Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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The KinkWizard
The KinkWizard, there she goes
Walking by, in her gown that glows
Her cape awash with spattered blood
Over her a head, a hoarded hood
A mystical being, so warm, so pure
You’re drawn in by her illusive demure
Cosmic qualities, calm and collected
Ensnared by her spell, reality rejected
Who is she, and where is she from
Better be quick, or she’ll catch you, run!
Walking by, in her gown that glows
Her cape awash with spattered blood
Over her a head, a hoarded hood
A mystical being, so warm, so pure
You’re drawn in by her illusive demure
Cosmic qualities, calm and collected
Ensnared by her spell, reality rejected
Who is she, and where is she from
Better be quick, or she’ll catch you, run!
#magic
#myself
#mystery
51 reads
3 Comments
In My Honey Pot
#sensual
58 reads
4 Comments
No sleep
#dreams
#lust
#sexy
50 reads
2 Comments
One Week part 3
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
34 reads
4 Comments
FOR OUR PLEASURE
We look, the scene unfolds, a twisted tale of desire.
Both of us chuckle and smile, igniting a fire.
I hide my blushing face, in the confines of the bed,
Like a bird, trapped in a cage, longing to be fed.
In moments of surrender, pleasure starts to find its way,
A small "yes" escapes my lips, as I try hard to delay,
Pure ecstasy consumes me, an impossible task to succeed,
As the sensations course through me, they're too urgent to impede.
I feel your softness, my sweets, down between my thighs
After all the times love was...
Both of us chuckle and smile, igniting a fire.
I hide my blushing face, in the confines of the bed,
Like a bird, trapped in a cage, longing to be fed.
In moments of surrender, pleasure starts to find its way,
A small "yes" escapes my lips, as I try hard to delay,
Pure ecstasy consumes me, an impossible task to succeed,
As the sensations course through me, they're too urgent to impede.
I feel your softness, my sweets, down between my thighs
After all the times love was...
#lover
#lust
#orgasm
#passion
#sex
93 reads
6 Comments
Sensual Storm
our bed is a shoreline.
And I? - a delirious sea
crashing and splashing
over silky sand
like an untamed storm;
or like a devil out of hell upon a steed
smacking its flank;
my brain is inundated
with ecstacy
with each spray
over the softness
of your saturated figure
And I? - a delirious sea
crashing and splashing
over silky sand
like an untamed storm;
or like a devil out of hell upon a steed
smacking its flank;
my brain is inundated
with ecstacy
with each spray
over the softness
of your saturated figure
#orgasm
#sex
68 reads
9 Comments
Before My Husband Catches Us In Here
Quickly!
You need to
get your
naked ass out of
that jacuzzi, dressed
and out before my
husband
catches us
in here!
You need to
get your
naked ass out of
that jacuzzi, dressed
and out before my
husband
catches us
in here!
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#husband
#sensual
56 reads
0 Comments
YOU MAKE ME FEEL
#erotic
#rhyming
#sex
70 reads
0 Comments
-UMPING
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#rhyming
#sex
47 reads
1 Comment
Girl in lingerie wakes up after night of partying with me
Sorry guys
FULL VERSION
COMING SOON
????
FULL VERSION
COMING SOON
????
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
59 reads
5 Comments
I ever wonder
a soft peck on cheek
a deep French passing the lip
I ever wonder
will them eyes twinkle
or them lips ever mumble
I ever wonder
will you feel the heat
or I’m cooled by your spit
I ever wonder
will you simply kneel
or I’m to make you heel
I ever wonder
do make it sloppy
do let me feel that trickle
I ever wonder
stretch me please, will you
sensuality of tongue
I ever wonder
my pleasures uncut
It’s the skin to skin lust
I ever wonder
heated...
a deep French passing the lip
I ever wonder
will them eyes twinkle
or them lips ever mumble
I ever wonder
will you feel the heat
or I’m cooled by your spit
I ever wonder
will you simply kneel
or I’m to make you heel
I ever wonder
do make it sloppy
do let me feel that trickle
I ever wonder
stretch me please, will you
sensuality of tongue
I ever wonder
my pleasures uncut
It’s the skin to skin lust
I ever wonder
heated...
#dreams
#erotic
#lust
#haiku
#senryu
75 reads
4 Comments
Chapter 13 Inner Struggle in the Church Pew
Chapter 13 Inner Struggle in the Church Pew
“When you follow the desires of your sinful nature, the results are very clear: sexual immorality, impurity, lustful pleasures…” Galatians 5:19
As Brittney heard the scripture read, she felt a whirlwind of shock, guilt, and fear. As the pastor continued, she couldn't shake the feeling that the message was directed straight at her, exposing her deepest secrets and desires for all to see.
The mention of "sinful nature" and the consequences of following it sent a flush of embarrassment creeping up her...
“When you follow the desires of your sinful nature, the results are very clear: sexual immorality, impurity, lustful pleasures…” Galatians 5:19
As Brittney heard the scripture read, she felt a whirlwind of shock, guilt, and fear. As the pastor continued, she couldn't shake the feeling that the message was directed straight at her, exposing her deepest secrets and desires for all to see.
The mention of "sinful nature" and the consequences of following it sent a flush of embarrassment creeping up her...
#betrayal
#marriage
#motherhood
#religion
#sex
57 reads
3 Comments
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