Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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InvisibleGirl
Poem Published
Today 6:34pm
Today 6:34pm
Submissive Babygirl
#BDSM
#dirty
#sexy
10 reads
0 Comments
cunnilover
Poem Published
Today 5:41pm
Today 5:41pm
Chocolate Child
I felt her hair on my cheek and knew it was time for us to freak, you see we don’t make love and there is no cuddle, what this woman wants is for me to make her bubble.
“Explore my world with your strength and manliness, let me feel you deep in my uterus”
I’m not trying to be like her man, and don’t want her to act like my woman, but we need each other for these afternoons of erotic pleasure, these afternoons that we treasure. If you’ve got the room next door, then you must have heard our passion soar, with moans so deep that we’ve ripped sheets, and cum so thick,...
“Explore my world with your strength and manliness, let me feel you deep in my uterus”
I’m not trying to be like her man, and don’t want her to act like my woman, but we need each other for these afternoons of erotic pleasure, these afternoons that we treasure. If you’ve got the room next door, then you must have heard our passion soar, with moans so deep that we’ve ripped sheets, and cum so thick,...
#sex
#erotic
#dirty #temptation
#dirty #temptation
2 reads
0 Comments
MysticalRose
Poem Published
Today 10:01am
Today 10:01am
Deflower me
#lust
#sex
#erotic
#lover
#passion
91 reads
14 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Today 6:28am
Today 6:28am
LET EROS FLY
Let Eros fly over our bed
As we sleep together, naked,
Shoot his arrows in his fly-by
That reawaken heart and thigh,
Stimulating that age old urge
That bids a couple's bodies merge
In act of early morning love
While dawn breaks the night sky above.
As we sleep together, naked,
Shoot his arrows in his fly-by
That reawaken heart and thigh,
Stimulating that age old urge
That bids a couple's bodies merge
In act of early morning love
While dawn breaks the night sky above.
#lust
#sex
#erotic #rhyming
#erotic #rhyming
36 reads
1 Comment
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
Today 2:14am
Today 2:14am
BACCHANALIANISM
In the cabana
Mini fridge on the lānai
Decorating cues from Asia
Sipping lambic from a calabash—
Balsamic and basil blinis
A touch too basic, needs more acid
The flashy sin of samba
Hot like chili
Tommy Bahamas and bikinis
(We once spent time
Volunteering in clinics
In Namibia)
She’s been depending on cannabis
Taking acacia to be slim again
Coconut oil balms
Alms for what ails
Better them than mail it in—
Banish the thought!
--- ...
Mini fridge on the lānai
Decorating cues from Asia
Sipping lambic from a calabash—
Balsamic and basil blinis
A touch too basic, needs more acid
The flashy sin of samba
Hot like chili
Tommy Bahamas and bikinis
(We once spent time
Volunteering in clinics
In Namibia)
She’s been depending on cannabis
Taking acacia to be slim again
Coconut oil balms
Alms for what ails
Better them than mail it in—
Banish the thought!
--- ...
#sex
#identity
#politics
#alcohol
#drugs
29 reads
9 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:50pm
Yesterday 9:50pm
This Glowing Locus (2nd Draft)
Revulsions of your unmasked malevolence
give away your deceiving benevolence.
This bosom, the locus of my emotionality
glowing like a lantern when you’re beside me,
the very essence of my being in perfect rapport with you.
My flame and your shadow have a salacious rendezvous.
Pity not for when you see me dying to a flicker.
Your intuition knows to revive my flame already.
You know I betrayed you, and you’re deceivingly merciful. Why?
What’s this character to be so forgiving?
Clemency, desiring it I confess shames...
give away your deceiving benevolence.
This bosom, the locus of my emotionality
glowing like a lantern when you’re beside me,
the very essence of my being in perfect rapport with you.
My flame and your shadow have a salacious rendezvous.
Pity not for when you see me dying to a flicker.
Your intuition knows to revive my flame already.
You know I betrayed you, and you’re deceivingly merciful. Why?
What’s this character to be so forgiving?
Clemency, desiring it I confess shames...
#love
#relationships
#heartbroken
#sex
#betrayal
22 reads
0 Comments
InvisibleGirl
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:05pm
Yesterday 9:05pm
Personal f**k Toy
#sex
#dirty
136 reads
12 Comments
MusicallyMrM
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:08pm
Yesterday 6:08pm
St. Augustine....2/21/19
..at the dawning
of a new day
across the horizon lies St. Augustine,
there across the bay
the peace and serenity
is broken by the cannon's volley.
It's recoil rotates the earth
deep inside my loins, I feel
the birth
of my passionate longings
for you
it's power like that of
the raging waters of Niagara
crashing into the river's basin
I hasten
as my eyes close tightly
in remembrance of a night
that we first made love.....
…floating along the frothy waters, ...
of a new day
across the horizon lies St. Augustine,
there across the bay
the peace and serenity
is broken by the cannon's volley.
It's recoil rotates the earth
deep inside my loins, I feel
the birth
of my passionate longings
for you
it's power like that of
the raging waters of Niagara
crashing into the river's basin
I hasten
as my eyes close tightly
in remembrance of a night
that we first made love.....
…floating along the frothy waters, ...
#nature
#sensual
31 reads
1 Comment
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:27pm
Yesterday 5:27pm
sWORDPLAY
Don't hurt nobody with that"
She cautioned me,
So being a gentleman
I asked if she had a sheath
I could put it in
She cautioned me,
So being a gentleman
I asked if she had a sheath
I could put it in
#erotic
#funny
54 reads
14 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:26pm
Yesterday 5:26pm
What's on the Menu
What's on the Menu
Hunger waits
Until the stillness.
Each taste
Reviewed
And catelogued.
Salt
Sweat
Sweet
Silt
Sensation
Cat-
Elogued.
Waiting.
And hungry.
Hunger waits
Until the stillness.
Each taste
Reviewed
And catelogued.
Salt
Sweat
Sweet
Silt
Sensation
Cat-
Elogued.
Waiting.
And hungry.
#sensual
#temptation
#passion
49 reads
0 Comments
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