Erotic Poems by Top Critiquers
Erotica and sex poetry written by the DU Poetry top critiquers
(members who have given lots of useful comments to other poets this month)
Commemoration I: Southern France, Age of Accountability
Written by Ahavati
Poem Published 25th June 2017 1:34pm
Lavender, purple oasis
beyond golden wheat
of a Promised Land
Mediterranean azure
lining the Province
of St Paul de Vence
Life-Friends flower wildly
burgeoning adolescence
amid fruit-laden branches
The twisted Apple
its arthritic stem, fluffy
blossom in their hands
Young chins harvest
dripping to insects. . .
wormy scavengers
He a boy, barely man
nobley helping her
from the tree
Became no match
for the...
beyond golden wheat
of a Promised Land
Mediterranean azure
lining the Province
of St Paul de Vence
Life-Friends flower wildly
burgeoning adolescence
amid fruit-laden branches
The twisted Apple
its arthritic stem, fluffy
blossom in their hands
Young chins harvest
dripping to insects. . .
wormy scavengers
He a boy, barely man
nobley helping her
from the tree
Became no match
for the...
79 reads
13 Comments
Dominique
Written by crowfly
Poem Published 24th June 2017 4:51pm
The gun thugs call her Dominique
Last woman standing every time
The hoods left bleeding in her wake
Their dead whores propped all in a row
He offers to buy her a drink
A Blood On the Water, with a twist
He lights the tip of her Gaulois
His final glib attempt at gallantry
Dominique shoves her hero to the bed
Straddles his hips and rides
Allowing him his sweet release
And knowing this will be his last
She leaves him cooling in the sack
Before maid service rumbles by
Not much like the open road
And nothing like this...
Last woman standing every time
The hoods left bleeding in her wake
Their dead whores propped all in a row
He offers to buy her a drink
A Blood On the Water, with a twist
He lights the tip of her Gaulois
His final glib attempt at gallantry
Dominique shoves her hero to the bed
Straddles his hips and rides
Allowing him his sweet release
And knowing this will be his last
She leaves him cooling in the sack
Before maid service rumbles by
Not much like the open road
And nothing like this...
54 reads
5 Comments
Time to Taste
Written by SweetOblivion
Poem Published 24th June 2017 5:35pm
EXTREME CONTENT
369 reads
2 Comments
The Time Has Come
Written by Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Poem Published 25th June 2017 7:39pm
I agonize and dream I use my claws
To rake them down your spine & ride you slow
The humid slick is running down the walls
The night is thick with nowhere else to go
To rake them down your spine & ride you slow
As lightning shakes the thunder from the sky
The night is thick with nowhere else to go
Each tremor taking us before they die
As lightning shakes the thunder from the sky
Denying us the rain that comes alone
Each tremor taking us before they die
That soon will bring a deluge of our own
Denying us the rain...
To rake them down your spine & ride you slow
The humid slick is running down the walls
The night is thick with nowhere else to go
To rake them down your spine & ride you slow
As lightning shakes the thunder from the sky
The night is thick with nowhere else to go
Each tremor taking us before they die
As lightning shakes the thunder from the sky
Denying us the rain that comes alone
Each tremor taking us before they die
That soon will bring a deluge of our own
Denying us the rain...
179 reads
4 Comments
Gingerbread...
Written by MusicallyMrM
Poem Published 22nd June 2017 11:33pm
.gingerbread
laced with a sweet, sticky
white glaze
her taste still fresh upon my lips
and on my mind.....anytime
desires
to have my hands knead you
to roll your dough in the
round....mmm
my rolling pin
pressing you paper thin
so slowly,
rhythmically,
so damned deliberately
so into you....
my mouth waters
watching the way
that dress envelopes
your every curve
rich, brown textures
white and embroidered
tracing a shape that only
God could have designed,
sent down from the...
laced with a sweet, sticky
white glaze
her taste still fresh upon my lips
and on my mind.....anytime
desires
to have my hands knead you
to roll your dough in the
round....mmm
my rolling pin
pressing you paper thin
so slowly,
rhythmically,
so damned deliberately
so into you....
my mouth waters
watching the way
that dress envelopes
your every curve
rich, brown textures
white and embroidered
tracing a shape that only
God could have designed,
sent down from the...
96 reads
0 Comments
Healing Waters
Written by Hepcat61
Poem Published 21st June 2017 3:51pm
In lips caressed with praising, sound its fill,
Which fall and leave mine filled with deeper yearn.
That lift again to nape of sweet stream’s spill
Descend again in urgent deeper's burn.
Which fall and leave mine, filled with deeper yearn,
From heaven’s shown embrace on rosy peak,
Descend again in urgent deeper’s burn,
To dire land, the pilgrims’ doorway seek.
From heaven’s shown embrace on rosy peak,
Long have I missed the fount I’ve never known.
To dire...
Which fall and leave mine filled with deeper yearn.
That lift again to nape of sweet stream’s spill
Descend again in urgent deeper's burn.
Which fall and leave mine, filled with deeper yearn,
From heaven’s shown embrace on rosy peak,
Descend again in urgent deeper’s burn,
To dire land, the pilgrims’ doorway seek.
From heaven’s shown embrace on rosy peak,
Long have I missed the fount I’ve never known.
To dire...
71 reads
0 Comments
06:59
Written by debug
Poem Published 20th June 2017 10:06am
I wake up naked
not remembering
who pulled my briefs down
and peeled the skin off
my erected pulsating glans
stripped me off
my barriers
of keeping a subconsciousness
alert
awake
depressed
your impossible femininity
stifles my sex organ
transforms my male anatomy
to pray on your unearthly orgasms
…but I wake up
dress up
and I go out
to live in the world
I step away
away from this purple haze
of your split reality
leaving my keys with you
…at night
fantasizing you unlock...
not remembering
who pulled my briefs down
and peeled the skin off
my erected pulsating glans
stripped me off
my barriers
of keeping a subconsciousness
alert
awake
depressed
your impossible femininity
stifles my sex organ
transforms my male anatomy
to pray on your unearthly orgasms
…but I wake up
dress up
and I go out
to live in the world
I step away
away from this purple haze
of your split reality
leaving my keys with you
…at night
fantasizing you unlock...
167 reads
0 Comments
Explode
Written by toniscales
(Lost Girl)
Poem Published 27th June 2017 4:31am
EXTREME CONTENT
6 reads
0 Comments
Milk & Honey Rivulets
Written by Lena-underneath
Poem Published 20th June 2017 7:35pm
EXTREME CONTENT
351 reads
6 Comments
Moola
Written by Madintellect
Poem Published 20th June 2017 6:01am
Haven't written in days
Fuck. I've been phased
Bust my ass off daily
Because
My wage
Has been raised
~•~
Another 3bucks
Soon my arms
Will
Be tree-trunks
Don't give
A fuck
About these punks.
I please sluts
That need spunk.
Well I let the
BEAT-BUMP
~•~
Offline
Fuck. I've been phased
Bust my ass off daily
Because
My wage
Has been raised
~•~
Another 3bucks
Soon my arms
Will
Be tree-trunks
Don't give
A fuck
About these punks.
I please sluts
That need spunk.
Well I let the
BEAT-BUMP
~•~
Offline
68 reads
1 Comment
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