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Kinkpoet
Poem Published
Today 9:47am
Today 9:47am
The Care After
#BDSM
#spiritual
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
3 reads
0 Comments
MusicallyMrM
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2023 1:11pm
2nd Dec 2023 1:11pm
As Her Moon Dances........
Well, I wanna make love to you tonight
I can't wait 'til the mornin' has come
You know, I know now the time is just right
And straight into my arms you will run
And when you come, my heart will be waiting
To make sure that you're never alone
There and then all my dreams will come true, dear
There and then I will make you my own.............1
So vivrant, so vital-her soul shines
down upon me like a full moon, vibrant and bright
Her contention seems to
bring me to a full boil......my constitution hard,
the beast in me howls...
I can't wait 'til the mornin' has come
You know, I know now the time is just right
And straight into my arms you will run
And when you come, my heart will be waiting
To make sure that you're never alone
There and then all my dreams will come true, dear
There and then I will make you my own.............1
So vivrant, so vital-her soul shines
down upon me like a full moon, vibrant and bright
Her contention seems to
bring me to a full boil......my constitution hard,
the beast in me howls...
#sensual
#passion
#seductive
93 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:49pm
Yesterday 11:49pm
Lower
#lust
#sex
38 reads
0 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:16pm
Yesterday 6:16pm
WILD FINGERS and AN EVEN WILDER IMAGINATION
And how I fantasized,
that his wet and grooved tongue,
slithered between the valleys of my breasts and thighs.
Out from between his lips it slithered,
seeking a home for the love he could offer,
seeking shelter besides the cavity of his mouth.
In unison with the fantasy, I touched herself.
I pulled at my nipples,
that protruded like two love buttons,
aching forward for a mouth, a warm nose to cleave them.
My sugar sweetened the satin sheets beneath me,
and, like a river, my desire rippled forth.
And as I breathed heavily,...
that his wet and grooved tongue,
slithered between the valleys of my breasts and thighs.
Out from between his lips it slithered,
seeking a home for the love he could offer,
seeking shelter besides the cavity of his mouth.
In unison with the fantasy, I touched herself.
I pulled at my nipples,
that protruded like two love buttons,
aching forward for a mouth, a warm nose to cleave them.
My sugar sweetened the satin sheets beneath me,
and, like a river, my desire rippled forth.
And as I breathed heavily,...
#lust
#lover
#temptation
#passion
#orgasm
81 reads
1 Comment
Naajir
Poem Published
15th Aug 2015 6:11pm
15th Aug 2015 6:11pm
My Pusher
she pushed ink like
a crack dealer
my number one smack dealer
my soul's healer
my mind stealer
the heroine of my heart
shootin heroin straight into my veins
main line
takin the red eye
straight to my third eye
swellin my main vine
thick n full
she push n pulls...
erections
emotions...
ink spots irises
all i see is
beautiful black lotion
the most sensual poem-a-therapy
like Calgon
she takes me away..... ...
a crack dealer
my number one smack dealer
my soul's healer
my mind stealer
the heroine of my heart
shootin heroin straight into my veins
main line
takin the red eye
straight to my third eye
swellin my main vine
thick n full
she push n pulls...
erections
emotions...
ink spots irises
all i see is
beautiful black lotion
the most sensual poem-a-therapy
like Calgon
she takes me away..... ...
1448 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:27am
Yesterday 11:27am
When We Got To Our Friend's Art Studio
When
we got
to our friend's
art studio
and saw him painting
a portrait of this one
latest muse, she looked at me
with a smile like she had wanted
me to get naked and pose with her
in front of everyone right in that room.
we got
to our friend's
art studio
and saw him painting
a portrait of this one
latest muse, she looked at me
with a smile like she had wanted
me to get naked and pose with her
in front of everyone right in that room.
#beauty
#fiction
#dialogue
#art
#sensual
39 reads
0 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:32am
Yesterday 9:32am
MIDNIGHT SNACK
#women
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
75 reads
3 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:39am
Yesterday 6:39am
A MEMORY (NOT AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL)
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming
64 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:11am
Yesterday 2:11am
Let Herself Celebrate The New Year
Catherine went to
a local bar and had let
herself celebrate
the New Year. Then, she woke up
naked in some other bed.
a local bar and had let
herself celebrate
the New Year. Then, she woke up
naked in some other bed.
#alcohol
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
#NewYear
54 reads
2 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
5th Dec 2023 11:45pm
5th Dec 2023 11:45pm
I'm hers
#love
#lust
#sex #BDSM
#sex #BDSM
127 reads
6 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
5th Dec 2023 3:35pm
5th Dec 2023 3:35pm
Mosaic of Memories
In the mosaic of memories that haunt my heart,
each piece of canvas holds bold reds and silver
of my past excess.
In the dark cracks between colors my father
used me to break his vows to my mother.
When I came of age, I used that darkness to
destroy the trust of others.
Across this chaos of colors that is my life, your
steady hand appears and begins to arrange the pieces
to create patterns of love, intricate and warm.
Your eyes reflect my past and glisten with regret
at what I’ve lost, but still, you stay. ...
each piece of canvas holds bold reds and silver
of my past excess.
In the dark cracks between colors my father
used me to break his vows to my mother.
When I came of age, I used that darkness to
destroy the trust of others.
Across this chaos of colors that is my life, your
steady hand appears and begins to arrange the pieces
to create patterns of love, intricate and warm.
Your eyes reflect my past and glisten with regret
at what I’ve lost, but still, you stay. ...
#love
#regret
#art
84 reads
1 Comment
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
5th Dec 2023 7:05am
5th Dec 2023 7:05am
INVITATION ACCEPTED.....
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming
116 reads
2 Comments
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