Erotic Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Erotica and sex poetry
Poems written by Top Critiquers
An Aching Cocoon
Climax was like speeding through a euphoric galaxy.
Completely unburdened by mundane reality.
My mind dream deep, but far from sleep.
Desire drenched lips bring my naked petals a dew of bliss.
Abandoning myself to you is a sweet intense insanity.
As you stare at the center of my soul
Devouring my untold.
In an aching cocoon in the garden of my heart.
The caterpillar of never, becomes butterflies of the deepest pleasure.
Completely unburdened by mundane reality.
My mind dream deep, but far from sleep.
Desire drenched lips bring my naked petals a dew of bliss.
Abandoning myself to you is a sweet intense insanity.
As you stare at the center of my soul
Devouring my untold.
In an aching cocoon in the garden of my heart.
The caterpillar of never, becomes butterflies of the deepest pleasure.
#lust
#passion
#obsession
211 reads
15 Comments
New Order

#relationships
#BDSM
#Buddhist
#spiritual
#lover
323 reads
13 Comments
A ROUGH HAND

#erotic
#BDSM
#sensual
#passion
#seductive
41 reads
2 Comments
MASSAGE UPON THE BED

#erotic
#rhyming
50 reads
2 Comments
Honey
Have you had her honey?
Yes, I've tasted it before,
delicate and sweet,
I always ask for more.
Like wine from an orchard,
or honeysuckle on the vine,
pleasantly delicious,
it's totally divine.
Tantalizing on the tongue,
and sticky on the skin,
a delightful pleasure to lick,
possibly a sin.
Yes, I've tasted it before,
delicate and sweet,
I always ask for more.
Like wine from an orchard,
or honeysuckle on the vine,
pleasantly delicious,
it's totally divine.
Tantalizing on the tongue,
and sticky on the skin,
a delightful pleasure to lick,
possibly a sin.
#sex
#food
#rhyming #seductive
#rhyming #seductive
207 reads
2 Comments
Moan
Evading desire peaks
for a moment
I cannot deny it entry
by all means Lady Lust do come
Seeking a level playing field
tilt the earth and spin
scatter on the winds a spell
Bewitching in nature
cultivate lust in passion's hold
secreting my treasure
With just a measure of guilt
Holding tightly to the feeling
beguiling a woman, am I
Crimson lips, purple hair
conjuring a man to me
Let all the little witches stir
a cluck of the tongue
and it has begun
...
for a moment
I cannot deny it entry
by all means Lady Lust do come
Seeking a level playing field
tilt the earth and spin
scatter on the winds a spell
Bewitching in nature
cultivate lust in passion's hold
secreting my treasure
With just a measure of guilt
Holding tightly to the feeling
beguiling a woman, am I
Crimson lips, purple hair
conjuring a man to me
Let all the little witches stir
a cluck of the tongue
and it has begun
...
#lust
#gothic
#witches
166 reads
6 Comments
i want
i want
to descend
into
submission,
to trail
my lines
across her
imagination,
to dream
on
her breast,
to
dive into
the depths
of her
desires.
to descend
into
submission,
to trail
my lines
across her
imagination,
to dream
on
her breast,
to
dive into
the depths
of her
desires.
#happiness
#relationships
#beauty
#admiration
#passion
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6 Comments
Totally Loving The Rush Of His Gush
The night in the oasis of time our lips then body divinely touched
Mm… kisses up my spine our naked emotions revealed so much
You kissed my tender lips, slightly trembling beneath yours
His voice I submitted my love, desires upon my skin shall gently pour
I inched back, preparing to flee
The silhouette of his soul upon earth’s pillow where his heart now tease
Gently he pulled me closer, my erratic heartbeats sinking in trepidation ...
Mm… kisses up my spine our naked emotions revealed so much
You kissed my tender lips, slightly trembling beneath yours
His voice I submitted my love, desires upon my skin shall gently pour
I inched back, preparing to flee
The silhouette of his soul upon earth’s pillow where his heart now tease
Gently he pulled me closer, my erratic heartbeats sinking in trepidation ...
#erotic
#lover
#sensual
#passion
#seductive
311 reads
DANCING in the MOONLIGHT
In moonlit glades where shadows play,
A nymph appeared, fair as the new day.
Her skin aglow with a silvery sheen,
A creature of myth, a fantasy dream.
Her eyes like pools of liquid sweet desire,
A tempting gaze, a flickering sultry fire.
With every step, the forest heavily sighed,
As ancient trees their secrets confide.
Beneath the boughs of the ancient oak,
A satyr danced, a mischievous bloke.
His hooves tapped a rhythm on the moss,
As the nymph's laughter, a melody, was embossed.
Together they twirled within...
A nymph appeared, fair as the new day.
Her skin aglow with a silvery sheen,
A creature of myth, a fantasy dream.
Her eyes like pools of liquid sweet desire,
A tempting gaze, a flickering sultry fire.
With every step, the forest heavily sighed,
As ancient trees their secrets confide.
Beneath the boughs of the ancient oak,
A satyr danced, a mischievous bloke.
His hooves tapped a rhythm on the moss,
As the nymph's laughter, a melody, was embossed.
Together they twirled within...
#lust
#lover
#temptation
#passion
#seductive
69 reads
0 Comments
Masturbating

#erotic
113 reads
12 Comments
[un]restricted guidelines (remix) - featuring Naajir
let me see if I've got this right {w}rite
you wanna poetically please me
well, baby, go ahead
I’d be happy to indulgently spread
but you better do more than just tease me
cuz a creative mind is the most potent aphrodisiac
the ultimate turn on
so if we're gonna do this
here’s how it goes...
drop it on my tongue
all those rigid consonants & creamy vowels
working their delicious way in
leaving me all hot & bothered
fanning my lyrical flames
face flushed
crossing my metaphoric legs
as my muse snatches up...
you wanna poetically please me
well, baby, go ahead
I’d be happy to indulgently spread
but you better do more than just tease me
cuz a creative mind is the most potent aphrodisiac
the ultimate turn on
so if we're gonna do this
here’s how it goes...
drop it on my tongue
all those rigid consonants & creamy vowels
working their delicious way in
leaving me all hot & bothered
fanning my lyrical flames
face flushed
crossing my metaphoric legs
as my muse snatches up...
#confessional
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
112 reads
6 Comments
Ring my Bell
Today I'm letting
Freedom Ring
The ladies are
Ringing the Bells
For all men to chase
those Hungry Eyes
Making sure they
completely satisfied
Screaming and Moaning
your name so that the
whole world can
know they are
getting orgasmic
bliss over and
over again
So let Freedom Ring
Freedom Ring
The ladies are
Ringing the Bells
For all men to chase
those Hungry Eyes
Making sure they
completely satisfied
Screaming and Moaning
your name so that the
whole world can
know they are
getting orgasmic
bliss over and
over again
So let Freedom Ring
#women
#men
#sex
#freedom
#orgasm
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