Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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ReggiePoet
Reggie
Reggie
Poem Published
Today 11:14am
Today 11:14am
Scalped
#sex
#violence
#limerick #funny
#limerick #funny
11 reads
0 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
Today 10:29am
Today 10:29am
Green But Strong
#jealousy
#hope
#romantic
25 reads
0 Comments
hackerstacker
Poem Published
Today 4:17am
Today 4:17am
As i inter you
As I Inter You
I see you there thinking that I cannot see you through that shear white curtain and the sun to your back and your legs spared apart as you rub that sweet part. As I strip before your eyes. My cock is hard as I stroke it approaching you a smile comes upon your face just before you push your fingers hard into your sweet pussy.
Watch me stroke my cock till it becomes like a rock to drive it in your sweet pussy you moan out load I pin your ass to the wall and start driving my cock deep in to your wet pussy. Spread your legs wide for me to inter your...
I see you there thinking that I cannot see you through that shear white curtain and the sun to your back and your legs spared apart as you rub that sweet part. As I strip before your eyes. My cock is hard as I stroke it approaching you a smile comes upon your face just before you push your fingers hard into your sweet pussy.
Watch me stroke my cock till it becomes like a rock to drive it in your sweet pussy you moan out load I pin your ass to the wall and start driving my cock deep in to your wet pussy. Spread your legs wide for me to inter your...
#sex
#erotic
41 reads
1 Comment
PandoraUnleashed
Poem Published
Today 3:55am
Today 3:55am
Passionately Playful
We adore the stormy days. In all of it's breathtaking beauty, it brings out the most passionately playful of moods within us.
The sound of thunder crashed as the rain began to fall. The sky turned a majestic black as the room brightened like the light of day. Our atmosphere so quickly changed into a haven of zen like sin.
My eye's turned an electric blue as I eagerly anticipated how the evening would play out. His eyes were hypnotic and his hands felt like lightning themselves , conducive in setting every fiber ablaze . A far greater storm was brewing on the...
The sound of thunder crashed as the rain began to fall. The sky turned a majestic black as the room brightened like the light of day. Our atmosphere so quickly changed into a haven of zen like sin.
My eye's turned an electric blue as I eagerly anticipated how the evening would play out. His eyes were hypnotic and his hands felt like lightning themselves , conducive in setting every fiber ablaze . A far greater storm was brewing on the...
#sex
#rain
#storm
40 reads
2 Comments
Bonzi
Poem Published
Today 1:22am
Today 1:22am
Friend
Luck was on my side
glimpsed into blue eyes
seductive and longing
A moment in time
Fleeting as it was
served to satisfy
a yearning feeling
felt deep inside
glimpsed into blue eyes
seductive and longing
A moment in time
Fleeting as it was
served to satisfy
a yearning feeling
felt deep inside
#secrets
#sex
#IMissYou
46 reads
1 Comment
hackerstacker
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:39pm
Yesterday 10:39pm
Fingers on her ass
Fingers on her ass
At the brake of day it comes slowly
Lay and play
She comes much to fast
Fingers on her ass
Pass the buck ready to suck fingers resting on her ass
Pull out the covered flute who gives a hoot fingers on her ass
Found the passion fruit insert flute finger on her ass
Drove it deep yell bellows out fingers on her ass
Hussy you love this way fingers on her ass
Humping like a dog fingers on her ass
She reaches orgasm fingers on her ass
Sweat drips off my face fingers on her ass
By...
At the brake of day it comes slowly
Lay and play
She comes much to fast
Fingers on her ass
Pass the buck ready to suck fingers resting on her ass
Pull out the covered flute who gives a hoot fingers on her ass
Found the passion fruit insert flute finger on her ass
Drove it deep yell bellows out fingers on her ass
Hussy you love this way fingers on her ass
Humping like a dog fingers on her ass
She reaches orgasm fingers on her ass
Sweat drips off my face fingers on her ass
By...
#sex
48 reads
0 Comments
again
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:49pm
Yesterday 9:49pm
they grab they may but later
#lust
#sex
#erotic
#inspirational
#sensual
65 reads
2 Comments
Blackwolf
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:25pm
Yesterday 9:25pm
An Ode To Muster Mark Heard Through An Earwicker
Quantumliscious Is Being Subatomically Delicious ,
And I Favor Her Flavors , As I Note Her Behaviors
Of Up , Down , Top , Bottom , Strangely Charmed ,
As Her I Woo With My Deportmanteau Not Alarmed
And Her Quarky Style Is Electrically Elementary , Particleularily
Her Spin And Degree Of Freedom Displaying Her Queendom
In Weak And Strong Interactions And Her Dynamic Color Fashion
Her Lightweight Mass Is Special In Her Relativity And Provactivity
And Her Higgs Bosom Is Just Right To Excite My Field And Yield ...
And I Favor Her Flavors , As I Note Her Behaviors
Of Up , Down , Top , Bottom , Strangely Charmed ,
As Her I Woo With My Deportmanteau Not Alarmed
And Her Quarky Style Is Electrically Elementary , Particleularily
Her Spin And Degree Of Freedom Displaying Her Queendom
In Weak And Strong Interactions And Her Dynamic Color Fashion
Her Lightweight Mass Is Special In Her Relativity And Provactivity
And Her Higgs Bosom Is Just Right To Excite My Field And Yield ...
#lust
#relationships
#erotic #threesome
#erotic #threesome
29 reads
0 Comments
again
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:07pm
Yesterday 9:07pm
twin fux
#lust
#sex
#erotic #sensual
#erotic #sensual
60 reads
4 Comments
Blackwolf
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:23pm
Yesterday 8:23pm
Psycho Analized
Her Infatuation With Crazy Men And Anal Sex
Led Her To Be Psycho Analized Every Day ,
Just Without Her Newest Psychiatrist's Fee ;
The Black Leather Couch Did Get Steady Use ;
She Loved Both The Madness And The Intellect
And The Many Levels Of Intersect And Interplay
Schizophrenic Diagnosis Of The First Degree ;
She Just Used Her Couch For Sexual Abuse ;
Given A Resounding Pounding On A Daily Basis
It Was All As Simple As Getting Down To Basics
Though She Was Criticized She Did Not...
Led Her To Be Psycho Analized Every Day ,
Just Without Her Newest Psychiatrist's Fee ;
The Black Leather Couch Did Get Steady Use ;
She Loved Both The Madness And The Intellect
And The Many Levels Of Intersect And Interplay
Schizophrenic Diagnosis Of The First Degree ;
She Just Used Her Couch For Sexual Abuse ;
Given A Resounding Pounding On A Daily Basis
It Was All As Simple As Getting Down To Basics
Though She Was Criticized She Did Not...
#happiness
#sex
#motivational
#MentalHealth
#dirty
35 reads
5 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:27am
Yesterday 10:27am
The Compliments of Older Men
#lust
132 reads
10 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:11am
Yesterday 7:11am
IN THE RAIN
#sex
#erotic
#rain
#storm
#FreeVerse
121 reads
3 Comments
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