Drugs Poems Seeking Honest Critique
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about drug use and addiction (alcohol, medication and recreational drugs)
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Down the cocaine rabbit hole of love
You’re my everything yet here again I go..
Pushing you further and further away the deeper I go down this rabbit hole.
I love you deeply oh how much I love you so
Yet my drug addiction keeps hendering me how long will it be before you go
Each time I hit a bump the more I see you fall into a slump
I see it in your eyes because the eyes Chico the eyes they never lie
Am I wanting to live or am I wanting to die
Or am I trying to numb everything I try to hide just to feel some type of high
My love for you is overloaded me with joy no love I’ve never felt...
Pushing you further and further away the deeper I go down this rabbit hole.
I love you deeply oh how much I love you so
Yet my drug addiction keeps hendering me how long will it be before you go
Each time I hit a bump the more I see you fall into a slump
I see it in your eyes because the eyes Chico the eyes they never lie
Am I wanting to live or am I wanting to die
Or am I trying to numb everything I try to hide just to feel some type of high
My love for you is overloaded me with joy no love I’ve never felt...
#drugs
#addiction
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GARDEN of WEEDen
Garden of Weeden
A very special greeting
When you're inside so please fasten your seat belts for the ride
You'll be submerged like a ocean tide
In the beginning
People were holding hands and singing enjoying purple dreams orange and green every where to be seen lies the Forrest Pump running hydroponics producing beautiful strain of chronic if you're fatigue it's makes you bionic giving you the energy of Sonic levels that are Revelation the invitation like 420 participation into recreation of use
While hanging loose homemade edibles and organic juice found...
A very special greeting
When you're inside so please fasten your seat belts for the ride
You'll be submerged like a ocean tide
In the beginning
People were holding hands and singing enjoying purple dreams orange and green every where to be seen lies the Forrest Pump running hydroponics producing beautiful strain of chronic if you're fatigue it's makes you bionic giving you the energy of Sonic levels that are Revelation the invitation like 420 participation into recreation of use
While hanging loose homemade edibles and organic juice found...
#rhyming
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4 Comments
Drugs
Drugs will make you lose your mind
Drugs will make you crazy
Drugs will make you lose your kind
You’ll lose the time, chase me
Drugs will make you lose your way
Drugs will make you hazy
Drugs will make you lose your day
You’ll lose the plot, take me
Drugs will make you lose your goal
Drugs will make you lazy
Drugs will make you lose your soul
Drugs will make you crazy
Drugs will make you lose your kind
You’ll lose the time, chase me
Drugs will make you lose your way
Drugs will make you hazy
Drugs will make you lose your day
You’ll lose the plot, take me
Drugs will make you lose your goal
Drugs will make you lazy
Drugs will make you lose your soul
#drugs
#addiction
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1 Comment
Newspaper.
I found a
Newspaper in subway.
Some 🍋lime juice spread the
Matteo.
Crunch of birthday biscuits🍪
A bird's nest over her
Port Lincoln.
She might fall asleep on
Her getting ready for
Sometimes.
Newspaper in subway.
Some 🍋lime juice spread the
Matteo.
Crunch of birthday biscuits🍪
A bird's nest over her
Port Lincoln.
She might fall asleep on
Her getting ready for
Sometimes.
#trees
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for J.C. ( not Jesus Christ)
you grew up a good
Catholic boy
Mass, communion,
the rosary, the Virgin
Mary on Sundays
but your love of all
those holy sacraments
and saints changed when
you found dope could
fuck you better than any
high school cheerleader
and your words curled up from
the page like smoke from
a junkies cigarette
from sports to addict
to prose to poetry to
rock star
I watched a YouTube
of you reciting your
poems at St....
Catholic boy
Mass, communion,
the rosary, the Virgin
Mary on Sundays
but your love of all
those holy sacraments
and saints changed when
you found dope could
fuck you better than any
high school cheerleader
and your words curled up from
the page like smoke from
a junkies cigarette
from sports to addict
to prose to poetry to
rock star
I watched a YouTube
of you reciting your
poems at St....
#gratitude
#admiration
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7 Comments
In My Prime
#abuse
#despair
#emptiness #temptation
#emptiness #temptation
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Ale for the Ail
Closing my eyes
as I savor this moment
with big gulps of treasure.
Pretty soon, my mind is buh-bye,
drowning the torment.
Looking forward to the pleasure.
Tilting the bottle
to get those drops of goodness
that I need in my life.
Emotions at full throttle,
I must confess
I am riddled with strife.
Looking for satisfaction
in this cylindrical phenomenon
where my worries are diminished.
I enjoy the distraction.
Yes, I am gone.
I need another; I am not finished.
as I savor this moment
with big gulps of treasure.
Pretty soon, my mind is buh-bye,
drowning the torment.
Looking forward to the pleasure.
Tilting the bottle
to get those drops of goodness
that I need in my life.
Emotions at full throttle,
I must confess
I am riddled with strife.
Looking for satisfaction
in this cylindrical phenomenon
where my worries are diminished.
I enjoy the distraction.
Yes, I am gone.
I need another; I am not finished.
#alcohol
#rhyming
#confessional
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20 Comments
Adaigo.
Give adaigo the
Pet medicine as mind.@
Letter 1.
Pet medicine as mind.@
Letter 1.
#nature
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Frankiez.
e
Mustard sauce
Vingretta sauce
Cheese slice
Mushroom 🍲.
Mustard sauce
Vingretta sauce
Cheese slice
Mushroom 🍲.
#nature
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(32) Repeat.Intoxication.Process (R.I.P.) 02/01/2016 @ 3:11pm
Cocaine, marijuana, meth, pills and alcohol.
Fantasizing to be free both mentally & physically.
Will I seek help anytime soon?
Will I ever be high enough to reach the moon?
I lost my self control, I have no sense of hope.
The day will come, I’ll fatality drop from dope.
Unstable by the teardrop.
Countless narcotics, it’s a one stop shop.
Penny for your thoughts?
I’m drunk and nauseous, stomach knots.
Why am I breaking speed limits?
Will the drugs ever be off-limits?
I’m running on adrenaline!
In the dark,...
Fantasizing to be free both mentally & physically.
Will I seek help anytime soon?
Will I ever be high enough to reach the moon?
I lost my self control, I have no sense of hope.
The day will come, I’ll fatality drop from dope.
Unstable by the teardrop.
Countless narcotics, it’s a one stop shop.
Penny for your thoughts?
I’m drunk and nauseous, stomach knots.
Why am I breaking speed limits?
Will the drugs ever be off-limits?
I’m running on adrenaline!
In the dark,...
#SelfReflection
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1 Comment
Habitual Dependence
Will you catch me this time if I fall?
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
The dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
The dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
#love
#marriage
#addiction #support
#addiction #support
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They Call Me
Fucking druggo
Societal missfit
Dirty hippie cunt
Stinking of ganja
Hypocrit
Posting fingers
Lithium gaze
Smoking dangerous cannabis ?
This morbidly obese beast
Medicine cabinet fully stocked
Uppers downers
Antipsychotics
Now answer this
Whos the bigger druggo?
Societal missfit
Dirty hippie cunt
Stinking of ganja
Hypocrit
Posting fingers
Lithium gaze
Smoking dangerous cannabis ?
This morbidly obese beast
Medicine cabinet fully stocked
Uppers downers
Antipsychotics
Now answer this
Whos the bigger druggo?
#drugs
#marijuana
#addiction
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2 Comments
DU Poetry : Drug, Alcohol and Addiction Poems Seeking Critique