Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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SweetOblivion
Poem Published
Today 2:07pm
Today 2:07pm
My Pillared Portico
#love
#lust
#sex
1 read
0 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:49am
Yesterday 00:49am
I Almost Saw Your Kiss
#lust
#FirstLove
112 reads
4 Comments
spacemod69
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:07am
Yesterday 00:07am
First Time Together
She lies there
Naked
Bare
Beautiful
The overhead light silhouettes every curvature of her body
Her hands run over her skin and reach out to him
She wants his touch
"Come to Me"
He approaches, sensual, soft kisses to her inside leg
His nose nuzzles across her mound, kisses down the other side
She moans in enjoyment
His hands move up, caressing her
Feeling her smoothness
His tongue discovering the undiscovered
Her mountains call to him
Wanting to be climbed
To be founded
He obliges, and the mountain men smile...
Naked
Bare
Beautiful
The overhead light silhouettes every curvature of her body
Her hands run over her skin and reach out to him
She wants his touch
"Come to Me"
He approaches, sensual, soft kisses to her inside leg
His nose nuzzles across her mound, kisses down the other side
She moans in enjoyment
His hands move up, caressing her
Feeling her smoothness
His tongue discovering the undiscovered
Her mountains call to him
Wanting to be climbed
To be founded
He obliges, and the mountain men smile...
#lover
#sensual
85 reads
3 Comments
Mtnclimr
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:16pm
Yesterday 8:16pm
Destined To Be
Were you pulled from part of me
Before I was conceived
Was there talk of you and I
Before we even breathed
Were we destined to collide
In spite of the people sea
Will we make the most of all thats been given
Special just to you and me
It's me and you together
I so always will believe
Before I was conceived
Was there talk of you and I
Before we even breathed
Were we destined to collide
In spite of the people sea
Will we make the most of all thats been given
Special just to you and me
It's me and you together
I so always will believe
#happiness
#love
#ILoveYou
#beauty
#respect
61 reads
1 Comment
Miss_Blue
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:40pm
Yesterday 6:40pm
Vodoo doll
I'm your cute vodoo doll
Why because I like a prick?
Get your mind out of the gutter
If you're thinkin like a rhymer
I could've meant a prick of life
Of love, of pleasurable pain
Perhaps a little masochistic?
Prick me, one more time again
And let me do your dirty work
Was that blonde a bitch to you ?
Served you cold black coffee?
Smiled, as you said Thank You
If you prick me in the hand
Let's watch how she screams
Her tray crashes to the floor
Now mop up your spilt cream
We could hang...
Why because I like a prick?
Get your mind out of the gutter
If you're thinkin like a rhymer
I could've meant a prick of life
Of love, of pleasurable pain
Perhaps a little masochistic?
Prick me, one more time again
And let me do your dirty work
Was that blonde a bitch to you ?
Served you cold black coffee?
Smiled, as you said Thank You
If you prick me in the hand
Let's watch how she screams
Her tray crashes to the floor
Now mop up your spilt cream
We could hang...
#dark
#sex
#erotic #temptation
#erotic #temptation
37 reads
5 Comments
PRIVATEPLACES
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:27pm
Yesterday 1:27pm
A MAN'S JOB IN BED
#sex
134 reads
10 Comments
spacemod69
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:23pm
Yesterday 1:23pm
Body Exploration
#sex
#porn
115 reads
0 Comments
Mtnclimr
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:11am
Yesterday 11:11am
My Vixen
Chills sent deep as your fingers
Dance across my skin
Eyes teasing me, toying with me
Driving me into urges
I have so longed for
I taste the poison of your lips
Paralyzing my control
My body lies dripping with your scent
As you impale yourself with me
Relentless is your ride to my surrender
Gripping me, ravaging me, taking all of me
The wickedness of your smile
leaves me spent, my body drained of it's essence
I drift to sleep as I watch you lick
Your lips in satisfaction
I belong only to you
Dance across my skin
Eyes teasing me, toying with me
Driving me into urges
I have so longed for
I taste the poison of your lips
Paralyzing my control
My body lies dripping with your scent
As you impale yourself with me
Relentless is your ride to my surrender
Gripping me, ravaging me, taking all of me
The wickedness of your smile
leaves me spent, my body drained of it's essence
I drift to sleep as I watch you lick
Your lips in satisfaction
I belong only to you
#lust
#erotic
#lover
#sensual
#passion
101 reads
3 Comments
shadow_starzzz
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:23am
Yesterday 9:23am
Vagarious
There’s nothing more fragile than me watching him as he unravels himself whilst buried deep inside my cunt with his rock hard cock as we sway to the unchained melody that tethers me to his prick, and he’s etched his name upon my lips, forevermore.
The way he fondles my subconscious in subtle ways makes my cunt ache, and I’m oft left with imagery of his cock violating me plastered all over my mind, and it’s no wonder the hunger emerges with a constant desire to be filled to the brim with him as I revel in the brutality of his funny but honest tell tale signs of his emerging...
The way he fondles my subconscious in subtle ways makes my cunt ache, and I’m oft left with imagery of his cock violating me plastered all over my mind, and it’s no wonder the hunger emerges with a constant desire to be filled to the brim with him as I revel in the brutality of his funny but honest tell tale signs of his emerging...
#sex
#funny
#honesty
55 reads
6 Comments
PandoraUnleashed
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:27am
Yesterday 8:27am
Pulsing In The Deep...
#lust
#erotic
#prose
#lover
#dirty
189 reads
24 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:43am
Yesterday 6:43am
Breaking My Fast (reveille)
#lust
#morning
98 reads
7 Comments
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