Dark Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 4:55am
24th Nov 2024 4:55am
Something that's not talking about
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ For what I want to talk about is the affect of abuse. 😞 For it is very necessary to be able to share, your thoughts and insight and spiritual subconsciousness. For sure we never know what someone else is going through in there own personal life. For sure abuse in any way can be done in so many ways on so many levels.
YET the worst kind of abuse is mentally and emotionally and physically as it drains, from a person living with the disease of pain and depression and suffering and low self esteem. 😞 By the...
YET the worst kind of abuse is mentally and emotionally and physically as it drains, from a person living with the disease of pain and depression and suffering and low self esteem. 😞 By the...
#abuse
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
#LifeStruggles
#StreamOfConsciousness
71 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
21st Aug 2024 11:54pm
21st Aug 2024 11:54pm
Dirty Ace of Hearts
Channeling you
Looking everywhere
Then suddenly
You appeared
A dirty version
Former self
Turned out
Struggling to survive
Your immaculate conception
Poisoned on the avenue
Splintered and struck
I had choices
Take you home
Bathe you in sanctity
Or leave you wounded
For the next John
To worship you
Make you into his likeness
Only to fail desperately
As he won't know
What I...
Looking everywhere
Then suddenly
You appeared
A dirty version
Former self
Turned out
Struggling to survive
Your immaculate conception
Poisoned on the avenue
Splintered and struck
I had choices
Take you home
Bathe you in sanctity
Or leave you wounded
For the next John
To worship you
Make you into his likeness
Only to fail desperately
As he won't know
What I...
#dark
#despair
#hurt
#LifeStruggles
#temptation
217 reads
40 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 10:15am
1st Dec 2024 10:15am
Lichen Thallus
Apply the federation.
Allow a congregation.
Lose your mind to sedation.
Lose your kool; aid the plantation.
Planted in a vase.
No roots for me to trace.
No more individual face.
Just people losing the race.
A spore developing.
A hive of demons loudly sing.
Attract the greater being.
To destroy the weakest thinking.
A tree that only lies.
A mistletoe leeches the wise.
Time to prune the parasites.
Assassin's have a lonely plight.
Allow a congregation.
Lose your mind to sedation.
Lose your kool; aid the plantation.
Planted in a vase.
No roots for me to trace.
No more individual face.
Just people losing the race.
A spore developing.
A hive of demons loudly sing.
Attract the greater being.
To destroy the weakest thinking.
A tree that only lies.
A mistletoe leeches the wise.
Time to prune the parasites.
Assassin's have a lonely plight.
#hypocrisy
#money
#prison #SelfReflection
#prison #SelfReflection
58 reads
11 Comments
Dragonblood
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 4:04pm
31st Oct 2024 4:04pm
Get Away From The door!
These magazines are expired. The guy who collected them is dead. He's been dead for years now.
I called him Dad.
And these newspaper articles he collected are obsolete. But at one time, he considered them worth something 'cause they represent a time in history.
I can get rid of them now 'cause I don’t want them.
I need to throw them into the garbage where they belong.
I don't like old things. I don't want to go back to the past because... I just don't fucking want to!
I want to wipe away the past like dust.
I don't...
I called him Dad.
And these newspaper articles he collected are obsolete. But at one time, he considered them worth something 'cause they represent a time in history.
I can get rid of them now 'cause I don’t want them.
I need to throw them into the garbage where they belong.
I don't like old things. I don't want to go back to the past because... I just don't fucking want to!
I want to wipe away the past like dust.
I don't...
#WritingPoetry
117 reads
wallyroo92
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 2:54am
10th Nov 2024 2:54am
Morbid Curiosity
#animals
#death
65 reads
10 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 3:36pm
5th Nov 2024 3:36pm
Eventually [Nothing]
depression
oppression
expression
it’s all the same
creation of a breath
leading to eventual death
oppression
expression
it’s all the same
creation of a breath
leading to eventual death
#apathy
#death
#depression
#minimalist
#morality
89 reads
4 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
14th Oct 2023 2:15pm
14th Oct 2023 2:15pm
Dark Horse
I was thirty, when I was ten.
~
When you anointed me, with fists
it caused me a crown
When the points brought blood
you drew liquid red slashes
upon my downturned cheeks
Then you paraded me around the room
pulling me along by my matted hair
With each stumble, reminding me
that if I fell yet again
I wouldn't walk anymore that day
As fear would cause me to stay
down
The oddest part, including the other things
was how the lights were always on
and always during the day ...
~
When you anointed me, with fists
it caused me a crown
When the points brought blood
you drew liquid red slashes
upon my downturned cheeks
Then you paraded me around the room
pulling me along by my matted hair
With each stumble, reminding me
that if I fell yet again
I wouldn't walk anymore that day
As fear would cause me to stay
down
The oddest part, including the other things
was how the lights were always on
and always during the day ...
