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Poetic.drug
Poetic.drug
Poem Published
Today 6:39pm
Today 6:39pm
UPSTAIRS
Apr 2, 2014
Girl if you got me you really don't got to worry
Don't start slippin' cause I'll catch that in a hurry
You said you want a man to hold you down
Well damn you ain't got to worry I'll pin your ass to the ground
I don't got time to argue so imma slam your angry ass on the wall
Not to hard to hurt you but to make your emotions leak and you'll start to bawl
Then imma tell you how much I love you
But imma tell you that the attitude got to get up through
Then I'll tell your mixed emotion butt to go upstairs 1,2,3
Cause tonight we...
Girl if you got me you really don't got to worry
Don't start slippin' cause I'll catch that in a hurry
You said you want a man to hold you down
Well damn you ain't got to worry I'll pin your ass to the ground
I don't got time to argue so imma slam your angry ass on the wall
Not to hard to hurt you but to make your emotions leak and you'll start to bawl
Then imma tell you how much I love you
But imma tell you that the attitude got to get up through
Then I'll tell your mixed emotion butt to go upstairs 1,2,3
Cause tonight we...
#sex
#BDSM
#dirty
17 reads
1 Comment
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
Today 5:58pm
Today 5:58pm
Twisted Knickers
knickers in a twist
clumsily bends over chair
buttocks quivering
clumsily bends over chair
buttocks quivering
#BDSM
#senryu
15 reads
2 Comments
Baldwin
Poem Published
Today 4:38pm
Today 4:38pm
What Is It That You Want?
Do you want me like a puddle on the floor?
do you want me out of breath
and moaning,
like some lovesick, heart thumped schoolboy,
for the sight of you?
Do you want me jelly kneed,
and inarticulate, all stumbling over words
I want to wing your way?
Then turn on me, and turn again,
the awesome light that shines
within those piercing, dazzling baby blues
of yours,
and let me sigh away my days
in wanting more and more
of all the luminosity of you.
do you want me out of breath
and moaning,
like some lovesick, heart thumped schoolboy,
for the sight of you?
Do you want me jelly kneed,
and inarticulate, all stumbling over words
I want to wing your way?
Then turn on me, and turn again,
the awesome light that shines
within those piercing, dazzling baby blues
of yours,
and let me sigh away my days
in wanting more and more
of all the luminosity of you.
#crush
15 reads
5 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
Today 1:51pm
Today 1:51pm
Compliantly
The thigh touch always was simply a means.
I knew of your attraction and I played
This casual interaction. You heard screams
Inside your head that were strongly relayed
To deep within your pants, where something stirred;
I knew of your attraction and I played
This casual interaction. You heard screams
Inside your head that were strongly relayed
To deep within your pants, where something stirred;
#lust
46 reads
4 Comments
chobii_themechanic
Poem Published
Today 5:50am
Today 5:50am
finger love lust
Straight from a hot bath
Body feeling warm
Sunny rays destroy me wrath
Body & mind starts to wander
Feelings out of handle
I slowly embrace your body
Fingers trailing down
Body begins to tingle
Lust piercing perineal strap
Breathe starts to quicken
Louder pumps my heart
Nipples laugh, penis bold
Thinking erotic thoughts
My hand slides into your pants
Fingers glistening and wet
Stroking pleasureful your
Lovemaking cave
Percusses Orchestrated chants
Mingling Gräfenberg nerve ...
Body feeling warm
Sunny rays destroy me wrath
Body & mind starts to wander
Feelings out of handle
I slowly embrace your body
Fingers trailing down
Body begins to tingle
Lust piercing perineal strap
Breathe starts to quicken
Louder pumps my heart
Nipples laugh, penis bold
Thinking erotic thoughts
My hand slides into your pants
Fingers glistening and wet
Stroking pleasureful your
Lovemaking cave
Percusses Orchestrated chants
Mingling Gräfenberg nerve ...
#lust
#erotic
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
52 reads
1 Comment
chobii_themechanic
Poem Published
Today 5:29am
Today 5:29am
love is loud
this next poem was inspired by the beauty of women and the desire to make them feel loved.
COME AND LISTEN, FEEL MY HEART
LOUDER POPPING AT YOUR SIGHT
POPPING OUT WITH YOUR BIG SMILE
I FEEL THE URGE TO KISS YOU NOW
LOCK THE DOOR YOU'RE GOING DOWN
AND FEEL MY HEAT AGAINST YOUR BREAST
PULL MY HAIR AND KISS MY NECK
FEEL MY TONGUE STRIP YOUR LEGS
FEEL MY WARM LIPS SEIZE YOUR HIPS
LOVE IS BREATHING, LUST IS LIVING
EXPRESSING FEELINGS, JUST CARE GIVING
FEEL ME DEEP. DEEPNESS REACHED
IN AND OUT, IN AND...
