beads of sweat
formed on my brow and a flash of
panic shot behind my eyes.
I’d stumbled too close! I could not bring
myself to withdraw. I pressed deep and
paused accepting the inevitable.
God she was so warm and wet inside!
It was happening and there would be
no stopping it. My girlfriend’s brows furrowed
over eyes wide with disbelief as she
realized what was...
the only sounds were soft creaking of
a rented bed and a soft slapping of skin on skin.
Despite the cool air, beads of sweat
formed on my brow and a flash of
panic shot behind my eyes.
I’d stumbled too close! I could not bring
myself to withdraw. I pressed deep and
paused accepting the inevitable.
God she was so warm and wet inside!
It was happening and there would be
no stopping it. My girlfriend’s brows furrowed
over eyes wide with disbelief as she
realized what was...
#sex
#teens
97 reads
1 Comment
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 11:33pm
3rd Mar 2025 11:33pm
Shop till you drop
#dirty
#lust
#sensual
#sex
#temptation
76 reads
0 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 5:07pm
3rd Mar 2025 5:07pm
Lords of the Lay Down (Character Personality Collaboration)
#sex
63 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 3:17pm
3rd Mar 2025 3:17pm
The Maniquin Man
#fiction
#loneliness
#MentalHealth
#sex
#violence
56 reads
13 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 3:07am
3rd Mar 2025 3:07am
The desired pace
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#seductive
#sensual
130 reads
0 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 5:34pm
2nd Mar 2025 5:34pm
A Vow of Devotion - for a friend's marriage ceremony
In the hush of this cherished night,
They'll step into a harmonious embrace,
A dance of hearts, a sacred rite.
And so, it begins, each gesture, a vow of devotion
In his gentle pressing he seeks to
honor and cherish his new wife.
And she, with grace, responds in kind,
Sharing the depths of her affection,
As the animals at their core fulfill
a timeless covenant with the
Mother of all creation.
They'll step into a harmonious embrace,
A dance of hearts, a sacred rite.
And so, it begins, each gesture, a vow of devotion
In his gentle pressing he seeks to
honor and cherish his new wife.
And she, with grace, responds in kind,
Sharing the depths of her affection,
As the animals at their core fulfill
a timeless covenant with the
Mother of all creation.
#marriage
#nature
#sex
89 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 4:03pm
2nd Mar 2025 4:03pm
Garrison Belt
The leather
It's not super soft
Nor particularly hard
It's just kinda right
When you're up against a wall
Slow strikes to start
Building in to a rhythm
A cracking sound against your ass
Thighs too when you get whiney
So far it's just the leather
The buckle is for other occasions
We've just started this journey
Wait darling....wait
It's not super soft
Nor particularly hard
It's just kinda right
When you're up against a wall
Slow strikes to start
Building in to a rhythm
A cracking sound against your ass
Thighs too when you get whiney
So far it's just the leather
The buckle is for other occasions
We've just started this journey
Wait darling....wait
#BDSM
#pagan
#risk
#ThrillSeeking
#TruthOfLife
134 reads
21 Comments
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