Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Today 1:00am
Today 1:00am
Very bad girl
#erotic
#BDSM
#sexy
39 reads
4 Comments
4Her411
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:35pm
Yesterday 10:35pm
my first mate
my first mate
An air of musk in the air
a reminder of my first taste
of her sweet feminine cove
the power inside her swells
the aroma makes my heart race
her natural aroma and spice
to run my tongue along the crease of her thigh
piquancy provocative a wonderful appetizer
to move to split her divide
to move her oceans tide
beyond the breakers deepened intimacy
to unfurl her mainsail to raise the mast
to open ocean to deeper water her and I
a sounding to find the bottom
moan and sighs ebbs and flows
till we...
An air of musk in the air
a reminder of my first taste
of her sweet feminine cove
the power inside her swells
the aroma makes my heart race
her natural aroma and spice
to run my tongue along the crease of her thigh
piquancy provocative a wonderful appetizer
to move to split her divide
to move her oceans tide
beyond the breakers deepened intimacy
to unfurl her mainsail to raise the mast
to open ocean to deeper water her and I
a sounding to find the bottom
moan and sighs ebbs and flows
till we...
#romantic
#FirstLove
#sensual
#passion
#orgasm
21 reads
3 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:51pm
Yesterday 3:51pm
Joys of Imperfection
You speak of imperfections
to me a pleasing blemish worthy of knowing.
Your hand shelters the childhood wound that bent
perfect beauty into something more lovely.
I pull your hand away and smile into your hurt eyes.
The scar on your cheek is now a fractured bloom
pushing frantically against the harshness of past hurts.
Your beauty courses up thorough frozen soil to bring new life.
Let me kiss your broken petals and rest my lips against your cheek.
My fingers feel the raised edges of your scar as
imperfect lips wrap me in...
to me a pleasing blemish worthy of knowing.
Your hand shelters the childhood wound that bent
perfect beauty into something more lovely.
I pull your hand away and smile into your hurt eyes.
The scar on your cheek is now a fractured bloom
pushing frantically against the harshness of past hurts.
Your beauty courses up thorough frozen soil to bring new life.
Let me kiss your broken petals and rest my lips against your cheek.
My fingers feel the raised edges of your scar as
imperfect lips wrap me in...
#love
#lust
#healing #hurt
#healing #hurt
27 reads
4 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:53pm
Yesterday 12:53pm
Kidnapped
#sex
#erotic
#BDSM
49 reads
10 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:25pm
Yesterday 12:25pm
More .....
There's always more I could say
I hesitate
You want it as much as I want to give it
Yet
I hesitate
Here i can speak freely
The dark opens into light
Good Morning he says
No hesitation ever
I hesitate
You want it as much as I want to give it
Yet
I hesitate
Here i can speak freely
The dark opens into light
Good Morning he says
No hesitation ever
#love
#erotic
#spiritual
#lover
#art
45 reads
10 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:03pm
Yesterday 12:03pm
As If in a Dream
#love
#sex
#dreams
#death
#lover
52 reads
3 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:46am
Yesterday 9:46am
Trail Riding
#lust
#sex
#passion #orgasm
#passion #orgasm
47 reads
4 Comments
Just_Writing
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:57am
Yesterday 8:57am
Cherry Wood
#erotic
#lover
#orgasm
83 reads
14 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:17am
Yesterday 1:17am
If dreams could just come true
#love
#hope
#dreams
66 reads
4 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2021 11:50pm
22nd Jun 2021 11:50pm
CUNNILINGUS
#women
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
51 reads
16 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2021 2:31pm
22nd Jun 2021 2:31pm
Two Virgins
#sex
#limerick
46 reads
2 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2021 11:56am
22nd Jun 2021 11:56am
Fairytale with a twist
#dreams
#funny
51 reads
2 Comments
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