COME AND LISTEN, FEEL MY HEART
LOUDER POPPING AT YOUR SIGHT
POPPING OUT WITH YOUR BIG SMILE
I FEEL THE URGE TO KISS YOU NOW
LOCK THE DOOR YOU'RE GOING DOWN
AND FEEL MY HEAT AGAINST YOUR BREAST
PULL MY HAIR AND KISS MY NECK
FEEL MY TONGUE STRIP YOUR LEGS
FEEL MY WARM LIPS SEIZE YOUR HIPS
LOVE IS BREATHING, LUST IS LIVING
EXPRESSING FEELINGS, JUST CARE GIVING
FEEL ME DEEP. DEEPNESS REACHED
IN AND OUT, IN AND...
#love
#kindness
#lust #emotions
#lust #emotions
60 reads
0 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:03pm
Yesterday 8:03pm
I prefer a women with hair
#sex
#limerick
#funny
54 reads
3 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:34pm
Yesterday 5:34pm
The Perfect Pound
#sex
86 reads
4 Comments
arortiz73
MTP
MTP
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:52pm
Yesterday 4:52pm
Structured Fire
Unzip my pants,
yep, they're on fire.
Zip my lips
'case I might be a liar.
It's time to let my hose
do the talking.
You've whet my desire,
and the entire housing block
is on fire.
Crotch it up to chance,
and a crossed red hot wire.
So what?
I've harnessed a rain cloud,
I'll never run out of water.
I HEAR YOU
plain and loud from
the upper-moist tower,
SCREAMING
for a fire chief, in pain
for a sire. I'm here in relief,
TO KEEP
you safe...
yep, they're on fire.
Zip my lips
'case I might be a liar.
It's time to let my hose
do the talking.
You've whet my desire,
and the entire housing block
is on fire.
Crotch it up to chance,
and a crossed red hot wire.
So what?
I've harnessed a rain cloud,
I'll never run out of water.
I HEAR YOU
plain and loud from
the upper-moist tower,
SCREAMING
for a fire chief, in pain
for a sire. I'm here in relief,
TO KEEP
you safe...
#fire
#water
48 reads
4 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:21pm
Yesterday 12:21pm
Santa's naughty list
#erotic
#BDSM
86 reads
2 Comments
WordsUnspoken
Poem Published
26th Nov 2020 11:29pm
26th Nov 2020 11:29pm
Carnivore
I sink my fingers deep
It's not like you're going to fuck me
It's a slow thrum
Of a song only I know
Humming inside myself
Wet and wanton and wilting
Is it because I've always been willing?
It's sticky and sweet and resistible
Smeared heat on my thighs
My own fingers squeezing my throat
The haze of pleasure flushing my cheeks
The practiced snap of my hips thrusting me over the edge and into infinitesimal oblivion
It's not like you're going to fuck me
It's not like you're going to fuck me
It's a slow thrum
Of a song only I know
Humming inside myself
Wet and wanton and wilting
Is it because I've always been willing?
It's sticky and sweet and resistible
Smeared heat on my thighs
My own fingers squeezing my throat
The haze of pleasure flushing my cheeks
The practiced snap of my hips thrusting me over the edge and into infinitesimal oblivion
It's not like you're going to fuck me
#honesty
47 reads
1 Comment
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
26th Nov 2020 9:36pm
26th Nov 2020 9:36pm
You just you
YOU JUST YOU
You, just you
Your eyes just draw me in, like still waters on a pool, glistening and inviting, my soul it feels their pull
Diving into their knowing depths, I'd love my soul to swim, let your look devour me, take me deep within
Let me in to see your heart, let my love light shine, searching every corner for a place that could be mine
Looking at your pretty smile, with lips that look so sweet, I dream of tasting, loves sweet wine, everytime we meet.
They look so inviting, my hunger for them...
You, just you
Your eyes just draw me in, like still waters on a pool, glistening and inviting, my soul it feels their pull
Diving into their knowing depths, I'd love my soul to swim, let your look devour me, take me deep within
Let me in to see your heart, let my love light shine, searching every corner for a place that could be mine
Looking at your pretty smile, with lips that look so sweet, I dream of tasting, loves sweet wine, everytime we meet.
They look so inviting, my hunger for them...
#love
#erotic
112 reads
7 Comments
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