#abuse
#escape
376 reads
17 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 00:40am
29th Nov 2024 00:40am
Grotesque nectar
A victim like no other.
The mercy that i grant you.
Is the means to make you suffer.
Focusing the ire.
Emboldening in fire.
Twisting and entombing.
A hunger all consuming.
In molten flesh imprison.
Reborn from hatred risen.
By blood in dark baptism.
Free bound from the schism.
Corruption breed in sake.
Crushed all be in my wake.
As tortured havok reigned.
In sickness unrestrained.
Outcast of the infernal.
Wretched be eternal.
Now let slit the throat of birth.
And clot the veins in filth. ...
The mercy that i grant you.
Is the means to make you suffer.
Focusing the ire.
Emboldening in fire.
Twisting and entombing.
A hunger all consuming.
In molten flesh imprison.
Reborn from hatred risen.
By blood in dark baptism.
Free bound from the schism.
Corruption breed in sake.
Crushed all be in my wake.
As tortured havok reigned.
In sickness unrestrained.
Outcast of the infernal.
Wretched be eternal.
Now let slit the throat of birth.
And clot the veins in filth. ...
#hate
#myself
62 reads
0 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 12:05pm
13th Nov 2024 12:05pm
10 Psychological Senryu Poems
Lying Relations:
Betrayal trusted
Denial communicates
Deceitful conduct
In Paralysis:
Dagger to the back
Brotherly reality
Takes having no spine
Life of the Party:
Motive portrayal
Witticism dishonest
Proudly disrespects
Attention Center:
Imposing drama
Fanatical selfishness
Demanding response
15 Minute Fame:
Fulfillment never
Grandiose fantasy
Haughtiness insists
...
Betrayal trusted
Denial communicates
Deceitful conduct
In Paralysis:
Dagger to the back
Brotherly reality
Takes having no spine
Life of the Party:
Motive portrayal
Witticism dishonest
Proudly disrespects
Attention Center:
Imposing drama
Fanatical selfishness
Demanding response
15 Minute Fame:
Fulfillment never
Grandiose fantasy
Haughtiness insists
...
#humankind
#metaphor
#morality
#senryu
#spiritual
63 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
Today 12:00pm
Today 12:00pm
Cinder Trail
Tough as a chastity cast iron scinth...
The reaper, always the reaper.
"Now I'm walking alone on the cinder trail."
Forget the cut deep in your flesh.
Face the night as it was a flash.
"Now you're walking alone on the cinder trail."
Shoot down your loose phantoms...
The king is dead and there's no other.
"Now we're walking alone on the cinder trail."
The reaper, always the reaper.
"Now I'm walking alone on the cinder trail."
Forget the cut deep in your flesh.
Face the night as it was a flash.
"Now you're walking alone on the cinder trail."
Shoot down your loose phantoms...
The king is dead and there's no other.
"Now we're walking alone on the cinder trail."
#anxiety
#dark
#death
#evil
#oppression
20 reads
4 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 1:25pm
30th Nov 2024 1:25pm
Empty Flagons
With an empty flagon of the grog's misery embracing
the dusk as the shadows linger with syllables of love
Where angels are souls and the flesh is cold and
the beast within you silences the head. As my quill
becomes the guillotine whispering anonymously
unfed. My fornicating tongue awakes, under
the canopy of the master's hand unreeling the
soul on the twilight's shoals. Throbbing where
the flesh is blood in the troughs womb with
an empty flagon of the grog's misery
pulsing the evening's night
the dusk as the shadows linger with syllables of love
Where angels are souls and the flesh is cold and
the beast within you silences the head. As my quill
becomes the guillotine whispering anonymously
unfed. My fornicating tongue awakes, under
the canopy of the master's hand unreeling the
soul on the twilight's shoals. Throbbing where
the flesh is blood in the troughs womb with
an empty flagon of the grog's misery
pulsing the evening's night
#dark
#erotic
#gothic
79 reads
0 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
20th Jun 2024 8:56pm
20th Jun 2024 8:56pm
The Ghosts' unshared Story
shadows breed in twilight realms
there secrets blurred within boundaries
between light and darkness
whispered unfulfilled promises
there ghosts wander listlessly
not so white but faded grey
they look for wisps of promises
made by cruel lying lovers
in spectral robes perpetually blown
by invisible wind unfelt by some
their anguished cries for redemption
are moans when heard by fleshed humans
they weave their stories
between the shining moon
and the grey oncoming morn
spectral figures sorrow torn ...
there secrets blurred within boundaries
between light and darkness
whispered unfulfilled promises
there ghosts wander listlessly
not so white but faded grey
they look for wisps of promises
made by cruel lying lovers
in spectral robes perpetually blown
by invisible wind unfelt by some
their anguished cries for redemption
are moans when heard by fleshed humans
they weave their stories
between the shining moon
and the grey oncoming morn
spectral figures sorrow torn ...
#dark
#death
#fiction
134 reads
10 Comments
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