Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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King_Seraphiel
Joshua Jamal
Joshua Jamal
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:41am
Yesterday 00:41am
Honey
#love
#romantic
#wife
80 reads
0 Comments
CoffeeMan_YQX
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:46pm
Yesterday 11:46pm
Celestial
Hair as black as space
Eyes as bright as the sun
As beautiful as a nebula
Like Unicron, I want to eat the two planets that hang in your solar system
Wanting to pilot my shuttle through your worm hole
Give you a big bang
Our galaxies collide
Make your earth quake
Until we both explode in a supernova
Eyes as bright as the sun
As beautiful as a nebula
Like Unicron, I want to eat the two planets that hang in your solar system
Wanting to pilot my shuttle through your worm hole
Give you a big bang
Our galaxies collide
Make your earth quake
Until we both explode in a supernova
#erotic
#lover
#orgasm
#passion
#sex
85 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:56pm
Yesterday 10:56pm
Special gift from her
#erotic
#lust
#seductive #sexy
#seductive #sexy
80 reads
0 Comments
Artavious25
Taypen99
Taypen99
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:11pm
Yesterday 8:11pm
Sweeter
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#porn
#sex
104 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:40pm
Yesterday 7:40pm
No Longer In Todd's Vocabulary
Indecent
is no longer in Todd's
vocabulary when Sabrina's
enticing perfume's like an aphrodisiac
strong enough to make him strip down and
get it on with his next
door neighbor.
is no longer in Todd's
vocabulary when Sabrina's
enticing perfume's like an aphrodisiac
strong enough to make him strip down and
get it on with his next
door neighbor.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#lover
#sex
42 reads
0 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:47pm
Yesterday 2:47pm
Among Ancestors
In the quiet of rooms of ancestors, she lay naked face down,
a conduit between generations, breathing in the air
captured by walls her grandfather built
before her own mother's birth. Her legs dangled
silky smooth. They gleamed with a doll-like grace.
The boy standing next to the bed remembers the
knitting needles his grandmother once held.
Her body is an hourglass made of porcelain,
a figurine still in silent dance. Her back curves
gracefully, like a sand dune shaped by the wind,
tapering from her broad shoulders made strong...
a conduit between generations, breathing in the air
captured by walls her grandfather built
before her own mother's birth. Her legs dangled
silky smooth. They gleamed with a doll-like grace.
The boy standing next to the bed remembers the
knitting needles his grandmother once held.
Her body is an hourglass made of porcelain,
a figurine still in silent dance. Her back curves
gracefully, like a sand dune shaped by the wind,
tapering from her broad shoulders made strong...
#beauty
#family
#FirstLove #memories
#FirstLove #memories
76 reads
8 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:09am
Yesterday 6:09am
IN HER DIRECTION
#erotic
#sex
114 reads
0 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 5:59pm
15th Sep 2024 5:59pm
My Kiss
My kiss punctuates the rhythm of
silence between us, given as a deliberate
offering wrapped in the mystery of
not knowing what meaning you find
in my lips pressed to you.
While we linger in this stillness
the warm morning dew of
anticipation wets me.
My lips whisper their wish for you
as they part to receive
the tip of your tongue.
silence between us, given as a deliberate
offering wrapped in the mystery of
not knowing what meaning you find
in my lips pressed to you.
While we linger in this stillness
the warm morning dew of
anticipation wets me.
My lips whisper their wish for you
as they part to receive
the tip of your tongue.
#FallingInLove
#lust
#romantic
131 reads
3 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 8:15am
15th Sep 2024 8:15am
A Spin of Grin
Back from a business trip.
I want to trip on psychedelic
Erotic. Nothing overly dramatic
Just you. There. Baring a
Barely there.
You – There. On the table top
Grinning. Spinning upon a heel
Until
I
feel the desire to say:
Stop.
Putting
You
on
Top
Never-ever
Stop
***
C/B
BD
SM
***
I want to trip on psychedelic
Erotic. Nothing overly dramatic
Just you. There. Baring a
Barely there.
You – There. On the table top
Grinning. Spinning upon a heel
Until
I
feel the desire to say:
Stop.
Putting
You
on
Top
Never-ever
Stop
***
C/B
BD
SM
***
#shadows
72 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 2:17am
15th Sep 2024 2:17am
Well? Don't You Want To Get It On With Me?
Kate saw Eric watching her.
She took off her top and jeans.
Then, she smiled at him.
She took off her top and jeans.
Then, she smiled at him.
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
111 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 10:48pm
14th Sep 2024 10:48pm
Angel or Demon
#BDSM
#dirty
#passion
#sex
#temptation
104 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 6:57pm
14th Sep 2024 6:57pm
When Felicity Got That One Tee Shirt For Her Birthday
When Felicity
got that one tee shirt for her
birthday, she thought it
was funny. But then, she woke
naked and on top of Shawn.
got that one tee shirt for her
birthday, she thought it
was funny. But then, she woke
naked and on top of Shawn.
#birthday
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#tanka
55 reads
2 Comments
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