Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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The awakening

#lust
#sex
#dreams
7 reads
4 Comments
Curious Wine

#dark
#evil
#UnrequitedLove
#horror
#seductive
5 reads
0 Comments
Would U Treat Me So Bad

#dark
#gothic
#nature #ForbiddenLove
#nature #ForbiddenLove
10 reads
0 Comments
Just Like Heaven
Just like heaven I am so very drawn to you
Under your spell it's intoxicatingly fresh & new
Sensual feelings flood through my every thought
Tonight & every night you all I've ever sought.
Listening to your words whispered into my ears
Igniting raging fires for you sound so very sincere
Kneeling before you I will start to aim to please
Everything and anything to put you at total ease.
Heaven has sent you on special loan for me
Every sense in your body I will try to set free
As kisses and touches your body I have tweaked ...
Under your spell it's intoxicatingly fresh & new
Sensual feelings flood through my every thought
Tonight & every night you all I've ever sought.
Listening to your words whispered into my ears
Igniting raging fires for you sound so very sincere
Kneeling before you I will start to aim to please
Everything and anything to put you at total ease.
Heaven has sent you on special loan for me
Every sense in your body I will try to set free
As kisses and touches your body I have tweaked ...
#happiness
#love
#admiration #emotions
#admiration #emotions
49 reads
3 Comments
Though Shalt Not Want...

#lust
#dreams
#spiritual #passion
#spiritual #passion
29 reads
2 Comments
The Greatest

#sex
#erotic
#sensual #sexy
#sensual #sexy
34 reads
1 Comment
Dream time Queen

#love
#hope
#dreams
28 reads
2 Comments
Last Night
Softly he asked, "have you ever tried?"
Hesitantly I turned to him
and discovered our new playtime
One after the other
Gasping from the shock of each slap
Aching, tensing
Shifting forwards and back
My racing heart echoes
Each stinging slap building
Aching need
Tears of ecstasy in my eyes
Then my lovers breath
upon my neck
Release the passionate delight
of my anticipation
Blissful quaking drips like honey
Nourished pleasure
My body blushed
Hesitantly I turned to him
and discovered our new playtime
One after the other
Gasping from the shock of each slap
Aching, tensing
Shifting forwards and back
My racing heart echoes
Each stinging slap building
Aching need
Tears of ecstasy in my eyes
Then my lovers breath
upon my neck
Release the passionate delight
of my anticipation
Blissful quaking drips like honey
Nourished pleasure
My body blushed
#erotic
#sexy
#orgasm
217 reads
12 Comments
Match Up
Roses can often be red
as violets are often blue.
How about I give you head
and you go down on me too.
Or let's switch it up instead
and do what lover's love to do.
as violets are often blue.
How about I give you head
and you go down on me too.
Or let's switch it up instead
and do what lover's love to do.
#lover
#sexy
#passion #seductive
#passion #seductive
70 reads
0 Comments
Favourites

#threesome
#sexy
39 reads
1 Comment
A Weird One.....Conversation In Haiku

#dark
#gothic
#scary
#UnrequitedLove
#passion
25 reads
0 Comments
Upon These Fingers
Upon................
Look at me dear look
Into the ah secret of my eyes
U are a mirror image upon
These Fingers of dear mine
Thank u for your consideration
Of the strength of my tips
And these the understanding of
My fingers your g-spot ah grips
Upon slick and off slick
Soothingly passing by
Coming back leaving even
Returning to ease the cry
Tasting my kindness as
This I eyely to u ah tell
Rubbing the swiftness of
This funny pussy in our excel
...
Look at me dear look
Into the ah secret of my eyes
U are a mirror image upon
These Fingers of dear mine
Thank u for your consideration
Of the strength of my tips
And these the understanding of
My fingers your g-spot ah grips
Upon slick and off slick
Soothingly passing by
Coming back leaving even
Returning to ease the cry
Tasting my kindness as
This I eyely to u ah tell
Rubbing the swiftness of
This funny pussy in our excel
...
#lust
#dirty
#sensual
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
43 reads
0 Comments
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