Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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gardenlover
Poem Published
Today 9:27am
Today 9:27am
In Praise of Working Girls
#lust
#sex
#erotic
5 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Today 6:39am
Today 6:39am
TAKING THE PLUNGE
#marriage
#beach
#rhyming #sensual
#rhyming #sensual
22 reads
0 Comments
MusicallyMrM
Poem Published
Today 00:44am
Today 00:44am
Neo-Woulf: The Dark Seduction
#lust
#sex
#dreams
73 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:31pm
Yesterday 10:31pm
YOUR ONE IN A MILLON
#happiness
#love
#strength
#courage
#admiration
101 reads
0 Comments
souladareatease
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:27pm
Yesterday 6:27pm
Bag Of Bones
Fold Winters breath between hidden valley
Beats break like no other
across the literal back
We rode the eventide, smoke,sin & skin
lost indentations that no longer remain
pierce the lonely mind
solemn statues, ornament objects
shine
to shine in the dark with widening iris
shook across hyper'ed flesh, every bump rises
The beast of two backs, painted artisan aplomb
kiss me empty with once-upon-a-time-
loss
The cretin emerges swallowed in sweat
a token of appreciation
where Mary...
Beats break like no other
across the literal back
We rode the eventide, smoke,sin & skin
lost indentations that no longer remain
pierce the lonely mind
solemn statues, ornament objects
shine
to shine in the dark with widening iris
shook across hyper'ed flesh, every bump rises
The beast of two backs, painted artisan aplomb
kiss me empty with once-upon-a-time-
loss
The cretin emerges swallowed in sweat
a token of appreciation
where Mary...
#LifeCycle
60 reads
0 Comments
Kiondria1
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:27am
Yesterday 4:27am
Memory
I can't see, for where I am there is no light. Struggling to find air, my breathing begins to die down...What am I supposed to do when being in this state of mind is having me in a panic? The beating of your heart and the look in your eyes both becomes clear, and my voracious appetite for becomes very contagious. The taste of your lips, the feel of your touch, and the smell of your fragrance forced me into insanity. You whispered in my ear soft words that even made the most forbidden parts of my body arise in shock. Your tongue traveled freely around the world of my skin, having me gasping...
#sensual
89 reads
0 Comments
again
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:02am
Yesterday 4:02am
when night falls
when night falls
when night falls
again remembers
all his life's important
lonely night falls
Now what of a fall
his doesn't stand
so he strokes his head
with his hand
hoping the lower one will stand
and walk over to his hand
[i]but alas nothing lke that now happens
so this winter no fall
nothing like now a tap water's fall
hear those tip tap sounds
and
enjoy
again doesn't now fall
so why now cumm here
after all[/i]
when night falls
again remembers
all his life's important
lonely night falls
Now what of a fall
his doesn't stand
so he strokes his head
with his hand
hoping the lower one will stand
and walk over to his hand
[i]but alas nothing lke that now happens
so this winter no fall
nothing like now a tap water's fall
hear those tip tap sounds
and
enjoy
again doesn't now fall
so why now cumm here
after all[/i]
#lust
#erotic
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
83 reads
3 Comments
Absence
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:21am
Yesterday 1:21am
Milk
#lust
#erotic
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
171 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
16th Nov 2019 2:31pm
16th Nov 2019 2:31pm
CAPTURE BY THE NIGHT
#lust
#sensual
#sexy
#temptation
#passion
202 reads
6 Comments
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