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Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Today 10:24am
Today 10:24am
LOVE WISDOM HAIKU
The best way to get
over someone - is to get
under another.
over someone - is to get
under another.
#love
#erotic
#haiku #funny
#haiku #funny
7 reads
1 Comment
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Today 9:55am
Today 9:55am
WANT A FEAST?
You are a ravenous sexy beast:
a bit's not enough, you want a feast.
As upon a table I am laid,
my sweetmeats of love to you displayed.
Taste the sweet wine my lips with yours share,
like bee tongue tip in honey down there.
Bite upon the plump pendulous fruit
on the top half of my birthday suit.
Go over cheeks of my steaky rump
and line of my ribs before you hump.
Before the straight knife in me you stuff,
let me feel your mouth eating my muff.
a bit's not enough, you want a feast.
As upon a table I am laid,
my sweetmeats of love to you displayed.
Taste the sweet wine my lips with yours share,
like bee tongue tip in honey down there.
Bite upon the plump pendulous fruit
on the top half of my birthday suit.
Go over cheeks of my steaky rump
and line of my ribs before you hump.
Before the straight knife in me you stuff,
let me feel your mouth eating my muff.
#rhyming
#sensual
20 reads
1 Comment
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Today 9:35am
Today 9:35am
The last dream
The last dream
Slowly your fingers fall through my hand as you turn and walk away, I know deep inside my dream, that's the last time we got to play
No more will you be in my arms, no longer in my bed, no passion from your sweetened lips, my dreams of you are dead
The juice you often gave to me has no gone, I'm just let with thirst, your breasts I cupped are out of reach, this really is the worst
Whispers gently falling on my ears, desires quietly said, begging me to take you are no longer in my head
Like the sands of time you slide away,...
Slowly your fingers fall through my hand as you turn and walk away, I know deep inside my dream, that's the last time we got to play
No more will you be in my arms, no longer in my bed, no passion from your sweetened lips, my dreams of you are dead
The juice you often gave to me has no gone, I'm just let with thirst, your breasts I cupped are out of reach, this really is the worst
Whispers gently falling on my ears, desires quietly said, begging me to take you are no longer in my head
Like the sands of time you slide away,...
#erotic
#dreams
25 reads
8 Comments
Midnight_Rose
Carrie Gogo
Carrie Gogo
Poem Published
Today 2:18am
Today 2:18am
Fantasy
#erotic
#lover
#sensual #orgasm
#sensual #orgasm
93 reads
2 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
Today 1:44am
Today 1:44am
High School Reunion
#sex
#school
#funny
37 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:42pm
Yesterday 6:42pm
masochism
in the aether I twist and turn
burning with need
burn, squirm, plead
in darkness greed, I stumble
humiliation the feast of demon
slither, slide inside pink blush
connecting with my depths
sexual stimulation, masturbation
hunger within heightened arousal
massages my imagination
until waves of pleasure overcome me
peak after peak as you mount my summit
push deep to know me
inside my sanctity break my sanity
stretched to my limits I succumb to the worst of you
swollen intentions breaks my pride
as...
burning with need
burn, squirm, plead
in darkness greed, I stumble
humiliation the feast of demon
slither, slide inside pink blush
connecting with my depths
sexual stimulation, masturbation
hunger within heightened arousal
massages my imagination
until waves of pleasure overcome me
peak after peak as you mount my summit
push deep to know me
inside my sanctity break my sanity
stretched to my limits I succumb to the worst of you
swollen intentions breaks my pride
as...
#lust
#erotic
#BDSM
62 reads
5 Comments
Pimp2ThaFuture04
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:38pm
Yesterday 12:38pm
Talkin' Sweet Flames (intro)
Hey there sweetie
It's nice to finally meet
if you're hungry
We can both be food for thought
it's my treat
I'm from wherever you're going
even if it's a foreign place
I will hold you closer in my arms
and we will teleport there safe
it's a mystery with me please don't be afraid your secrets are saved
together we can make waves
but babe I'mma need you
To be brave
Let down your hair, I got some time to spare for you to show me
a warrior like She-Ra with the power
of grayskull...
It's nice to finally meet
if you're hungry
We can both be food for thought
it's my treat
I'm from wherever you're going
even if it's a foreign place
I will hold you closer in my arms
and we will teleport there safe
it's a mystery with me please don't be afraid your secrets are saved
together we can make waves
but babe I'mma need you
To be brave
Let down your hair, I got some time to spare for you to show me
a warrior like She-Ra with the power
of grayskull...
#erotic
#lyrics
#lover #passion
#lover #passion
101 reads
11 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:50am
Yesterday 11:50am
Diving
#lust
#sex
#passion
118 reads
2 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:27am
Yesterday 8:27am
COMPLETING A JOURNEY
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming
92 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th Jul 2020 10:58pm
7th Jul 2020 10:58pm
Antisocial Distance
Today sucked
Out of gas
It's only Tuesday
Heading over to Yoko's
Sushi is good
Little corner table
Away from everyone
Antisocial Distance
Wanna join me ?
Dirty martinis
Extra olives
Sweet whispers
Flirty fun
Wear that short skirt I love
Yeah that one
You know me
Core values
Out of gas
It's only Tuesday
Heading over to Yoko's
Sushi is good
Little corner table
Away from everyone
Antisocial Distance
Wanna join me ?
Dirty martinis
Extra olives
Sweet whispers
Flirty fun
Wear that short skirt I love
Yeah that one
You know me
Core values
#culture
64 reads
20 Comments
Wh1skeySwagger
Swagger
Swagger
Poem Published
7th Jul 2020 9:56pm
7th Jul 2020 9:56pm
Sensation Play
Alertness heightened
Not afraid
Trembling with excitement
Immobile
Craving the next touch
Increased sensitivity
Panting shallow breaths
Aching to know what will be next
Total darkness
Inconceivable Pleasures
Orgasm approaches
Not for the faint of heart
Not afraid
Trembling with excitement
Immobile
Craving the next touch
Increased sensitivity
Panting shallow breaths
Aching to know what will be next
Total darkness
Inconceivable Pleasures
Orgasm approaches
Not for the faint of heart
#courage
#romantic
#erotic
#sensual
#passion
99 reads
8 Comments
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