Drugs Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about drug use and addiction (alcohol, medication and recreational drugs)
Poems written by Top Critiquers
(coffee) pot dealer ~ a senryú
bold enticement
darkness courses through my veins
to ensure that rush
darkness courses through my veins
to ensure that rush
#coffee
#addiction
#senryu
328 reads
39 Comments
Drink my blood... Again...
You are my red-hot vein, pierced through and through,
Subduing me in your voluptuous sins
You are the ban of the great bloody bunch,
You are my impudent and violent exciting fear
You are a drug running through closed veins,
You are the line beyond which I fall up
And in flight, I will wear wings with you,
And over the abyss I will soar like a bat
You tied my thoughts, stole my flesh,
Drank the blood, you give an unthinkable high
And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,
Begins to break my heart without a dose ...
Subduing me in your voluptuous sins
You are the ban of the great bloody bunch,
You are my impudent and violent exciting fear
You are a drug running through closed veins,
You are the line beyond which I fall up
And in flight, I will wear wings with you,
And over the abyss I will soar like a bat
You tied my thoughts, stole my flesh,
Drank the blood, you give an unthinkable high
And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,
Begins to break my heart without a dose ...
#marijuana
#vampires
#addiction
235 reads
24 Comments
Blunt Farce Drama
(An Editorial Piece with Walter’s Alter Ego)
====~
Thank you Wally,
I just took a hit and that shit made me hella mellow…
Oh hello!
Tonight, we will be discussing the weed industry
And why we need to understand the bigotry
That’s been set in place by the system
Many of you may be familiar with the legalization of marijuana
In many different states
But I’m gonna make an observation that feels more like farce than drama
That may open the floodgates for debate
Over the years many dudes, homies and brothers ...
====~
Thank you Wally,
I just took a hit and that shit made me hella mellow…
Oh hello!
Tonight, we will be discussing the weed industry
And why we need to understand the bigotry
That’s been set in place by the system
Many of you may be familiar with the legalization of marijuana
In many different states
But I’m gonna make an observation that feels more like farce than drama
That may open the floodgates for debate
Over the years many dudes, homies and brothers ...
#politics
#marijuana
319 reads
6 Comments
I was trying to give up alcohol knowing full well that was bullshit
It wasn't the alcohol that was the problem
It was when and how much
I think I figured it out
Widow Jane took me back in her loving arms ....
It was when and how much
I think I figured it out
Widow Jane took me back in her loving arms ....
#identity
269 reads
12 Comments
A brothers plea.
Brother, you was born in 80,
I followed in 82,
Right from the get go,
i looked up to you,
With no father figure around,
He was out of view,
You took me under your wing
and showed me a thing or two
We loved, laughed and played,
Still to this day, I'm amazed,
You taught me everything,
From tying a shoelace, To having a shave,
I look back now and think,
those were the days,
I say this with sadness as things began to change.
We grew in an era where,
It was socially cool to drink ...
I followed in 82,
Right from the get go,
i looked up to you,
With no father figure around,
He was out of view,
You took me under your wing
and showed me a thing or two
We loved, laughed and played,
Still to this day, I'm amazed,
You taught me everything,
From tying a shoelace, To having a shave,
I look back now and think,
those were the days,
I say this with sadness as things began to change.
We grew in an era where,
It was socially cool to drink ...
#brother
#alcohol
401 reads
4 Comments
cold
hurting ache in my soul
sinful need causes me pain
I cry then curl inward
I'm no good
I look at the bright eyed people
I want to be like that
damnation's game wicked revival
I'm different I know it
I wonder if it's obvious
this soul hiccup?
worship the whore
insidious need inside me
I feed it
I feel I have no choice
not enough dopamine to cope
my brain goes on the fritz
synapses misfiring leaves me reeling
I genuinely hurt
bare without covering
vulnerability overload
it's so...
sinful need causes me pain
I cry then curl inward
I'm no good
I look at the bright eyed people
I want to be like that
damnation's game wicked revival
I'm different I know it
I wonder if it's obvious
this soul hiccup?
worship the whore
insidious need inside me
I feed it
I feel I have no choice
not enough dopamine to cope
my brain goes on the fritz
synapses misfiring leaves me reeling
I genuinely hurt
bare without covering
vulnerability overload
it's so...
#addiction
363 reads
13 Comments
Posie K
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I tried to hide my colorful addiction
In the comfort of my brownstone
My silent obsession lay bare in front of me, craving the color of the newest rendition
Rocking in my bed, leg twitching, waiting for the crack of dawn
Willing the need for the hunger to be gone
Metamorphosing from a sleepy head
Once I rose from my Queen Size bed
A full blown sultry diva to welcome the calling of the birds’ morning song
Panting in...
