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Poem Published
Today 3:41am
Today 3:41am
MY Cummmming Mind
#erotic
#sensual
#sexy #temptation
#sexy #temptation
15 reads
1 Comment
Sex_on_the_Joe
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:05am
Yesterday 00:05am
Dick Tease
There is this girl I do love so
I haven't the balls to let her know
She's just my type but out my league
She flaunts her body without fatigue
She makes her money wee the hour
And covers her nipples via a flower
She dances in unison upon a stage
Her partner's a pole within a cage
Her titties are huge, round and firm
Just like my john who begins to squirm
Her ass is enormous riding my lap
She goes up and down making it clap
I slip her a twenty, my number's inside
As I head on home enjoying my ride
I haven't the balls to let her know
She's just my type but out my league
She flaunts her body without fatigue
She makes her money wee the hour
And covers her nipples via a flower
She dances in unison upon a stage
Her partner's a pole within a cage
Her titties are huge, round and firm
Just like my john who begins to squirm
Her ass is enormous riding my lap
She goes up and down making it clap
I slip her a twenty, my number's inside
As I head on home enjoying my ride
#lust
#sensual
#temptation
26 reads
2 Comments
ReggiePoet
Reggie
Reggie
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:51pm
Yesterday 11:51pm
Thy Willing Servant
For M'lady, a quatern
The lady doth protest too much
Methinks—behold! Her thighs are spread!
She bids my wand’ring tongue to touch
Her lovely, moistened maidenhead!
A virgin smile, doth needs betray
The lady doth protest too much
Her hymen craves my lip’s foreplay
A grand display, indeed. Nonesuch!
With tongue, and lips, and teeth, I'll clutch
And kneed her holy treasured bud
The lady doth protest too much
This night, her knight, I'll stand at stud!
Thy willing servant, ever keen
To serve a kiss with...
The lady doth protest too much
Methinks—behold! Her thighs are spread!
She bids my wand’ring tongue to touch
Her lovely, moistened maidenhead!
A virgin smile, doth needs betray
The lady doth protest too much
Her hymen craves my lip’s foreplay
A grand display, indeed. Nonesuch!
With tongue, and lips, and teeth, I'll clutch
And kneed her holy treasured bud
The lady doth protest too much
This night, her knight, I'll stand at stud!
Thy willing servant, ever keen
To serve a kiss with...
#sex
#rhyming
16 reads
2 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:56pm
Yesterday 9:56pm
Red Wine
Red wine
On my palate
A soft scent
Of lilac
From a candle
As I
Indulge
In the
Sensual
Ambrosia
Flavor
Of your
Intimacy
I savor
The taste
Rolling off your
Nipples
Down
To your navel
I stick my tongue
In the pool
Then drink
Till it’s empty
Yet to get my fill
I Descend
To the depths
Devour
The crest
Of a female
So blessed
Now
Let me bless
Your elegance
With my skill ...
On my palate
A soft scent
Of lilac
From a candle
As I
Indulge
In the
Sensual
Ambrosia
Flavor
Of your
Intimacy
I savor
The taste
Rolling off your
Nipples
Down
To your navel
I stick my tongue
In the pool
Then drink
Till it’s empty
Yet to get my fill
I Descend
To the depths
Devour
The crest
Of a female
So blessed
Now
Let me bless
Your elegance
With my skill ...
#erotic
#alcohol
#tobacco
#sensual
#crush
28 reads
11 Comments
2ndPlanetFrmTheSun
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:05pm
Yesterday 9:05pm
Moon
She is an interesting one
innocent
yet hesitant of naughty fun
She is analytical, pulling all apart at the seam
To serve is her deepest desire
she wants to fulfill your dreams
To be a part of something,
preferably a masters wish
gives her mind a break,
She binds us in expectation
She is critical to the core
but deep down inside
she wants to be a whore
She holds back the parts of me
that you want so bad
to let loose and show you
the best thoughts I've ever had
But please,...
innocent
yet hesitant of naughty fun
She is analytical, pulling all apart at the seam
To serve is her deepest desire
she wants to fulfill your dreams
To be a part of something,
preferably a masters wish
gives her mind a break,
She binds us in expectation
She is critical to the core
but deep down inside
she wants to be a whore
She holds back the parts of me
that you want so bad
to let loose and show you
the best thoughts I've ever had
But please,...
#sex
#BDSM
26 reads
0 Comments
DaVinci_07
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:58pm
Yesterday 5:58pm
Commute
On my commute,
music playing, hot wake-up in a cup.
"You shook me all night long" - AC/DC.
Makes me think back to her.
Met at a club, cocktails flowing.
For once, I was smooth.
She let me make a move.
Smile comes to my lips.
Right hand adjusts,
left hand on the wheel.
Feeling good, wind flowing.
Subliminal finger check,
her scent no longer.
Crap, was that a red light!
Music turned down.
Throat dry, cup to lips.
music playing, hot wake-up in a cup.
"You shook me all night long" - AC/DC.
Makes me think back to her.
Met at a club, cocktails flowing.
For once, I was smooth.
She let me make a move.
Smile comes to my lips.
Right hand adjusts,
left hand on the wheel.
Feeling good, wind flowing.
Subliminal finger check,
her scent no longer.
Crap, was that a red light!
Music turned down.
Throat dry, cup to lips.
#happiness
#anxiety
#lust #erotic
#lust #erotic
29 reads
5 Comments
hackerstacker
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:45pm
Yesterday 4:45pm
Strip and dance
Strip and dance
In this i see you standing there smiling at me as I sit in my chair music in the back ground playing was a song by David Rose called the stripper. As you slowly start to dance running your hands along your thighs sexually in-bracing your full rounded breast. undoing one button at a time dropping it to the floor you bend over pull you skirt off as well then your panties as you turn still bent over showing me your sweet firm ass touching your toes your pussy gives me a big smile.
Now am aroused walking toward me you sit and give me a lap dance rubbing your...
In this i see you standing there smiling at me as I sit in my chair music in the back ground playing was a song by David Rose called the stripper. As you slowly start to dance running your hands along your thighs sexually in-bracing your full rounded breast. undoing one button at a time dropping it to the floor you bend over pull you skirt off as well then your panties as you turn still bent over showing me your sweet firm ass touching your toes your pussy gives me a big smile.
Now am aroused walking toward me you sit and give me a lap dance rubbing your...
#dance
#sensual
28 reads
0 Comments
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:39pm
Yesterday 4:39pm
Tresses
Darkest temptation
cascading downward
female mystique
captivating me again
Making me long
thus
to pull my fingers
through their silkiness
Leaning in close
breathing in fully
the deep fragrance
of lavender seduction
Before pull it out
a horse hair brush
starting at the top
all the way to the end
As you moan
ever so soft
savoring the moment
before the first swat
cascading downward
female mystique
captivating me again
Making me long
thus
to pull my fingers
through their silkiness
Leaning in close
breathing in fully
the deep fragrance
of lavender seduction
Before pull it out
a horse hair brush
starting at the top
all the way to the end
As you moan
ever so soft
savoring the moment
before the first swat
#lesbian
#erotic
#BDSM
63 reads
23 Comments
CHOCOLATEDROP
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:26pm
Yesterday 4:26pm
LYING IN BED NAKED AND ANTICIPATING..........
#lust
#erotic
#sensual
90 reads
4 Comments
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