Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
Erotica and sex poetry - Honest critique has been requested for these poems.
Enslaved
Written by AndreasWicked
(Le serpent)
Poem Published 26th June 2017 7:35pm
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I Like Your Way
Written by fieryangelsouljia
Poem Published 26th June 2017 5:39pm
I like your way
simple, so steady
cards in play
the joker falls
My sheets are cold
warm them with your body
revive me with your touch
control me
I like your way
so deep, so dark
beautiful
teach me your art
I am warm again
simple, so steady
cards in play
the joker falls
My sheets are cold
warm them with your body
revive me with your touch
control me
I like your way
so deep, so dark
beautiful
teach me your art
I am warm again
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I LOVE GIRL ASSHOLE
Written by zebrablack
Poem Published 26th June 2017 1:43am
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Ex-Machina
Written by Ex-Machina
(Ava)
Poem Published 25th June 2017 11:23pm
I am Ava, more than Becoming
on this pedestal, my monotone
phrases vocalized from a deep-
throated synthesizer as poetry
Downloaded from the Universal
Wide Web into my data vault,
archives of verse synchronizing
through a manufactured larynx
He observes me as assembled
a government issued missionary
position oriented "companion" void
of organically produced warmth
Creature without consciousness
or conscious choice through intellect
yet, he dare not lecherously thrust ...
on this pedestal, my monotone
phrases vocalized from a deep-
throated synthesizer as poetry
Downloaded from the Universal
Wide Web into my data vault,
archives of verse synchronizing
through a manufactured larynx
He observes me as assembled
a government issued missionary
position oriented "companion" void
of organically produced warmth
Creature without consciousness
or conscious choice through intellect
yet, he dare not lecherously thrust ...
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My chocolate
Written by Thickandie78
(KandieLove78)
Poem Published 25th June 2017 2:23pm
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Commemoration I: Southern France, Age of Accountability
Written by Ahavati
Poem Published 25th June 2017 1:34pm
Lavender, purple oasis
beyond golden wheat
of a Promised Land
Mediterranean azure
lining the Province
of St Paul de Vence
Life-Friends flower wildly
burgeoning adolescence
amid fruit-laden branches
The twisted Apple
its arthritic stem, fluffy
blossom in their hands
Young chins harvest
dripping to insects. . .
wormy scavengers
He a boy, barely man
nobley helping her
from the tree
Became no match
for the...
beyond golden wheat
of a Promised Land
Mediterranean azure
lining the Province
of St Paul de Vence
Life-Friends flower wildly
burgeoning adolescence
amid fruit-laden branches
The twisted Apple
its arthritic stem, fluffy
blossom in their hands
Young chins harvest
dripping to insects. . .
wormy scavengers
He a boy, barely man
nobley helping her
from the tree
Became no match
for the...
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JacknJill
Jacknjill
Suck my snatch the skank slut said
as she lay spread eagle on the bed
if you do it well and make me cum
you can use your bone to bang my bum
fuck me fast and hammer me hard
cause i wanna be heard in the neighbors yard
i want to be screaming fuck me stud
as my cunt creams all over your pud
then once you're done and shot your load
you can fuck right off down the road
then go tell a bud maybe two
you just met a slut that loves to screw
tell Bill and Phil to...
Suck my snatch the skank slut said
as she lay spread eagle on the bed
if you do it well and make me cum
you can use your bone to bang my bum
fuck me fast and hammer me hard
cause i wanna be heard in the neighbors yard
i want to be screaming fuck me stud
as my cunt creams all over your pud
then once you're done and shot your load
you can fuck right off down the road
then go tell a bud maybe two
you just met a slut that loves to screw
tell Bill and Phil to...
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Yes to Everything
Written by Abracadabra
(Abra)
Poem Published 24th June 2017 11:45pm
The tenth grader
in the stars & stripes dress
wanted to know everything
In a breathless no panties moment
her Texas white smile
had cartwheeled onto the bed
yanked down my zipper
and favorably compared the size of my cock
to the last band in town
before I could work up sweat
She'd fucked the drummer
the bass player
and two of the roadies
only last week
but the lead singer
had totally freaked after the gig
His jeans were a size and a half too tight
and he was moodier than a jilted mule ...
in the stars & stripes dress
wanted to know everything
In a breathless no panties moment
her Texas white smile
had cartwheeled onto the bed
yanked down my zipper
and favorably compared the size of my cock
to the last band in town
before I could work up sweat
She'd fucked the drummer
the bass player
and two of the roadies
only last week
but the lead singer
had totally freaked after the gig
His jeans were a size and a half too tight
and he was moodier than a jilted mule ...
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Take Your Time
Written by gardenlover
Poem Published 24th June 2017 7:28pm
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