4.7 star rating 332 Reviews
$29.00 USD
I tried to hide my colorful addiction
In the comfort of my brownstone
My silent obsession lay bare in front of me, craving the color of the newest rendition
Rocking in my bed, leg twitching, waiting for the crack of dawn
Willing the need for the hunger to be gone
Metamorphosing from a sleepy head
Once I rose from my Queen Size bed
A full blown sultry diva to welcome the calling of the birds’ morning song
Panting in...
#parody
#satirical
#vanity
596 reads
14 Comments
Crocodile
Even when he lies
He says
I'll be back in an hour
I shrug it off and
Take a shower
Many hours later
He strolls into the house
I sit waiting like a mouse
Look into his eyes
Already know he's fried
Even when he lies
He says
I smoked a little weed
His anthem his creed
Saluting the visible bloody vein
Even when I lie
I say
I'll love you forever
Float over like a
Magnetic feather
When he reaches for my hand
I should have ran
He touches my skin
I know he wants...
He says
I'll be back in an hour
I shrug it off and
Take a shower
Many hours later
He strolls into the house
I sit waiting like a mouse
Look into his eyes
Already know he's fried
Even when he lies
He says
I smoked a little weed
His anthem his creed
Saluting the visible bloody vein
Even when I lie
I say
I'll love you forever
Float over like a
Magnetic feather
When he reaches for my hand
I should have ran
He touches my skin
I know he wants...
#relationships
#drugs
515 reads
31 Comments
Master Jewelers
Some of them grew up on pot farms.
Young folks seeing the plants – As pure innocents.
(Perhaps a true form of innocence.)
Innocence, lost in air raids of helicopter swarms.
When the shit was banned, propaganda proliferated.
The term MJ – Signified something that would turn you gay.
“Mary/Juan” – A hermaphroditic human, or something?
Or perhaps make you play the piano in frantic madness, crazy.
Certainly, it was an attack on the people’s best interests,
A defense of the textile industry & other interests.
And perhaps even a...
Young folks seeing the plants – As pure innocents.
(Perhaps a true form of innocence.)
Innocence, lost in air raids of helicopter swarms.
When the shit was banned, propaganda proliferated.
The term MJ – Signified something that would turn you gay.
“Mary/Juan” – A hermaphroditic human, or something?
Or perhaps make you play the piano in frantic madness, crazy.
Certainly, it was an attack on the people’s best interests,
A defense of the textile industry & other interests.
And perhaps even a...
#forest
#nature
#coffee
#misunderstood
#tea
154 reads
2 Comments
Brother's Keeper
Youngest of three brothers
I'm stuck being his
Oldest Brother Keeper
Makes you feel like shit
Because your oldest brother
Likes the creature called
Hard Liquor which causes
Him to do crazy things like
engaging in sexual congress
With an 18 year old girl
Which is very creepy
Because she has Daddy Issues
I'm stuck being his
Oldest Brother Keeper
Makes you feel like shit
Because your oldest brother
Likes the creature called
Hard Liquor which causes
Him to do crazy things like
engaging in sexual congress
With an 18 year old girl
Which is very creepy
Because she has Daddy Issues
#brother
#erotic
#alcohol
#dirty
#crush
378 reads
5 Comments
Alcohol Tank Propane
I'm on this shit heavy
And freon is a drank as well
But this Tank Propane is
One hot ass cold in excel
This fizz homemade truly
Accept my soul so ah wells
And leaves no stains there of
Of the ah shitty ah trails
My enemies die as I sleep
And it be me doing this each week
This Tank Propane even increase
This sex drive of mine for nerds a beast
Take motor oil and gas
Add a little break fluid
With water and kool-aid
Of any kind true to it
Put in a little tonic water
Or sparkling soda...
And freon is a drank as well
But this Tank Propane is
One hot ass cold in excel
This fizz homemade truly
Accept my soul so ah wells
And leaves no stains there of
Of the ah shitty ah trails
My enemies die as I sleep
And it be me doing this each week
This Tank Propane even increase
This sex drive of mine for nerds a beast
Take motor oil and gas
Add a little break fluid
With water and kool-aid
Of any kind true to it
Put in a little tonic water
Or sparkling soda...
#dark
#gothic
#evil
#alcohol
#ForbiddenLove
51 reads
0 Comments
Drug usage and addiction
Maybe smoking ''regular '' cigarettes
Has little to do with Addiction
Because it is accepted socially
(Though less today as in former times
Such as those of the Malboro man...
Who also died of cancer)
But it is an addiction nonetheless,
Pretty much like beer and other forms
Of alcohol.
You fall in the grips of these demons
You then are a victim
And so are your loved ones.
Has little to do with Addiction
Because it is accepted socially
(Though less today as in former times
Such as those of the Malboro man...
Who also died of cancer)
But it is an addiction nonetheless,
Pretty much like beer and other forms
Of alcohol.
You fall in the grips of these demons
You then are a victim
And so are your loved ones.
#anger
#regret
#denial
95 reads
1 Comment
DU Poetry : Drug, Alcohol and Addiction Poems by Top Critiquers