Erotic Poems by Top Critiquers
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Erotica and sex poetry
Poems written by Top Critiquers
I could be a better boyfriend than him

#lust
#lesbian
#erotic
#bisexual
#crush
87 reads
14 Comments
Galaxy of Ecstasy
His eyes were an icy,
laser greenish blue,
with the power
to freeze her every sadness.
Her eyes, an emerald jade,
sought his soul,
with the power to intoxicate his soul,
with a single glance.
She possessed a passion so deep,
he inhaled her fiery beauty,
sparking an eternal fire,
In the loins of his existence.
Touching sweetly scorches
their ferocious need.
His smooth hard architecture,
towered all over her red juicy heart.
She gnawed on his hardened need,
to enter, ...
laser greenish blue,
with the power
to freeze her every sadness.
Her eyes, an emerald jade,
sought his soul,
with the power to intoxicate his soul,
with a single glance.
She possessed a passion so deep,
he inhaled her fiery beauty,
sparking an eternal fire,
In the loins of his existence.
Touching sweetly scorches
their ferocious need.
His smooth hard architecture,
towered all over her red juicy heart.
She gnawed on his hardened need,
to enter, ...
#lust
#sex
#passion
112 reads
4 Comments
Goddess in Red
Goddess over intuition,
seer of need behold your daughter
I am in the serpent's den with Cain
corrupt the vision
and turn the sea that is against me
so that I may rise
ancient, awoken rudely I writhe in pain
I am rudely treated
I excel on the mists
I am traceless
I conjure the truth, oh magic man
contest not my honesty and power
gripping desire disturbs my faith
I am keeper of dreams and delusions
it is with great pleasure I come forth to greet you
in the depths where you reside
...
seer of need behold your daughter
I am in the serpent's den with Cain
corrupt the vision
and turn the sea that is against me
so that I may rise
ancient, awoken rudely I writhe in pain
I am rudely treated
I excel on the mists
I am traceless
I conjure the truth, oh magic man
contest not my honesty and power
gripping desire disturbs my faith
I am keeper of dreams and delusions
it is with great pleasure I come forth to greet you
in the depths where you reside
...
#lust
#pagan
#magic
72 reads
3 Comments
On the bed
Sensual dreams
lips still dry
pillow tucked between legs
lips still dry
pillow tucked between legs
#love
#erotic
#haiku
156 reads
22 Comments
Fidelio
Proem:
Cannot hold you back
Loathe to let you go
Throw your violent hips
Bucking to and fro
On your stony shoals
Siren sinking ships
Spell apocalypse
With your fingertips
..
First Act:
All Things Pass Through Midnight
With Trepidatious Strides,
Rain glides down the paned
Glass, liquid
Light,
Pooled
Into each
Drop, beneath it’s
Tensile
Skin,
Touching opaquely
Into various shades ...
Cannot hold you back
Loathe to let you go
Throw your violent hips
Bucking to and fro
On your stony shoals
Siren sinking ships
Spell apocalypse
With your fingertips
..
First Act:
All Things Pass Through Midnight
With Trepidatious Strides,
Rain glides down the paned
Glass, liquid
Light,
Pooled
Into each
Drop, beneath it’s
Tensile
Skin,
Touching opaquely
Into various shades ...
#erotic
#night
#LifeGoals
#admiration
#passion
1106 reads
26 Comments
You Never React
You don't react
I say lewd and lascivious things
I can't help myself, I don’t want help
Other than you
Who could I say those things to ?
Misfits
Renegades
Sexual Outlaws
That's a start
Do you agree ?
Waiting
Always wanting
Desire deep cuts to the heart
Coagulation
I say lewd and lascivious things
I can't help myself, I don’t want help
Other than you
Who could I say those things to ?
Misfits
Renegades
Sexual Outlaws
That's a start
Do you agree ?
Waiting
Always wanting
Desire deep cuts to the heart
Coagulation
#sex
#BDSM
#manipulation
256 reads
42 Comments
Forbidden love

#love
100 reads
4 Comments
Tiny truths... in glimpses
I want to shrink down
slither deep inside
warm myself
until I'm dripping
of your sweet mastery
Smile through welcomed howls
try to still
as the sear burns
into each cell
Fusing
two
to one
Divinity and destiny
beautifully procreate—
birth a new life
In understanding the needs of the flesh;
The ying and yang
of our power exchange
How desire's rippled current electrifies!
My knees wobble
I'm a new babe ...
slither deep inside
warm myself
until I'm dripping
of your sweet mastery
Smile through welcomed howls
try to still
as the sear burns
into each cell
Fusing
two
to one
Divinity and destiny
beautifully procreate—
birth a new life
In understanding the needs of the flesh;
The ying and yang
of our power exchange
How desire's rippled current electrifies!
My knees wobble
I'm a new babe ...
#lust
#BDSM
#confessional
#lover
#suffering
303 reads
54 Comments
Tice Nits

#erotic
#funny
#dirty
103 reads
11 Comments
This Is The Second Time This Has Happened...

#lust
#travel
#orgasm
#ThrillSeeking
#seductive
225 reads
6 Comments
Lion Tub
You're the only one I know
that bathes in swirling darkness.
It's your ebony hair, murking the depths
Coloring the lion-tub water
into something sinister.
Supported by its four paws,
it holds itself up, and open to you.
In this low light,
it absorbs the night, around you.
Its back is broken, widened
into a pool, for the blood of rain
as you languish from its mouth
to its hind quarters.
It had roared, at first
a deep throated metallic growl.
But as it bled, as bathwater for you ...
that bathes in swirling darkness.
It's your ebony hair, murking the depths
Coloring the lion-tub water
into something sinister.
Supported by its four paws,
it holds itself up, and open to you.
In this low light,
it absorbs the night, around you.
Its back is broken, widened
into a pool, for the blood of rain
as you languish from its mouth
to its hind quarters.
It had roared, at first
a deep throated metallic growl.
But as it bled, as bathwater for you ...
#sensual
#temptation
272 reads
26 Comments
Scarlett Johansson Vampire fantasy

#erotic
#BDSM
#vampires
#dirty
#sexy
69 reads
3 Comments
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